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Reviewer: Schultal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 7:57 PM Title: The Black Family

Great story, but there were some grammatical errors I would just look over and fix. Otherwise it was a wonderful story and plot!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2016 3:20 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved it.

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 7:07 PM Title: Time Spend a Part

I was huge with both of my kids....people thought I was having twins....but they were just big kids!

Reviewer: Ebbegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 3:29 AM Title: Epilogue

Great Story!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2015 2:05 PM Title: Epilogue

a wonderful story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 3:49 PM Title: Time Spend a Part

sad way to make babies

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 3:15 PM Title: Never Say Goodbye

glad I could put this story over 100

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 2:45 PM Title: Home Sweet Home

asshat jake

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 2:12 PM Title: The Road Trip Home

had the man never performed oral before?

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 1:40 PM Title: Shows Over, Go Home!

A great story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 1:11 PM Title: The Meeting

WOW

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2015 12:14 PM Title: Wednesday, Week 1

AWWW

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2015 2:01 AM Title: Mrs. Cullen Goes to Forks

RUDE AWAKENING FOR kATE

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2015 1:36 AM Title: The Cullen Family

SO FAR SO GOOD

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2015 1:00 AM Title: The Black Family

INTERESTING

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2015 12:17 PM Title: Mrs. Black Goes to Portland

Super good

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 10:15 PM Title: I'm Coming Home

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 9:34 PM Title: Time Spend a Part

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 8:56 PM Title: Never Say Goodbye

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 8:24 PM Title: Home Sweet Home

Loved It! Jake is an ass!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 7:41 PM Title: The Road Trip Home

I absolutely live this story!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 6:14 PM Title: Shows Over, Go Home!

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:58 PM Title: The Meeting

Loved it! Go Bella!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:38 PM Title: Sunday, Week 2 Part III

Love it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:21 PM Title: Sunday, Week 2 Part II

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:40 PM Title: Sunday, Week 2 Part I

Love it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:16 PM Title: Saturday, Week 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:42 PM Title: Friday, Week 2

Loved it! Kate is finally getting what she deserves!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:09 PM Title: Thursday, Week 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:50 PM Title: Wednesday, Week 2

 

 

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:30 PM Title: Tuesday, Week 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:16 PM Title: Monday, Week 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:51 PM Title: Sunday, Week 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:39 PM Title: Saturday, Week 1

Loved it! I really hate Kate!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:09 PM Title: Friday, Week 1

Loved it! I really hate Kate!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:03 PM Title: Thursday, Week 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 11:43 AM Title: Wednesday, Week 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 11:16 AM Title: Tuesday, Week 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 10:06 AM Title: Monday, Week 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 9:23 AM Title: Mrs. Cullen Goes to Forks

Loved it! I really hate Kate!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 9:07 AM Title: Mrs. Black Goes to Portland

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 8:24 AM Title: The Cullen Family

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 8:11 AM Title: The Black Family

Loved it!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 6:12 AM Title: Sunday, Week 2 Part I

oh i can't wait for these two women to meet

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 5:11 AM Title: Friday, Week 2

oh goodness kate you are such a piece of work

man  oh man i am loving this story

wow blown away. can't stop reading

wow shocked when leah said she loved jake.  poor bella so many want to bring her down when she looks out for everyone

what happened between bella and edward would not have happened at that time if there where no drugs involved. yes they liked each other but both are honorable and i do not think they would have acted until the both finalized the situation's at home. loving it

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 3:05 AM Title: Epilogue

loved the ending!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all the reviews you have provided during the writing process. They have been greatly appreciated. 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 2:32 AM Title: Epilogue

That's better than ending with Kate! Good grief, that's a lot of kids-glad it's fiction! Thanks for the story!



Author's Response:

Thank heavens for fiction ... I can't even manage with the two I have, lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I have greatly appreciated all your wonderful words about the story. Thanks!

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 2:18 AM Title: Epilogue

So sad this is over loved it 



Author's Response:

I know right, but everything must come to an end. Thanks for reading and reviewing during the writing process. I have appreciated every word of encouragement. Thanks!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2013 12:01 PM Title: Here Comes the Bride

I can't wait for the epilogue. I don't want this story to end with Kate-no matter that she well deserved trouble she's in. I have really enjoyed this story. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2013 11:58 AM Title: Here Comes the Bride

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2013 11:41 AM Title: Here Comes the Bride

Loved it

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 1:49 AM Title: We’re Having a Baby … Babies

Congrats to the new parents!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 1:16 AM Title: We’re Having a Baby … Babies

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 1:01 AM Title: We’re Having a Baby … Babies

Damn I kinda hope they tell Jake to shove it 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2013 2:47 AM Title: Verdicts and Decisions

Wow, what a chapter. Can't wait for the rest.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2013 2:08 AM Title: Verdicts and Decisions

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2013 1:58 AM Title: Verdicts and Decisions

Damn need more

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2013 9:29 AM Title: Double, Double Toil and Trouble

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2013 3:43 AM Title: Double, Double Toil and Trouble

I watched Wife Swap tonight and was hoping for an update to this story. Thanks! I am mad for bella, but I did see the school problems coming. I hope she takes Edward up on his offer to work with him. They make a great team.

