Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:49 PM Title: Epilogue
It's cute when grown ass men do dumb things during a birth. LOL congratulations on your story. :)
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
I have cried a lot during this story and honestly, yes, it was irritating that Edward was such a dumb ass for so long. LOL
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 20
Dam I would say Emmett is a cock blocker, but he's more of a feelings or talking blocker. LOL
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well it seems like Edward can hear Bella.....
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
If Edward finally announced his feelings just to die on Bella that would be so shitty. Bella has already lost way too much.
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm glad Bella made a run for it. I guess the cops would have just sat there like dumb asses if she didn't.
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
It's sad that Edward was so douchey to Bella while denying his feelings. Bella deserves better that how he has been acting to her. I'm glad Rosalie found the warehouse.
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
Well.... he was 1 of my guesses. So he liked Bella and Alice when they were children? Sicko!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
I knew this shit would end up being Edward's fault. Because heis STILL being an ass.
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
I knew this shit would end up being Edward's fault. Because heis STILL being an ass.
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
I think this is going to hurt Bella more than Edward. His pain is his own doing and fuckery.
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
Now I feel bad for James as well. Edward is still being a denieing douche. And the cops are no closer to figuring shit out.
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hmmm Edward maybe talked to Bella because he feels guilty, I think.
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
The killer is a possessive crazy fucker, isn't he? Bella isn't snapping back any time soon.
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well you have taken 1 possible suspect away, but dam there are a lot more.
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is upping the douche factor a lot isn't he??
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward's silence was douchey..... I don't like creepy Jake, creepy Sam or creepy Tyler
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward's silence was douchey..... I don't like creepy Jake, creepy Sam or creepy Tyler
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh dam!!! Where is Alice?
Date: 02 Aug 2018 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
this is getting scary....
Date: 28 Apr 2018 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
If creepy Sam knew Bella and Edward slept together the night before he took her and knew James was about to get some and Jake just talked to her how is Tyler still alive when he took her virginity and hurt her?
Date: 28 Apr 2018 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
Emoward is exhausting!
Date: 28 Apr 2018 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
Okay its either Marcus from PA police their old boss or Sam Uley Edwards old partner from the same.
Date: 28 Apr 2018 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thank you Emoward because I didn’t understand her drama at all!
Date: 08 Mar 2015 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Jake and the Q-Tips lolololololol love it..
Date: 05 Sep 2014 4:10 PM Title: Epilogue
super sweet story ;) thanks for sharing it with us ;D
Date: 05 Sep 2014 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
ok super cool story ;) is the killer mike? ;D
Date: 04 Jan 2014 7:25 PM Title: Epilogue
For a min there i thought alice girl and bellas boy would get together but then I remembered they are truly related almost siblings lol
Date: 04 Jan 2014 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
Im guessing the killers uley
Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:48 AM Title: Epilogue
That was darling! I laughed until I cried when Edward roared off down the street, just like his dadhad done ! That is so silly, and so cute, too! Great story, see you next time you post one!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
It might have been irritating to some to have them fight their feelings this long, but hey, this is your story, let'm write their own if they don't like your's! I'm just all about the happy ending, which you very nicely provided!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 20
It figures that Emmett would interrupt, bless his bull-in-a-chinashop ways! Oh well, now that he's awake, thay have time!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
Carlisle knew that letting Bella stay with Edward would be the best medicine for him, and sure enough it was! Thank God for modern surgery techniques, huh?
Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 18
That was the perfect place to end the chapter, because those that didn't want to strangle you were damn sure going to be hot to read the next chapter! Oh, by the way, yippee, Sam is dead!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
Why would Sam treat Bella like that if he wanted her so damn much? Makes no sense to mistreat her if she was such an obsession!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
How could Rose have found that warehouse when Edward didn't? Trying to see the forest for the trees, I think! This staking out for twenty-four hours seems kind of stupid, what if it's twenty-four hours Bella doesn't have?
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
It finally hit me when I thought back to when Edward said something was off about Sam Uley! Wonder where he's got Bella locked up?
