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Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 194

If an employer ever said anything if that nature now days, he'd be sued for sexual harassment. Even if it was not intended to be directed at the recipient but as a subject matter. Haha.
Will Bella be with a new friend?

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Date: 18 Mar 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 193

I can imagine the mind playing emotional tricks on Bella. Making her feel alone, despondent and nearly abandoned. But she is also the one choosing to not make further headway with Edward's adoptive parents or to reach out to Emmett, Alice or Rosalie.
This homework is a great idea. Meet someone new.

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Date: 18 Mar 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 192

I like how they signed off their text messages with their Italian terms of endearment.

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Date: 18 Mar 2014 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

What are opposable thumbs?

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 191

The future us looking brighter.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 190

The new beginning has a bitter sweet start.
It's everything they need right now.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 189

Open and shut case. What about Aro's brothers?

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 188

Their making progress as a couple.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 187

I like him answering her in Italian.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 186

Aro may actually be delusional. Not enough to be deemed insane but enough to convince himself of falsehoods.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 185

Edward's lips are a delightful way to be distracted!

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 184

No other questions from cross examination? That's unheard of in this day and age.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 183

Will the interrogation be intense from the defense side? How will Edward and Bella's relationship be delt with during questioning?

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 182

Are there any members of the Volturi left to inflict harm to the witnesses?

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 181

They are still very intune with each other. Similar gift ideas to convey the desire to be in thus relationship for a lifetime and beyond.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 180

Edward needs to guard his heart but also needs to be open enough to allow new memories to take over where the bad ones left.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 179

A new beginning!
Alice is fun and not too over the top.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 178

Bella snapped out of her quasi comatose state rather quickly. Edward's voice must have medicinal qualities.
A date night sounds like a good step forward.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 177

Let's hope Randall is also put behind bars as an accomplice to kidnapping, assault and battery.
They have soooooo much to discuss

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 176

Bella pushed herself into this state by not heeding the warnings Irina and Emmett continued to describe.
I understand Esme's concern but she really shouldn't interfere with her sons heart.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 175

Emmett may have to have her admitted to the psych-ward for an evaluation if she keeps this up.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 174

This separation will be the breaking point for both of them.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 173

Even if Charlie were present I don't think Bella's recovery process would be any better; I'd taking place at all. She would be masking her symptoms by pretending to look after her father.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 172

She followed through with her goal of a kiss on her birthday.
The separation of Charlie from Bella brought tears to my eyes. But the time they spent together was priceless.

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Date: 15 Mar 2014 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 171

It's rough tryin to make it on your own, even worse when it was second nature and then taken away so that the process has to begin again.

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Date: 15 Mar 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 170

Poor Edward. He is still feeling like he is on the outside looking in on Bella's life.
Aro on death row; could it be that life will finally be relaxing for the Del Cigno family?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 169

Some much needed girl time.
Did Emmett show up to sit with Charlie?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 168

If Bella could only remember the way she felt as she tried to help Edward become accustom to her touch. Then maybe she could begin to let Edward help her.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 167

Girly bonding should be interesting.
The birthday dinner as a gift is very sweet.
Who will keep an eye on the two as they dine out?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 166

That makes Renata the daughter of...... ???????????????
Aro is a liar, but should we be surprised. No!

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 165

Time is still on their side. Interesting that Bella made the correlation between her now being the one having difficulty with touch. Whereas it was Edwards problem when they first met.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 164

DNA pending.........you are just toying with us!
Edward's real life is now on display.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 163

Now you have me wondering who is lying about the affairs and deviant behaviors under the sheets.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 162

She got though it, with the aid of her protector.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 161

Will Edward be the one to break the news to Charlie?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 160

It should never happen in a hospital that is worth its name. But, having said that, there are orderlys and nurses that do not read charts thoroughly and act according to said protocols, causing similar incidents.
The feds really have no authority in the situation but it was fun to watch Edward in action.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 159

Poor Bella. I hope Charlie has a change of clothes near by. Ew!

