Date: 26 Sep 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 28
I hope this is the straw that breaks James' back and lets Larry get rid of him!
Date: 26 Sep 2015 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 27
Don't you dare let Jacob kill or hurt them! The creepy bastard is ramping up his evil!
Date: 26 Sep 2015 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 26
Alice and Edward make a good shopping team, especially where jewelry is concerned. The three couples spending the weekend at Chez Cullen is fun to read!
Date: 26 Sep 2015 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 25
The things Seth said to Bella are proof of what Jacob thinks of Bella! I sure hope he doesn't cause them any real harm! If not for the shadow of all their stress, things are pretty much good!
Date: 26 Sep 2015 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
This makes me wonder when, if ever, Tanya is going to get the message that Edward wants nothing to do with her! Bella and he have made up, but what will Emmett have to say?
Date: 26 Sep 2015 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 23
You did an absolutely beautiful job for their first time! It's no wonder they don't want to leave this darling cottage and just go back to real life, school, etc.! It is lovely to read about their feelings for each other!
Date: 26 Sep 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 22
There was never any doubt that the band would kick ass! Alice is just full of mischief and surprises, isn't she?
Date: 25 Sep 2015 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
Talk about happy circumstances! It's wonderful that Carlisle has relented and allowed Edward's change of major! Bella hasn't had such a good time, what with the ankle sprain and that awful nightmare! All in all, things are going well!
Date: 25 Sep 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
This chapter started out awful for everyone, but it helped to have the police take charge. The time grows closer for "when", but this erotic encounter was great as an appetizer!
Date: 25 Sep 2015 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
Naturally my first thought went to Jacob, butthere is always creepy James, the TA! The pictures sure have everyone in an uproar! I really don't blame them, that is pretty damn scary!
Date: 25 Sep 2015 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 18
I see they have more than made good use of their alone time! The schedules all these young people maintain tires me out just reading it!
Date: 25 Sep 2015 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
Sure as hell, Jake has gotten his hands on Bella's new phone number! The rest of her day was great, though tiring, but that phone call and no talking worries me no end!
Date: 24 Sep 2015 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
I have a bad feeling that unknown call was stalker Jake! Rose is right about Bella being a different person on stage, than how she is the rest of the time! If they can find the time and place, Bella and Edward are going to finally consummate their growing love, I can just feel it!
Date: 24 Sep 2015 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 15
I really hope Carlisle gets a clue about how much Edward does not want to be a doctor! If he keeps pushing Edward, it could end their relationship, which Esme fears! Your first real intense lemon was beautifully done!
Date: 24 Sep 2015 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
I had no doubt Bella would do well working with Garrett.
Date: 24 Sep 2015 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
Sure hope his piano playing hasn't been deferred with a broken hand! It was so brave to take on that animal who had his hands all over Bella! Despite all the drama, it looks like she had a great birthday!
Date: 23 Sep 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
Lovely birthday and the gentle explorations were done just right! I'm with you on not having them get too intense too quickly!
Date: 23 Sep 2015 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
Guess Bella will just have to deal with the jealous cats in choir as well as her caveman brother. Having Edward's support makes up for a lot! Looking forward to their time together for Bella's birthday!
Date: 23 Sep 2015 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
Seems there are always people like Tia, whose jealousy gets the better of them! So far, everything is working out well, except for the creepy looks from James Loften! Everyone feels like there is something wrong with him! Me, too!
Date: 23 Sep 2015 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
Not only is he gorgeous, he's very smart! Charlie appreciates his baby girl has a protector at school. Just as I was afraid, Jake is trying to cause trouble, the sick fool!
Date: 23 Sep 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 8
This is a lot of fun with all the choral singing, etc. It reminds me of high school and the only reason I graduated. Sadly, I never attended college but have happy memories of singing all those many, many years ago! Life is going too well for there not to be trouble ahead I'll bet!
Date: 23 Sep 2015 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
Now that Bella has shared her history with Edward, I'm scared that Jacob isn't through stalking her! An obsession like that doesn't just disappear! It's amazing how fast Bella and Edward are falling for each other. Jasper and Alice seem to be equally smitten with each other, but I'm seeing rough seas ahead for Emmett if he pursues Rose. She will have a really hard time ever trusting a man again!
