Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
One quick question....will there be a HEA???
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
One quick question....will there be a HEA???
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
One quick question....will there be a HEA???
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
One quick question....will there be a HEA???
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
One quick question....will there be a HEA???
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
One quick question....will there be a HEA???
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
One quick question....will there be a HEA???
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
One quick question....will there be a HEA???
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
One quick question....will there be a HEA???
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
One quick question....will there be a HEA???
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
One quick question....will there be a HEA???
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
One quick question....will there be a HEA???
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
One quick question....will there be a HEA???
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
One quick question....will there be a HEA???
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 3 - What do you want?
There are some people who are lucky enough to find love sooner than others after loosing a spouse/partner. Mourning means coming to terms with a loss and moving on.
Date: 06 Jan 2018 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
WooHoo!!!
Go Edward!!!
Date: 06 Jan 2018 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
WooHoo!!!
Go Edward!!!
Date: 06 Jan 2018 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
WooHoo!!!
Go Edward!!!
Date: 06 Jan 2018 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
WOW!!! I haven't been this excited about a story in a while but then again I did kinda rea your story The Bronx Bombers....was it??? anyway I truly liked the storyline but I'm a diehard Bella/Edward reader. I tried to put Edward in place of Emmet but it was too much trouble for me that is. So since I know you do magic with words I trusted this would be good....and it being a B/E story all the better. Ok enough rambling (he he he) I look forward to reading it's definitely off to an amazing start.
Date: 03 Jan 2018 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Emmett said his finely goodbye he knows she will be OK now. Great story
Date: 04 Sep 2017 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
Update
Author's Response:
Hello-
Sorry life and some other issues have kept me from writing and I apologize. but rest assured another chapter is in the works and I will get it out as soon as possible!
Thank you for your patience with me!
Sin
Date: 04 Sep 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
Update
Date: 09 Jul 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
This is a very good story.
Date: 07 Nov 2015 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
Go Esme
Date: 07 Nov 2015 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
Gutsy move walking in Sal's together.
Date: 07 Nov 2015 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
Just love this story so much
Date: 12 Jul 2015 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
Grest story. Hope to see a update soon.
Date: 02 Sep 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
Love it
Date: 29 Jun 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
wow cant belive some one was one step ahead of them in taking Mr. C out. Iam hopeing Esma gets her HEA. I think she really deserves it. Scum says shit like that in her face. She must want a shot at him :)
Date: 29 Jun 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk
Where is Esma when Charlie is touching Bella and why does Esma not see it? I dont understand.
Date: 19 Jun 2014 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
I hope you eventually continue this story! I'm hooked on it!
Date: 19 Jun 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love it when He gets possessive! You have created a yummy Edward!
Date: 19 Jun 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk
Bad ass Bella!
Date: 19 Jun 2014 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
The way the kids talk is so cute! You hear their voices perfectly!
Date: 19 Jun 2014 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 3 - What do you want?
Carlisle is one sick dickhead! Edward is yummy! He wants Bella to move on fast but not only for his pride but for her safety too.
Date: 19 Jun 2014 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
I love it when he puts Carlisle in his place.
Date: 19 Jun 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is sooo good! Crazy how young Bella is. Carlisle is so ruthless!
Date: 28 Apr 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
great couple chapter love it hope you update soon
Date: 06 Apr 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
Really enjoying this story. Can't wait to see where it goes.
Date: 31 Mar 2014 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
:)
Date: 31 Mar 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
:)
Date: 31 Mar 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 3 - What do you want?
:)
Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
WOW. Loving it so far.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
will there be a update soon... would love to no what happen..
Date: 14 Feb 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
Oooo love it!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interestjng story! I can't wait for more :)
Date: 12 Feb 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
So glad you're still writing!
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
wow didn't see that coming at all.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
Oh heavens that was wonderful
Author's Response:
I am so glad you like the story. I appreciate you taking the time to review.
~Sin
Date: 21 Jan 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
Oh man al I ve, tjis is good
Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 3 - What do you want?
This is really good, stay inspired! On to the next chapter
Date: 20 Jan 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
WOW, go figured. You are good!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. I appreciate it.
~Sin
Date: 17 Jan 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Omg this is great... Can't wait for more.. Keep it COMING please...
Date: 17 Jan 2014 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
Can't wait to see what's happens next.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
What a very interesting night. And it's not over yet ^_^
more chapters please.