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 158

I think the reason Edward has never allowed himself to heal is that he is afraid he will forget his mother. Everything she meant to him and how she lived him unconditionally.
He needs to go back to her grave and tell her everything about his life. Purge his pain over the loss of her.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 157

Momma's boys are the best kind. My daddy a momma's boy, so I married a momma's boy.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 156

Edward remember the moments where Bella needed her mother for questions and comfort. How sweet that he wants to share his adoptive mother with her. He us always one step ahead.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 155

I think we all know the answer to that question; YES she is still in love with Edward.
Do you think Charlie knows about Bella's paternity?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 154

Lose the beard.......chuckling.
Therapy and open communications will be their only saving grace.
What a gruesome way for Sulpicia to die. And Renata took herself out. Hm, she must have loved her mother. Did she fund out Charlie was her father?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 153

Bella's anger may be wrongfully placed but her heart was broken just a badly as her body. I hope Emmett can and Charlie can talk some sense into her. Soon.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 152

I hope Emmett can act like a buffer between Bella's angry confusion and Edward's explanations.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 151

Glad they had a moment to themselves to grasp the need for each other that still remains.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 150

The telemetry unit is not the next phase if Bella's recovery just yet. She is not ambulatory nor is it necessary to monitor her heart during physical exertion. That will come in a few months time. She would be in ICU or their step down unit if extubated (no more breathing tube).
Glad Edward has some pull within the Bureau.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 149

Will Bella's condition render her unable to have children? With all the money Charlie has, cane they find the best orthopedic surgeon to repair her leg?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 148

I hope Bella's new found knowledge of her parentage will not interfere with her physical and emotional healing. She will have scars much like Edward.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 147

Did James nick an artery?
Will the rest of the raid be completed by the time Bella arrives at the hospital?
Edward must be devastated

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 146

I almost commented last chapter on the fact that I thought Aro believes he is Bella's father!
Well, Bella is the product of rape. Then she finds out that Renata is really Charlie's daughter and her mother was poisoned by her rapist. Wow, that is a lot to take in.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 145

Do they plan on giving Charlie a dead body?
I hope Sulpicia is released and can begin a relationship with Charlie.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 144

Charlie has an admirer! Didn't see that coming.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 143

Sulpicia is Aro's show piece. Held against her will. Did Aro threaten her family?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 142

Who was the masked person that sort of cleaned Bella up?
James is a pig. He must not rate very high in Aro's organization.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 141

How did Riley hook up with James?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 140

Three down, with James and Riley to go!

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 139

Aro isn't as smart as one would think. He should have kept Edward in his sights.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 138

Is Edward physically able to pull off his part of the raid? Will his attachment to Bella interfere?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 137

Wondering if Emmett will try to get into the bureau?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 136

Emmett is going to get an earful if Edward tells him everything.
Glad Rosalie set him straight.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 135

I want Rosalie to kick Emmett's ass for going after an injured man. She needs to out Emmett back in the proper frame of mind!
Edward won't be well enough now to go on the attack when they extract Bella.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 134

Charlie must really trust Edward!
Will Edward experience a melt down as they find Bella?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 133

Club fed will be a much nicer sentence than a pine box six feet under.
Emmett is going to crap a brick when Rosalie shows up at the house! Haha
I didn't think of Riley as a possible suspect. Hm.....

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 132

Man, I still can't decide who the informant is. But, based on Charlie's quick response I'm leaning his way.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 131

Charlie and Emmett's response to Edward's identity will be most interesting.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 130

When Emmett gets there, will Edward tell him the truth?
Bella wasn't paying attention to her surroundings like she had been taught. Now look at her circumstances.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 129

Cheesy on just the right amount. Considering all the trauma and the PTSD that Edward experiences in a day.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 128

Did Bella just see the future? If Charlie renounces his title, who would fill the spot? Emmett? I would hope he wants out too.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 127

Wow, that has soooooo hot!

