Date: 08 May 2017 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 32
Please! Come back.....you are missed.
READ YOU SOON 🌺
Date: 11 Apr 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 32
Glad you are back writing.
Date: 29 Mar 2015 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 32
I'm here! XOXO,Cheri
Date: 26 Mar 2015 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 32
Looking forward to reading the updates. Glad to see you are back.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2015 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 32
Love your story glad you doing better.Can't wait for more .
Date: 25 Mar 2015 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 32
Hang in there! Glad you are back!
Date: 24 Mar 2015 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 32
Hurray! can't wait so glad things are better for u
Date: 24 Mar 2015 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 32
glad your writing again looking forward to updates
Date: 24 Mar 2015 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 32
Can't wait!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Mar 2015 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 32
thanks for the info
Date: 24 Mar 2015 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 32
Still here :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?
its been almost a year since an update i hope you haven't abandoned it its too good
Author's Response:
No I have just had alot of things going on in real life ! I will be back soon I promise!!
Date: 19 May 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?
Strange. I really can't reconcile this with the quality of your earlier stories. It seems almost as if someone else is writing this, as opposed to "Master to you", "Graduation gift" etc... Did something happen, a new beta maybe?
Author's Response:
So you don't like this story ? I have the same Beta, due share what the problem is ok. please message me and let me no.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2014 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
Really loving this story so far....hoping edward can fix the brokenness!
Looking forward to the lemons too! xx
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 31
I'm glad that Bella's been able to tell Dr Banner what happened to her and how her parents turned against her. She's taken her first baby steps to recovering and becoming a stronger person.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 30
Bella's definitely better off in familiar surroundings and hopefully with Dr Banner being around 24/7 she'll feel more able to talk and start to get better, build her self esteem.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 29
Poor Bella, it's going to take her some time to get through this, well both of them really.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 28
I seem to be lurching from one 'Oh my God!' to another 'Oh my God!' So here goes, oh my God!!
Jane x
Date: 19 Feb 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 31
I am glad that Bella is opening up, so she can heal. It is time for them to really learn about each other and establish a strong relationship. Hopefully Bella will get stronger and have better selfworth through her submission and therapy.
Date: 14 Feb 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 31
I am glad that Bella is getting help.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 31
I love the story but a long wait for a short chapter without much progress
Date: 11 Feb 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 31
Poor Bella! I hope she it's on the road to recovery ;)
Date: 10 Feb 2014 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 31
Why is Edward so afraid to talk to her now? Good chapter.
Date: 10 Feb 2014 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 31
Good thing the doctor was there
Date: 18 Dec 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 30
Bella has a long road ahead of her. She needs to learn to love herself and she will with Edward's help.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 30
Thanks! Love this story ;)
Date: 14 Dec 2013 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 30
Motives. I need motives besides money. Great update.
Date: 14 Dec 2013 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 30
charlie is a bad dad
Date: 14 Dec 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 29
bella now has a doctor
Date: 14 Dec 2013 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 29
I can not believe that Bella's dad help kidnap her. Can you remind us or tell why he did it??
Date: 14 Dec 2013 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 28
Poor Edward!!! Poor Bella!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2013 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 30
thank you for the updates...Charlie how could you.............I hope Bella recovers quickly
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2013 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 30
hurry back
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2013 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thank you to both you and your Beta for both updates. loved them
Date: 13 Dec 2013 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 30
Poor thing she is still blaming herself for everything
Date: 13 Dec 2013 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 29
I was so afraid for her
Date: 13 Dec 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 30
I am spool excited for the updates and hope you make your goal! Kudos to RAH07890.
Date: 05 Dec 2013 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 28
bella had a delicate hold on sanity to begin with
Date: 25 Nov 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 28
I have just read this from the start. Personally I find such short chapters irritating, but I know others prefer them so I'm not complaining too much!
I think the idea of a father allowing his daughter's rapists to go free like in this story is very implausible without there being some other factor that (presumably) will come out in the next few chapters. The love at first sight I get, sort of, but the auction, when Bella was set OK and had an 'in' to find a Master more openly and able to exercise choice I don't understand.
