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Reviewer: bosygurl_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2016 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 60 - Epilogue

Do you have a back story to your story

Reviewer: bosygurl_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2016 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 59 - Master of my Destiny

Am glad Russell was dead  and Pam dead feeling alone like nobody didn't care for her I know Eric think Pam betrayal him but they let Sookie get away with everything  she was loive snd pam was not love please reply back

Reviewer: bosygurl_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 55 - Soul Rescuer

Where Eric was gone with Nathaniel and allis where was Pam at you didn't mention it

Reviewer: bosygurl_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 53 - The Defense

That was funny

Reviewer: Virgomrs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2014 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 60 - Epilogue

Exellent read. Thank you so much.

 

Reviewer: CUSpacecowboy Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 59 - Master of my Destiny

Glad Russell died, maker or not its still his fault she got raped when he knew about the trouble Debbie caused. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 60 - Epilogue

Nice ending.  Sucks that Russell had to die.   Pam got off way too easy.   Not sure if I feel sorry for Hunter or not.

TY for writing and sharing with us.

ty

Reviewer: Jadajuice Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 59 - Master of my Destiny

exciting chapter - sorry to see Russell die.    Thanks for all the recent updates !

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 59 - Master of my Destiny

Pam got off WAY to easy for all her betrayals.  Poor Sookie losing another person she loved.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 58 - Break on Through (to the Other Side)

Ugh surprised they brought Pam along.  What a biatch.    Poor Sookie.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 57 - The Beginning

Niall got off Waaaaayyyy to easy.   Should have left enough for Sookie to get her revenge.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 56 - Runaway

Niall is such a coward.  Poor Fintan.  Glad Dermot is going to help.   Sigh  Sookie

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 55 - Soul Rescuer

Ack  You sure know how to deliver the cliffies.    Niall and Alcede both need to die and soon.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 54 - Stolen

Oh Alcede.  You are a moron.  Hope they get Nora soon.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 53 - The Defense

Great planning.  Love Ailis putting Pam in her place.   Hope she gets the message and doesnt do anything stupid again.   

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 52 - Ain’t No Sunshine

There are some Vamp King/Queens who def need to be culled when all is said and done.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 51 - The Truth Behind the Rose

Glad that Roman was there to help explain things.  Wonder what Susie is going to tell them tomorrow.   Ugh Hunter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 50 - Vampire’s Lament

Susie brought up a good point.  Wonder if Sookie absorbed the dying faieries light or something.

Were had it coming.  Stupid idiot.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 49 - The Temper Trap

"when he won her hand"  pfft what a delusional moron.  Can't wait for him to die.  Wonder what Hunter was promised.  Poor little guy.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 48 - In this Moment

Glad Russell is cool with it.  Susie is too cute.

Reviewer: georgiasuzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 48 - In this Moment

Oh wow! That was definitely hot :)  I hope that Russell and Eric can end the feud for good now. It's like they're even; Russell killed Eric's family and Eric killed Russell's. It would be awful for Sookie to have to choose or for Russell to issue a hurtful maker's command. Thanks for the update! 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 47 - The Gift

Glad Susie apploogized and all.   Yey  Jesus is coming.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 46 - Heart of Stone

Go Bad Ass Sookie .   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 45 - Too Young

Glad they are backing up Jason.   Good for Thalia

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 44: Before the Damned

Russell is too funny.   All for warlow the sleezeball rapist showing up.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 43: Wild Thing

oooh hawt hawt hawt

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 42: Highway to Hell

Roman is going to push to far one of these nights.   Poor Fintan

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2014 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 41: The Ties That Bind

Suzie is just too adorable.   Wow  Sad Story.  Niall has a lot to answer for.  

Reviewer: Jadajuice Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 40: Demon Lover

will be hoping for the best for Vamps Mom. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 40: Demon Lover

ooh yummy

dl

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 39: The Devil’s Rejects

Niall needs to die along with anyone else who knew where she was.  Stupid men wanting brood mares.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 38: Fortune Faded

Glad they thought to bring Jason and Susie in.   hmm  Warlow pissed at Niall.  Is it too much to hope that they kill each other?   Yea I know wishful thinking.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 37: Fairy Tale

Can't wait for Niall and Warlow toget what's coming to them, esp Niall.   And the pussy "royalty" who want to give over Sookie.   Poor Sookie is surely feeling guilt and helplessness over hunter and all.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 36: Reprive

OOOH E and S get some lemony time!!!! yey

Reviewer: Jadajuice Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2013 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 35: The Safest Way into Tomorrow

This story has become one of my favorites.  Thanks for sharing and this quick update.  have a great holiday season and look forward to more in the New Year -

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2013 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 35: The Safest Way into Tomorrow

ROFL for the Quinn comments.  Love it.  Poor Susie.

Reviewer: Jadajuice Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2013 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 34: Madman Across the Water

Thank you so much for the update.  Poor little Susie,  what a way to unite all these vamps against this common threat !  I'll try to patiently wait for the next chapter !

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 34: Madman Across the Water

Niall you are a moronic fool who want to start an interspecies war.  Hope someone get to drink his child selling arse.

Reviewer: Jadajuice Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 33: That Ol Black Magic

Thanks for the update - have a wonderful Thanksgiving

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 33: That Ol Black Magic

oooooh  Now I knew it has something to do with fairies, but wasn't expecting Claudette.   oooooh

Reviewer: Jadajuice Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 32: Waltz of the Damned

I am really enjoying this story !  Thank you for sharing.  What's up with Michelle?  Look forward to more.

