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Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 4:12 AM Title: Futuretake

Great ending. How did Bella not see the coincidence with the name Anthony Brandon? I'm guessing that was the Cullens--especially Edward.

 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved hearing Edward's thoughts. Glad the wolves were able to join with him to get rid of Victoria. Now to wait to see if what she said was true. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

As much as I think she made the right choice, it's still so hard to see Edward on his knees and groveling. But, he's going to have to live with the consequences of his actions. 

I have a feeling Charlie is totally aware of what just happened. I'll have to read on to see if I'm right. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2019 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

Uh oh! Is it Edward or one of the other Cullens? Can't wait to find out. Just glad it's probably not Victoria. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2019 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

I told you I'd give this a try. It's a very interesting twist on what did happen in the books. I can't wait to see where the story takes me. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2019 9:42 PM Title: Futuretake

So the Cullen's kept a look-out over Bella.  

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2019 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good for Bella getting out of her "funk"

Reviewer: pokolie Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 6:15 AM Title: Futuretake

i'm gonna go out on a hunch here and guess that it was either alice or Edward cuz Alice's former last name was Brandon and Anthony idk if it sounds like Alice or has 2 do with Eddie

Reviewer: pokolie Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 2

i really loved it... not too many bella/jake fics out there mostly edward lovers but all in all a good story

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