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Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like it

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like it

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow, I don't know how I feel about Edward's reaction. As you know, I have been pissed about what Bella has been up to but the punishment seems extreme. It's Bella trying to fit into Edward's life that is the root cause of her issues. Bella said last chapter in her lyrics about sometimes leaving someone is what they need to be ok, so I think Edward choosing punishment over getting Bella counseling or finding her a different job and letting her grow her self confidence on her own is the real answer. His solution seems pretty selfish.

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

Another really good chapter!!! I feel like Bella is accepting the circumstances and is willing to do what she needs to do to find happiness with or without Edward. It's really the first true glimmer of self confidence that she has displayed.  I thought she handled the situation with Embry good too. Hurt, but kept her emotions in check.  I agree about the stoplight on the 71!!! What's up with that!!! I think it's time that Charlie tells Edward what Bella has been doing for them. I don't think Bella will ever have the courage AND why the hell doesn't Edward offer his employees health insurance? He should be a part of SAG along with his employees. He worries about Bella's health but no health insurance? What a jerk!!

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 8

Now that was a GREAT chapter!!! Finally I feel like Bella sees what I have seen since part 1!! I do wish she would have taken off the ring but this was a big step and when she walked out, her response was mature and valid. Edward's head is in the clouds and I am really glad that Bella was a grown up!!! I know this is a HEA but, this idea of the society that the man chooses and that's that needs to be challenged. Kind of like imprinting in TW...it always bugged me that here's infant Renesme who has been chosen by Jacob and that's that...seriously???

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 7

Let me ask you a question, do you ever hear a word from Matt Damon's wife? She was a single mom he met out one night. Not Hollywood, not the most beautiful, but she is probably one of the classiest women who walk the red carpet. Bella is well versed in all things Hollywood and paparazzi yet she didn't think that his PR Team would be concerned with her image? I agree with Bella, they maybe soulmates but they are not suitable for each other. And why would Edward attempt to make people he PAYS to promote his image when they are doing their job? If this is anyone's fault, it's Edward's for not having the foresight to speak to his team about how he wanted his relationship with Bella handled. He knows she is getting unfavorable press yet he avoided the elephant in the room (no pun intended). Any person involved in Hollywood says that you better develop some thick skin or your never going to make it...Edward needs to mentor Bella, I know he has tried, but he needs to try harder because even if he is the equivalent to Brad Pitt, even he couldn't stop the YEARS of his wives being harassed and shamed so the only person who will continue to "pay" will be Bella and because his team got real with her, he needs to be a man and handle this situation the way it needs to be handled, not the way Bella thinks it should be handled. She has too many control issues to be successful too but that's another topic...I am way more pissed at Edward on this one.

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 5

Ok, first off I like the story and that's why I keep reading because I want to see where exactly this secret society is heading. But, I am still really struggling with Bella. The best line you wrote was towards the end where she knows what she is doing will hurt Edward. This is the crux though, the MONEY, if she is writing this as an older woman it seems she would have some additional insight into her motives. She takes liberties like agreeing to babysit while she is on the clock without discussing it with Edward or Emmett yet she's obsessed with this idea of not taking advantage or sleeping her way to the top. She is SO OUTSPOKEN to the point of nagging and whining yet she can't tell Edward something like "hey, I took a job editing so I can learn a new skill" or "my parents are going through some personal difficulties and I am helping them and I will not accept your money in the form of a raise, loan, or overtime". Also, she has these male friendships going back to James, would Bella be ok with Edward hanging out alone with Britney Spears? I just feel like not only does Bella not respect herself (even though her mouth may fool you), she doesn't respect Edward, or Alice or anyone who crosses her path. She wants all this recognition for her talents but she gives zero in return. She treats Angela the best, but I don't know why anyone would even want to be friends with her. I realize that low self esteem is a huge part of who she is but people who have LSE are emotionally draining and that's what I see right now is this vacuum that is Bella and it's becoming perplexing. I am really hoping that Edward leaves her when the truth comes out about all this because to me, this is a deal breaker. I want to see Bella grow and gain some gratitude for these people who have done everything to help and encourage her and I don't see that happening without her actions having some consequences.

