Date: 08 Jan 2019 10:51 PM Title: Outtake One: The Dress
Amazing story!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2018 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 43
she is feeding him an hour before surgery? don't think so
Author's Response:
I didn't write that he ate an hour before surgery. I wrote that Tanya told Bella to go eat.
Date: 06 Mar 2018 9:01 PM Title: Outtake One: The Dress
I am so happy for this family. Each is getting stronger every day.
Date: 06 Mar 2018 9:01 PM Title: Outtake One: The Dress
I am so happy for this family. Each is getting stronger every day.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2018 12:30 AM Title: Outtake One: The Dress
Great story
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2018 12:30 AM Title: Outtake One: The Dress
Great story
Date: 01 Feb 2018 9:42 PM Title: Outtake One: The Dress
Lovely!
T
Date: 31 Jan 2018 8:36 PM Title: Outtake One: The Dress
Nice that Renee is doing something for Bella that Bella would want.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2018 9:02 AM Title: Outtake One: The Dress
Renee actually really thought about what Bella would want. :)
Date: 30 Jan 2018 5:50 PM Title: Outtake One: The Dress
love it
Date: 30 Jan 2018 12:48 PM Title: Outtake One: The Dress
:):)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 11:17 AM Title: Outtake One: The Dress
thank you so much for sharing this amazing f/t with us looking forward to the others ;D
Date: 30 Jan 2018 7:47 AM Title: Outtake One: The Dress
Lovely chapter !
Date: 30 Jan 2018 3:19 AM Title: Outtake One: The Dress
Thanks for the outtake. Sounds like a pretty dress, and not at all conventional. At least Renee is listening to her wishes, and both of them are trying to mend the relationship. Will look forward to the rest of the outtakes.
Date: 28 Nov 2017 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 48
loved it - looking forward to some futuretakes
Date: 06 Nov 2016 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 48
I read the whole story and do not believe for a new york minute that Charlie, after looking for Bella for years, would leave her working in a diner eating " 2 packet of Ramen for three days". I am wondering how well you understand people.
Date: 05 Nov 2016 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 32
Why why why wouldn't Charlie get her some help. There is no reason in the world good enought. There can be no justification for this.
Date: 02 Nov 2016 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 48
This story is completely fantastic!! I love it! I love these characters! I wish there was more!! Thanks for sharing!! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 48
WOW!!! lots of f****d up people but a really great ending i hope you do come back with some f/t ;D
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 29 Sep 2016 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 48
Another great one from u!
Date: 26 Sep 2016 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 48
Finally happiness.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 48
:) loved this story
Date: 21 Sep 2016 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 48
Thank you!
T
Date: 21 Sep 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 48
:):)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 21 Sep 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 48
Thanks for completing this one. Looks like things are going to work out just fine for all of them. I'm sure Edward and Bella won't be the only two getting married, but will be followed by Carlisle and Esme, Emmett and Rose, and Alice and Jasper at some point. Will look forward to any outtakes you choose to post, as well as what comes next on your other stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 48
Great end. Like that you didn't just wave a magic wand and everyone was OK. TY for writing and sharing
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 06 Sep 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 47
You always make me cry at some point in ur stories. Today it was this chapter!
Date: 29 Aug 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 47
Glad they talked some. I think they'll need to do more of it, but good start.
Date: 29 Aug 2016 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 46
Thanks u so much for ur dedication to finishing these wonderful stories!
Date: 29 Aug 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 47
Thanks for the update. Think I need to go back and re-read the earlier chapters. Anyways, looks like they will accept the marriage. Hopefully they will now stay involved in Bella's life. Will be looking forward to seeing how this one plays out.
Date: 28 Aug 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 47
I am crying like a baby after this chapter
Date: 18 Aug 2016 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 46
I am so happy for Edward and Bella. Renee has shown them that they deserve to be loved.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 46
Wow Renee is really turning out to be a great person.
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2016 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 46
I totally understand not being into something you once loved. Do what you can when you feel you can. I will have fun rereading them. I'm not a big reviewer but I am a big reader so even if you get a random rating without a review dissent mean people don't like or appreciate what you do it just means some of us don't express or selves very well.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 46
This made me cry. Happy tears, but bawl I did.
Date: 16 Oct 2015 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 45
Updated soon
Date: 23 Sep 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 45
Wow renee is being so cool. Yea sucks that money talks even when it comes felons.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 45
Good chapters keep on writing
Date: 19 Sep 2015 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 45
So glad that Renee is helping them. It was great to get an update on this wonderful story.