So far not too much BDSM taking place. Are the other memebers of Edward's family in the lifestyle or just aware of Edward's choice?
I liked the twist of having Aro involved in Bella's kidnapping - I didn't see that one coming at all!
MB
Date: 24 Nov 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
Welcome back. I can't wait to see how Bella is.
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 28
Thanks for the update I was wonderning if u abandoned the story was so glad to see that u hadn't. Please try to make not so long between updates. I have absoulty love reading this very captivating & intriging story!!!!
Date: 22 Nov 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
I hope that the police are tracing Edward's car and trying to find Aro. Edward needs to get his money back as well.
Date: 22 Nov 2013 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
Thanks! I love this story ;)
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2013 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 28
Poor Bella and Edward.
Date: 22 Nov 2013 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 28
poor Edward and Bella they are both going through a break down
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 27
What the hell!? What on earth is going on?
Jane x
Date: 02 Oct 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 27
Why is Aro doing all of this?????? Who is this unknown POV?????
Date: 21 Sep 2013 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 27
Ahh you lost me completely. :(
Author's Response:
I'm sorry I hope you enjoy it I will be updating soon hope that will help clear it all up !
Date: 16 Sep 2013 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
Who keeps 4.5 million in their house? Why are they doing this? Edward has to have security that will have recorded the scenes at his house. Why would Charlie do this to Bella.
Date: 15 Sep 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 27
Charlie and Aro? Isn't Aro respected and all that? Won't he have to leave town now?
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
looking forward to the next update
Date: 15 Sep 2013 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks! I can't wait for more ;)
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 27
her own dad has her and i don't think he will let her go
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 26
Who has Bella? Who's Sir?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2013 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh my God!!!!
Jane x
Date: 11 Sep 2013 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
Poor Bella. Hold on Edward will save you.
Date: 10 Sep 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 26
Who ever it is she is really scared....
Date: 10 Sep 2013 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 26
Can't wait for the next update :)
Date: 10 Sep 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
Look out Charlie
Date: 10 Sep 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to reading more :)
Date: 10 Sep 2013 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?
Looking forward to reading more :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2013 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 26
loving this story
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2013 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 26
oh no poor bella
Date: 09 Sep 2013 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 26
Who in the hell is it a he better be dead befor long cant wait for more
Date: 09 Sep 2013 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
Shit no who is at the door
Date: 09 Sep 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 26
OMG! I can't wait for more ;)
Author's Response:
Soon I promise
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 26
oh goodness who has bella
well edward get her back
who scared her so bad, wow
Date: 09 Sep 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 26
Who has Bella? You can not leave us hanging for to long.....PLEASE!!!!
Author's Response:
never !
Date: 09 Sep 2013 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 25
What has happened????
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2013 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
So Bella has her wish and she's been collared by her Master and their contract is in place. I don't like that Edward referred to Bella as being needy and high maintenance, even if that's what he wants he didn't need to mention it. If I was Bella I would be very upset and offended by that remark. It's a good job I'm not her, lol, I'd be in so much trouble I probably wouldn't sit down for a year.
Jane x
Date: 23 Jul 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 24
I love the strong yet caring letter Edward wrote.
Date: 18 Jul 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 24
Kinda of lofty....you can't fix everything for someone
Date: 18 Jul 2013 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 22
She still is a bad mom youDont abandon your daughter
Date: 18 Jul 2013 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
Well the l word is out....trouble ahead
Date: 18 Jul 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well at least she got some of it out
Date: 18 Jul 2013 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
Glad she came out of it
Date: 18 Jul 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
Poor Bella no one would ever want that!
Date: 18 Jul 2013 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well Renee is huge bitch
Date: 18 Jul 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 14 My Demons
Poor Bella I hope they can help her
Date: 18 Jul 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
This is not going to be good....
Date: 18 Jul 2013 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
Look out Charlie!
Date: 18 Jul 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love is a little quick to declare after one day isn't it?
Date: 18 Jul 2013 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
Dang....he just can't get enough....it is good so far!
Date: 18 Jul 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
I wonder what Ed will do when he finds out
Date: 18 Jul 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 6
He seems like he really wants to take care of her