Date: 10 Jun 2022 1:57 PM Title: Endings
Loving it. Emmett is a riot.
Date: 27 May 2018 6:17 PM Title: Endings
90 hours a week away from his kids? When the hell does he see them? They’re four, he must seem the at Weekends only, unless he’s working then too.
All these women dying in childbirth. Is USA a third world country?
Date: 12 Mar 2018 6:28 AM Title: Outtake One
Loved readingthis storyline. Thank you for sharing your talents with us
Date: 30 Nov 2014 10:45 PM Title: Perspectives
How dare Bella assume that Edward wouldn't want to be a father to his own son. To take that choice away from him is unforgivable as well as Rose, Em, Jake and Leah going along with her knowing how selfish she is. Emmett's the worst because he's witnessed his brothers pain when Angela died and now to choose to put him through more agony is just cruel! Why put Bella's feelings before his brother's and his family? How can Bella hurt Edward knowing how much he loves her and she loves him? I wouldn't have the strength to walk away like that.
Great story!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 3:19 PM Title: Outtake Three
wow what a great story ;) thanks so much for sharing it here ;)
Date: 20 Sep 2014 8:10 PM Title: Endings
cool beginning but in bpov it said rose was alice's little sister? so how can she be in a relationship with her cousin? and wouldn't they know each other already? ;)
Date: 11 Nov 2013 11:04 PM Title: Tears
Does Edward have to be so mean to the medics and hospital staff?? Geez
Date: 11 Nov 2013 9:52 PM Title: Breakdown
It is really weird seeing how Bella acts about her fathers death. It just doesn't seem sincere.
Date: 21 Oct 2013 9:05 PM Title: Time
Enough is a enough! Who at 25 acts like this? And what friend would Stand and watch you behave in this manner. A good friend listens, but tells you the truth even when you don't want to hear it.
This going on and on....really. low self-esteem.....my god Bella is killing me.
I truly enjoyed the fist half of the story. ..up until the accident, but the chapters afterward really make me mad. The selfish coward. At this point I cannot read any more. I know they will get back together, but look at all the folks who gets hurt in between. Cannot take it.
Thanks for taking the time to write. Thanks for the story.
Date: 18 Oct 2013 9:20 PM Title: Flirting
so sad that I couldn't get any of the above links to work ... story is great so far
Date: 30 Sep 2013 7:14 AM Title: Perspectives
yep, bella is selfish and i don't like her
Date: 08 Aug 2013 6:45 PM Title: Outtake Three
not that she wouldn't have deserved it. LOL
Ty for writing and sharing.
Date: 08 Aug 2013 6:43 PM Title: Outtake Two
yummy yummy. get her E.
Date: 08 Aug 2013 6:41 PM Title: Outtake One
oooh LOVE this chapter
Date: 08 Aug 2013 6:03 PM Title: FGB No. Two: The Future Shot
Gotta LOVE when all the kids are finally in school. LOL for getting caught though
Date: 08 Aug 2013 5:55 PM Title: FGB No. One: The Lost Scene
Sam is such a great friend for them
Date: 08 Aug 2013 5:54 PM Title: Epilogue: Part Two
Glad E and Em made up. B&E are insatiable huh? Awww Peter.
Date: 08 Aug 2013 5:32 PM Title: Epilogue: Part One
Woo Hoo for Wedding. So Em, Rose, Leah, Jake, and Alice weren't invited to the wedding?
Date: 08 Aug 2013 5:20 PM Title: Finally
They need to have counselling if they want a chance to work. Don't blame Lizzie for being gunshy at the thought of B coming back. B cause almost all of this. Sweet talk with E at Ang's grave though
Date: 07 Aug 2013 10:45 PM Title: Advice
BPOV: Yup its a mess of your own making B. sam is sooooooo right.
EPOV: I'm with E. I'd be pissed as hell too. Esme is so cool. Love her. I kinda don't blame Alice. The effect on the girls, not to mention E, would have made me do something like that too.
