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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 92

excellent story ;) thanks so much for completing and posting this on here ;D

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Date: 20 Jan 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

u go girl~!!!!

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Date: 12 Nov 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 92

loved this story

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Date: 12 Nov 2013 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 92

Enjoyed this story a lot. Thanks. Sorry I didn't always review. 

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Date: 09 Nov 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 91

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Date: 08 Nov 2013 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 90

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Date: 07 Nov 2013 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 89

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Date: 06 Nov 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 88

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Date: 05 Nov 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 87

loved this

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Date: 02 Nov 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 86

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Date: 31 Oct 2013 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 85

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Date: 31 Oct 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 31 Oct 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 30 Oct 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 84

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Date: 29 Oct 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 83

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Date: 27 Oct 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 82

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Date: 25 Oct 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 81

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Date: 24 Oct 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 80

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Date: 23 Oct 2013 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 79

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Date: 17 Oct 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 78

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Date: 12 Oct 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 77

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Date: 11 Oct 2013 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 76

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Date: 10 Oct 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 75

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Date: 05 Oct 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 74

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Date: 03 Oct 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 73

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 72

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 71

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Date: 26 Sep 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 70

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Reviewer: bullnala Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 70

Jake should go home. As much as he's been there for her, it's Edwards turn now. And jake can always visit. Emmett will need him so they can further their bromance. 

Reviewer: RoseE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 5

I JUST started reading this and I can't stop. Oh, man...the pain -- I can feel it bleeding through (no pun intended). Her heartbreak, confusion and despair are gutwrenching. 

If you've never felt the hurt of hope lost, or the COMPLETE abandonment of something/someone you believed worth fighting for...then you don't get it.

Having your fears and insecurities coldly thrown in your face before being declared unfit or unworthy of being loved or accepted will unhinge you, drain you of sanity. Life as you thought you knew it becomes surreal and confusing; a jumble of disjointed bewilderment and madness. In your despondency you wonder constantly how you could have gotten it so wrong... Absolutely nothing makes sense. 

Your words -and the format you're presenting them in- describe that PERFECTLY. It brings tears to my eyes just reading it.

Thank you for sharing. I look forward to your updates. --RoseE. x

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2013 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 69

I don't always review, but I do want you to know I really enjoy this story. Thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 69

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Date: 19 Sep 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 68

Exactly - What!!!!

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Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 67

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Reviewer: bullnala Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 67

I love a snowball fight but my god Edward, bend a knee and ask!

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 66

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Date: 14 Sep 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 65

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Date: 13 Sep 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 64

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Date: 12 Sep 2013 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 63

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Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 63

This story has been such a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 62

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 61

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Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 61

I love the flying Dinali sisters act!  Too bad their act has been cancelled...permanently!  Thanks for a laugh in this chapter.  The fetch and puppy!  That's too much!  Hahaha

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 60

loved this

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Date: 05 Sep 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 59

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Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 58

I loved Dared to truth. I hated Alice and somewhat Jasper, but I loved your story. I hope things get better. You are an awesome writer!!!!! Thanks for writing and sharing with us.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2013 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 58

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Date: 31 Aug 2013 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 57

loving this

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Date: 30 Aug 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 56

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Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 56

Pie and a dead Tanya...can't wait!

Reviewer: bullnala Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 55

Woo hoo!  Some tits are gunna fly. Burn those puppies one by one. Maybe Eddie can have one and Bella the other. And then you could make her a real fire crotch lol. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 55

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Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 55

Wow, that was a big bit into Bella's trust bun...he wants the 'honor' of making Tanya go away!  I hope he is doing it because he wants to, not because he wants to make it up to Bella.  Till next time...thank you.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 54

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Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2013 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 53

Well, I hope all the Denali's are dead. They are not to nice of people, no wonder Rose always got along with them.  But Rose may be changing, she did, after all, change Bella for Edward.  This story is getting deeper and deeper.  Thanks for e updates...till next time.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 53

Let Bella at her! 

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Date: 25 Aug 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 52

Don't think she'll blame Jake too much

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Date: 24 Aug 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 51

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Reviewer: monkeymom Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 50

I'm hanging in there!  Actually, I'm really enjoying the fact that Bella is putting everything out in the open at last.   She is letting everyone know how she feels and why she feels that way, rather than holding it all inside.     It's all based on what she knows, since no one has told her anything about...well, anything!   In that light, her reactions are very understandable. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 50

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Reviewer: bullnala Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 50

Why would anyone leave? And why did people hate Bella? I think she's been remarkably restrained lol. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2013 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 49

loving this

Reviewer: bullnala Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 48

I like her thinking. But Alice is defective. Very very defective. 