Date: 23 Sep 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Rosalie, I hope they throw the book at Royce and his frat brothers! Of course they really ought to be tortured and half killed!
Date: 23 Sep 2015 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was beautiful and very sweet when he told about his mom, and how Bella filled that spot in his heart! Really swoony!
Date: 23 Sep 2015 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm loving how this is going! They truly seem made for each other!
Date: 22 Sep 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Just as I suspected, Tanya has reared her really ugly head already! Boy, she really went off on Bella!It tickled me no end when Edward told her off and rescued Bella! Looks like Bella is well away from her ex! It was neat to read about how she and Edward sang together, I love when they had that instant connection!
Date: 22 Sep 2015 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
Tanya sounds like a rare bitch, with that "nobody breaks up with her", crap! I bet Edward probably hasn't seen the last of her. She's the type to cause trouble if she can! Rosalie seems down on men, so her story won't be a happy one, and Alice is a ball of energy. Bella will no doubt get along with them both!
Date: 22 Sep 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good first meeting all around, but I'm worried about Charlie! Something is going on there and Bella isn't quite aware of what it is yet!
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 100
As always, the story was wonderful and I loved it. Thanks!!
Date: 23 Jul 2015 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 100
I really enjoyed this story. I was wondering if you have any idea when or if you will start posting the sequel.
Author's Response:
I have the outline started. I'm hoping to start posting around Labor Day. I just have to get a few other things completed before I turn my attention to that.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2015 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 100
Loved it!!
James & Victoria are the mystery POV!
I can' wait for the sequel to come out, your my favorite author!
Date: 06 Jun 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 67
Klenfields is wear my mom got her dress back in the 1980s. Her dress wasn't as much as they are today. Also I wished Randy was in the story telling Alice to knock it off and/or being his usualself on Say Yes to the Dress. Also I know someone who now works at Klenfields however Klenfields isn't really in Manhattan its in a nice area of Brooklyn I think somewhere close to the city but not in the city city
Date: 10 May 2015 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 100
Enjoyed the story. Thanks for posting it. The ?POV? Well I have no doubt that it is James & Victoria.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2015 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 100
Is it James and Victoria? :-) DUNDUNDUN......
Date: 15 Apr 2015 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 100
Thank you, thank you, thank you! The great James and Victoria, I assume. Wonderful. Can't wait!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2015 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 99
Loved it such a great story.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 100
:) loved this story. My guess would be James and Victoria. Looking forward to reading the sequel
Date: 14 Apr 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 100
Its James and Victoria
Date: 13 Apr 2015 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 100
guess from what you left for clue? james and victoria. and yay for the sequel! I can't wait to read it already!
Date: 13 Apr 2015 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 100
Victoria and the music guy (name forgotten) who was fired. Probably will have a real name of James!
Great story...can't wait for the sequel.
Date: 13 Apr 2015 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 100
James and Victoria!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 100
zJames and Victoria from Larry's class!!! Thanks for a great story - Xanath
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 100
James and Victoria! They are going to cause some serious trouble aren't they!!!???
Date: 13 Apr 2015 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 99
This has been an absolutely wonderful story! There is more detail and character development in here than in many modern novels. I hope you ccontinue to write wonderful stories lime this! A sequel would be lovely
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2015 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 99
:) Loved this story. I hope you do a sequel
Date: 12 Apr 2015 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 98
That was amazing! I really loved this chapter! Perfect wedding for these two, and I LOVED the pictures! <3
Date: 11 Apr 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 97
I absolutely love this!! Charlie was awesome when he gave Bella the hair comb!! LMAO! Renee is a twit and I am glad she didn't go!! I am excited for more!! :)
Date: 11 Apr 2015 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 97
SO amazing! Loved their wedding; it was perfect! Can't wait for the lemon chapter ;)
Date: 11 Apr 2015 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 96
OH MY GOSH!! I love these two!
Date: 11 Apr 2015 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 95
OH SNAP!!!!! I'm SO happy for all of them!
Date: 11 Apr 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 96
LOVE! LOVE! LOVE THIS!!! :)=)
Date: 11 Apr 2015 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 95
Sequel please! I love this story.
Date: 10 Apr 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 95
yes a sequel
i loved this story from the start
but i have really enjoyed all your stuff
well done
Date: 10 Apr 2015 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 95
SEQUEL!!! Absolutely loving this story.
