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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 8:19 PM Title: Epilogue: Tying up some knots...

I remember pumping for 2 weeks when military sent me on a TDY soon after giving birth.  Our freezer was quite full.  

Wow Bella was quite nice with giving Esme another chance at life.  Doesn't surprise me that Little Em went to Esme for while.  

LOVE that blue silk dress next to the wedding one.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Dream Comes True

Glad Em and C has a talk.  At least he's not talking about trying to get custody of little Em.  

Awww for the name. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 9: Three steps forward, one step back

He is being wayyyy too nice to her, JMHO.

My stomach was really sensitive to pressure too when I was pregnant. Nice shower.  Glad Jasper could make it. aww for Emmett and the blanket.

Sadly I was expecting the end part

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 8: Settling In

Glad they are allowing the kids input into thier bedrooms and such.  Very nice that he is keeping a good relationship with her parents for the kids sake.  Sorry but Esme has no right to try to get C to take care of her medically.  Of course it;s Emmetts kid

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 7: Heartbrake and Tears

Yea Emmett is going to be hard to deal with for awhile.  Wonder when he's going to find out Carlisle isn't his biological father.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 6: The end of the Nightmare?

While I agree that the kids need to be out of the house when it happens, she def needs to be arrested asap.  Awesome that he is keeping the kids grandparents in the picture and setting up that trip.  

I don't think he cared about the fact that Esme is going to jail so much as how its going to affect the children.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meet the parents...

Poor Bella and Carlisle.  Glad Tanya remembered the cameras.  Eek for meeting the to-be inlaws that way.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 4: Will the dream come true?

oh wow.  Esme needs to go to jail for this one.  What a skank.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 3: The beginning of a Dream

Esme is getting off with getting the house and cars.  She better be happy.  I'd request supervised visitation for her after 2 episodes of child abuse.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 2: Isabella

I would have made Esme leave, not the kids from their house.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2019 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to my World

Wish he would have just divorced the skank, but was prob afraid that courts would give to the egg donor regardless of what was actually best for children.  Poor Alice.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 12:13 AM Title: Epilogue: Tying up some knots...

Thanks for the story

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 10: The Dream Comes True

Interesting 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 9: Three steps forward, one step back

Oh my!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 8: Settling In

Ok Emmett her son or Emmett the dude she slept with before?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2013 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 7: Heartbrake and Tears

How sad :(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 6: The end of the Nightmare?

Oh no she can't remember?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meet the parents...

Not a good first meeting

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2013 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 4: Will the dream come true?

Oh no....she is going to loose the baby

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2013 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 3: The beginning of a Dream

Can't believe he let her have the kids

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2013 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 2: Isabella

I would have told him get rid of the wife!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to my World

Wow esme is a piece of work!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 6:56 PM Title: Epilogue: Tying up some knots...

Loved this story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. You did an amazing job with it. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, chek out the rest of my work and recommend this story to everyone who might be interested on reading, thanks again!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 3:37 PM Title: Epilogue: Tying up some knots...

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

This was the last chapter, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: ChocolateDrop76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meet the parents...

I'm glad they found out quickly. . .who did it!!! Send that bitch to jail make her big Bertha's bitch!!!



Author's Response:

Oh thats nasty, LOL! Thanks for reading :-)

Reviewer: ChocolateDrop76 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 4: Will the dream come true?

I don't know why you made her so fucking weak (Bella). You should have made her a soldier someone who is not afraid to stand up to Esme.  When Esme said she would take Carlisle you should have had Bella ROFL. Bella should have brought up the fact that she knew Emmett wasn't hers and when Esme called her a whore she should have gotten real brazen and said. "Um fucking another dude the day before you wed and passing said child off as your husbands baby. . .no sweets the "whore award" goes to you!!! That would have been awesome!!!



Author's Response:

Hello there, glad you are liking the story, yeah i should have written something like that but I think that bella was being the bigger person in the whole situation and she didnt want to answer the same way or with the same things esme comfronted her. Thanks for reading and revewing!! :-)

Reviewer: ChocolateDrop76 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 3: The beginning of a Dream

They should have told the children they were getting a divorce and explained to them what that meant. Children are extremely perceptive.  Also when you were explaining what Bella wore to the gala you listed phone twice. But awesome story all the same!!!

Reviewer: ChocolateDrop76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2013 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 2: Isabella

The three words are not too soon in their case b/c they felt the same way. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 10: The Dream Comes True

I am glad that Esme lived and that Emmett Sr. came to take care of the baby. I am just wondering if Little Emmett is going to stay with Carlisle or if he is going to live with Emmett Sr. Glad that Bella and the baby are ok. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 10: The Dream Comes True

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Dream Comes True

Wow, Esme lived. Didn't see that one coming. I'm glad Emmet Sr. stepped up to take Esmeralda & hear everything that happened in his absence over the years.

