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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2015 11:17 PM Title: Epilogue: Never Grow Up

cool ending to this great little fic thanks for sharing on here ;D

Reviewer: prettylashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2015 1:49 PM Title: Epilogue: Never Grow Up

It was really a good story. I liked how you showed all the characters. But there is one thing i always wonder. Bella got paid for her mistakes individually. She had to live in guilt, couldn't move in a relationship. But edward though he was miserable he good really good bargaining. He may had not moved forward emotionally. He did love tanya and had her company physically. I wish edward could suffer more... All in all it was good.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: A Place In This World

I'm actually proud of him. He's living his life. He in the right for letting his family know how they made him feel.

Bella's friends are just enablers.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen: Mean

I don't get how it was Bella who had to stop the wedding when they haven't seen each other for 3 years and it was his choice to have this wedding no matter how wrong? I  mean who in their right mind would stop a wedding to tell her ex that she still loved him after all of this time?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 11:48 PM Title: Epilogue: Never Grow Up

Love the perfect ending.  I am sad that this wonderful story has come to an end. Thank you for sharing with us. 



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Thank you so much for all of your reviews, and for taking the time to read the entire story. I am so glad you liked it 😃

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Mine

Love it!!!!! Perfect

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One: I'm Only Me When I'm With You

Love love lo his proposal.  Perfect. Glad Rose and the baby are ok. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter Twenty: Love Story

Everyone is so happy.  I am so glad that Brook has moved on. Love every detail. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 8:04 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen: Mean

So glad that Brook can be there to celebrate with them. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Speak Now

FINALLY! !!!!!!!!!!! Love that they are going to face Tanya and the crowd together. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Untouchable

Glad that Alice and Brook could work together to show Bella the invitation.  I think Edward had already lost himself.  Sad

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent

OMGOSH! ! I can't believe Edward is settling for a life time. That is just wrong.  I can't believe that he did not even ask i

What was wrong with Bella or if she was ok. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen: Enchanted

I can not believe that she is missing Emmett and Rose ' s wedding.

I'm sorry,  I k ow everyone has to move on but I do not like that Edward is happy without Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: A Place In This World

Well Edward seems to have found happiness.  I wish Bella could find some too. My heart breaks for her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:51 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: Tied Together With A Smile

It seems like Edward is moving on but Bella is not. Sad

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:30 PM Title: Chapter Twelve: Cold As You

Iam gad that Bella and Embry are still friends.   It was a sweet idea Brook had. I just hate that it ended badly. Wow Edward's family had a bad reaction to Tanya being there. I hate that Edward is settling for 2nd best. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:27 PM Title: Chapter Eleven: The Way I Loved You

Wow they are both moving on but their hearts really are not into it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:04 PM Title: Chapter Ten: If This Was A Movie

I agree with Edward.  She should have realized that he had a once in a life time opportunity.  And he would have resented her if he had not gone.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter Nine: Last Kiss

Well they both have started new lives. 

They both are very trusting when it comes to just meeting new people.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter Eight: Come In With The Rain

Wow. They have gone their separate ways.  How sad. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter Seven: The Story Of Us

My heart breaks for both of them.  I think they both are wrong.  They have invest so much time in their relationship.  They have said that they have learned to talk about their problems and work through them bur apparently not. Bella and Edward both need to tell each  how they feel and why.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Six: Beautiful Eyes

Love it. But I am confused. In the 1st chapter Bella stops Edward's wedding. It looks like they are going to get married at this point. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter Five: Our Song

OMGosh! !! They almost got caught. Lol.

Glad that Emmett and Rose worked things out 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter Four: The Other Side Of The Door

Wow they have been together for over a year a have not said "I love you". Wow that is just about unheard of now days. 

