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Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

One quick question....will there be a HEA???

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

One quick question....will there be a HEA???

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

One quick question....will there be a HEA???

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

One quick question....will there be a HEA???

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

One quick question....will there be a HEA???

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

One quick question....will there be a HEA???

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

One quick question....will there be a HEA???

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

One quick question....will there be a HEA???

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

One quick question....will there be a HEA???

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

One quick question....will there be a HEA???

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

One quick question....will there be a HEA???

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

One quick question....will there be a HEA???

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

One quick question....will there be a HEA???

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

One quick question....will there be a HEA???

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 3 - What do you want?

There are some people who are lucky enough to find love sooner than others after loosing a spouse/partner. Mourning means coming to terms with a loss and moving on.

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

WooHoo!!! 

Go Edward!!!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

WooHoo!!! 

Go Edward!!!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

WooHoo!!! 

Go Edward!!!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2018 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

WOW!!! I haven't been this excited about a story in a while but then again I did kinda  rea your story The Bronx Bombers....was it??? anyway I truly liked the storyline but I'm a diehard Bella/Edward reader. I tried to put Edward in place of Emmet but it was too much trouble for me that is. So since I know you do magic with words I trusted this would be good....and it being a B/E story all the better. Ok enough rambling (he he he) I look forward to reading it's definitely off to an amazing start.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2018 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 8

Love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2018 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 8

Emmett said his finely goodbye he knows she will be OK now.  Great story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2018 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

Update 



Author's Response:

Hello-

Sorry life and some other issues have kept me from writing and I apologize. but rest assured another chapter is in the works and I will get it out as soon as possible!

Thank you for your patience with me!

Sin

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

Update 

Reviewer: Mounds01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

This is a very good story.  

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2015 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

Go Esme 

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2015 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

Gutsy move walking in Sal's together.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2015 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

Just love this story so much

Reviewer: mr kitigato Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2015 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

Grest story. Hope to see a update soon. 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

Love it

Reviewer: debbieg Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

wow cant belive some one was one step ahead of them in taking Mr. C out. Iam hopeing Esma gets her HEA. I think she really deserves it. Scum says shit like that in her face. She must want a shot at him :)

Reviewer: debbieg Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk

Where is Esma when Charlie is touching Bella and why does Esma  not see it?  I dont understand. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

I hope you eventually continue this story!  I'm hooked on it!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love it when He gets possessive!  You have created a yummy Edward!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk

Bad ass Bella!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

The way the kids talk is so cute!  You hear their voices perfectly!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 3 - What do you want?

Carlisle is one sick dickhead!  Edward is yummy!  He wants Bella to move on fast but not only for his pride but for her safety too.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

I love it when he puts Carlisle in his place.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is sooo good!  Crazy how young Bella is.  Carlisle is so ruthless! 

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

great couple chapter love it hope you update soon

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

Really enjoying this story. Can't wait to see where it goes.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 3 - What do you want?

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

WOW. Loving it so far.

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

will there be a update soon... would love to no what happen..

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

Oooo love it!

Reviewer: xoxokristen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interestjng story! I can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Mouginae Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

So glad you're still writing!

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

wow didn't see that coming at all. 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

Oh heavens that was wonderful



Author's Response:

I am so glad you like the story. I appreciate you taking the time to review.

~Sin

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

Oh man al I ve, tjis is good

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 3 - What do you want?

This is really good, stay inspired!   On to the next chapter

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

WOW, go figured.  You are good!



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Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. I appreciate it.

~Sin

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Omg this is great... Can't wait for more.. Keep it COMING please...

Reviewer: tammy0208 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

Can't wait to see what's happens next. 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

What a very interesting night. And it's not over yet ^_^

more chapters please. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

make them pay

Reviewer: roswellgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

so glad i found this here thanks for the link

Reviewer: Rosaliek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

You sure you have writers block cause if u do it surely doesn't show cause those were two really good chapters especially this chapter here I cant wait to see how this plans out , no pressure but please update soon

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

Ahh what a twist

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

I am glad you moved your stories here looking forward to reading more please.