Susan

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 32: Waltz of the Damned

SOoooo happy for Lala and Jesus.   Poor Susie.  Uh oh.... what are you hiding about michelle?!?!?!?!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 31: Shattered by the Sun

Pam is one stupid, selfish, delusional bitch

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Date: 28 Oct 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 30: Sour Cherry

Ugh Pam really wants to die doesn't she.    Roman is too uber creepy.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 29: The Pathfinder and The Prophetess

Ludwig is such a trip.   hmmma contract huh?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2013 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 28: Limelight

glad they are talking like this.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 27: Tear Away

awww Eric is jealous.   Like that Russell cares for her though.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 26: Immaculate Crucifixion

Happy that Scumbill is finally dead.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 25: Innocent Eyes

Susie is adorable. Glad she's not on the AVL's radar. Hate Nan and Scumbill.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 24: The House That Built Me

Buh Bye Nasty Fairy!!!.  Can't wait till Niall gets whats coming to him.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2013 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 23: Fuck the Pain Away

ugh  Glad youare done with Nora. ewwww.   Hmmm wonder what Eric is going to do/say when they see Niall again.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 22: Anger and Apathy

Bad Ass Sookie.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 21: Creeping Death

 oh salome.... naughty,  naughty.   can't wait for scumbill to be punished

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 20: Master of Puppets

Oh wow  Sookie is cookoo for cocoa puffs.    Pam really needs to be killed off at this point before she gets Eric killed.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 19: Dead Man's Party

scumbill needs to die.   ewww  enough Nora.  blech.   Lol

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 18: Invisible Touch

Pam still bitchy as ever.   LOVE ghostly Sookie.   ROFL

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 17: Interlude

oh my  Sookie has def changed huh?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 16: Harvester of Sorrow

A/N:   So long as you promise a E/S ending, I'm happy with whatever ya'll see fit to post.   

 

Chapter:  Blah Blah Nora Blah.   (hee hee channeling Pam).    Poor Eric.  Wonder if it was drugs, Magic or both....and why.    Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 15: Coffin Builder

go sookie. Debbie was one waste of life. she deserved to die.

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Date: 25 Jul 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 14: Destroy Everything You Touch

Buh Bye Petey.    You got what you deserved.    Didn't think I"d say this but Go Russell!!!!

Reviewer: CUSpacecowboy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Ghost of You

Eric is a bit of a hypocrite he talks about Bill moving on and having sex with someone else when he's doing the same thing he talks about missing sookie wanting her back and how much he wants her but he's having sex with fangbangers having threesomes and now with her cousin right now he's just as bad as bill

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Ghost of You

wow  Claudette is a real piece of work....although I agree that there needs to be revenge gotten.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 12: Shame on the Moon

 omg omg omg  poor sookie.

 

fyi  you don't have to edit your stories here.   we aren't the prudes  like on FFn.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 11: Price of Freedom

Well its obvious Pam is still a resentful, spoiled brat.   She deserves to be punished every day until Sookie is found.....and then a month for every day she was tortured.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 10: A Fortune in Lies

wow  she's got a little stockholm syndrome going there.   Revenge indeed.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 9: Fade to Grey

The fairies are pathetic.  Nora is right to point out them leaving her to her own devices for too many years.

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Date: 25 Jun 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 8: Burnt Flowers Fallen

hmmm Russell is an interesting psychopath.   I can;t wait for Sookie to get her revenge on them all.   Glad Sookie is staying strong as she can.  Surprised Russell isn't bored already.    Why do I have the feeling he's going to turn her at some point?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 7: Devils in My Head

Pam really doesnt get it does she.  At least Nora isn't trying to seduce him.   Evil dream woman.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 6: Breaking the Girl

OMFG  Love that Sookie is sorta staying strong, but now I REALLY say Pam got off way to f'ing easy



Author's Response:

Like Vickie said, it seems that way now. Just wait.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 5: One Way Ticket

Russell is a crafty MF.   Glad Thalia is on his side.   I agree Pam is never to be trusted again. 



Author's Response:

Russell is certainly wiley. I felt bad for Eric when writing that part. He's kind of adrift with no help.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 4: I Won't Pay Your Price

Pam got off pretty easy considering.

Author's Response:

That seems to be the concensus. ;)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 3: I Might Have Been Queen

Hope I like nora better here than TB. So far not bad. LOVED Roman’s character. Hated when he died so soon. Scumbill and Nan need to die. F’ing Scumbill!!! Big mouth arse

Author's Response:

We definitely played with Nora and Roman more than they did on the show. It was fun developing their characters more than we got to see.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Acid Queen

Pam needs to pay even more dearly for this. Love Nan playing Scumbill but Skanky Anne deserves to die along with Nan and Russell

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Come Undone

Looks like Scumbill needs to be added to Niall’s Need to Die list. Pam really f’d up this time.

Author's Response:

Our Pam is TB Pam, maybe a bit to an extreme. But yes, they're all scummy.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 0: The First Cut is the Deepest

oh Wow. Rough start. I don’t really care for TB Pam and this seals it. Hope our kids will get a HEA by the end though

Author's Response:

It won't be an easy ride for sure.

Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2013 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Come Undone

Fucking Pam!   Fucking Bill!

What selfish Bitches!



Author's Response:

Definitely! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2013 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Acid Queen

 Wow



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1: Come Undone

I'm so intrigued!!! I hope you update soon!!



Author's Response:

I'll update every Sunday. :)

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 0: The First Cut is the Deepest

OH how horrid!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

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