Date: 10 Apr 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 95
YES, to a sequel!
Date: 10 Apr 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 95
I wish the band the best but I hope they get their degrees as well as fame.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2015 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 95
Oh please please uodate soon!!! I love it!
Date: 10 Apr 2015 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 95
Definetely write a sequel!
Date: 10 Apr 2015 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 95
Definitely need a sequel. Need to see how they mesh rockstardom with being plain old music teachers. You know you can do it!
Date: 10 Apr 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 95
ABSOFREAKINLUTELY FANFRIGGENTASTIC!!! :)=)
All I could picture when they heard their song on the radio was the scene from 'That Thing You Do!' LMAO!!! I love this story! These characters...all of it and I would love for there to be SO much MORE!! :)=)
Date: 09 Apr 2015 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 94
emmett what a cockblocker lol
great chapter
Date: 09 Apr 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 94
Absolutely fantastic!!! I love and and excited for more birthday fun! ;)
Date: 08 Apr 2015 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 93
OMG!!! That was fantastic!! I love this chapter!! :)
Date: 08 Apr 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 92
OMG!! So, I am all caught up and you have me dying to know who the familiar voice could possibly be! ;)
Date: 08 Apr 2015 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 91
FANFRIGGENTASTIC!! :)=)
Date: 07 Apr 2015 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 90
Alice really screwed a lot of things up with her selfish decision. I have a lot to say about this because Bipolar has been tossed into play but I am going to try and just roll with it. We have 3 of 7 people in our home with this disorder. Believe me I live it every single day for the past 25 years and yes, bad choices and consequences be damned but I feel like Alice was just completely selfish!! She had no trust in her relationship with Jasper that she couldn't talk to him...that she didn't let him in on what had happened, that she lied to him. She knew where he stood with children...*sigh* sorry I tried not to...anyway...LMAO! I love this story and I love all the updates I have been getting lately!!! I hope that things will get better for Alice and that even with the awful choices and decisions she made that Jasper loves her enough to stick by her...OKAY, I am completely rambling now, let me go and read some more! :P
I hope I mentioned my love for this somewhere in my ramblings! ;) PHEW!
OMG! I so thought someone would catch them in the bathroom! lol
Date: 07 Apr 2015 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 92
great chapter... its a start for jasper and alice even if they have a long way to go.. glad the drama is put on hold for a while.
Date: 07 Apr 2015 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 89
OH SHIT!! Didn't see that coming!! Thought for sure he would be sad with her but relieved!! Never angry! She lied! WOW!
Date: 07 Apr 2015 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 92
And...I'm crying. I cannot wait for more!
Date: 07 Apr 2015 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 88
I freakin love this story!!!:) I love Italy! I love Gelato!!! :P
Date: 07 Apr 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 86
As far as I am concerned Renee can still eff off!! She is still acting despicable! I would have stay in Jacksonville but at the hotel!!
No need to hurry things! We are a very patient group...well, some of us! lol :)=)
Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 92
Seriously , who is edward to judge .. Yes Alice made a huge mistake but she wasn't exactly herself .. If he's going to be more harsh on her than a stranger what good is he as a brother .. She was there for him through thick n thin he should do the same .. As for Jasper , he was so quick to jump the gun and leave her , did he even hear her excuses or bother to think . He just left and didn't look back nor think why sweet but a bit pushy Alice did a 180 like that .
Date: 06 Apr 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 89
OH MY GOSH!! Intense isn't even beginning to cover it. I cannot wait for more!
Date: 06 Apr 2015 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 88
That was amazing! I really loved it! Haddon was a douche; I'm glad he's gone!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 87
great chapter
great story
well done
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 87
Good chapter it moved things along with short time jumps. Sometimes you need that. We need to banish Renee to the pits of hell.
Date: 04 Apr 2015 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 85
Yay, sex! Boo, Renee! Does that about cover it? Did you ever say what Bella was singing?
Date: 03 Apr 2015 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 85
Absolute LOVE only! ;) Excited for more!! As ALWAYS!! :)=)
Date: 03 Apr 2015 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 84
Have I mentioned my love for this story? :P I LOVE THIS! :)
Date: 03 Apr 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 83
This is so fantastic!! :)=)
Date: 03 Apr 2015 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 82
LOVE THIS!!! :)=)