Date: 01 Mar 2020 4:34 AM Title: Epilogue
Absolutely loved this story!!! Demetri was a dream really and I'm so glad Bella grew up. I only wish that there was more.
Date: 01 Mar 2020 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hot damn Demetri is yummy
Date: 01 Mar 2020 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 17
Naw these two!
Date: 01 Mar 2020 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 16
So then what was their plan all along, cause that does make sense.
Date: 01 Mar 2020 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm really hoping she'll stay and want to stay with Demetri.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2020 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
It's like Alec is her brother. I do hope that when Demetri becomes king, he doesn't get rid of Marcus.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2020 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bout damn time!
[Report This]Date: 29 Feb 2020 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
Marcus was very fatherly to her, I just hope she isn't in too much trouble
Date: 29 Feb 2020 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
I really do hope she doesn't have to wet that mask much longer. And I hope she gets through this destroy her food phase
[Report This]Date: 29 Feb 2020 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
She has to wear a mask?! For how long? They need to find something better and something that doesn't cover her face.
[Report This]Date: 29 Feb 2020 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
So she is technically the best tracker in the world now, he should be proud. I wonder if she has any other gifts?
[Report This]Date: 29 Feb 2020 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
I wanna know what Demetri meant for them to both behave? And what the heck did Bella do with this pink fog? Did the metal that came out of her head leave marks?
[Report This]Date: 29 Feb 2020 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
I can understand why Demetri is what he did, I just hope he loves her like he should.
Date: 29 Feb 2020 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
He really does care for her, he's just not going to lie to her. Which is what a true mate and partner should do.
Date: 29 Feb 2020 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love the banter between Demetri and others. And even though Bella is acting like a scared little bitch, she's still snarky. I truly hope she stops this whining thing though and realizes that Demetri is her mate and love him.
[Report This]Date: 29 Feb 2020 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love the banter between Demetri and others. And even though Bella is acting like a scared little bitch, she's still snarky. I truly hope she stops this whining thing though and realizes that Demetri is her mate and love him.
[Report This]Date: 29 Feb 2020 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Fun and spunky beginning! Like this!
[Report This]Date: 29 Feb 2020 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Fun and spunky beginning! Like this!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2020 12:12 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved it! Great job.
Date: 15 Feb 2018 3:29 AM Title: Epilogue
I really like this story
Date: 14 Feb 2018 1:35 AM Title: Epilogue
I love your Demetri. This a great story.
Date: 14 Feb 2018 1:35 AM Title: Epilogue
I love your Demetri. This a great story.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 7:06 PM Title: Epilogue
this was worth the wait!
now, how about a sequel? :)
but really, ty for finishing this with
how busy you are.
keep up the great works!
Date: 05 Aug 2017 8:21 AM Title: Epilogue
Thank you!
Xx T
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2017 1:30 AM Title: Epilogue
I wish it was longer I love your story
Date: 03 Aug 2017 7:32 PM Title: Epilogue
I was so excited to see this . Congrats on getting you password. Your writing has always been up there as one of my favorite. Thank you.
Date: 18 Feb 2017 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
Please update soon love this story will Edward die what do they really want bella for
Date: 27 Dec 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
Somethign more between Alice & Edward. Some more nefarious reason...
This is a great, unusual story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 25 Nov 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
Can't wait for an update to see what he does to Edward.
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2016 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hey, so I am a huge fan of your writing, i have you on fanfiction and facebook lol please update this story i really cant wait tp read more and see Edward get his ass handed to him. cant wait for the update. V xxx
Date: 26 Aug 2016 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
nudge nudge poke poke i know you are prob busy but its a gooooood story sofar and im dying for the next chappy ok ill admitt was like demtri yawn but then i read it and im like what happenes next........
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2016 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 16
Amazing story! Looking forward to reading what comes next.
Date: 10 Aug 2016 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
Update soon great chapter
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2016 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
i so want to read more love it
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
Gah what happens next
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
Eeep!! This is awesome!! I really hope you can update it again soon :D
Date: 29 Jun 2016 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
this is a great chapter, demetri is such much more a badass than edward ever thought to be.
Date: 24 Jun 2016 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Please more from this story and cover up please
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2016 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
I continue to be amazed by your Dimitri!!! Always happy when Jasper survives, along with Peter. Anticipation for the next chapters and the rest of this terrific story remains high. Looking forward to next alert to hit my inbox. Thanks.
Date: 14 Jun 2016 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
The cliff again... please update soon. What is it that makes him prefer dealth...maybe Alice saw they would be tied to the big "V". What it is is a big need for an update soon. Please.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2016 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well, I'm glad Peter, Charlotte and my Jasper were smart enough to get, while the getting was good! *hugs*
Date: 13 Jun 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
where can we find the translations for your story Google translate doesn't seem to work for it.
Date: 12 Jun 2016 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love the delicious way you unravel a story only to add another question at the very end of a chap. can't wait to see what the mind rapist is up to.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
Whoa, what is he about to uncover?! Oh man, awesome!
Date: 12 Jun 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yey the captain and major got to leave. Stupid Malice and fuckward
Date: 12 Jun 2016 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh boy! What we're Edward and Alice up to? How could Jasper leave Alice? Were they really mates to begin with?
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2016 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
what is edward up too to bad the wolfs have to die there were lied to too
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2016 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
Please tell me there is going to be more soon! I really am loving this!
