Date: 30 May 2021 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 53
the romance is kust as good as the lemons
Date: 29 May 2021 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 45
hat last bit brought tears to my also
Date: 29 May 2021 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 40
love you too
Date: 29 May 2021 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 38
so goodbut sure how a gay dancer would turn mafioso that quickly
Date: 27 May 2021 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 27
I would have to be leery she left so fast without a second thought
Date: 27 May 2021 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
it would be scary for someone in Bella's situation I worry about my spouse when they go out in traffic I could not deal with the fears Bella has
Date: 26 May 2021 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
something tells me she is about to find out what she has been missing
Date: 26 May 2021 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
this is awesome so glad it was on Tufano's favorite list
Date: 26 May 2021 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
this is awesome so glad it was on Tufano's favorite list
Date: 26 May 2021 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
if course he is
Date: 26 May 2021 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
awesome start
Date: 25 Apr 2018 11:53 PM Title: Future Take
That was really a great story, thanks for sharing it with us..
Date: 30 Nov 2017 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 60
I'm in a Mobward place this month so I re-read my favs and yours is one of them. Thanks again for writing it and keeping it up here on the site. Cheers to you!!!
Date: 16 Jun 2017 4:23 AM Title: Future Take
Just found this story and I love it
Date: 10 Sep 2016 12:59 AM Title: Future Take
Miss your writing style. Too bad you don't write on this site anymore.
Date: 07 Jun 2016 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 37
It's Felix! He's creepy and always there.
Date: 14 Oct 2015 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hahaha Edward knows a bout boots brands? Come on soo stupid
Author's Response:
Doesn't everyone know Louis Vuitton? They are know. For their red soles. Even my husband knows them.
Date: 06 Aug 2015 5:20 PM Title: Future Take
excellent story ;) 5 kids awesome!!!! thanks for completing and posting this on here :D
Date: 12 Feb 2015 1:43 AM Title: Future Take
Great story. I really enjoyed reading it.
Date: 04 Jan 2015 8:08 PM Title: Future Take
looking forward to Dancerward and would not mind future outtakes
Date: 04 Jan 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 60
the Esme part made me cry and I was freaked with the boys getting "arrested" is a great story
Date: 03 Jan 2015 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
I guess James can wait lol
Date: 03 Jan 2015 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
knight in shining armour or dark angel who can say no
Date: 03 Jan 2015 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
great start
Date: 17 Dec 2014 5:45 AM Title: Future Take
I LOVE IT ITS EVERYDAY LIFE :D
Date: 16 Dec 2014 4:12 AM Title: Future Take
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I enjoyed it so much!!! :)
Date: 11 Dec 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 60
Love it. First time reading one of your stories but I gotta say, I am not disappointed. Looking forward to reading more from you.
Date: 09 Dec 2014 3:04 PM Title: Future Take
Brilliant and beautiful!
Date: 09 Dec 2014 3:15 AM Title: Future Take
Hopefully this will help him get his head out of his arse.
Date: 13 Nov 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
My husband is wondering why I'm sitting here crying. LOL loved it
Date: 30 May 2014 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 60
Hello it took two days but I read it all and I loved it so much drama and love action and heart thank you
Date: 29 Apr 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 60
Wow! What a story!! I loved every line if it! More, please!!!
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to reading your story. Great 1st chapter.
Date: 21 Dec 2013 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh, sweet sweet mafia justice!
Date: 21 Dec 2013 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
Still see the potential in your writing! Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Date: 21 Dec 2013 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is really good, you stated that this is your first story, Bravo! Great job. Little grammatical issues but nothing major!
Date: 19 Dec 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 60
Wonderful ending. ROFL for "arresting" the guys. Wowser 4 kids and still going strong!!!
Ty for writing and sharing.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 59
Glad Alec is turning out to not be a jerk. Awww a girl
Date: 19 Dec 2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 58
awww she's so sweet with everyone. Yummy lemon too.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 57
wow B is such a good person. I don't think I would have been able to do it
Date: 19 Dec 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 56
oooh B is scary when she is mad. Poor Peter too.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 55
hmmm now what are those men up too I wonder. Bella is the consumate sweet hostess
Date: 19 Dec 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 54
yummy wedding night. lemon dance for that.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 53
aww wonderful speeches.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 52
aww so glad B had her room for the moment with Esme.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 51
aww for Peter's speech. yey for wedding rehearsal. LOL for the Father
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 50
Glad Peter is going to be ok
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 49
woo hoo Go Peter and B protecting the family.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 48
OMG Felix is the traitor???? Figures Renee was a goomah and killed. So glad for the tracking devices. Glad Felix didnt know about them.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 47
Poor B Morning sickness can be nasty thats for sure. EEEK for ending.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 46
awww what wonderful news!!!!
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 45
Glad E got her calmed down. At tleast sthe went somewhere safe. Aww for the Dad and B talk
Date: 19 Dec 2013 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 44
ow wowser. Wonder what Charlie meant by closer
Date: 19 Dec 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 43
Wow Go bad ass Bella. Glad she got it out of her system. Go Peter. He is shaping up to being a extra great guy.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 42
hmmm truth or lies.....that is the question. Charlie is a moron for coming back though.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 41
oooh yummy end.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 40
Wow Riley really wants to die doesn't he. What a dickhead.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 39
Dance sound wonderful. Uh Oh. Wonder what E is going to bid to stop that little cliffy at the end.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 38
Glad peter was looking our for our girl.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 25
love it I read this on ffn and love it so much
Date: 18 Dec 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 37
awww for Peter and Erik
Date: 18 Dec 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 36
so cute that Petey is so protective of her.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 35
Peter is going to be a great asset I think. Stupid Caius and Alec. ewww I hope B wasnt' meant for one of them.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 34
awww a little matchmaking with Erik and Peter maybe???? Go Protector Peter at the end. Grr who shot at our girls!!!
Date: 18 Dec 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 33
Glad she had a good shoppingtrip. LOL for Em not wanting to change for pics. Go Bella with getting Z to come. Siohban seems really great. hope she is what she seems.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 32
Good planning with Jake and Stefan. Hope Stefan can be trusted. LOL for burning Dinner
Date: 18 Dec 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 31
Wedding plans sound good. I agree with the extra guards and for staying at E's place.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 30
hmm Guessing the intended is someone in Aro's organization. yummy end. Christmas wedding sounds good.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 29
woohoo wonderful reunion
Date: 18 Dec 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 28
Glad she got to say goodbye to Peter and company.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 27
Glad they talked things out. Skankya is lucky E let her run
Date: 18 Dec 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 26
ah so Peter sees E huh? Glad he asks about Skankya before giving up the info.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 25
I think I would have freaked if I were B too.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Ah Erik... guessing he knows the truth about Skankya then if he's helping E. Ugh stupid Charlie.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
grrr Charlie with Aro and Skankya lied.....gee what a surprise....NOT. Wonder if Peter rats her out or does E find her another way?
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 23
I loved Esme slapping Tanya it felt good.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 22
Poor things all of them
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
B is smart about this. Glad she ran into Zafrina.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ugh you know Skankya is prob knocked up because of the Volturi or something like that.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 20
oMFG. Please tell me thats not true? Skankya cannot be prego by him. nononono
Date: 29 Jul 2013 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 18
I hope the snake isn't lying to Edward...
Date: 29 Jul 2013 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love that she did that for Carlisle!!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2013 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm sooo hooked on this story!
Date: 29 Jul 2013 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 12
I love daddy Carlisle!