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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:49 PM Title: Epilogue

It's cute when grown ass men do dumb things during a birth.   LOL     congratulations on your story.  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 21

I have cried a lot during this story and honestly, yes, it was irritating that Edward was such a dumb ass for so long.   LOL

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 20

Dam I would say Emmett is a cock blocker, but he's more of a feelings or talking blocker.   LOL

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 19

Well it seems like Edward can hear Bella.....

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 18

If Edward finally announced his feelings just to die on Bella that would be so shitty.   Bella has already lost way too much.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 17

I'm glad Bella made a run for it.  I guess the cops would have just sat there like dumb asses if she didn't.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 16

It's sad that Edward was so douchey to Bella while denying his feelings.   Bella deserves better that how he has been acting to her.   I'm glad Rosalie found the warehouse.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Well.... he was 1 of my guesses.   So he liked Bella and Alice when they were children?   Sicko!!!   

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

I knew this shit would end up being Edward's fault.   Because heis STILL being an ass. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

I knew this shit would end up being Edward's fault.   Because heis STILL being an ass. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

I think this is going to hurt Bella more than Edward.  His pain is his own doing and fuckery.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 12

Now I feel bad for James as well.   Edward is still being a denieing douche.  And the cops are no closer to figuring shit out.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

Hmmm   Edward maybe talked to Bella because he feels guilty, I think.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

The killer is a possessive crazy fucker, isn't he?    Bella isn't snapping back any time soon.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 9

Well you have taken 1 possible suspect away, but dam there are a lot more.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 8

Edward is upping the douche factor a lot isn't he??

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 7

Edward's silence was douchey.....   I don't like creepy Jake, creepy Sam or creepy Tyler

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

Edward's silence was douchey.....   I don't like creepy Jake, creepy Sam or creepy Tyler

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 6

oh dam!!!   Where is Alice?

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

this is getting scary....

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2018 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 19

If creepy Sam knew Bella and Edward slept together the night before he took her and knew James was about to get some and Jake just talked to her how is Tyler still alive when he took her virginity and hurt her?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2018 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 15

Emoward is exhausting! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2018 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 12

Okay its either Marcus from PA police their old boss or Sam Uley Edwards old partner from the same. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2018 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

Thank you Emoward because I didn’t understand her drama at all! 

Reviewer: karemay Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2015 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

Jake and the Q-Tips lolololololol love it..

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 4:10 PM Title: Epilogue

super sweet story ;) thanks for sharing it with us ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 12

ok super cool story ;) is the killer mike? ;D

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 7:25 PM Title: Epilogue

For a min there i thought alice girl and bellas boy would get together but then I remembered they are truly related almost siblings lol

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

Im guessing the killers uley

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:48 AM Title: Epilogue

That was darling! I laughed until I cried when Edward roared off down the street, just like his dadhad done ! That is so silly, and so cute, too! Great story, see you next time you post one!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 21

It might have been irritating to some to have them fight their feelings this long, but hey, this is your story, let'm write their own if they don't like your's! I'm just all about the happy ending, which you very nicely provided!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 20

It figures  that Emmett would interrupt, bless his bull-in-a-chinashop ways! Oh well, now that he's awake, thay have time!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 19

Carlisle knew that letting Bella stay with Edward would be the best medicine for him, and sure enough it was! Thank God for modern surgery techniques, huh?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 18

That was the perfect place to end the chapter, because those that didn't want to strangle you were damn sure going to be hot to read the next chapter! Oh, by the way, yippee, Sam is dead!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 17

Why would Sam treat Bella like that if he wanted her so damn much? Makes no sense to mistreat her if she was such an obsession!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 16

How could Rose have found that warehouse when Edward didn't? Trying to see the forest for the trees, I think! This staking out for twenty-four hours seems kind of stupid, what if it's twenty-four hours Bella doesn't have?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

It finally hit me when I thought back to when Edward said something was off about Sam Uley! Wonder where he's got Bella locked up?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

