Date: 03 Mar 2015 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 92
excellent story ;) thanks so much for completing and posting this on here ;D
Date: 12 Nov 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 92
loved this story
Date: 12 Nov 2013 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 92
Enjoyed this story a lot. Thanks. Sorry I didn't always review.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 70
Jake should go home. As much as he's been there for her, it's Edwards turn now. And jake can always visit. Emmett will need him so they can further their bromance.
Date: 25 Sep 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
I JUST started reading this and I can't stop. Oh, man...the pain -- I can feel it bleeding through (no pun intended). Her heartbreak, confusion and despair are gutwrenching.
If you've never felt the hurt of hope lost, or the COMPLETE abandonment of something/someone you believed worth fighting for...then you don't get it.
Having your fears and insecurities coldly thrown in your face before being declared unfit or unworthy of being loved or accepted will unhinge you, drain you of sanity. Life as you thought you knew it becomes surreal and confusing; a jumble of disjointed bewilderment and madness. In your despondency you wonder constantly how you could have gotten it so wrong... Absolutely nothing makes sense.
Your words -and the format you're presenting them in- describe that PERFECTLY. It brings tears to my eyes just reading it.
Thank you for sharing. I look forward to your updates. --RoseE. x
Date: 20 Sep 2013 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 69
I don't always review, but I do want you to know I really enjoy this story. Thanks
Date: 19 Sep 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 68
Exactly - What!!!!
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 67
I love a snowball fight but my god Edward, bend a knee and ask!
Date: 12 Sep 2013 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 63
This story has been such a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing
Date: 07 Sep 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 61
I love the flying Dinali sisters act! Too bad their act has been cancelled...permanently! Thanks for a laugh in this chapter. The fetch and puppy! That's too much! Hahaha
Date: 03 Sep 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 58
I loved Dared to truth. I hated Alice and somewhat Jasper, but I loved your story. I hope things get better. You are an awesome writer!!!!! Thanks for writing and sharing with us.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 30 Aug 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 56
Pie and a dead Tanya...can't wait!
Date: 29 Aug 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 55
Woo hoo! Some tits are gunna fly. Burn those puppies one by one. Maybe Eddie can have one and Bella the other. And then you could make her a real fire crotch lol.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 55
Wow, that was a big bit into Bella's trust bun...he wants the 'honor' of making Tanya go away! I hope he is doing it because he wants to, not because he wants to make it up to Bella. Till next time...thank you.
Date: 26 Aug 2013 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 53
Well, I hope all the Denali's are dead. They are not to nice of people, no wonder Rose always got along with them. But Rose may be changing, she did, after all, change Bella for Edward. This story is getting deeper and deeper. Thanks for e updates...till next time.
Date: 26 Aug 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 53
Let Bella at her!
Date: 25 Aug 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 52
Don't think she'll blame Jake too much
Date: 22 Aug 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 50
I'm hanging in there! Actually, I'm really enjoying the fact that Bella is putting everything out in the open at last. She is letting everyone know how she feels and why she feels that way, rather than holding it all inside. It's all based on what she knows, since no one has told her anything about...well, anything! In that light, her reactions are very understandable.
Date: 22 Aug 2013 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 50
Why would anyone leave? And why did people hate Bella? I think she's been remarkably restrained lol.
Date: 20 Aug 2013 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 48
I like her thinking. But Alice is defective. Very very defective.
Date: 18 Aug 2013 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 47
Ahhh...we find out about Charlie soon. Bella is really torn in so many directions...her emotional well being is so fragile, and being a new born! PMS is othing compared to this! Read you tomorrow.
Date: 16 Aug 2013 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 45
It makes sense, perfect sense. They've all said empty sorrys that they think should earn them instant forgiveness. I've always thought Edward got off way to easy in New Moon but the rest of the family didn't even get an 'excuse me??' from Bella.
Date: 16 Aug 2013 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 45
I'm glad Bella didn't crumble. The family has to see what a mess they crated and that THIS Bella is not the one they left. I think I got the gist of your chapter...the key is to always read your story in quiet, no distractions or anything. That way you can follow a little better..at least that is what I have found! Have a great day.
Date: 15 Aug 2013 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 44
We don't have cherry flavoured Coke, a fact I am grateful for.
Curve Ball is hands down one of the funniest stories I've ever read.
And if a third category is available, the def humor should be added.
As usual, I'm loving this story too.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm pissed at all of them, except Bella. I still have no idea why they are acting like they are. But I really don't understand why Rosalie would change Bella, if she is the same as she was in the books. She was totally against Bella being changed. I have no idea where you are taking us, but I'm happy to go along!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
WHOA!! I almost fell off the couch reading this one. Rosalie changed Bella????
Chloe, your mind is a wondrous place! I did not see that coming at all.
I'm still not clear on what their reasoning was, but I'll figure it out.
Loved this chapter!!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh, wow!! You have thrown a curve into what I was thinking... I think. This just gets more intersting with each chapter.
Da-da-dum-dum.... On to find out if Carlisle is the one who changed her.
I'm dancing over to the next chapter. Loving it so much.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
You cracked me up with the "Vampire Valium" comment. He could be my Valium any day. ;)
I'm trusting you to give us everything we need. I did love that Bella told Emmett she could take him!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh, Chloe, I want the link to your FB page, please. I don't think I realized you had one.
Every time she refers to "him", my heart breaks a little. But that's ok. I'm sure you will mend it eventually.
I couldn't help but laugh at you being tempted to let Bella go after Rosalie. That would have been something to read.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
I wasn't surprised that Jasper and Emmett came, but I was surprised that Rosalie did. I can't wait to find out why they are there; and what they meant by "get back here sooner". You have me totally puzzled, Chloe. That's what I love about this story. Great chapter.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm not guessing on who the three visitors are. I'm just going to read the next chapter. Lol. I love how her new friend wants to protect her and refuses to leave even when she trys to get him to. I have no idea what is going to happen next, but I'm still enchanted with this story.
Date: 11 Aug 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 42
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! The tits were served! Does Emmett have moobs? I can see him having moobs lol.
Date: 06 Aug 2013 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 39
:) definitely cherry
Date: 03 Aug 2013 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 36
i bit hard to read the choppy, but still reading none the less. he does know she is a newborn right? is he really that stupid?
Date: 03 Aug 2013 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 36
He will be too tempted to have sex with her if he lets the animal in him loose? Is that what he is afraid of now? Thanks for writing. I am with you till the end.
Date: 03 Aug 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 35
I'm still here! Just kind of hunkering down quietly in a corner waiting to see what happens next...which I'm sure will be good 'cause how could it not be?
Date: 02 Aug 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 35
LOL Of course he's going to make her wait. There's no way it would have been that easy. But at least she still knows he's not leaving...ever again.
Date: 02 Aug 2013 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 35
I'm here! But I have been slack and commenting on Facebook. So I will comment here today. Silly virginal boy. That's one thing I've never quite understood in the books. Vampires are supposed to be passionate and violently in love with their mates so he should have had her knickers round her ankles as soon as he realised he didn't want to eat her. Well her blood anyway lol.
Date: 01 Aug 2013 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 34
Kissing is always good. And I'm glad the she sees that he's trying because he really wants to be there. Can't wait for tomorrow.