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
Sure, now that they have finally done the deed, now you let this psycho take Bella from Edward? Not nice! I'm scared that now the prologue will come true!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
Maybe forced contact will work where common sense was ignored! Now we know how this creep is overpowering his victims, but what he does is still twisted and perverted!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
Guess I was stupid , since it never occured to me that the killer might be James! This is one sick puppie, from what he said to poor James! It's beginning to look like he will soon get his hands on Bella and then it's all over!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 11
I think the reason Edward got through to Bella is the connection between them, that neither of them is willing to acknowledge! I wish Bella had been paying attention to what she said to everyone about not wasting time telling people you love them!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
Poor Jake! What a horrible way to die and be found like that, and by Bella! Evidentally his wife was Leah and they had children who now have no daddy! I hope the guys are going to find this son-of-a-bitch and soon! Wait til they figure out it's Bella that the killer is obsessed with!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
Who could have gottenthe drop on Jake like that? Must have been someone very strong or very sneaky, or both! Edward better get his act together or he'll lose Bella forever!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
These two sometimes give me an extreme pain in my butt, with the way they deliberately misunderstand each other! I want to yell at them, which is really silly of me, I know!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
Heck no, he didn't want an out! He's just a bit too unsure of the situation and lost the opportunity to declare himself!I'm crossing my fingers that Jake isn't the bad guy in this, but certainly don't discount the possibility!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
Now the guys have figured out this killers type of victim, they better watch their sisters like hawks! Poor Bella, she fell for the oldest trick in the book, I love you, disguising the truth of I want in your pants! I see that first spark between Edward and her. They probably haven't noticed before since growing up together.
Date: 02 Jan 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
Murders right on campus! Not good , now that the girls are here! Thank heaven the guys are on the job, looking for the bad guy!
Date: 02 Jan 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
The girls are about to turn fifteen, and Edward's had a job offer in Seattle! Loved the fact of miscreant Mike Newton trying to hold up a convenience store! He's not too bright to try that in front of two cops!
Date: 02 Jan 2014 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
The girls are best friends, just like their brothers. That makes for really close neighbors I'll bet. It's nice that both Alice and Bella ahve big brothers to watch out for them.
Date: 02 Jan 2014 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was pretty funny, Carlisle rushing off to the hospital without his pregnant wife! Now that's pure panic! Well, the girls are here and all is well, for the moment. Emmett sure changed his mind about baby sisters, once he laid eyes on her!
Date: 02 Jan 2014 4:41 AM Title: Prologue
That's sure one way to get my attention, Bella watching Edward get shot!
Date: 06 Nov 2013 8:36 PM Title: Prologue
I tried to send you a private message bute it wouldn't let me so I'm writing my review here & I hope you get this.
i have officially read all of you stories & I never reviewed per chp. If the story is complete like all yours I wait til the end but since you had a few I decided to just write one big review,
Soi just like to say I'm so glad to have found you & I loved your stories!!! I only disliked jake being a bad guy in most tho. I am team twilight and read as many jake/Bella fics as I do ed/Bella & jake was never mean, just my opinion. Ha! I just want you to keep up with the good work and write more if able. I have you faved so I can check up. Thanks for sharing your talent!
hugs, Stephanie
Author's Response:
Thanks, Stephanie. I'm glad that you enjoyed this one. I do have a new story in the works, so make sure that you have me saved in the faves. Jake will be all good in this one. He was in Killer too...:)
Thanks for reading.
Liz
Date: 05 Nov 2013 4:43 AM Title: Epilogue
Short and sweet! I love the way you write, so I prefer the longer ones! But I'll take what I can get! Lol!
Thanks for sharing your talent. :)
Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
Shoot...I truly thought it was Mike Newton...so much for my detective skills!! Awesome story by the way!
Date: 30 Oct 2013 1:16 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved it!
Date: 22 Oct 2013 3:49 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for sharing your creativity with us. It was great. I can't wait for more from you!!
Date: 22 Oct 2013 2:49 AM Title: Epilogue
awesome story!! Thanks for posting it..... :)
Date: 21 Oct 2013 9:05 PM Title: Epilogue
Awesome, the only thing is I want to know why she had that reaction to the case file! :)
-Kate
Date: 21 Oct 2013 8:51 PM Title: Epilogue
awww i love the name parker and i love that he forgot her lmao just hilarious!!