Ch 31 (inside ch 30 lol)
BPOV: Glad E wants to take it slow. Trust, esp regarding the girls, needs to be earned. Sam is toooooo funny.
EPOV: Can't blame him for being cautious.
BPOV: Glad she's acutally thinking about his feelings now. Glad she's being responsible about BC now. Seattle: yea she should have told him sooner. sigh she really needs to communicate better. Glad they are getting some alone time, but I know it was hard leaving my first child.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 9:10 PM Title: Admissions
BPOV: Sorry B. You deserve every bit of hardness Sam et al give you. The Cullen's would be right to never speak to you again,esp with how those little girls were hurt. And just wait till they find out that Em knew.
Awww for Sam and his new man and job. I agree with Sam on the singing. Can't stand Barbra or her little Celine Clone. blech.
Glad Sam is being stern with her. Although I'd meet at a neutral location, like Em's place. They should have to endure some pain since they were complicit in the deception.
Gotta love Esme. Although how/why she kept it from Edward I'll never get. ok wierd note..Isnt the breast pump one of the great inventions for mommies!!! E would be within his rights to dump her. (yea I'm a bit bitter)
EPOV: You are Wayyyyyyy to good to her. oh E if only you told her that before. But she was still in the wrong. Glad he asked for time.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 8:09 PM Title: Labor
Wish she had to go without the epidural. Sooooo mad at her. Sorry but Em should have reclused himself. sooo wrong the way he is continuing to lie to his family.
EPOV: Glad the girls are doing better. Poor E. Em is a bad brother lying to him
RPOV: ah So Em is trying to be sneaky. Thats cool. Still don't like Rose.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 7:53 PM Title: Time
Bella doesnt deserve a new friend right now, gay or not. Rose doesn't deserve to have it either. She, and Em, are still lying to the whole family. Those poor little girls. Wouldn't blame E for trying to get custody and shutting all the liers out of his life.
Jan: if not for the health of the baby, I'd say she deserves everything she's feeling. She def doesnt deserve Sam.
Feb: Pathetic that Sam get to experience that kick and not E
Mar: Like you deserve any better. Glad Alice left the diatribe. Sam is too nice.
April: Wow Sam is really nice
EPOV: Poor guy.
May: glad she's uncomfortable. Wow Can't believe Em is participating in that shower considering he is keeping his nephew away from the father, siblings, and grandparents. Sam is funny
EPOV: At this point, E has every reason to hate Rose and Em. Wow Rose is just cruel, esp with yelling for Em the way she did.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 7:36 PM Title: Perspectives
Em pov: Wow I'm def anti Rose right now. Asking Em to lie is cowardly on her part as well. E has a right to know regardless of his past conversations about no marriage.
Leah POV: Leah and Jake are sooooo wrong about this. hppft...Leah is not strong. She just tried to force Jake into a baby. Not fair to Em, Esme or Carlisle either.
Lizzie POV: Those poor girls. So wrong hurting them as well, not to mention keeping a sibling from them.
Alice POV: Wow Rose et al lying to Alice too. This is ridiculous. Can't blame Alice for being pissed.
Rose: Em deserves better than Rose at this point. Wouldn't blame him for leaving her for her forcing him to lie to his whole family. Wow NOW she decides that B is wrong? What a goober Rose is. Kinda expected Bella's response to her tirade.
Carlisle: He is so nice, even when Bella doesn't deserve it.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 7:21 PM Title: Connection
woah.....why would em, rose, jake, and leah help her leave him??????? WTH??? Very cowardly way to leave B.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 7:10 PM Title: Assurance
hmmmm now what is B planning? She needs to tell him soon before someone one else drops the beans.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 6:51 PM Title: Tears
OMG what a way to find out about baby. E is going to go nutso!!!!
Date: 07 Aug 2013 6:43 PM Title: Declaration
he wants to talk while she's driving??? what an idiot
Date: 07 Aug 2013 4:44 PM Title: Dilemma
Only Alice would deliver dinner invitations to FAMILY via messenger. Silly woman.
