Date: 28 Apr 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 44
I loved the gift Bella gave to Edward. I think Charlie should move closer to his kids. They seem pretty settled on the other side of the country. Charlie now knows life is too short.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 32
OH WOW!!! This is fantastic!! :)
Date: 24 Apr 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 29
FANTASTIC STORY!!! :)=)
Date: 23 Apr 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 28
Holy smokes! I love this! :)
Date: 23 Apr 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 24
Badass Bella Rocks!!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 26
I LOVE THIS!!! :)
Date: 15 Apr 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 44
My thoughts
Edward's second gift: I wish I had an Edward like that. Priceless
Chief Swan: I think going back to the force will give him much needed excitement. I also think it may help while he recovers from treatment.
Jacob- the ass: he's not dead, unfortunately. He's hiding out at a friend's house, biding his time and licking his wounds. He's probably with Seth.
Love your story. I smile when I get an update that you've posted
Date: 15 Apr 2014 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
I wonder who the familiar face is and I wonder if he now has Edwards phone number too. lol This is so exciting!! I am off to read more!! :)=)
Date: 15 Apr 2014 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 44
Loved this chapter. I'm so glad they are happy and things got taken care at the police station. I don't believe Jacob's dead. He's probably skilled enough to jump into the water and swim to shore. He's probably hiding at LaPush with the help of his friends.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 44
Jacob is hiding, I am afraid.Thank you for this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 44
Those CD's were the greatest gift that Bella could've ever given Edward. I loved it! :)
I HOPE that Jacob is dead, but something is telling me that he isn't. He's like a cockroach, so I'm assuming that he wouldn't die so quickly or easily. LOL Also, seeing how uncooperative his family is being kinda leads me to suspect that they know something, or that they are hiding/protecting something (him). I don't think they'd be acting like that if they knew or even thought that Jacob was dead. :(
I bet Edward's second gift is an engagement ring. Let's hope so! ;)
Can't wait for more! :)
Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 44
Aw, that was amazing! I almost cried reading about Edward's gift! Loved it!
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 20
Okay so we are assuming it is Jacob. Port Angles IP...Who took the pics of her and Edward? I am loving this and I can't wait to read more!! :)
Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
I LOVE THIS!! I wonder who could it be that keeps calling? ;)
Date: 08 Apr 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
*raises both hand frantically*
I love this story!!! :)=)
Date: 07 Apr 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
WOW!! They are fantastic!! :)
Date: 07 Apr 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is fantastic!! :)
Date: 06 Apr 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is fantastic! :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2014 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 43
I am rereading this story and I still love it.
Date: 30 Mar 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 43
I'm so glad they got to Bella in time!!! What Charlie did for Edward was so awesome!! I really don't think we've seen the last if Jacob!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 43
I think I've missed a few chapters of this story, I will have to catch up soon. :) I hope they caught Jacob. If not then I hope he and his friends do not harm them Edward or Bella again.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 43
I sure hope Jacob got shot and died when he hit the water. Thank you for not dragging her kidnapping out.
Date: 27 Mar 2014 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 43
it's a big ocean and he's a good swimmer he can end up just about anywhere I hope they do catch him I'm glad to hear the injuries aren't too bad
Date: 27 Mar 2014 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 43
Thanks for the update. I'm glad they got there in time but I wont rest untill Jacob is caught. Maybe now his "friends" can stop harassing Bella every time they see her.
Date: 27 Mar 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 43
That was amazing! Loved it! Just one small thing...in your AN, you said reviews were your "heroine", which is a female hero. I think you meant the drug "heroin" ;-)
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 43
Hopefully, Jacob drowned or landed on some rocks when he jumped in the ocean. He deserves nothing less!
Date: 27 Mar 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 43
Ah, I don't think so! I think he is still out there. Good chapter!
Date: 27 Mar 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 43
Love all your stories!
Date: 27 Mar 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 43
another fantastic chapter
always worth the wait
well done
Date: 22 Mar 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 42
OMG such a cliffie! Update soon!
Date: 03 Mar 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 41
DAMN!!! Edward must be insanely nervous about talking to Charlie to forget his number one rule, Bella not going anywhere alone. I knew Jacob would be making an appearance soon, just didn't know when or where. Hope you're able to update soon. Loved this chapter!
Date: 03 Mar 2014 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 42
That was amazing! I cannot wait for more!
