Date: 05 Jun 2013 3:40 AM Title: The Search
Well done, I enjoyed it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read it. I'm glad it was worth your while. :)
Date: 04 Jun 2013 12:05 AM Title: The Search
This is great! For a first attempt you've really manage to get a lot of detail and new information in. It felt a little rushed but I think you should really continue and see where you can go from here. I'd love to read anything you happen to share
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your encouragement! Honestly the idea had been bouncing around in my head for quite a while until in one night of insomnia I started writing at 3:30am. It all came out in one blast. I can totally see why you felt it rushed. I was concerned about getting too bogged down in Alice's visions and dragging. I guess I went the other way ;) Meh. You have to start somewhere, right?