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Reviewer: Jessa7635 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2018 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 4

Please come back and continue ASAP 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 4

The pieces begin to come together.  Very nice!  I do admire the fact that Bella, here, is more than understanding and tries to assuage Emmett's guilt.  It says a lot for her character.  Now if they can just survive!  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

So Peter doesn't like dogs, huh?  Again, a nice chapter.  I find the physical differences between humans and Emmett and Peter fascinating.  I look forward to seeing if Emmett can find a way to save Earth.  Also, I find his guilt in the matter touching.  

 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

Nice!  You are creating a culture and heirarchy and that is never easy.  Yet, you give it to us in logical parts that add well to the story.  Nicely done!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Marvelous idea for a story - and Bella and Emmett!  So rare!  Thank you!  Peter and Emmett explaining who they are to Bella is one thing, but I'm interested to see how the others react.  I look forward to your updates!

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