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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 53~ barbecued sausage & potato salad

love this family

it seems maybe anthony didn't want to see his mom or that he didn't want to leave his family he has now worried about what will happen while he was gone

i am glad alice is getting a second chance and has someone who wants nothing but to love her

love it

Reviewer: Bec2b Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 53~ barbecued sausage & potato salad

I look forward to every chapter.  Thank You.  You make them seem so really, sometimes I reread your story, because it has such a warm feeling about it and with todays world it is a nice change.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 53~ barbecued sausage & potato salad

sweet chapter.  Kinda can understand why anthony wouldn't want to be anywhere near kate.   Aww poor alice.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 53~ barbecued sausage & potato salad

I love this story, it is so sweet.

Reviewer: pink cactus2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 52 ~ terrible, no good, very bad

Just found your story Lillian and I love it!  Your writing skills are exceptional and the humor ....well I have smiled and laughed all the way through. Thank you for giving us a new visual whenever we picture the Cullens" and their friends!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words.  I am glad you are enjoying my story.  I hope to update with a new chapter in a few days.

Cheers, 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2014 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 52 ~ terrible, no good, very bad

I love this story. I also love "Alexander and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day". My son's name is Alexander and I use to read it to him when he was being overly trying. It helped us both slowdown and regroup.

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 52 ~ terrible, no good, very bad

I loved this chapter. My heart goes out to little Anthony. I think he should be the one to tell off Kate. I DO NOT like how she has treated that cute boy! Keep 'em coming 😀

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 52 ~ terrible, no good, very bad

What a thoroughly charming and enjoyable chapter.  It reminded me of when I was a youngster and got into my parents usually locked drinks cabinet.  I thought it would be a great idea to mix all the drinks together and then pour them back into the bottles.  Needless to say, I made a huge mess and ruin many bottles of booze, my parents where not at all happy.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 52 ~ terrible, no good, very bad

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 52 ~ terrible, no good, very bad

That book is a great book
Good chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 52 ~ terrible, no good, very bad

Wonderful chapter.   I would have done what Bella did with closing the door and laughing first too.    Book is cute. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 51 ~ hush puppies and key lime pie

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: wolf17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 51 ~ hush puppies and key lime pie

This is really good please keep up the great work and please update soon

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 51 ~ hush puppies and key lime pie

I retread the whole story up to this point. I love it so much. I hope there's a lot more left of their story. I look forward to the next chapter. 

 

I hope things get better soon for you and your family. My thought and prayers are with you. 

Virginia aka twi-sessed

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 51 ~ hush puppies and key lime pie

i wish the best with your family

 

love edward and his

alice and jasper getting hitched very cool. the last of the pairings

how cute edward misses bella so.   very cool that jasper gets to show the girls some of phils's favorites.

love it all, thank you

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 51 ~ hush puppies and key lime pie

Glad Everything is going so well for them all.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 51 ~ hush puppies and key lime pie

:-)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 51 ~ hush puppies and key lime pie

Love your story! Thanks for the beautiful update.XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: joshuasmom131 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 51 ~ hush puppies and key lime pie

Great chapter love this story 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 51 ~ hush puppies and key lime pie

Thank you for the update. Best wishes and prayers for your family.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 51 ~ hush puppies and key lime pie

Lovely chapter.

 

I hope your troubles pass soon.  All the best.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Viva Las Vegas

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Viva Las Vegas

I love your story can 't wait for more .

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 50 - Viva Las Vegas

How could anyone not love Emmett? The wedding was wonderful. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 50 - Viva Las Vegas

i love the way you write all the characters

they are all great especially the kids-they all take your breath away

awesome wedding

love it

Reviewer: bird1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 50 - Viva Las Vegas

that was so sweet. so happy for them. cant wait for the births of the babies of both couples.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Viva Las Vegas

awww what a wonderful ceremony

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Viva Las Vegas

I loved the chapter! The tasteful Elvis themed wedding was perfect!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Viva Las Vegas

What a lovely wedding.  It is always a joy to read your updates.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Viva Las Vegas

Loved It

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Viva Las Vegas

Yay Emmett and Rose are married. It was a cute ceremony.

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 15 ~ humble pie

I totally love Lil Bit!!! ADORABLE!

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 13 cup cake

I knew she had a kid!!! Totally called it! I don't know how she has one, but I knew she had one!!

Freakin' amazing story...totally captivated!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 49 ~ bag-et wif chockit haze nuts

Loved it :)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 49 ~ bag-et wif chockit haze nuts

Love love it can't wait for more. Great story.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2014 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 49 ~ bag-et wif chockit haze nuts

Anthony is so sweet, but acts so much older than his age. I blame this on Kate. He needs some help because a little boy should have carefree moments. He worries about everything. Edward is  right how Bella is so intelligent except when it comes to security and self preservation. Thanks Edward for saving Rose.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 49 ~ bag-et wif chockit haze nuts

I always enjoy reading abou this sweet family.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 49 ~ bag-et wif chockit haze nuts

yey  for the twins.  Glad Rose is ok.  Poor little anthony.  Counselling sound like a great idea.

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 49 ~ bag-et wif chockit haze nuts

Poor Anthony, I hope he gets the help he needs. Glad Rose is ok. Twins, YAY! Really, Bella is surprised that Edward is jealous, does she even know her husband?

