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Date: 30 May 2021 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 53

the romance is kust as good as the lemons

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Date: 30 May 2021 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 52

awesome

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Date: 29 May 2021 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 45

hat last bit brought tears to my also

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Date: 29 May 2021 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 40

love you too

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Date: 29 May 2021 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 38

so goodbut sure how a gay dancer would turn mafioso that quickly

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Date: 27 May 2021 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 27

I would have to be leery she left so fast without a second thought

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Date: 27 May 2021 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 17

it would be scary for someone in Bella's situation I worry about my spouse when they go out in traffic I could not deal with the fears Bella has

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2021 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 10

something tells me she is about to find out what she has been missing

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2021 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 9

this is awesome so glad it was on Tufano's favorite list

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Date: 26 May 2021 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 9

this is awesome so glad it was on Tufano's favorite list

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Date: 26 May 2021 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 3

if course he is

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2021 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

awesome start

Reviewer: Randi Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2018 11:53 PM Title: Future Take

That was really a great story, thanks for sharing it with us..

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2017 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 60

I'm in a Mobward place this month so I re-read my favs and yours is one of them. Thanks again for writing it and keeping it up here on the site. Cheers to you!!!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 4:23 AM Title: Future Take

Just found this story and I love it

Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2016 12:59 AM Title: Future Take

Miss your writing style. Too bad you don't write on this site anymore. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 37

It's Felix! He's creepy and always there. 

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2015 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 9

Hahaha Edward knows a bout boots brands? Come on soo stupid



Author's Response:

Doesn't everyone know Louis Vuitton?  They are know. For their red soles. Even my husband knows them. 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2015 5:20 PM Title: Future Take

excellent story ;) 5 kids awesome!!!! thanks for completing and posting this on here :D

Reviewer: tricklem Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 1:43 AM Title: Future Take

Great story. I really enjoyed reading it. 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2015 8:08 PM Title: Future Take

looking forward to Dancerward and would not mind future outtakes

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 60

the Esme part made me cry and I was freaked with the boys getting "arrested" is a great story

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 12

love it

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2015 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 5

I guess James can wait lol

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2015 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 4

knight in shining armour or dark angel who can say no

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2015 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

great start

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 5:45 AM Title: Future Take

I LOVE IT  ITS EVERYDAY LIFE :D

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2014 4:12 AM Title: Future Take

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I enjoyed it so much!!! :)

Reviewer: Kreitlow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 60

Love it. First time reading one of your stories but I gotta say, I am not disappointed. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 3:04 PM Title: Future Take

Brilliant and beautiful!

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 5:43 AM Title: Future Take

; )

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 3:15 AM Title: Future Take

Hopefully this will help him get his head out of his arse.

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 15

My husband is wondering why I'm sitting here crying. LOL loved it

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 60

Hello it took two days but I read it all and I loved it so much drama and love action and heart thank you

Reviewer: becky Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 15

so awesome!

Reviewer: Gran6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 60

Wow!  What a story!!  I loved every line if it!  More, please!!!

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 46

Great story

Reviewer: becky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to reading your story. Great 1st chapter. 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2013 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 15

Outstanding! 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2013 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh, sweet sweet mafia justice! 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2013 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 4

Awwww

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2013 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

Very good

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2013 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 2

Still see the potential in your writing!   Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2013 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is really good,  you stated that this is your first story,  Bravo!   Great job.  Little grammatical issues but nothing major!   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 60

Wonderful ending.  ROFL for "arresting" the guys.    Wowser 4 kids and still going strong!!!

 

Ty for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 59

Glad Alec is turning out to not be a jerk.   Awww a girl

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 58

awww she's so sweet with everyone.  Yummy lemon too.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 57

wow  B is such a good person.   I don't think I would have been able to do it

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 56

oooh B is scary when she is mad.   Poor Peter too.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 55

hmmm now what are those men up too I wonder.   Bella is the consumate sweet hostess

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 54

yummy wedding night.  lemon dance for that.

ld

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 53

aww wonderful speeches.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 52

aww  so glad B had her room for the moment with Esme.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 51

aww for Peter's speech.  yey for wedding rehearsal.  LOL for the Father

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 50

Glad Peter is going to be ok

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 49

woo hoo  Go Peter and B protecting the family.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 48

OMG  Felix is the traitor????   Figures Renee was a goomah and killed.   So glad for the tracking devices.   Glad Felix didnt know about them.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 47

Poor B  Morning sickness can be nasty thats for sure.    EEEK for ending.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 46

awww what wonderful news!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 45

Glad E got her calmed down.  At tleast sthe went somewhere safe.    Aww for the Dad and B talk

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 44

ow wowser.   Wonder what Charlie meant by closer

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 43

Wow  Go bad ass Bella.  Glad she got it out of her system.  Go Peter.  He is shaping up to being a extra great guy.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 42

hmmm truth or lies.....that is the question.   Charlie is a moron for coming back though.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 41

oooh yummy end.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 40

Wow  Riley really wants to die doesn't he.   What a dickhead.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 39

Dance sound wonderful.  Uh Oh.  Wonder what E is going to bid to stop that little cliffy at the end.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 38

Glad peter was looking our for our girl.   

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 25

love it I read this on ffn and love it so much

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 24

love it

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 37

awww for Peter and Erik

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 36

so cute that Petey is so protective of her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 35

Peter is going to be a great asset I think.   Stupid Caius and Alec. ewww I hope B wasnt' meant for one of them.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 34

awww a little matchmaking with Erik and Peter maybe????   Go Protector Peter at the end.   Grr who shot at our girls!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 33

Glad she had a good shoppingtrip.  LOL for Em not wanting to change for pics.   Go Bella with getting Z to come.  Siohban seems really great.  hope she is what she seems.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 32

Good planning with Jake and Stefan.   Hope Stefan can be trusted.  LOL for burning Dinner

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 31

Wedding plans sound good.  I agree with the extra guards and for staying at E's place.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 30

hmm Guessing the intended is someone in Aro's organization.  yummy end.  Christmas wedding sounds good.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 29

woohoo  wonderful reunion

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 28

Glad she got to say goodbye to Peter and company.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 27

Glad they talked things out.   Skankya is lucky E let her run

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 26

ah so Peter sees E huh?   Glad he asks about Skankya before giving up the info.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 25

I think I would have freaked if I were B too.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

Ah Erik...  guessing he knows the truth about Skankya then if he's helping E.    Ugh stupid Charlie.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 23

grrr Charlie with Aro  and Skankya lied.....gee what a surprise....NOT.  Wonder if Peter rats her out or does E find her another way?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 23

I loved Esme slapping Tanya it felt good.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 22

Poor things all of them

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 21

so sad

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 22

B is smart about this.   Glad she ran into Zafrina.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 20

love it

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 21

Ugh you know Skankya is prob knocked up because of the Volturi or something like that.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 20

oMFG.  Please tell me thats not true?   Skankya cannot be prego by him.  nononono

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 23

go Esme...

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 18

I hope the snake isn't lying to Edward...

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 17

:)

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love that she did that for Carlisle!!!! 

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 14

I'm sooo hooked on this story!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 13

:))

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 12

I love daddy Carlisle!

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