Date: 07 Jun 2021 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 31
glad I found this , enjoyed the read..you did a wonderful job putting this together. thanks for sharing!!!
Date: 27 Jun 2020 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
God I don't like Kim
Date: 30 Mar 2017 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am loving your story so far. It's so laid back and easy flowing.
Date: 18 Apr 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 28
Damn!!! That was messed up! That was a horrible place to end. I really really hope you're able to post next chapter soon.
Date: 09 Jan 2014 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
I would love to read that story
Author's Response:
*sigh* my mojo is non existent. :( every time i sit and write nothing come up, but dont worry as soon as I finish this one I will contnue with my others. Thanks for the review :)
Date: 09 Dec 2013 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 27
Anxious for next!!
Date: 12 Sep 2013 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
They're cute together!! ;D ;D
Date: 15 Aug 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 21
Jared and Bella? Strange.. hahah. love it!
Date: 10 Aug 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
That's interesting that Jared can hear and communicate with Bella. I was worried for a minute but very glad it's a brother/sister thing. Kim is such a spoiled self-centered bitch! I'm sure she'll have a lot to say about Bella, Leah, and Paul being in a poly relationship. While the elders are checking Jared and Bella's bloodlines, maybe could check to see if there's a way to un-imprint so Jared find someone he could be happy with instead of miserable for ever. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 09 Aug 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
really enjoying this story so far.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
i would like to read more on this story.
Date: 23 Jul 2013 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
Continue!! Love it!
Date: 22 Jul 2013 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really loved the story. Im hock to the storynwhatbwouls like to know what happens next. Please write more to this story. It's awesome story. Please keep it going.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm completely and totally hooked on this story. I can't wait to see how they work on their relationship and "get to know each other". Just the little scene in the kitchen was hot!! I'll bet when they actually all come together it will be smokin' hot!!
Date: 18 Jul 2013 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
like the story, just difficult to read with all the grammer
Date: 03 Jun 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
Continue continue!!! Love it!
Date: 28 May 2013 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
I dont understand why kim is seen to be ignorant and closed minded just because she doesn't believe in the same thing as bella or Emily the way I see it kim gas choose not to accept the concept of unnatural relationships and everyone can have choice to accept or to not accept right? Why does it seem like there is the force that she must accept or she is ignorant and close minded. I dont like beef, am I ignorant and closed minded because I refuse to eat beef or believe that everyone shouldnt eat it?
Author's Response:
You are the second person that has an issue with this. Let me ask you something do you look down at others that eat meat? Do you make it your mission to preach at them saying that meat is not good for them, that your way is better than theirs and that you are right no matter how others feel about it? This is what Kim is doing. She doesnt have to accept it, shit she doesnt even have to like it but that doesnt mean that she should throw her belief onto others. Leah and Bella are happy, the others dont mind their relationship, all they see is a happy couple. Kim doesnt seem to see that, all she see are her beliefs and how she was taught and that Leah and Bella are wrong.
Being open minded is being able to accept that not everythign is as you like it to be, that there are differences in the world and with time everything changes. If we were to meet and go out to eat would you look down at me for ordering steak? or would you just accept the fact that I eat diffferent than you but in no way, shape or form it changes the type of person I am.
Do Leah and Bella have to act like a couple not in love because Kim is uncomfortable at their relationship? Why should Kim be comforted and be put above everyone else? If she doesnt like it then she can either leave or just deal with it. She already made her dislike made no need to keep pushing the issue.
If you dont like the story hun then dont read. The pairing is a Leah and Bella pairing, if you are not comfortable with that pairing why read. Are you going to have a problem when Paul gets involved?
Date: 28 May 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
I think kim does have something there same sex lovin is unnatural but in todays world we have natural and unnatural concepts not judging just stating a fact
Author's Response:
You said you are not judging but then you call it unnatural. How is it two people being in loving comitted relationship unnatural. It doent matter if they the same sex or not, they have a right to love whomever they want.
Date: 20 May 2013 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
OH, Bella don´t feel hurt... Paul is yours too, hahahah
Date: 03 May 2013 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
Uhul!! Paul arrived!!! Love it!! Anxius for the next chapter ;D
Date: 27 Apr 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
Whoo hooo, Pauls feeling it Bella. Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing.
Date: 20 Apr 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love it!!! Anxious for Paul/Bella/Leah!!
Date: 07 Apr 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter!! Can't wait to read more! And the new story looks good!
-Kate
Date: 21 Mar 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love it! When Paul will appear?
Author's Response:
He will be gone for three months but Im going to be doing some time jump. There is so much fluffiness I can do before it gets old. There will be more drama with Kim and some other playes but it wont take long for Paul to show up.
Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 12 Mar 2013 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
Enjoying it! Thanks for writing.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
I like the fic! Dont like Kim! I dislike anyone who judges people for who they love. I wish everyone one would keep the nasty comments to themselves. In RL or fanfic world. Thanks for writing.
Date: 24 Feb 2013 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 17 Feb 2013 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like it... And want to read more... Please update soon
Date: 15 Feb 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great start!!! Can't wait to read more!!! :)
-Kate