Reviewer: smadril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

I love mob stories n have read so many amazing ones.... Your story caught my eye an so I gave it a whirl .... This story is very good and I love how Bella was married to Emmett ...showing a more softer, committed side if Emmett as Bella's husband.... Carlisle , well yea, total douch ... I like your story a lot n can't wait for ur nxt update .....      The avid reader

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

hell know it is my favorite night

hot damn i am excited someone decide to stick the pig and now make him pay for all the shit he has done. carlisle i hope you rot in hell

thank you eleazar for doing the job and getting your women

love it and can't wait for more

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

GREAT START! I LIKE IT SO FAR AND WILL CONTINUE READING.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk

I think Bella shouldn't get too ahead of her self.......Carlisle hasn't been in charge this long by being stupid. She's gonna get herself hurt, her kids in danger and Edward killed if she's not carful. It Might be better to just trust in Edward and let him handle things.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk

I love a bad ass Bella.

Reviewer: Rosaliek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk

Love this story and glad that even though u r busy with ure move u r able to still get the chapters out there so very much appreciated and can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk

Edward is such a good guy and love Bella and the kids.  Bella is going to get Carlisle make him eat his own balls.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

I think Carlisle needs to die

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 3 - What do you want?

Carlisle is such an ass

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

okay so i guess we can all come together to see the snake is carlisle and he needs to die

my goodness who take their son out due to jealously and wanting the wife---sick man

love bella she is strong and not stupid. she is smart and will out smart carlisle

too bad bella can't be the one to take carlisle out. she has enough reason

love it all. thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. I appreciate it and glad you like the story. I appreciate you taking the time to review

It means the world to me.

~Sin

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions

I dear lord,  don't go to Vegas.  Well then again,  Bella could hold her own with the skank twins.  LOL

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

Boy,  Carlisle is quite the fucking asshole, isn't he!    I'm really lovin' this story :) 

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved the chap.

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

Love it update soon

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

Hmm so starts out he has to be with her and now is he really having feelings. I hope he is not playing bella heart. I don't like dr. I think edward is right he had something to do with his death but what. I like this story are you puting it on any other sites too. Please keep it going. 

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow interesting about dr would kill bella. keep going

 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

Interesting story, I don't think I've read this kind of story before, kudos. I've read plenty of Mobward stories but not a widow Bella with kids he falls for. Looking forward to this one, hope you update frequently. 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

loving it and can't wait for more

usually you don't hate carlisle but man he is an ass and easy to hate

i am hoping edward is able to help bella. she is strong and i believe carlisle is underestimating bella. she was loyal and i do not believe she would go against the family



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

hell of a first chapter

love it



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Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

Um, yas. More please.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

Interesting. Looking fowrard to more.

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it prereader volunteer 



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Reviewer: Vane3131 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

Oh fuck this bitches are gonna make it hard for Edward to move on 

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

I like Edward so far but it seemed like Emmett treat Bella like gold.......Will Edward be willing to do the same or will he want hoes on the side

Reviewer: Flora73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

He is falling in her,but he was not nice to his Girls,

his dad is a Evil.

Mh,Carlisle let Emmet kill,maybe.

I am looking here for more.

Hugs,Marianka

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

Carlisle is a sick fuck and I would like Edward to put a big hole in him.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

So sad Bella loses her husband and her father in law is trying to match her up already.



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Reviewer: Flora73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Omg i love it,i want more,

u wrote fantastic.

Poor Bella,

Carlisle is bad here,

Good Beginning:)



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Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

Ok, I want to know how long it's going to be before Edward or Bella or maybe Esme take out Carlisle! I don't know that I've ever wished for he death of a major canon character before, but I guess there is a first time for everything!



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Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ooh Carlisle is one evil son of a bitch isn't he? Poor Bella, I can't  imagine being widowed so young and to be left with 3 little ones. 

 Can't wait for more!



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Reviewer: Rosaliek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

It's called a shift in lifestyle Edward, which is what has happened to u your dad is a cold person and now u have a purpose for sticking around, making sure the crazy parent doesn't harm bella or the kids.

 

loving this so far, thanks for starting it :)

please update soon



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Reviewer: Rosaliek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loving this so far I was abit confused about the relations between Carlisle and emmett but u clarified that so I'm all good to go I'm about to read chapter two so I can't wait



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