Date: 16 Jan 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
make them pay
Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
so glad i found this here thanks for the link
Date: 14 Jan 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
You sure you have writers block cause if u do it surely doesn't show cause those were two really good chapters especially this chapter here I cant wait to see how this plans out , no pressure but please update soon
Date: 14 Jan 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
Ahh what a twist
Date: 14 Jan 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
I am glad you moved your stories here looking forward to reading more please.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
I love mob stories n have read so many amazing ones.... Your story caught my eye an so I gave it a whirl .... This story is very good and I love how Bella was married to Emmett ...showing a more softer, committed side if Emmett as Bella's husband.... Carlisle , well yea, total douch ... I like your story a lot n can't wait for ur nxt update ..... The avid reader
Date: 14 Jan 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell
hell know it is my favorite night
hot damn i am excited someone decide to stick the pig and now make him pay for all the shit he has done. carlisle i hope you rot in hell
thank you eleazar for doing the job and getting your women
love it and can't wait for more
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
GREAT START! I LIKE IT SO FAR AND WILL CONTINUE READING.
Date: 20 Dec 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk
I think Bella shouldn't get too ahead of her self.......Carlisle hasn't been in charge this long by being stupid. She's gonna get herself hurt, her kids in danger and Edward killed if she's not carful. It Might be better to just trust in Edward and let him handle things.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk
I love a bad ass Bella.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk
Love this story and glad that even though u r busy with ure move u r able to still get the chapters out there so very much appreciated and can't wait for more 😊
Date: 19 Dec 2013 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk
Edward is such a good guy and love Bella and the kids. Bella is going to get Carlisle make him eat his own balls.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
I think Carlisle needs to die
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 3 - What do you want?
Carlisle is such an ass
Date: 18 Dec 2013 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
okay so i guess we can all come together to see the snake is carlisle and he needs to die
my goodness who take their son out due to jealously and wanting the wife---sick man
love bella she is strong and not stupid. she is smart and will out smart carlisle
too bad bella can't be the one to take carlisle out. she has enough reason
love it all. thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review. I appreciate it and glad you like the story. I appreciate you taking the time to review
It means the world to me.
~Sin
Date: 18 Dec 2013 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Reactions
I dear lord, don't go to Vegas. Well then again, Bella could hold her own with the skank twins. LOL
Date: 18 Dec 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
Boy, Carlisle is quite the fucking asshole, isn't he! I'm really lovin' this story :)
Date: 18 Dec 2013 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the chap.
Date: 14 Jul 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
Love it update soon
Date: 15 Jun 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
Hmm so starts out he has to be with her and now is he really having feelings. I hope he is not playing bella heart. I don't like dr. I think edward is right he had something to do with his death but what. I like this story are you puting it on any other sites too. Please keep it going.
Date: 15 Jun 2013 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow interesting about dr would kill bella. keep going
Date: 11 Jun 2013 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
Interesting story, I don't think I've read this kind of story before, kudos. I've read plenty of Mobward stories but not a widow Bella with kids he falls for. Looking forward to this one, hope you update frequently.
Date: 10 Jun 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
loving it and can't wait for more
usually you don't hate carlisle but man he is an ass and easy to hate
i am hoping edward is able to help bella. she is strong and i believe carlisle is underestimating bella. she was loyal and i do not believe she would go against the family
Author's Response:
Date: 10 Jun 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
hell of a first chapter
love it
Author's Response:
Date: 10 Jun 2013 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
Um, yas. More please.
Date: 09 Jun 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
Interesting. Looking fowrard to more.
Date: 09 Jun 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it prereader volunteer
Author's Response:
Date: 09 Jun 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
Oh fuck this bitches are gonna make it hard for Edward to move on
Date: 09 Jun 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
I like Edward so far but it seemed like Emmett treat Bella like gold.......Will Edward be willing to do the same or will he want hoes on the side
Date: 09 Jun 2013 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
He is falling in her,but he was not nice to his Girls,
his dad is a Evil.
Mh,Carlisle let Emmet kill,maybe.
I am looking here for more.
Hugs,Marianka
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
Carlisle is a sick fuck and I would like Edward to put a big hole in him.
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
So sad Bella loses her husband and her father in law is trying to match her up already.
Author's Response:
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Omg i love it,i want more,
u wrote fantastic.
Poor Bella,
Carlisle is bad here,
Good Beginning:)
Author's Response:
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
Ok, I want to know how long it's going to be before Edward or Bella or maybe Esme take out Carlisle! I don't know that I've ever wished for he death of a major canon character before, but I guess there is a first time for everything!
Author's Response:
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ooh Carlisle is one evil son of a bitch isn't he? Poor Bella, I can't imagine being widowed so young and to be left with 3 little ones.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Date: 09 Jun 2013 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Aftermath
It's called a shift in lifestyle Edward, which is what has happened to u your dad is a cold person and now u have a purpose for sticking around, making sure the crazy parent doesn't harm bella or the kids.
loving this so far, thanks for starting it :)
please update soon
Author's Response:
Date: 09 Jun 2013 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loving this so far I was abit confused about the relations between Carlisle and emmett but u clarified that so I'm all good to go I'm about to read chapter two so I can't wait
Author's Response: