Date: 25 Apr 2016 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
You really made me want to throttle her father in this one. Transposing his issues with what his wife felt towards the life as an ARMY wife, to what Bella will feel if she was one herself, was assinine on his part. I was so proud of her when she slapped him and didn't talk to him for months. Some may think that was childish, not this reader. I felt it was strength shining strong there. For him to presume such a horrid thing was mind boggling. Especially with her already having lived a life moving all the time. She knows this life, better than a person just enlisting. Sheesh. All that lost time and his injury can be blamed on one General Swan. I'm glad that they are getting away from him and closer to Edward's family. Smart move. I liked that Bella handed him the letters and that he read them out loud.
Date: 07 Jun 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not my cup of tea but I took a chance and liked it.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
You two did a nice job of collaboration here! It made me want to slap Edward for listening and punch Charlie for demanding, but it turned out all right! Bella was raised in the army and knew exactly what the life entailed, so why would her father think she didn't know what she was getting by falling in love with a soldier? Edward shouldn't have decided without Bella's input, either! Guess it's a block-headed guy thing! All turned out well, so they are forgiven!
Date: 12 Oct 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Heartbreaking at first but the happy ending made up for it. I love a good soldier angsty story! : )
Date: 28 Apr 2013 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was really amazing.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
love it
Date: 07 Feb 2013 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it. Thanks for writing.
Date: 05 Feb 2013 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
nice story,
Thank you
Date: 03 Feb 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful story. Great job.
Date: 03 Feb 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, Charlie should have realized that his daughter didn't have anything from her mother!!!!
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, great O/S... :)
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
beautiful made me cry would Love it if you would continue this story thank for writing
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow ... just ... wow ...
you ladies sure know how to pack a story full of heart, heartbreak, heartache and heartwarming moments!!!
thank you for sharing your beautiful story, great job!