Sure, now that they have finally done the deed, now you let this psycho take Bella from Edward? Not nice! I'm scared that now the prologue will come true!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 13

Maybe forced contact will work where common sense was ignored! Now we know how this creep is overpowering his victims, but what he does is still twisted and perverted!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 12

Guess I was stupid , since it never occured to me that the killer  might be James! This is one sick puppie, from what he said to poor James! It's beginning to look like he will soon get his hands on Bella and then it's all over!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 11

I think  the reason Edward got through to Bella is the connection between them, that neither of them is willing to acknowledge! I wish Bella had been paying attention to what she said to everyone about not wasting time telling people you love them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Jake! What a horrible way to die and be found like that, and by Bella! Evidentally his wife was Leah and they had children who now have no daddy! I hope the guys are going to find this son-of-a-bitch and soon! Wait til they figure out it's Bella that the killer is obsessed with!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 9

Who could have gottenthe drop on Jake like that? Must have been someone very strong or very sneaky, or both! Edward better get his act together or he'll lose  Bella forever!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 8

These two sometimes give me an extreme pain in my butt, with the way they deliberately misunderstand each other! I want to yell at them, which is really silly of me, I know!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 7

Heck no, he didn't want an out! He's just a bit too unsure of the situation and lost the opportunity to declare himself!I'm crossing my fingers that Jake isn't the bad guy in this, but certainly don't discount the possibility!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 5

Now the guys have figured out this killers type of victim, they better watch their sisters like hawks! Poor Bella, she fell for the oldest trick in the book, I love you, disguising the truth of I want in your pants! I see that first spark between Edward and her. They probably haven't noticed before since growing up together.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

Murders right on campus! Not good , now that the girls are here! Thank heaven the guys are on the job, looking for the bad guy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

The girls are about to turn fifteen, and Edward's had a job offer in Seattle! Loved the fact of miscreant Mike Newton trying to hold up a convenience store! He's not too bright to try that in front of two cops!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 2

The girls are best friends, just like their brothers. That makes for really close neighbors I'll bet. It's nice that both Alice and Bella ahve big brothers to watch out for them.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was pretty funny, Carlisle rushing off to the hospital without his pregnant wife! Now that's pure panic! Well, the girls are here and all is well, for the moment. Emmett sure changed his mind about baby sisters, once he laid eyes on her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 4:41 AM Title: Prologue

That's sure one way to get my attention, Bella watching Edward get shot!

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 8:36 PM Title: Prologue

I tried to send you a private message bute it wouldn't let me so I'm writing my review here & I hope you get this.  

i have officially read all of you stories & I never reviewed per chp.  If the story is complete like all yours I wait til the end but since you had a few I decided to just write one big review,

Soi just like to say I'm so glad to have found you & I loved your stories!!!  I only disliked jake being a bad guy in most tho.  I am team twilight and read as many jake/Bella fics as I do ed/Bella & jake was never mean, just my opinion.  Ha!   I just want you to keep up with the good work and write more if able.  I have you faved so I can check up.  Thanks for sharing your talent!

hugs, Stephanie



Author's Response:

Thanks, Stephanie. I'm glad that you enjoyed this one. I do have a new story in the works, so make sure that you have me saved in the faves. Jake will be all good in this one. He was in Killer too...:)

Thanks for reading.

Liz

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 4:43 AM Title: Epilogue

Short and sweet! I love the way you write, so I prefer the longer ones! But I'll take what I can get! Lol!
Thanks for sharing your talent. :)

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 15

Shoot...I truly thought it was Mike Newton...so much for my detective skills!!  Awesome story by the way!

Reviewer: Myhubbyissoedward Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2013 1:16 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved it!

Reviewer: MissMartha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2013 3:49 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for sharing your creativity with us. It was great. I can't wait for more from you!!