Yay!!!! Baby Edward!!!!!

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 9: Three steps forward, one step back

It was such a happy chapter too. I'm not surprised though, complications like she was having are very touch & go. Mine weren't the same but I had similar problems. My daughter & I almost died but luckily we're both fighters. Looking at her now she's vibrant & full of energy & sunshine you'd never know she was a micro preemie born at 24 weeks. 

Im sad that Esme died, I wonder what's going to happen to the baby. I hope she lives. Please don't write an infant death. 



Author's Response:

Nothing will happen with the baby. Lets see about Esme...

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 9: Three steps forward, one step back

OMGosh!!!!! I can not believe that Esme died. I am wondering if Carlsile and Bella will raise Esme's baby. That was so sweet what Emmett did with his blankets and his apology. 



Author's Response:

It was a blanket and a stuffed Bunny. Lets see about esme's death...! Thanks for reading

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 9: Three steps forward, one step back

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 8: Settling In

Please say it is senior emmetts and not junior. OMG. UPdate soon please. 



Author's Response:

Emmett Sr. of course! 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 8: Settling In

Wow, so after all these years she's pregnant by the father of her first baby. Was she seeing him through out their entire marriage?

Next chapter please 



Author's Response:

No she wasnt, emmett sr. (as another reviewer called him) is a military man. that and more will be revealed on the next chapter!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2013 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 8: Settling In

OMGosh!!!!!!! If she has been with Emmett Sr. Then way was she fighting so hard to get Carlisle back? I wondered from the other. Hater if she had meet up with Emmett Sr.  agin. Glad Carlisle saved her. The house sounds wonderful.



Author's Response:

Because she knows that maybe Emmett Sr. cant committ to her. All those loose ends will be tied up soon, Carlisle is a compassive man and deep down he knows that he will forgive her but as a doctor its his job to save her no matter what she had done. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2013 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 7: Heartbrake and Tears

I feel so sorry for the kids. What is the deal with Esmeralda, is ahe pregnant?

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 7: Heartbrake and Tears

Hmm was esme pregnant. If so who's. 



Author's Response:

That will be revealed on the next chapter...Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 7: Heartbrake and Tears

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 6: The end of the Nightmare?

I do not blame Carlisle for sending the kids away. I can kind of understand why Carlisle would feel bad. Especially for the kids. Can't wait to see Bella's reaction. 

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 6: The end of the Nightmare?

No, he needed to shield those poor kids.  Hum Esme in jail, feeling bad a that's a NO!!  She should be doing chartwheels.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 6: The end of the Nightmare?

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 5: Meet the parents...

Oh no. Esme has done it now. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 5: Meet the parents...

Looking  to more

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 2: Isabella

This is a wonderful chapter but you really need to go back and fix the typos.  It really take away from the flow of this lovely chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you and i know. it would be so much easier if i had a beta. i know i saw them after i posted and re read the chapter on the site. keep reading, thanks again!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 4: Will the dream come true?

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 4: Will the dream come true?

Esme has gone crazy!!!!!! I hope Tanya shows up soon and helps Bella. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 3: The beginning of a Dream

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 3: The beginning of a Dream

I am happy for Carlisle. I am surprise that Esme has joint custody. I would have thought that Carlisle would have fought for full custody. 



Author's Response:

that will come soon. he didnt want alice and rosalie to know. next chapter will be up soon.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 3: The beginning of a Dream

Well they are progressing like couples do. He seems in love with her and she is with him. Those children have to be part of the package and now another one.  Well  nice story.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 2: Isabella

It takes a very calm person to raise special needs children. Some people barely raise children with no problems.  I think Esme has too many problems of her own. Yes what she did was wrong but the children now have suffered.



Author's Response:

you are totally right. Next chapter will be up in a few minutes.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 2: Isabella

Has Esme always been hard on her children??? What is up with her? I am glad that Carlisle has found Bella. Can't wait to see their relationship bloom. Please update soon. 



Author's Response:

No she wasnt before, is just that she resents alice a little because she is a girl, esme tought that if she had another son carlisle wont find out about emmett. and since she only gave him to girls its bitter sweet to her. also carlisle doesnt want her anymore and is seeing other people, but it was wrong of he sto spank alice for the food thing. if you know your child doesnt eat a certain thing AFTER they had tried it once, why punish them? I dont like celery, i know this after i tried it on the second grade on a 5 senses activity and i didnt like it. Esme is trying to cope with the fact that she messed up and that because of that her former life is over, you better continue reading, there's more coming on! Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to my World

Poor Carlisle. I hate that Esme did that to him. I can not believe that she fuck her someone else the night before she married Carlisle. Can't wait to see where you take this story. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to my World

looking forward to seeing where this is going 



Author's Response:

The next chapter is up, enjoy!

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