Date: 21 Oct 2013 6:57 PM Title: Epilogue
Too short dear. Great story but I hate parting with you again so soon.
Date: 21 Oct 2013 6:18 PM Title: Epilogue
très belle histoire
Author's Response:
Huh?
Date: 21 Oct 2013 2:58 PM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story
Date: 21 Oct 2013 2:42 PM Title: Epilogue
The end of the story! You did a wonderful job on this one and I can't wait until you start another! Until then! Dana
Date: 21 Oct 2013 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
Can I get an Awwwww.
Awwwwww
UST......OMG women......no do again, bring on the epi yeahhhhhhh.
Date: 21 Oct 2013 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 21
hey
great chapter!
my gosh!!!
It really took long for them...
but it was quite good that way!
I love happy endings!
even when I'm shocked that it is ending soo soon!!
bye
Lil
Date: 19 Oct 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh no more more, come on don't stop this story so soon. I have throroughly enjoyed it.
Date: 19 Oct 2013 6:11 PM Title: Prologue
What a great chapter. Thanks so much for sharing your creativity with us. The suspence was fantastic. Can't wait for the Epi!!
Date: 19 Oct 2013 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
looking forward to the epilogue.
Date: 19 Oct 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
Good thing Jane found her! Finally, they can be a couple :) loved it!
Date: 16 Oct 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
Frustrating indeed
Date: 16 Oct 2013 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
ugh good chapter update soon
Date: 16 Oct 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
freaking Emmett and his big mouth! wrong time to come in!...lol.
Date: 16 Oct 2013 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
Yeah love Wednesday ...... Thank you, thank you, thank you....
Frustrated yet OMG frustrated isn't the word for it......
As to the story.....
"Hmmmmm" that's all Edward has to say " Hmmmmmmm" slap the man...lol..
Bring on the next chapter.....yeah....
Date: 15 Oct 2013 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wednesday, Wednesday ...darn it women...... Wait ... Hmmm.... Ahhhh....heh heh heh heh.... gotcha..... It's Wednesday for me tomorrow ...lol.
Sooooo I far as I'm concerned you have to keep your word.... Come on women lol.
Forgot to mention well done, really liked this chapter.
You got the hospital lingo down pat.
Good job.
*whispers* my Wednesday tomorrow .... Just sayin. Lol
Date: 12 Oct 2013 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow! That was one brutal cliff you left us on last time and this one isnt much better! Absolutely loving it!
Date: 12 Oct 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
He's alive and Bella's okay! Thank goodness for that! Wednesday can't get here fast enough! Until then...Dana
Date: 12 Oct 2013 4:07 PM Title: Prologue
No,Edward can't be dead.
Date: 12 Oct 2013 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
Please tell me that Bella has eaten, showered and has clean clothes. Great chapter.
Date: 12 Oct 2013 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad he's stabilizing. I can't wait for Wednesday for more. Love this story.
Date: 12 Oct 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
Let him wake up quickly! Hope they'll be no complications
Date: 11 Oct 2013 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
Very good chapter girl! I so want to kick Sam's ass for putting Bella and everyone through what he did! Can't wait for Saturday! Dana
Date: 11 Oct 2013 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh you rotter......lol
You just had to leave it there didn't you.....
Once again, you rotter you...lol
Date: 10 Oct 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait for the next chapter. Don't take long.
Date: 10 Oct 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh no he has to be okay they have to be together.
Date: 10 Oct 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
And then??? Please! Don't leave us on this cliff for very long!!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
Holy crap!!! I'm gonna be biting my nails till Saturday! !!!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
He better survive! We have to have a HEA!!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
Ohh exciting, can't wait.
Ohhhhh
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ooo! I'm holding my breath here!!! Can't wait for more!!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
Omg!!!!!!! I wish she could stab him in the leg!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
Very glad that Bella has some fight in her.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
Don't wait too long to post the next chapter. I can't wait.