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Reviewer: angel1215 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 6: Entitled

Wow!!!!!   What a lucky girl.

Reviewer: angel1215 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 5: Perfectly Appropriate

Jasper is seriously sick in the head.  He really went to his sister's house the morning after her first night with her new husband?  I'm embarrassed for him.  He is ridiculous!!!!!!!!!!!  If there's anyone Bella needs protection from it's Jasper, not Edward.  I'm so glad Edward stood up to him and that Sam arrived when he did.  I hope he locked him up.            

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 6: Entitled

You did not disappoint at all! Bold & sweet Isabella gets her way every time!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 5: Perfectly Appropriate

Yes, SHARING  IS VERY VERY GOOD! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 4: YET

It was a perfect night!!!!!!!!  As much as I love lemons, the sweetest part to me was that you had Edward taking off her shoes not just rushing her to the bedroom. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 3: And Then Forever

I LOVED it that she kicked Rose out just before she went to the ceremony!  You have mde her so strong & bold.  The next chapter I'm sure will be full of lots of yummy goods!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 2: Stripped Bare

It was so sweet what Edward said to Jasper.  Oh, and your warnings at the beginning of this chapter made me laugh a lot! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Show and Tell

I'm so excited for continuation of this story!  The way you write keeps the anticipation almost unbearable.  

Reviewer: Foreverpeetaslove Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2013 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: Perfectly Appropriate

Oh please loosen up and let Bella see how dirty, or beautifully, wonderfully dirty Edward can be in bed!! Great chapter and I think Jasper actually has a few screws loose. Has he not learned anything? 

Reviewer: trixielou Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 5: Perfectly Appropriate

Thank goodness..... Let her have ALL of HIM just how she WANTS him and HE wants HER!!! 

 

What a slow and painful burn but OH so wroth it.

 

Thank you for sharing..Can't wait till the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 4: YET

So beautiful!  

Reviewer: mass88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 4: YET

I loved it!!!  I don't think I could say it any better!  You did good girl!

Reviewer: iphone Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 4: YET

Nice job. Like the innuendo.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: Show and Tell

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 3: And Then Forever

I'm so glad she told Rose to go.  Her negativity, very obviously, even spread to Emmett.

Please don't leave us hanging for too long, like Isabella, we're impatient to get to the other thing.

Great story

Reviewer: noomom Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Show and Tell

Good start to the sequel!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 2: Stripped Bare

I loved seeing them make up... so glad that assper will stand up with Edward and walk his sister down the isle... thank you! 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 2: Stripped Bare

At last everyone is back where they belong - especially Emmett and Rose in the dog house because they're idiots who never listen or learn from their mistakes.

Jasper's overprotectiveness of Isabella becomes more understandable now we realise the lengths Ethan went to protect his family.

Great story

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Show and Tell

Perfec first chapter. I loved it.

Alice and Jasper crack me up and I agree with her and Bella. Jasper's rules are a ridiculous double standard that he doesn't need to worry about. Bella is her own person and makes her own rules. The fact that they happen to be exactly what Jasper wants for her is simply a happy coincidence.

As for Bella and Edward, I love that they've been together for so long and are still keeping to those rules. It is an amazing testament to how much he loves her. And I'm glad that none of those things in the bag interested him. He loves her for who she is and not what people think she should be. And I'm glad that he's changed so much that she can completely be herself with him and it's still sexy. Oh and I'm really, really glad that he finally did take her into his bedroom and was able to walk away without breaking the rules because he knows how much that first time will mean...for both of them.

I loved this so much and can't wait for the next update. Much love to you - D

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2013 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 1: Show and Tell

I wonder if she'll tell Jasper that he can burn the lingerie after all.

Great start.

Reviewer: Longing Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Show and Tell

Great start!!! Can't wait to read more.  :-)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2013 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Show and Tell

So.... I have a few dozen questions.  This is not a flame, just freaking confused.

What is Jasper's deal with Bella??   She is engaged to a ex-manwhore. Does he think she is going to be a 107 year old virgin???  He is making out with Alice, and  doesn't think Bella will be doing that with Edward?   Come on...that is a whole lot of far fetched.

Why do ALL of them beat around and around and around and around and around the bush.  JUST SAY WHAT YOU MEAN! Its time to kill the ducking bush!! 

Bella wanted her first time to be in there new home.  WAS it that hard to say??  IF she can not say it, she should not be doing it! 

Edward want to have sex, but not??  

 

I love this story, but damn!!  I wish they would just say what they are going to say!   

 

Sorry, dont mean to be mean or to flame.  Not intended that way.

 

Looking forward to more.

If you could answer my questions that would be great!  :)

 

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