Date: 22 May 2016 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 38
I absolutely loved this version of Fifty Shades. I've read the original books and a lot, and I mean a lot, of blogs with the bloggers interpretations of this very story. This story, however, is by far the best ever I've read. I honestly don't think even EL James could have written a better story. You are very talented and I hope to one day see you published as an accomplished writer. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more stories from you. You have fan for life in me.
Date: 22 Nov 2015 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
The fact that neither of us could come to the other and actually communicate our problems was the cause of our marriage breakdown.
And there's me thinking it was because he was falling in love and fucking another woman, whilst neglecting his wife and child for five months?
silly old me.
Date: 25 Mar 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
During their 2 month separation, Lucy must have figured out that she and Christian were finished. Of course, during that time period they were probably still in contact with each other, just not physically, which I find hard to believe since Christian thought he was in love with Lucy.
Date: 28 Dec 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
Christian really isn't trust worthy and his words aren't believable. He deliberately lied to Ana about Elaine for months, possibly years. He had a long-term affair with a woman he played with the idea of leaving Ana for, possibly falling in love with with the woman. What else has he lied about/hiden from her, and will continue to do so until/unless Ana finds out about it and confronts him? He wants full disclouser but gives none until forced.
Date: 15 Oct 2014 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 38
Such a wonderful story!!
I really wanted to rip Christian dick off and beat him over the head with it!! LOL
Lucy and Elana! What a pair!
I dont know if I could have taken him back the way Ana did. But it worked out!
Love it! Will there be a epi?
Hope to hear from you :)
Date: 03 May 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, I found it, it's me, DG from FF. All's right in my world again. this is one of my favorite stories of Ana & Christian, and I come back to it often, so am glad to know where I can get a dose when I need one. Hopefully you have found a much happier, troll free, home here.