Date: 22 May 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
Please please please please finish
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2016 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
Another rocking chapter! And what a cliffy you little cutie. Sorry it's taken me so long to read and review. Delay not indicative of my interest in and love of your story. Just had too many other icky distractions. Reread 14 too. Very much looking forward to the Cullens getting their asses kicked. Hope you're back soon!!!
Date: 05 May 2016 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love this story are you still writing
Date: 01 May 2016 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 15
Update soon can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 16 Apr 2016 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love it. Please update again soon.
Date: 21 Mar 2016 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm really liking this, keep 'em comming
Date: 19 Mar 2016 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella, Bella....you never listen. I cannot wait to see how this turns out....love it.
Date: 18 Mar 2016 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
So....who's going to get it first? Update soon!
Date: 16 Mar 2016 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
Awesome...I am on the end of my seat waiting for the beatdown that iscoming to the Cullens.. Update soon please!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love love love can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2016 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ohoh Cullens be fu*ked! *hugs*
Date: 13 Mar 2016 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
I absolutely love the Bella/Demetrie pairing - I didn't think I would, but I do! I can't wait for the next chapter!! How often do you normally update? I understand you've been working on this a while and I sincerely hope you get to finish it; there's nothing worse than an unfinished story!!
Author's Response:
So glad you like the pairing. It's my favorite.
as for what you asked, due to life and circumstances, updates for this stopped for a really long time, and I've just started writing it again. It WILL be finished in due time, and rather quickly. I don't stick to a schedule because things always crop up and stop me from being able to keep the promise.
However, I am closing in on the ending, so it shouldn't be too much longer. The hold off between the last two updates was the release of a book, and my originals always come before fanfiction.
Give me a little longer and I'll have it done, since having it done within a week didn't happen because of the release and a sick kid.
~Speklez
Date: 12 Mar 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the updates can't wait for more
Date: 11 Mar 2016 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh I am on the edge of my seat. I love Dem just love him ... and how he dealt with the captain lol.
Date: 10 Mar 2016 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
It's getting good lol look forward to next update x
Date: 10 Mar 2016 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
Looking forward to finding out what happens in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2016 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love it. Update soon
Date: 10 Mar 2016 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
non sa devenait interressant Un autre chapitre stp merci
Date: 10 Mar 2016 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
Ha. Peter and Char are so screwed. Bet that was why pixie bitch asked Jas to call them. She never cared for them. She probably figured Aro wants the Cullen gifts and Carlisle's friendship more than he wants them dead. Pete and Char were the sacrificial lambs.
Hope Bella is smart enough to stop fighting Dem and really listen to and understand how badly Edward and Alice used her. Dem is right...they may not have known she was his mate before, but they certainly knew by the time they left Voltura the first time!
Date: 10 Mar 2016 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 15
Cullen really are stupid. Buh Bye morons
Date: 10 Mar 2016 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think he was to cryptic for her to understand what he meant. He shouldn't fault her for that since he didn't give her any proof to what he meant and she was way to brainwashed to get it.
Date: 10 Mar 2016 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
Absolutely love this story...Thanks for the update...
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
peter going to be pest at jasper i say let bella kill edward lol
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loving your story! It's a joy to read and I can't wait to have another chapter to do so.
Date: 24 Feb 2016 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wake up call... things are waaay different than they were with the Cullens.
Date: 24 Feb 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
So Alice knew this was going to happen? Looking forward to seeing what happens next
Date: 24 Feb 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow great two chapters. I was so excited to see you are finishing this story. Love Dem her is awesome. So bummed you skipped the lemon though.
Date: 24 Feb 2016 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
just came across your story. Very interesting, I don't think I've ever read one like this. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh...this is getting DEEP! *hugs*
Date: 22 Feb 2016 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ohhhh!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 22 Feb 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
I can understand some of his point but it was BS that he let her go with them months ago when he knew she was under their spell.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2016 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love it so can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2016 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
Your Demitri is so badass!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2016 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
I hope he spares my Jasper. He's been lied to by the Cullens every bit as much as Bella. Since she and D are mates, she won't be able to leave him, will she? Maybe Jasper can join the guard too. Will Pete be showing up?
Date: 22 Feb 2016 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
Boy after two years I wish you would RECAP. Is he going to kill Bella?
Date: 22 Feb 2016 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm glad your finally finishing this story. I really enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2016 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
he sound so mean and not loveble
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2016 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
Fantastic chap...can hardly wait for more...you always captivate.
Date: 22 Feb 2016 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
He made some really good points in that last paragraph. I wasn't sure I completely agreed with him altering her memories during her change, but really, she never listed to a word he said. Now I totally get why he had to do it.
Date: 20 Feb 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
Read all of this in one sitting. Looking forward to the next update.
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2016 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh how I've missed Dem/Bella!!!
Damn woman!!!!! You can't leave me hanging like that!!! What a clife!
Wonder what Sella's gonna do now?
Awesome story so far :D
^Cloe^
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2016 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
Love it. I am addicted to it it's great :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 13
I so can't wait to read more.
Date: 17 Feb 2016 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
Can't wait for more and am looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 17 Feb 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
Can understand her being upset. He could have said something came up, just not left letting her think she's not worthy or something. Ah well
Date: 16 Feb 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
whoo hooo glad i got to read this! very well done love
Date: 16 Feb 2016 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
I like her spunk! Alex has his hands full. I hope she at least cleans up and changes before she goes charging around the palace!
Date: 16 Feb 2016 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
holy fuck this is awsome!!! love it!