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 126

I miss the three kisses punctuating the unspoken ILY's. But the actual words are rather powerful.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 125

All this uncertainty has caused them to voice their thoughts and confess their love for one another. Good timing I think.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 124

Heidi was an informant for Aro. Hm, wonder who else is on his payroll?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 123

Edward was right to include Bella in the news of the recent threat to Charlie. She needs to constantly aware of her surroundings and potential threats to her person.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 122

Will Angela be mixed up in the drama?
Nice to have Edward and sexy times back together.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 121

Is it a matter of forgiveness from Bella or a matter of growing up from Angie's perspective?
Angie needs to prove her remorse and understand that there are circumstances that out weigh her petty wants. Until that time she should be left to her own devices.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 120

With Felix and Demetri out of the picture, will Aro be relying on Jane and Alec? I can't remember the third guys name, Mario maybe?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 119

I hope Charlie will be able to convince Bella that Edward's last name is through adoption. He is the man he has shown her day in and day out.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 118

Oh no he didn't.......
Edward's a jealous man. Riley's going to regret his greeting.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 117

Bella's touching gift tugged at my heart.
I think Charlie knows that Edward is a plant from the feds.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 116

How will the bureau find out about their prize agent being severely injured?
Poor Bella is a wreck.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 115

Felix had better not escape the confines of Twilights basement. He should only exit the building after he gives up information and only un a body bag!

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 114

Oh boy, is Edward ready for this two on one fight?
Will Emmett or someone else show up in time to help dust the Volturi thugs?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 113

Does the del Cigno family find out about Edward's dual personas before or after the arrests? Will Emmett escape the heat unscathed?

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 112

Rose and Alice should be the ones in trouble.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 111

Is the room sound proof?
So good together!

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 110

Is Edward logging all this information for his next report to Carlisle?

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 109

I feel so bad for Emmett.
How long before Bella brings up the chance meeting with Ro and Alice.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 108

Why would Ro have shown up?
Unless she is the one to deliver some news that the agency has discovered.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 107

At least Charlie and Bella are still on the same page where Edward is concerned.
I'm worried about this Aria person though. Is Emmett already back in the states?

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 106

She was able to ground him and bring him back to the feelings of loving her body. Very intimate.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 105

Will Edward be hurt that Bella looked at his phone?
Edward's release of emotions has solidified Bella's resolve to be everything that Edward needs.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 104

Edward has found another woman who wants to give him gifts to show her love. He has come full circle!
The healing is a slow process, but he is on his way to learning how to love without the fear of loss.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 103

That is quite the warm up for this evenings big show!
They are explosive together.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 102

The 'I Love You's' are slipping out more easily. And more frequently. Sigh

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 101

I don't think Charlie could get rid of Edward even if he thought it might be a good idea. Edward not only saved his life but he protects the one thing that remains of his wife, Bella.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 100

Yeah, they are getting closer to saying it face to face!
Nice to note that Jessica took a stand and let Angela know that she didn't take to kindly to the selfish ways being exhibited.
I'm wondering if aunts had anything to do with Renee's demise? Aro is still at the top of my list though.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 99

I guess Angie has not had to experience any form of grownup responsibilities. She is very self centered. I hope Ben takes the time to instruct her on how she will end up alone if she doesn't begin see responsibility as a part of her life.
Good wager Edward. The challenge will some how end up in Bella's favor as always though.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 98

Bella is Edward's second chance to feel the power of love and it's healing qualities. He will do what is necessary to protect her from every form of pain.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 97

Will Edward ask to be pulled from the case? Will his fears of Bella being hurt wreak havoc with his cerebral thinking?
Charlie won't let him go though. I think it's about time the informant was revealed to Edward so he has a connection to his team.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 96

Poor Emmett! I hope he can meet his dream girl at some point in the future.
Edward needs no help in succeeding in this dance floor challenge. Bella will be writhing in pleasure!

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