Reviewer: tricklem Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2013 2:49 AM Title: Epilogue

awesome story!! Thanks for posting it..... :)

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2013 9:36 PM Title: Epilogue

LOVED IT!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2013 9:05 PM Title: Epilogue

Awesome, the only thing is I want to know why she had that reaction to the case file! :) 

 

-Kate

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2013 8:51 PM Title: Epilogue

awww i love the name parker and i love that he forgot her lmao just hilarious!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2013 7:40 PM Title: Epilogue

great story

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2013 6:57 PM Title: Epilogue

Too short dear. Great story but I hate parting with you again so soon. 

Reviewer: nanie057 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2013 6:18 PM Title: Epilogue

très belle histoire



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Huh?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2013 2:58 PM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story

Reviewer: DanaLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2013 2:42 PM Title: Epilogue

The end of the story! You did a wonderful job on this one and I can't wait until you start another! Until then! Dana

Reviewer: Molly May Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2013 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 21

Can I get an Awwwww.

Awwwwww

UST......OMG women......no do again, bring on the epi yeahhhhhhh.

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2013 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 21

hey

great chapter!

my gosh!!!

It really took long for them...

but it was quite good that way!

I love happy endings!

even when I'm shocked that it is ending soo soon!!

bye

Lil

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 21

Oh no more more, come on don't stop this story so soon. I have throroughly enjoyed it.

Reviewer: MissMartha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 6:11 PM Title: Prologue

What a great chapter. Thanks so much for sharing your creativity with us. The suspence was fantastic. Can't wait for the Epi!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 21

:)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 21

looking forward to the epilogue.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 21

Good thing Jane found her! Finally, they can be a couple :) loved it!

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

Frustrating indeed

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2013 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 20

:)

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2013 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

ugh good chapter update soon

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 20

freaking Emmett and his big mouth! wrong time to come in!...lol.

Reviewer: Molly May Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2013 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 20

Yeah love Wednesday ...... Thank you, thank you, thank you....

Frustrated yet OMG frustrated isn't the word for it......

As to the story.....

"Hmmmmm" that's all Edward has to say " Hmmmmmmm" slap the man...lol..

Bring on the next chapter.....yeah....

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2013 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 20

Sweet.

Reviewer: Molly May Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2013 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wednesday, Wednesday ...darn it women...... Wait ... Hmmm.... Ahhhh....heh heh heh heh.... gotcha..... It's Wednesday for me tomorrow ...lol.

Sooooo I far as I'm concerned you have to keep your word.... Come on women lol.

Forgot to mention well done, really liked this chapter.

You got the hospital lingo down pat.

Good job.

*whispers* my Wednesday tomorrow .... Just sayin. Lol

Reviewer: MissMartha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wow! That was one brutal cliff you left us on last time and this one isnt much better! Absolutely loving it!

Reviewer: DanaLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 19

He's alive and Bella's okay! Thank goodness for that! Wednesday can't get here fast enough! Until then...Dana

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 19

:)

Reviewer: Annette Pattinson Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 4:07 PM Title: Prologue

No,Edward can't be dead.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 19

Please tell me that Bella has eaten, showered and has clean clothes. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

I'm glad he's stabilizing. I can't wait for Wednesday for more. Love this story.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 19

Let him wake up quickly! Hope they'll be no complications

Reviewer: DanaLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 18

Very good chapter girl! I so want to kick Sam's ass for putting Bella and everyone through what he did! Can't wait for Saturday! Dana

Reviewer: Molly May Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh you rotter......lol

You just had to leave it there didn't you.....

Once again, you rotter you...lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved this

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

Can't wait for the next chapter. Don't take long.

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh no he has to be okay they have to be together.

Reviewer: MissMartha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

And then??? Please! Don't leave us on this cliff for very long!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 18

Holy crap!!! I'm gonna be biting my nails till Saturday! !!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 18

He better survive! We have to have a HEA!!

Reviewer: Molly May Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ohh exciting, can't wait.

Ohhhhh

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 17

loving this

Reviewer: MissMartha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

Ooo! I'm holding my breath here!!! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 17

Omg!!!!!!! I wish she could stab him in the leg!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 17

Very glad that Bella has some fight in her.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

Don't wait too long to post the next chapter. I can't wait.

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