Date: 26 Jul 2020 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 22
Please update this story soon it is wonderful so far and you are a fantastic writer!
Date: 21 Apr 2019 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love this story so much! I really hope you come back and complete it!
Date: 25 Oct 2016 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love it Please update.
Date: 24 Oct 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
i love it and i hope you countinue it
Date: 22 Sep 2016 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Are you going to finish it?
Date: 09 Jun 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love this story, I was just checking to see if you had updated or decided to finish it. I check here and on fanfiction. It's a shame you stopped where you did, I would have loved to have seen where you went with this from here....
Date: 18 Feb 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
Are you ever going to update this story. Because I really want to know what the will said and what's going to happen with the blacks.
Date: 30 Jan 2015 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
loved reading this waiting for an update
Date: 01 Jan 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
Its been forever, when will receive an update. What does the will say...
Please up date soon.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
I really like the plot to your story, your writing is also gradually getting better as it continues :) good job! I can't wait to read more
Date: 03 Dec 2013 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 22
It amazes me how self important some people feel they are.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love this story please keep . Up the good work, I can not wait for the will reading, I hope that Bella gets it all.
Date: 26 Nov 2013 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
I loved it update soon
Date: 24 Nov 2013 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 22
It is a good thing they are getting away. Cauis could go crazy after the will is read.
Date: 24 Nov 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 22
LOVED IT! THANK YOU
Date: 24 Nov 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love it! Though I can't wait to see what the Cullen's idea of camping is. :)
Date: 24 Nov 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved the update. Newton is creepy but I can't wait for the will reading. Sounds good.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2013 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm really enjoying this story. You're doing a great job. Drama, suspense, romance,bad boys and Sex! Just what any good story needs. Can't wait for the reading of the will.Hope the next chap. is up soon. Thank You for sharing your imagination and creativity with us. It must be hard putting this out there and not knowing how it will be received. I say, GOOD JOB!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
I can't wait for the next up date I hope it's sooner this time
Date: 23 Nov 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
That was amazing! I really loved this chapter! I cannot wait to see what their camping trip will be like.
Date: 23 Nov 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 22
I was so excited to get this update!!!!!!! I can not wait to see what is in the will. Worried just a little about Cauis and Mike!!!!!! Glad that Bella is excited about their camping trip. But I am sure that the Cullen's camping adventure is not like the general public's camping adventure.
Date: 23 Nov 2013 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 22
excellent. waiting for more. i'm glad that aro changed the will and didn't inform people. lol
Date: 22 Nov 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
Good chapter. Poor Bella, how sad to lose her grandfather when she just met him. Her life sure has changed from the beginning of this story.
Date: 22 Nov 2013 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
great chapter loved it
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
Excellent story.... worth the wait for new chapters.
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
Yay, a new chapter! I love this story!
Date: 22 Nov 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
Rainbow Falls sounds nice. Poor B ss sad. Ugh Newton.
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2013 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 22
IT HAS BEEN A LONG WAIT BUT WELL WORTH IT. THANK YOU!
Date: 22 Nov 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
So good to hear from you thanks. Poor Bella so sad I cant wait for the reading of the will shit is going to hit the fan when the creeps find out they get nothing lol
Date: 22 Nov 2013 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
Good Chapter, I am interested what the reading will show and maybe there will finally be some peace for Bella and she can truly start to enjoy be married and now that she has closure with her family she can move on with her life.
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 21
Aaaawwww.....well, at least he was able to meet her and pass her his legacy!!! Only problem is I'm sure Caius, the Denali's, and the Black's may cause a scene.....not to mention others that may not like Aro's choices!!! MORE SOON PLEASE!!! LOVE IT!!!
Date: 15 Oct 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow this story it great! I 'm really enjoying it . I hope you continue
to finish this stort, it would be so sad to let it go unfinished!
Sincerely, L.Jacox
Date: 27 Aug 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 21
Bella has been through so much. She needs some time to think everything through. She is on overload.