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2013 3:00 AM Title: Double, Double Toil and Trouble

Need more

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2013 4:44 AM Title: New Beginnings

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 3:30 AM Title: Merry Christmas Darling

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 6:37 AM Title: Merry Christmas Darling

I think the trouble could be both 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2013 3:42 PM Title: I'm Coming Home

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 2:46 PM Title: The Road Trip Home

Bella has a violent streak in her. Edward better watch himself. I don'tthink she will ever let anyone else hurt her like Jake did without fighting back. Edward obviously never had much experience with woman or he would know never to tell your current love that she is like your ex in any way! Bad Edward!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 5:08 AM Title: Home Sweet Home

looking forward to more

Reviewer: seba nefer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 4:18 AM Title: The Road Trip Home

:)))



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Thanks

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 3:53 AM Title: The Road Trip Home

Damn their first fight

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 3:47 AM Title: The Road Trip Home

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: PrincessSlayer Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 12:07 AM Title: The Black Family

I love this story! Cant wait to read more, keep up the good work...;)



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 4:11 PM Title: Shows Over, Go Home!

Hope Bella doesn't lose her teaching job over her assault of Kate. NOT that the witch didn't haven't coming, but that kind of thing is frowned upon in a pre-school teacher. Leah must be quaking in her shoes.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 3:28 PM Title: The Meeting

Yayyy!!! Go Bella, kick her ASS. That chick deserves everything she gets. I couldn't wait for this chap and it definitly did not disappoint.

E/k

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 5:08 AM Title: Shows Over, Go Home!

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 3:18 AM Title: The Meeting

Go Bella! Don't mess with the woman's kids.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2013 11:37 PM Title: Sunday, Week 2 Part III

Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2013 10:24 PM Title: The Meeting

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2013 4:15 AM Title: Sunday, Week 2 Part II

I really think that Jake needs more punishment. A lot more. A whole lot more. Bella didn't say half of what I would have said to him.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2013 3:55 AM Title: Sunday, Week 2 Part III

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2013 3:49 AM Title: Sunday, Week 2 Part II

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 4:25 AM Title: Sunday, Week 2 Part I

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 4:13 AM Title: Sunday, Week 2 Part I

Damn need more

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 3:59 AM Title: Saturday, Week 2

Damn

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 3:10 PM Title: Friday, Week 2

I just love Benson and Stabler. lol

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 2:45 PM Title: Friday, Week 2

looking forward to the next chatper 

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 2:43 AM Title: Friday, Week 2

Damn hope this ends in a hea for e/b



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:)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 9:31 PM Title: Thursday, Week 2

I am glad the Doublemint Twins will get what's coming to them. I hope they implicate Kate and she goes to jail so Garrett can get custody of the girls without having to spend a lot of money on a lawyer. The tricky part is going to be the confessions of both Jake ( the louse) and Bella ( evn though it wan't her fault).

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 9:07 PM Title: Wednesday, Week 2

Charlie must have the money somewhere. Alice seems to have a lot more secrets in store. Edward is a sweetheart.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 11:44 AM Title: Thursday, Week 2

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 4:42 AM Title: Wednesday, Week 2

looking forward t mroe 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 4:26 PM Title: Saturday, Week 1

Charlie should have hit Jake again.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 2:43 PM Title: Monday, Week 2

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 4:13 AM Title: Saturday, Week 1

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2013 10:03 PM Title: Friday, Week 1

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2013 3:30 AM Title: Friday, Week 1

Those two she-devils! Poor Edward and Bella could have died. They are going to be mortified. I hope whatever you have in store for Kate and the Doublemint Twins is vengeful!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 3:49 PM Title: Thursday, Week 1

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews during the process of writing. I have appreciated each and every one. Thank you so much for your support.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 1:20 PM Title: Tuesday, Week 1

Jake, that dog. I knew something was up with him. But I knew that he wasn't going to fall in love with Kate, so I guess it wraps that up. But poor Bella! He two best friends cheating on her. That sucks. And she and Edward are both going to lose the kids they love. Again, sucks! I can't wait to see what happens.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review ... I apologize for the lateness of a response, but know I got them and appreciated every single one. Thanks!

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 1:18 PM Title: Thursday, Week 1

Just glad Edward was there to help her



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews ... I haven't been responding like a good girl should. But, I appreciated everyone of my reviews during the process of writing the story. Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 12:38 PM Title: Monday, Week 1

Damn can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thanks ... soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 12:09 PM Title: Monday, Week 1

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Soon, have chapter 6 with beta and will be writing 7 sometime today. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 12:07 PM Title: Monday, Week 1

Loving it. Kate is the girl you love to hate!



Author's Response:

She had to be the opposite of Bella in order to make it into the show. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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