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Date: 20 Aug 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 48

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 47

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Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 47

Ahhh...we find out about Charlie soon.  Bella is really torn in so many directions...her emotional well being is so fragile, and being a new born!  PMS is othing compared to this!  Read you tomorrow.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 46

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Date: 16 Aug 2013 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 45

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Reviewer: bullnala Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2013 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 45

It makes sense, perfect sense. They've all said empty sorrys that they think should earn them instant forgiveness. I've always thought Edward got off way to easy in New Moon but the rest of the family didn't even get an 'excuse me??' from Bella. 

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2013 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 45

I'm glad Bella didn't crumble.  The family has to see what a mess they crated and that THIS Bella is not the one they left.  I think I got the gist of your chapter...the key is to always read your story in quiet, no distractions or anything.  That way you can follow a little better..at least that is what I have found!  Have a great day.

Reviewer: bullnala Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 44

We don't have cherry flavoured Coke, a fact I am grateful for. 

Curve Ball is hands down one of the funniest stories I've ever read. 

And if a third category is available, the def humor should be added.

As usual, I'm loving this story too. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 44

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Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

I'm pissed at all of them, except Bella. I still have no idea why they are acting like they are. But I really don't understand why Rosalie would change Bella, if she is the same as she was in the books. She was totally against Bella being changed. I have no idea where you are taking us, but I'm happy to go along!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 19

WHOA!! I almost fell off the couch reading this one. Rosalie changed Bella????

Chloe, your mind is a wondrous place! I did not see that coming at all.

I'm still not clear on what their reasoning was, but I'll figure it out.

Loved this chapter!!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh, wow!! You have thrown a curve into what I was thinking... I think. This just gets more intersting with each chapter. 

Da-da-dum-dum....  On to find out if Carlisle is the one who changed her.

I'm dancing over to the next chapter. Loving it so much.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 17

You cracked me up with the "Vampire Valium" comment. He could be my Valium any day. ;)

I'm trusting you to give us everything we need. I did love that Bella told Emmett she could take him!!!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh, Chloe, I want the link to your FB page, please. I don't think I realized you had one. 

Every time she refers to "him", my heart breaks a little. But that's ok. I'm sure you will mend it eventually.

I couldn't help but laugh at you being tempted to let Bella go after Rosalie. That would have been something to read.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 15

I wasn't surprised that Jasper and Emmett came, but I was surprised that Rosalie did. I can't wait to find out why they are there; and what they meant by "get back here sooner". You have me totally puzzled, Chloe. That's what I love about this story. Great chapter.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 14

I'm not guessing on who the three visitors are. I'm just going to read the next chapter. Lol. I love how her new friend wants to protect her and refuses to leave even when she trys to get him to. I have no idea what is going to happen next, but I'm still enchanted with this story.

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Date: 12 Aug 2013 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 43

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Date: 11 Aug 2013 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 42

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Reviewer: bullnala Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 42

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!  The tits were served!  Does Emmett have moobs? I can see him having moobs lol. 

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Date: 08 Aug 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 41

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 40

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 39

:) definitely cherry

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Date: 05 Aug 2013 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 38

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Date: 04 Aug 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 37

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Date: 03 Aug 2013 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 36

i bit hard to read the choppy, but still reading none the less. he does know she is a newborn right? is he really that stupid?

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2013 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 36

He will be too tempted to have sex with her if he lets the animal in him loose? Is that what he is afraid of now? Thanks for writing. I am with you till the end.

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Date: 03 Aug 2013 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 36

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Date: 03 Aug 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 35

I'm still here!   Just kind of hunkering down quietly in a corner waiting to see what happens next...which I'm sure will be good 'cause how could it not be?

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 35

LOL Of course he's going to make her wait. There's no way it would have been that easy. But at least she still knows he's not leaving...ever again.

Reviewer: bullnala Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2013 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 35

I'm here! But I have been slack and commenting on Facebook. So I will comment here today. Silly virginal boy. That's one thing I've never quite understood in the books. Vampires are supposed to be passionate and violently in love with their mates so he should have had her knickers round her ankles as soon as he realised he didn't want to eat her. Well her blood anyway lol. 

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Date: 02 Aug 2013 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 35

loved this

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Date: 01 Aug 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 34

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Date: 01 Aug 2013 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 34

Kissing is always good. And I'm glad the she sees that he's trying because he really wants to be there.  Can't wait for tomorrow.

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2013 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 34

Lovely

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Date: 31 Jul 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 33

loved this

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Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 33

Love it

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Date: 30 Jul 2013 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 32

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