Date: 02 Mar 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 42
Oh shit! This is gonna get ugly... jacob is batshit!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 42
Oh God!!! Bella should've NEVER went anywhere alone! I hope that animal doesn't rape her, or hurt her more than he already has! :( He'll probably go nuts if he sees her "Edward" tattoo. I HOPE that Bella gets rescued ASAP!!! I also hope that Jacob gets what he has coming to him!
Date: 02 Mar 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Bella. I hope Emmet or Edward remembered not to leave her alone and get there in time.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 42
Bella let her guard down there
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 42
Oh shit that was so mean!!! Please don't make us wait to long for the next chapter please! PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Feb 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 41
I kept waiting for Jacob to show up. Loved it.
Date: 22 Feb 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 41
So wonderful! I loved it! Cannot wait for the next one!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 41
I'm so anxious to see what this drama is going be! Hoping for a quick update! ;)
Date: 22 Feb 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 41
really enjoy reading your stories and this one is no different
well done
Date: 11 Feb 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 40
Amazing updates. I hope Bella is able to stay safe in Firks... But have a bad feel just as Bella has. Looking forward to more.
Date: 10 Feb 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 40
Hello! I finally got set bup here on twcs after you took this story down from fanfiction. Glad to finally catch up with these characters and their story line, which I really love since I am a choral singer. Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 40
I hope that Charlie is alright...although he shouldn't have taken it out on Bella when they got home.
And I hope that Mark keeps those videos & pics of Edward's safe...I have a bad feeling that Jacob may do something to them. :(
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 08 Feb 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 40
Thank you for the update.
Poor Bella and Emmett. Even if they know that it's going to be OK, they have to leave their father alone when they do back. I hope Carlisle's opinion is also good.
I'm still worried about what Jacob. With Bella back home he may try to do something. I hope Emmet dosen't leave her alone.
Date: 08 Feb 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 40
really enjoying this story
well done
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please pleases we need more :)
Date: 29 Jan 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 39
What?! Bubut I need more!!!
Date: 11 Jan 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 39
That was amazing! I really loved it! I know something is going to happen in Forks...I can feel it. I just hope it won't be too terrible.
Date: 05 Jan 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Their apt sounds amazing haha. They better catch Jacob soon!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2013 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 38
Are you done with this story if not please update :)
Date: 23 Dec 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 38
Oh wow, that was amazing! I really loved this! I hope they catch Jacob soon.
Date: 21 Dec 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 37
Oh no did Jake make an appearance. Loved their time spent with Esme and Carlisle.
Date: 09 Dec 2013 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 37
Amazing chapter update real soon! Xoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2013 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 37
Can't wait to see what's going on! Lovin' this!
Date: 29 Nov 2013 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 37
Someone tore her room apart..
Date: 16 Nov 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 36
You can up with some great truth or dare questions. Loved it.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 36
i soo enjoyed their game .. it was so funny.
Date: 15 Nov 2013 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 36
cool can't wait
Date: 12 Nov 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 35
That was an amazing chapter. Loved hearing about Elizabeth. And their thanks were so sweet. Loved it. Not looking forward to having Bella going home for Christmas.
Date: 11 Nov 2013 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 35
I can't wait for the next chapter please
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2013 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 35
What a lovely holiday and what a lovely chapter. :)
Date: 19 Oct 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 33
I don't see how Edward's parents could keep him from going to visit Bella at her dad's since he's over 18, & they're technically not even his real parents. He pretty much does whatever he wants any other time, plus he & Bella will be living together soon, so this makes no sense to me. And why would Esme & Carlisle want to keep him from going? It's not like they would have to pay his way, or anything.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 34
That was aamzing! I cannot wait to see what will happen next! I am so proud of Carlisle for finally accepting Edward's choice in major :)
Date: 17 Oct 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 34
love this story i love all your stories alice dragging emmett by the ear!! LOL update soon i wanna know what shes gonna do with the tie!
Date: 15 Oct 2013 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 32
Another great chapter.
Date: 13 Oct 2013 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 33
I LOVE this story :) I cannot wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 33
Can't wait to read more love this story.
Date: 07 Oct 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 33
great one!
Date: 06 Oct 2013 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 33
I wish Bella didn let Alice railroad her all the time. Great update hun :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2013 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 32
Great chapter! really enjoy this story and your writing, thank you!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2013 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 31
so good please post nore really soon i love this story.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 28
please more more please so good. need more
Date: 26 Jul 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
I´m really glad you reposted this story because this is one of my favorite ones, please don´t take it down forever
Date: 05 Jul 2013 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 27
They had the same dream that is so scarry. She is in shock about the money it is not something she needs or want but it will be nice. Chistmas will be great.