I can not believe that Emmett did that to Rose. I don't blame Rose for being mad and hurt.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter Three: Crazier

I bet Edward really likes the girls too. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter Two: Fearless

I like Edward and Bella together.  Love them dancing in the street.  Can't wait to see what happens to them since in the 1st chapter Bella was stopping Edward's wedding. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter One: Sparks Fly

Well the story begins.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:31 PM Title: Prologue: Speak Now

Can't wait to read more.  Sounds interesting. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2013 8:08 PM Title: Epilogue: Never Grow Up

Sweet end.  Liked seeing the fast forward in everyone's lives.

 

TY for writing and sharing.

TY

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2013 2:11 PM Title: Epilogue: Never Grow Up

Scratch sounds like fun.  I am so happy that Bella and Edward are having there happy ending love the story and sad it is over but look forward to more of you.

Reviewer: chris1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2013 5:04 AM Title: Prologue: Speak Now

Great story

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2013 1:17 AM Title: Epilogue: Never Grow Up

Cute ending! Never let him forget it, girl!Thanks for the great read.

Looking forward to the next story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 2:06 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Mine

love it so sweet and it was wonderful he was in on all the decition



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Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2013 2:13 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Mine

This was a cute simple wedding.



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Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Mine

I could feel their happiness! Can't wait for the epilogue. What a story they have to tell their grandchildren.



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Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: karencullen2007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Mine

very sweet ending!



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Mine

Woo Hoo for being married.  Happy Dance

 

hd



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Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: Myhubbyissoedward Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 10:27 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One: I'm Only Me When I'm With You

Great story 



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 8:48 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One: I'm Only Me When I'm With You

awww that was a cool proposal.    yey for new baby!!!!!



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One: I'm Only Me When I'm With You

What a wonderful day for the Cullen family.



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 6:47 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One: I'm Only Me When I'm With You

That was a great proposal and then a baby tops the day off what more could be asked for lol



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Reviewer: The White Cat Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One: I'm Only Me When I'm With You

*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*  The proposal was perfect!!  Wonderful chapter my friend



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Thanks love! :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One: I'm Only Me When I'm With You

Happy, happy chapter!



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Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2013 7:11 AM Title: Chapter Twenty: Love Story

Life is good they cant go back only forward so happy 



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Thanks for your review :) Glad you liked it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2013 5:46 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen: Mean

Love it Brook is the best.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2013 5:26 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Speak Now

About time love it I cant wait what happens when Tanya finds out the wedding is over.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Untouchable

silly man he has lost himself already how very sad.  My heart is breaking for Bella

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2013 4:48 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent

Wow how cold can he be he didnt even ask how bad she was.

Reviewer: cinngood2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter Twenty: Love Story

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a few chapters but RL sucks!

 

Glad that Bella got to say her piece but I really wished she had kicked him in the balls too.  He deserved it.

 

Chapter 20:  Love the progress that they have made.  They truly seem to be on their way to true happiness.

 

Caution...Rant Ahead:  What the Fuck?  Where the hell does Edward get off being angry about a drunken one night stand that Bella had a couple of years ago?  He's been fuckin and saying I love you to the same skank for the past tree years.  He was going to marry the bitch.  Again he needs a good swift and hard kick in the balls.  Oh, wait, I earlier declared that he was a pathetic, Balless asshole so maybe she should just shove a pineapple up his ass.  Rant over.

 

In all seriousness, I liked the way you brought them back together.  Bella definitely deserves to be happy.

 

Can't wait for more!



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hahahahahaha Sorry you see Edward in such a bad light, but I'm glad you're still reading :) Thanks for your review

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter Twenty: Love Story

I am so glad that Brook and Sebastian found each other as well. Bella just needs to move in with Edward, so Brook can move Sebastian into the apartment.



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Aren't you the little mind reader? :) Hope you enjoy next chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:42 AM Title: Chapter Twenty: Love Story

yey for everyone getting along.  awww for brook and sebastian.



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Thanks Kelly! Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen: Mean

I loved the chapter.



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Thank you! :)

Reviewer: saniaast27 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen: Mean

wow beautiful !
I love this story so real and note full of half lies its beautiful good work.

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Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 11:00 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen: Mean

Sweet! More, more!