Date: 27 Aug 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh no! Aro is dead and the crap is really going to hit the fan. It'll be nice to have Bella's whole family together, in a way!? ...poor Bella, talk about an up and down couple of days! Her highs and lows are very extreme. Thanks for update, I loved it and love this story...always hoping for more, soon!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it. Wonder how Billy will handle them moving Charlie and Renee? Why wouldn't he let her go to the cemetery? See ya next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2013 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 21
"Edward was laughing so hard....he snorted coffee out of his nose" lol lol if I'd been drinking coffee while reading the story about Emmett cooking I would have snorted coffee too::))
"He just passed away, about an hour ago, in his sleep.” Well, this is a new experience! Don't think I've ever been sad that Aro dies until now:(
Date: 21 Aug 2013 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
To much to handle so sad just find family and loss them just as fast poor thing
Date: 21 Aug 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 21
Awwwww. I really was hoping they would have a relationship. Great chapter though
Date: 21 Aug 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 21
great chapter loved it sad his gone but at least she got to meet him cant wait to see wat happens next update soon
Date: 21 Aug 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh wow, that was AMAZING! I cannot wait for the next one! I also cannot wait for more lemons ;)
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 21
love it
alot of fun on the gund range
so sad to hear about aro. how heartbreaking for bella.
i am glad for bella having edward and his family
love it
Date: 21 Aug 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
of course it's a good chapter as always butl too short for the long wait. maybe next one will be longer. please!!!!!!!!!! (hehehe) til next time.
Date: 20 Aug 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
I knew that Aro would die soon. Now I am really afraid for Bella. I just hope Aro's "people" do not come after her.
Date: 20 Aug 2013 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 20 Aug 2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
Poor Bella. But At least she has the Cullen's.
Date: 20 Aug 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
Can't wait for mor eplease update ASAFP.
Date: 20 Aug 2013 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 21
awww she's lots grandpa Aro now too. poor thing. Glad E is there to support her.
Date: 20 Aug 2013 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
excellent. waiting for more.
Date: 23 Jul 2013 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
I slore down and one to go. Bella has stated her claim on her man, Edward.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love that Bella knows how to kick ass and won't take shit from hoes going after her man
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
update plz this is good
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
I like the story, but when people speak to Edward that way I have a difficult time picturing him as a mafia leader. The girls coming around throwing themselves at him is believable to a certain extent, but having Tanya hit Bella should of made Edward put a bullet through her head. He just doesn't come across tough enough and feared enough. I think I'm going to like having Aro as Bella's grandfather.
Date: 15 Jul 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great two chapter update. I am happy that aro gave bella the folder. now I have a better idea exactly how big of a deal it is that bella is his granddaughter. will they get a chance to deepen their relationship? Great job with the slores too.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
This chapter did a much better job convincing me that Edward is the leader of the mafia.
Date: 15 Jul 2013 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
That is love and Bella is a wild cat. I think others will think first before trying to mess with her man.
Date: 15 Jul 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
"...Bella had Lauren on the floor and was repeatedly punching her in the face..." lol lol Bella's getting her confidence:)
I suspect Bella will be lethal by the end of the story.
Date: 15 Jul 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
Take that Tanya and I would like to see her head blown off. Poor Bella she just want to know her family and time is almost up
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2013 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
“I swear to God, Edward. The next bimbo that comes up to you, I’M putting a bullet between her eyes.” lol perfect ending to a great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
My favorite line so far is about Esme smelling the baby powder. That was brilliant! I was glad to see a more dominate Edward in this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
Interesting story so far. I always like Edward in the mafia. As a head of the mafia he should be more feared though. I really feel Tanya has greatly overstepped her bounds and in the real mafia world she would be dead. Having Tanya behave that way makes him look wimpy. I love Edward's instant attraction to Bella.
Date: 15 Jul 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
great story! can't wait for more :)
Date: 15 Jul 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow!!! Bella is one fighting machine. LOL!!!!!!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
I hope Bella does get some time to get to know her grandfather. I hope that at some point in this story that Bella gets to slap the shit out of Tanya. PLEASE!!!!!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
OMG Loved it!!! Please update soon.. Looking forward to more! thanks
Date: 14 Jul 2013 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 20
LOVED IT. THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 20
Way to go Bella whipping Lauren ass
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
Go Bella!!!!!!!!! She sure knows how to handle herself. Can't wait for her to show up the guys at the shooting range!!!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love the chapters. Maybe the blonde bimbets should have listened to Edward. Now what is eleazar going to do when he finds out Bella is Volturi. Hurry back with more.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
o my god i love this story keep up the good work and i love the kick ass bella and eddie
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
oh bella what a way to go
these skanks need to leave your man alone, so proud of you
love it
Date: 14 Jul 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
Gah, those lemons were amazing :) I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow, that was amazing :) I really loved it! One thing, "fire arm" is one word :)
Date: 14 Jul 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 20
Can't wait for more.