Date: 15 Jul 2018 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
Please come back and continue ASAP
Date: 05 Sep 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
The pieces begin to come together. Very nice! I do admire the fact that Bella, here, is more than understanding and tries to assuage Emmett's guilt. It says a lot for her character. Now if they can just survive! Looking forward to more!
Date: 04 Sep 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
So Peter doesn't like dogs, huh? Again, a nice chapter. I find the physical differences between humans and Emmett and Peter fascinating. I look forward to seeing if Emmett can find a way to save Earth. Also, I find his guilt in the matter touching.
Date: 04 Sep 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice! You are creating a culture and heirarchy and that is never easy. Yet, you give it to us in logical parts that add well to the story. Nicely done!
Date: 04 Sep 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Marvelous idea for a story - and Bella and Emmett! So rare! Thank you! Peter and Emmett explaining who they are to Bella is one thing, but I'm interested to see how the others react. I look forward to your updates!