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Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 5:05 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen: Mean

I love the chapter(:



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Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen: Mean

Rofl for the breakup scene.  Skankya got dumped!!!! Yey



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Hahahahaha! Yes she did!

Reviewer: karencullen2007 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 12:55 AM Title: Chapter Nine: Last Kiss

wow...intense chapter

Reviewer: tiffanyleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen: Mean

Love it!!!!



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Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Speak Now

Loved it. I am so glad that Edward realized his mistake before Bella interupted. 



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Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: Shemilliah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Speak Now

Too easy Bella lol. Im so glad we've reached the wedding.
Wil they have a heart to heart after, will Edward feel bad knowing Bella never moved on?
Sooooooo many question lol

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I hope I'll be able to answer them all. Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: Foreverpeetaslove Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Speak Now

Woo hoo!!! Finally!!! (throws confetti in the air, fist pumping, marching around the room wielding a imaginary baton). Can you tell, I'm happy with the way this went...but I can't wait for the fireworks when Tanya is given the awesome news! Update soon please.



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Thanks so much for your review! Can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter

Reviewer: courttzuniga Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 4:22 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Speak Now

YAY!!!! 



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hahaha Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Speak Now

Good chapter.



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Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Speak Now

Woo Hoo  You Go Bella.  Abso LOVE Brook right now!!!



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Thanks Kelly! Glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: Shemilliah Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Untouchable

This is one of the most stupid Edwards I've come across. Now I don't even want Bella to stop the wedding.
He is selfish, point blank. Went to the 1st woman and declared his love (seems he gets that feeling so easily) and expects his family to drop Bella for his new chick.
I want a Bella that will kick him to the curb. Make him work for forgiveness. Because all I'm seeing is your whole relationship was lies if he moved on so quick (emotionally and sexually) while your still being faithful in a sense.
No he doesn't deserve you.
Lol sorry for my Dr. Phil moment, but these things get to me.
Love how its coming along.

Author's Response:

First I thought you were flaming, but then I read the end haha. Thanks for the review and I hope you like how the story wraps up

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Untouchable

You've already lost yourself E.  moron.



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Thanks Kelly haha

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Untouchable

Edward has already lost himself. He is marrying someone just because he doesn't want to miss Bella anymore. He needed someone to fill that empty space. Unfortunately, no one can fill that void fully.



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Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 1:18 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Untouchable

As long as she is Mrs. Cullen at the end of the day. That ends the thoughts of him ever loving Bella. He has his love that is what he wants. Bella is going to stand up in a church and interrup him from the woman he loves. He does not care about Bella at all. over and over. If Tanya is horrible then he got what he wanted.



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All will be revealed in the next chapter :) Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: myotherlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Untouchable

Getting closer...yay!  Keep up the good work and don't worry about the schedule.  :)



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Thanks for understanding and for your review :)

Reviewer: E-Hart360 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Untouchable

wwwoooooooow...



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Thanks? haha

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 9:26 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Untouchable

I am not understanding Edward right now. Anyway, don't stress about a posting schedule. As long as you don't leave me hanging, it's all good.



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Thank you for understanding and for your review :)

Reviewer: E-Hart360 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2013 10:01 PM Title: Prologue: Speak Now

lol your very welcome :)

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Date: 02 Aug 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent

yyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!

"i've been waiting for so... long

for a mirracle to come

for THIS mirracle to come

everyone told me to... be strong

hold, on..."

im glad i waited, thnk god things are finally picking up. i couldnt stand another chapter of him pretending to be inlove with that controlling banshee. and i cnt fuckin beleive what an asshole he's beeing knowing how close his family and Bella are. uugh! even though i have a very strong feeling he's just jealous of their close relationship. he can be such a dumbass sometimes...

(sorry 4 rambling...i cant help but type what i think most times).



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Loved the ramble! haha Thanks for your review

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2013 10:15 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent

You tell him Alice!!! Haha i loved the charter (:



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Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2013 10:44 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent

OMG   E you really are a moron..... and a selfish one too with that comment about Bella. What a Jerk.     LOVE Sebastian right now.    Whorena and Skankya are on my shit list too with the comment about the ring.  Greedy biatches.



