I really liked this story. I can't see Charlie letting her go th Chicago with someone she only knows for 2 days though. I would kill my daughter if she pulled that crap and she's 19! But I loved it anyway and because it's Edward it is ok. I would love to see another chapter of this one maybe of the move and of his parent's reaction and how they handle her schooling, apartment hunting, her getting pregnant since they did not use any birth control or protection. I love it when they have babies. Thanks for sharing. :) ~JDThorn