Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 3: THE Day, Jacob & Edward POVs
great story
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. :)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 2: THE Day
sexy
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :D
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Questions
wow hot
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :)
Date: 27 Feb 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 3: THE Day, Jacob & Edward POVs
Thanks for giving us Edward and Jacob's POV. that was really good. I did notice one thing from their POV that I did not pick up on when I read Bella's POV. You did NOT have Edward clean himself after taking Bella from behind and then she took him in her mouth. GROSS!!!!!!!!!!! I did not think about that when I read the other chapter.
BREAT JOB with this chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all your reviews. :) Sorry, I totally missed that. lol Guess it was kind of an automatic thing in my head that I didn't actually write it down. ;)
Date: 27 Feb 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 2: THE Day
OMG!!!!!! That was so amazing. You wrote that beautifully. It was written very tastfully. GREAT JOB!!!!! I loved it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 27 Feb 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: Questions
WOW!!!!! I can't believe this. This all sounds soooooo good. Can't wait for it to happen.
Author's Response:
Hehehe Thanks for the reviews. :)
Date: 26 Feb 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: Questions
Write a better summary.
Author's Response:
Hmm, ok. Why is the one I currently have on there not good enough?