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Loving the nicknames! They make my day haha Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: cinngood2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent

Gah!! I hate that Bella is hurt and in the hospital but I'm crossing my fingers that she meets a HOT ASS Dr. to get her all better and so she can have a little HAPPINESS!

Edward is pathetic!  He is a patheic, balless asshole.  Oh and he's selfish.  Personally I think you should just let him marry the hag and be a pathetic, balless, selfish Puppet for the rest of his life.  I have all respect for him.

Okay rant over.  I am not a fan of Edwards at all right now but I love where you're going with the story right now.  Keep up the good work!

Can't wait for more!

 



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Thanks for your review! Hope you like how to story unfolds :)

Reviewer: Louie Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2013 4:03 AM Title: Prologue: Speak Now

Now we're talkin'!!! Finally! Loving this story despite how angsty it is. Thank you for sharing:) 

Reviewer: EconomyofWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent

Ok, after all of this I am trying to see why Bella would even want Edward.  He is entirely selfish, going so far as to want her to be alone when she is struggling to survive.  I think he is irredeemable at this point.  I want her to scrap her actions in the prologue and find someone who might actually care if she lives or dies (like anyone else on the planet).  

And, I think she was totally wrong in not supporting him when he said he was going to Italy. But, his actions have been utterly ridiculous since then. 



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Thank you for your review :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent

OK, Alice is right: Edward is an asshole. he didn't even ask what happened to Bella or how seriously she was hurt! He should know that it must be serious if his family flew all the way to Arizona to be with her. As far as marrying Tanya, WTH? He left Bella because she tried to tell him what to do but he's going to marry Tayna so she can tell him what to do. Huh?



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He most definitely makes no sense right now. Lets hope he gets his head on straight. Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: The White Cat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent

YES!!!  It's about time he admitted he's settling on Skankya!  And OMG poor Bella!  And what's with Charlie not dropping everything when he life is in danger?  Oi. 

But on the good news, we're almost to the wedding!!  *happy dances*

 

Reviewer: cinngood2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2013 4:17 PM Title: Prologue: Speak Now

Forgot to say that I went back and read EPOV in chap 12.  It still doesn't change my mind.  He says he's not over her but yet he's so wrapped up in the differences between Bella and Tanya. The feeling I got from his descriptions of these differences is that he's relieved and sees Tanya as an improvement to waht he had before.  He says that he wouldn't have let her pass him by which tells me that he had already moved on before he ever asked her out. He talks of his and Bellas relationship as passionate and all consuming like it was a job. 

Bottom line, he held his stance.  He never even considered that maybe their words were spoken foolishly.  It's like he just said, well, that's done and just concentrated on the big boobs and blond hair.

Maybe it's because you've been a lot more descriptive with Bella and her feelings and anguish.  We get to feel her regret and broken heartedness. With Edward, not so much.  So no. I think he has glorified their relationship in his mind to justify his anger and leaving her but I doubt his heart was ever truly that involved.

Keep up the good work.  The angst is killing me but I can't not read.

 

Reviewer: cinngood2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen: Enchanted

So...Not...Fair!  I really thought Bella was going to get some happiness but noooooo!  I realize that Bella is doing this all to herself but come on, give the girl a break.  He doesn't give a shit about her, let her move on.

Still holding to the belief that Edward never truly loved Bella.  This with Tanya has been all too easy for him.

Okay, with all that being said, I will trust there is an HEA.  I'm very interested to see how you weave that one.  Now, if I can just get past psyching myself up for two days before I can read an update.  I think the angst is giving me an ulcer.

 

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2013 8:19 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen: Enchanted

I want to not like Tanya but I am having a hard time with that lol



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You will, trust me, you will have no problem doing it soon :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 4:21 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen: Enchanted

pfft to E and skankya.  Sorry....just can't like her.   Poor Sebastian.  How rude of them



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She is a Skankya. And don't worry, Sebastian will have his say :)

Reviewer: korenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 12:34 PM Title: Prologue: Speak Now

OMG WILL THEY JUST MEET KISS AND MAKE UP AREADY. IM DIEING HERE

 

KORENX 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen: Enchanted

Killing me...you are killing me.