Date: 19 Sep 2015 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 45
dang... lots of stuff. love renee. hate that asshole guy. he needs to die.. or you know, go to jail and stuff. cant wait for more!
Date: 18 Sep 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 45
They need to leave both of their apartments behind and take Renee up on the new one with security. They need to feel safe so they can heal. Edward does need someone. He needs Bella.
Date: 12 Jul 2015 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 44
When I began this story I wasn't sure if I could finish it because I'm so squeamish about child abduction and rape. However, after the first chapter, I couldn't put it down.
Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 19 Jun 2015 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 44
I think the silver lining in Edward's situation is Bella starting to bring nothing of her families a little closer.
Date: 19 Jun 2015 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 44
That was just a great chapter. Lots of issues seem to be resolving.
Date: 17 Jun 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 44
Good chapter, a feel good chapter. Love your characters. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 17 Jun 2015 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 44
Glad Renee decided to help anyway. Hope she and Bella can come to terms someday
Date: 17 Jun 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 44
Sweet! I love that she is reconnecting with her family.
Date: 11 Jun 2015 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 43
I'm so happy for them. Edward is young. He will rehab well.
Date: 11 Jun 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 43
Don't know why you worried, wonderful chapter and a great story. Thank you for sharing. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 11 Jun 2015 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 43
Sounded pretty good to me! Great chapter. Keep up the great work,
Date: 10 Jun 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 43
Glad e is doing ok.
Date: 10 Jun 2015 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 43
Oh I hope they get Liam and pardon my French but, FUCK him every which way but the right way with no lube! Lol and So excited they're gonna get married!
Date: 10 Jun 2015 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 43
So glD that Edward is awake. Thanks for the update.
Date: 09 Jun 2015 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 43
Good chapter. Maybe a few rays of sunshine for this tortured couple.
Date: 01 Jun 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 42
Edward can't help but be cute even when he is extremely hurt.
Date: 31 May 2015 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 42
Yes you are sick, but I love you and this wonderful story.XOXO,Cheri
Date: 30 May 2015 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 42
Can't wait for next update love the story line and its originality..
Date: 29 May 2015 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 42
Gee, that was romantic! Glad he woke up though.
Date: 29 May 2015 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 42
Aww, sweetness out of tragedy.
Date: 29 May 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 42
wow the renee thing was kinda messed up. But I can understand her asking
Date: 29 May 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 42
Awe how sweet, love it.
Date: 26 May 2015 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 41
Bella needs to call 911 asap.
Date: 21 May 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 41
Oh no poor Edward, please post soon
Date: 21 May 2015 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 41
How could anyone not love this story. Your characters are so real and broken. Love watching them fight to be "normal" and survive their God awful past. Thank you for sharing your talent. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 21 May 2015 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 41
What a horrible thing for Bella to walk in to find.
Date: 21 May 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 41
Holy Jesus, poor Edward!
Date: 21 May 2015 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 41
great meeting with Carlisle. ACK for E getting hurt. He needs a shotgun or a baseball bat behind the bar
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 41
Poor Edward......
Date: 07 May 2015 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 40
Wow, hope u update soon so we can make sure Edward is okay.
Date: 03 May 2015 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 40
Woah... that came out of left field. Reading it, I literally said, "holy shit". Lol. definitely can't wait for more!
Date: 03 May 2015 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 40
Sniff, sniff. He'll be OK.
Still cant figure out why Charlie did what he did.
Date: 03 May 2015 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 40
Wow an old school friend huh. Wonder how Mikey recognized her?
Oh No Poor edward.
Date: 03 May 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 40
Ahhhh, a good cliffie!
Date: 19 Mar 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 39
This was a really eventful chapter. Loved it. Thanks for continuing to post this wonderful story on this site.
Date: 19 Mar 2015 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 39
That was big for all of them to talk about there past now they just need to do more of that and get the feelings out.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 39
So glad I could find this story again!
Date: 18 Feb 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 39
Alice needs help. She doesn't believe that she is worthy of love and happiness.
Date: 14 Feb 2015 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 39
Wow these are some powerfully messed up folks.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 38
Renee needs to pay for Bella to get some therapy. She is holding onto too much anger and pain. If she wants a good future with Edward, she will do it. She needs to learn to love herself.