Reviewer: joshuasmom131 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 49 ~ bag-et wif chockit haze nuts

love the whole story always look forward to updates....thank you for a great story keep up the good work

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 49 ~ bag-et wif chockit haze nuts

love it

edward just is crazy in love with his wife and protective what is his

i am glad anthony has a family now. i hope they work something out so he has a relationship with his sister sasha

 

love it

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 49 ~ bag-et wif chockit haze nuts

anthony is so like his father very protective  he is wise beyond his years  Love u back!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 49 ~ bag-et wif chockit haze nuts

I love them as a family!  I think Anthony is the best big brother and I hope he knows he is loved and wanted!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 49 ~ bag-et wif chockit haze nuts

A pleasure to read as always.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

This was a great chapter. I love how they can go from sex maniacs to loving parents in moments.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

Beautiful. I love that song. 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

Love this story. I was afraid you had abandoned it. Please post soon.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

Lovely! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

They are such a sweet little family!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

wonderful start to the honeymoon.  

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

glad you are feeling better :] love the song it really fit was a little concerned about her drinking wine while pregnant but then i realized it was only a little Keep on feeling better! <3 see you soon

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

Oops! Bella better not have been drinking "...a rich Bordeaux..." She's pregnant!!! But sweet chapter otherwise!

Reviewer: tawelephant Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

So fantastic. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

That was a lovely chapter, thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

Really good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2014 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 47 ~ dream a little dream

So So beautiful. It was perfect for this couple.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2014 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 47 ~ dream a little dream

How cool so sweet.  I love Jacob anouncing them married to funny.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 46 ~ yummy cakes and sand-wishes

Love it what a great day and I love how they come together

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 47 ~ dream a little dream

One of Cass Elliot's best songs. Her voice was amazing. I had to sing the lyrics, not read them. I love 1 Corinthians as well. It was read at my wedding and I have read it at two other weddings. Loved the wedding. I love this story and the characters. However, I just hate calling Anthony, "Ant". Sorry.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 47 ~ dream a little dream

love this family

 

they have alot of respect and love

what a ggreat future to look forward to

love it

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 47 ~ dream a little dream

beautiful wedding :) i love that song :)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 47 ~ dream a little dream

Loved it ,can't wait for next chapter. Great wonderful story .

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 47 ~ dream a little dream

Lovely chapter, lovely wedding.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 45 - distracting brioche w creme fraiche

Love them the kids are so cute.  All I get at my house from the kids is stupid and idiot I think they have renamed themselves lol.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 47 ~ dream a little dream

Woo Hoo   Sweet pre wedding and wedding time!!

fw

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 47 ~ dream a little dream

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 47 ~ dream a little dream

God love them indeed.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 47 ~ dream a little dream

Even the wedding had their own not very traditional setting, poor Jacob. But as the say goes, if you can't beet'em, join them ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2014 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 46 ~ yummy cakes and sand-wishes

I will always be Team Edward. He is the best fantasy man out there. This was a cute chapter. Can't wait for the wedding.

Reviewer: Dalzieldawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 46 ~ yummy cakes and sand-wishes

Love the way you write can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: twilightgirl1690 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2014 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 46 ~ yummy cakes and sand-wishes

i love it im team Edward all the way update soon xx

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 46 ~ yummy cakes and sand-wishes

Fun chapter. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 46 ~ yummy cakes and sand-wishes

Sweet man and women time.  Lil Bit is just too cute.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 46 ~ yummy cakes and sand-wishes

I love these characters and their story. Thanks for writing such an up beat, happy story.

 

 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 46 ~ yummy cakes and sand-wishes

What a wonderful chapter, thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 46 ~ yummy cakes and sand-wishes

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 46 ~ yummy cakes and sand-wishes

Im Team Edward, all the way. I loved their days out. It was fun to read

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 45 - distracting brioche w creme fraiche

I love Anthony and little bit. So cute. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 45 - distracting brioche w creme fraiche

Emmett is so crazy. Edward is not a little man. That had to be a funny sight.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ just like his old man

I also was married in a double wedding with my sister. It was great and very special, plus it was cheaper and easier for the family to be able to come. My family lives all across the country. Bella and Roselie love each other like sisters, so I bet it would work.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 45 - distracting brioche w creme fraiche

lol, good thing these guys know not to do anything trashy on bucks night. that lil bit is smart as a whip!

Reviewer: joshuasmom131 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 45 - distracting brioche w creme fraiche

I love this story how many chapters do you think cause I could read this's forever lol ummmactually I did save it in my favs so I can read it whenever I want

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 45 - distracting brioche w creme fraiche

wedding is coming can't wait

 

love the kids

love it all

thank you

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 45 - distracting brioche w creme fraiche

The kids are so sweet and not one tantrum in sight.

 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 45 - distracting brioche w creme fraiche

Loved it :)

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 45 - distracting brioche w creme fraiche

AWE love the kids and Edward/Bella time. Do glad they are having their own weddings.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 45 - distracting brioche w creme fraiche

Kids are just too cute.   LOL for Em carrying out E

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 44 ~ just like his old man

love that idea!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches

aww, Emmett!, that was beautiful!!!! :D so happy for them!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 44 ~ just like his old man

double wedding awesome

love it

awesome family so much love

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ just like his old man

Loved it :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ just like his old man

Double wedding sounds great.  Love Anthony and Lil Bits interaction.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ just like his old man

Anthony's is the sweetest kid and such a great big brother.  Rose and Emmett are getting married on friday with Bella and Edward love it :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches

The house will be perfect and I am so happy for Rose and Emmett he is so happy.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ just like his old man

It is going to be a great and crazy wedding!!,

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ just like his old man

Oooh a double weddeing.  I lovely chapter.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ just like his old man

I saw that double wedding coming! I like it! What a happy story!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ just like his old man

Looking forwards to the next chapter

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ just like his old man

NOOO! Please no double wedding, while they do sound sweet and cute, each couple deserves their own day! I know this family isn't like that but Rose and Emmett do not need to steal Bella and Edward "thunder" so to speak. I do love how cute Anthony and Lil Bit are together.

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