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I'm sorry! Please don't die :)

Reviewer: killmeangel22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen: Enchanted

I thought this was supposed to be about Bella and Edward but it doesn't seem like it



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Not everything as it seems, things start to change next chapter :) It is most definitely E&B HEA

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 6:41 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: A Place In This World

He is so wrong poor boy and poor Tanya she does not have the love she thinks she does



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Thank you for your review :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: Tied Together With A Smile

So sad for all of them.  I think they can all see that he is settling for Tanya.

Reviewer: cinngood2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:34 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: A Place In This World

You are so right, I didn't like this chapter.  I mean, come on.  Why can't Bella be happy too?  Why is she still being punished for her mistake three years later?  It's obvious that Edward isn't dwelling on things. I'm beginning to question if he ever really loved Bella as much as he claimed he did. I mean, he moved on and never looked back but then again he was taken in by the big boobs and blond hair.  The only person that seems to be 'surviving' is Bella cause Edward is living his life to the fullest, the asshole that he is.

Okay, rant over.  You're doing a great job with this story or else you wouldn't get these kind of rants out of people.  I believe we'll get our HEA just I hate going through the angst to get there.  Keep up the good work and I can't wait for more (and maybe some happiness for Bella, please)!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :). Thank you for your compliments also. Don't fret, there will be HEA. I promise!

P.S. Not everything is as it seems. For your questions on Edward, review his POV of Chapter 12 :)

Reviewer: courttzuniga Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 6:19 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: A Place In This World

UGHHHHHHH EDWARD!!!! 



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hahahahaha Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: A Place In This World

Aww, jeez. He's so in love and Tanya seems nice. How in the heck are you going to make this story work??? More, soon!



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Thanks for your review :). Don't worry, you'll see

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: A Place In This World

awww poor B.  Surprised that E didn't unfriend her and everyone else after he stormed out from the party.



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Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: The White Cat Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: A Place In This World

Bella needs to grow up and at least *try* to move on and Edward is deluded if he thinks Tanya is where he belongs.  On the other hand, they are still very young and have time to learn.

*eagerly waits for some of the happily*



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Thanks Cat :) Don't worry, all will be revealed soon

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 7:47 AM Title: Prologue: Speak Now

See right there she is wrong. bella needs to leave them alone. Everyone has moved on she needs to . It is over he chose Tanya.



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review my story. I appreciate that you have a different view on how you would like this story to go. I did make clear up front that this will be an E&B HEA story and do not intend to change that. I'm sorry you aren't enjoying it. Perhaps you may enjoy Mafia Princess by tufano79 more.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 7:46 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: Tied Together With A Smile

See right there, let b live her life and leave them alone. Family needs to stay together. Alice will just have to suck it up and forget B in front of Edward and Tanya. Cause we know that is permanent.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 7:41 AM Title: Chapter Twelve: Cold As You

Let him and Tanya be happy. She is what he wants. He left B. He .. you know you wrote it. Why ever would you want to hurt her again? Why do you girls that write FF. Think Bella is so easy she will take his shit and come back for more?  At one point she needs to say. You know what you are not worth it edward, not at all.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 7:03 AM Title: Chapter Eight: Come In With The Rain

Then you take her to interrupt his Marriage to Tanya. Why? He must love her or he would not have asked her. Bella is the selfish bitch remember. The one he left. Why make Bella into a clinging vine. He will never want her, so let it go and set her up with a life. You have the power in this.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: Tied Together With A Smile

Can't blame Bella for not going knowing E is there and all.  Alice shouldn't have invited her when she invited E.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :). Unfortunately a theme in this story is selfishness, and Alice wanted them both there. She didn't think about them before she acted

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: Tied Together With A Smile

Wow, that was intense. Poor Edward must feel devastated to feel unwanted by his family. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, I do agree with you, it was a very tough day for him

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