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Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2018 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 137

Love it

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 137

I love rereading your stories

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 137

Loved it thank you

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 137

thanks for sharing this great story with us ;D 

Reviewer: Bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 137

Nice story😉

Reviewer: lamelurker Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 137

Thank you for writing and sharing your story!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 137

Love love love it!!!!!!!! Great job

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 136

YES!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 135

PERFECT! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 134

He said earlier in the story that he was not much in the romance side. I believe that he is VERY romantic. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 133

I am thinking that he is going to propose! !!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 132

So glad they are happy together. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 131

Glad that they are together. 

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 130

LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS CHAPTER! !!!!!!!! PERFECT

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 129

So his is romantic.  How wonderful.  Bella and Edward deserve to be happy. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 128

Glad that he went to the parents first. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 127

Edward is so sweet. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 126

Yes she needs time but she also needs him too.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 125

Well I guess Bella told him. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 124

So they both know that the other has feelings for the other. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 123

Wow. He will not be able to leave her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 122

I wonder if Bella will tell him her some of her feelings too.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 121

I never thought about them threatening to come back and get Alice

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 120

Love Tanya in this story.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 119

What did they tell bell

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 118

Glad for Seth. I knew he was a good man.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 117

Seth is a better man than that tournament. I don't understand why he would want to be involved with some thing like that.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 116

Wow. He had been out for 3 days. Wow! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 115

Love that she stayed with him. She probably felt more safe with him than any where.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 114

I don't blame Edward for wanting Bella right beside him

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 113

I am thinking that most of the girls are going to leave.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 112

Wow,  Jacob's father was in on it too. Wow.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 111

Hope the tribal leaders take care of Jacob and the others

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 110

Burn baby burn!!!!! Jacob has admitted it in front of everyone

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 109

Jacob has some nerve.  Why does he want her so bad? 

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 108

Love that he knows the difference even though he can't see

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 107

I think the fight is going to continue.  I can not believe that Jacob said surrender. Wow.  He must be in bad shape. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 106

Go Edward! !! Go Edward! !!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 105

Wow 15 min. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 104

Bless Bella's heart. 

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 103

I wonder what her reaction will be when she sees Edward

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 102

He finally sees her

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 101

Bless Seth ' s heart. Glad he was thinking ahead. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 100

I hope Edward listens to Seth.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 99

Hope he knows what he is doing

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 98

Why did Edward run out with Seth??

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 97

I hope the referee is fair

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 96

So all this time and Edward still has not laid eyes on Bella.  That has got to be hard.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 95

Love it

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 94

Edward is going to wipe that smirk off his face

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 93

I hope in the end that she goes home

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 92

Bless her heart

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 91

Why does she look scared.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 90

Glad that worked put.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 89

Hope she doesn't turn on Edward. 

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 88

Love that he has fans. I hope Tanya is not developing feelings for Edward. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 87

Love his gift to her. How sweet. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 86

Bless both of their hearts. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 85

I think she really wanted to stay....because of him.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 84

That was so sweet of Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 83

Poor Edward.  He has a lot on him right now. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 82

OMGosh! !!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 81

Hope Edward can bring down the tournament. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 80

Bless Esme ' s heart.  Always the loving mother. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 79

Glad Edward is wanting to help all of the girls.  I am thinking it is Carlisle checking on Edward. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 78

So glad that Edward is going to help them and they are going to help Edward

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 77

That is such a horrible life

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 76

Edward is going to kill Jacob. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 75

Some how I don't believe that to be true now.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 74

Hope they help

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 73

I hope they help him. Maybe they will look out for bell when they get back.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 72

Ok. I was upset with Edward at first.  But he is thinking with the right head. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 71

He better turn her down

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 70

Live a cocky Edward

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 69

Sizing up everyone not just Jake.  Smart move.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 68

Yes at least he is thinking straight. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 67

What is going on?  Where is Bella? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 66

Edward has a plan

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 65

At least Edward admitted she means something to him.

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 64

If Edward says he is going to fight then he will fight. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 63

Edward is going to lose it.

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 62

I don't think they know who he is or they would have been more impressed with him being there. 

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 61

Seth better listen

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 60

Seth better listen to Edward

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 59

Well ypu know what this means.  Edward is going to fight/kill Jacob. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 58

I have a feeling that Paul is going to wish he was a dead man when Edward gets through with him.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 57

Well Paul better start talking

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 56

Wow. Edward is a bad ass

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 55

Start to the point. 

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 54

Yes I think Paul has a bad problem. 

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 53

At least someone has Edward's back. 

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 52

That is scary. I can't believe that Edward is just waiting. 

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 51

Sounds like Edward and Bella have a lot in common. 

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 50

That is awful but true for a lot of families. 

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 49

Can't wait to find out. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 48

Is Renee in shock or does not care? 

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 47

Why does Paul want Bella

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 46

Hope he talks

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 45

Edward is going to hurt him if he doesn't open his mouth and start talking. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 44

I am wanting to know if this has anything to do with Edward not fighting any more. 

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