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 2

I liked almost everything about this chapter except for the dress...instead of hearing what she heard in the bathroom she should have been on the worst dressed list...that's what happens to nobody's who want to be themselves. I think what I'm missing in the story is EPOV because I don't get the attraction. She is so negative and even though she claims to trust Edward she's getting a second job without telling him? She just exudes such negativity that it's hard to see anything lovable and I think the hardest part is her lack of gratitude yet she is so obsessed with money and how much things cost.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 31

OMGoodness

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 22

She is always so combative with him. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 17

I just remembered that Jacob is a 2nd?  No idea what that means.  It makes me think if something happens to Edward, Jacob is supposed to step in?  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 13

I think the video was great!  I imagine it starting out in color & then when she sees the mail it all turns into black & white except the paint that she puts on the wall, the construction crews hats, the chandelier, the picture she puts a hammer through are all in color.  Then when he hands her the GQ magazine it all turns bak to color.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

I love love LOVE Marcus J.  I can totally picture him. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 9

I wonder if garret or someone else from the tria fete society made Embry stop being friends with Bella?

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2013 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 31

I truely have love reading each & every word that u have wriiten in wriiting this truely beautifully captivating & intriging story line. This story is so uniquely different from so many other out there that I have read. I am just so happy that u decidede to make this a 4 part series. I very much love sequels or series. I am definatly giving this a 10 star rating!!

Reviewer: Pikaboo Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 31

That was amazing... But I was wondering when the next part would be uploaded... I really really want to read more

 

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 31

what the hell bella. Why u running

Reviewer: ellabell Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 31

All I can say is WOW and I can't wait for Part Three!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 31

OMG!  You can't leave it up in the air like this! From OMG happy he proposed (and in such a beautiful way) to OMG Edward you never spank when you are angry...  Ok, lady, you are the one who got me sooooo pulled into this story, so you better write fast because I NEED to know who she is running to and where Edward is and OMG he must devistated to realize what he has done.  XOXO (yes I still love you), Cheri

Reviewer: sjdavis84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 31

Oh my!!!!! You can't leave us like that!! I hope part 3 doesn't take too long. I do love it, just not how it ends.

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 30

I have loved reading each & evey update to this truly captivating & intriging story!!! This  is truely an a very beautifully well written story!! I can't wait for u start writting part 3 of this story. Thanks for all ur hard work & dedication in writting this story. Please mark this story as completed because it is showing this story as not completed.

Reviewer: Pjdb Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 31

Aaaaagggghhhhh. Hurry hurry hurry with the next part. And thank you

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 30

She is NEVER going to make 30 days!! Loving this! XOXO, Cheri

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 29

Is Jake in love with her so he's trying to deal with that by keeping his distance and doing whatever to get his mind off missing her so much? Edward treats her too much like a child

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 28

She might as well just take her spanking now......She won't last 30 days

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 28

Yeah Edward is back... I just love this Edward....

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loving thisstory! XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 26

Could u Please UPDATE this to ch. 27 Plessssssssse!! I've seen u updated at fanfiction but not here. So, Pease, please update chapter 27 here pleasssse I'm truely loving reading this well thought out developed story. I am so exciced that there are going to be 4 parts to it!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry about that...to make it up to you I will update this story with chapter 27 and 28. Chapter 28 a day before Fanfic.net. Hope you enjoy!!!

Reviewer: justginger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 24

I loved this chapter

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 25

Alright you have to stop dropping these little hints and not elaborating it's killing me............

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loving this wonderful story!XOXO,Cheri



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THANK YOU!!!!!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

Really, really enjoying both of your stories.  So glad I found them!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 24

Is she going to tell him about the CD and the songs she helped write in it

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Reviewer: rosebard22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am so in love with this story! I started reading part 1 on Sunday and I've been reading it on the DL at work!! I like that Bella is flawed because she's so young and Edward is at times too overprotective because of his age and experiences. EC is such a realistic story and a problem that people don't really talk about in stories, so please bring on Part 3;-)!!!

Reviewer: Lady-Gemini Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 24

Awesome! Bring on Part three, this was great and I can't wait to read more soon! Xx



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Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 3

He was wrong on so many levels, don't get me started

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh great now they're gonna say she's doing Emmett. People are assholes sometimes

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 24

enjoyed the story but it bothered me that there was no mention of aftercare after the spankings

Reviewer: sa71728 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

I truly found this story interesting and was really hoping you weren't going to go the insta-family route with Embry's kids (hoping against hope really, it wasn't exactly subtle what was going to happen).  1. E/B still had major issues to deal with: every time I thought Bella had grown a spine, a paragraph later she was giving in to Edward (she allows him and the others to bully her into things and all she does is bitch about it instead of taking non passive-aggressive action or bitch about it and then have Edward distract her followed by her saying 'he's right'); 2. I didn't care about Embry or his kids, I still don't care about them.  Also, there were at least two major logic failures in this story that I was hoping you were going to address, but one didn't happen and the other I won't know if you address because I'm going to have to bow out now.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, sorry this story wasnt your cup of tea :-)

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