Reviews For Broken Rules
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Reviewer: hellishrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2013 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 7
Date: 06 Jun 2013 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love the re-writing of rule 12! Increadible story- I loved it. Thanks! Can't wait to read more from you.
Reviewer: hellishrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2013 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
Date: 06 Jun 2013 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well written! So many writers try and so many times it comes out awkard but not here. It was steamy yet beautiful and real.
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Date: 06 Jun 2013 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
Date: 06 Jun 2013 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
What an emotioal chapter. It felt so raw and exposed but I;m glad they finally started talking and I'm glad it not deflected by humor but it is a true comversation. Your dialogue feels very natural! Amazing job
Reviewer: hellishrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2013 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
Date: 06 Jun 2013 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
I actually joined yo read your stories. I found them on FF but you had noted that they were edited. So here I am and so far AWESOME. Love the premise!
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