Aww for dinner and for the start of after.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:47 PM Title: Revelations
lol for frustrated B. lol for getting caught making out by the kids.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:25 PM Title: Progress?
kinda bad timing. Glad Carlisle was there for her. was wondering who she was talking too. Kinda figured Billy or Carlisle.
Silly E thinking the worst that B would up and leave.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:14 PM Title: Surprises
Pixie and her parties. aww for the ending and the private gift giving.
Date: 06 Aug 2013 10:27 PM Title: Dates
oh Alice. You bad girl. Royce is a real piece of work. E to the rescue!!!
Date: 06 Aug 2013 10:10 PM Title: Games
Why do I have the feeling that Alice is going to cause a big rift. Sure hope Royce doesn't hurt Bella.
Date: 06 Aug 2013 9:33 PM Title: Comfort
oh E you were doing so well.... Poor broody E is back. Bella is gonna get whiplash soon
Date: 06 Aug 2013 8:55 PM Title: Moving
lol for the Jake/Edward little love story. yey for moving in.
Date: 06 Aug 2013 6:44 PM Title: Commencement
their banter is tocute. Uh oh Jealous E coming out to play
Date: 06 Aug 2013 6:34 PM Title: Brunch
glad their meeting went well. Considering the hours she'll be putting, I think the salary is good, esp if benefits are included too.
Date: 06 Aug 2013 5:40 PM Title: Interviews (Part Two)
Get him Esme!!! Aww for poor embarrased B
Date: 05 Aug 2013 11:53 PM Title: Interviews (Part One)
wow for Jake's issue and for the skank twins at the interview. love esme.
Date: 05 Aug 2013 10:33 PM Title: Alone
ooooh Em avoiding E. That's not good. Prob under threat by Rose as not to spill the beans about B. Wonder if B will show up to the interview or not.
E sounds like a work meanie. Love the girls and how he is with them though
Date: 05 Aug 2013 10:10 PM Title: Uncertainty
ooooh naughty B sneaking out. Ya know Em is not going to be able to keep his mouth shut.
Kate seems pretty cool.
Date: 05 Aug 2013 10:00 PM Title: Lemonade
Wowzer Wowzer Wowzer What a first meeting!!!
Date: 05 Aug 2013 9:46 PM Title: Flirting
oooh they are getting to know each other a little. Oh B.....dangerous game you are playing.
Date: 05 Aug 2013 8:01 PM Title: Nuptials
Both our kids have some things to get over huh? Ugh Newton. Alice's wedding sounds lovely.
Aww for E trying to look out for her. So sweet.
Date: 05 Aug 2013 7:40 PM Title: Possibilities
poor B. Glad Billy was there to help her. Alice is a force of nature that's for sure. Ah E gets his first peek at B. Hope he doesn't make an arse out of himself.
Date: 05 Aug 2013 2:17 AM Title: Breakdown
Glad that we don't have to worry about Jake sniffing around B. Sounds like they are good friends. Hmm now why does E not like Rose? She seems pretty cool in this story.
Date: 04 Aug 2013 11:01 PM Title: Endings
well James is a horndog but at least he doesn't sound abusive. oh wow for the way she found out about her dad. glad she didn't wreck the car or anything. lol for the kid based ok intervention
Date: 04 Aug 2013 10:42 PM Title: Change
Great start. Cant wait to see where you take it.
Date: 25 Jun 2013 5:33 PM Title: Perspectives
Neither Bella nor Emmett desreve forgiveness. This is utter betrayal. bella is being cruel and self serving. Not just to Edward but his poor little girls.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 3:43 AM Title: Interviews (Part Two)
loved it!
Date: 14 Oct 2012 2:05 AM Title: Interviews (Part One)
loved it!
Date: 02 Sep 2012 12:41 AM Title: Commencement
labor of love edward widower
Date: 22 Jul 2012 9:27 PM Title: Outtake Three
I'M SO GLAD THIS ISN'T WHAT HAPPENED THAT WAS SHITY OF EDWARD.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 9:12 PM Title: Outtake Two
IT WOULD HAVE BEEN BEAUTIFUL ALSO IF IT HAD OF HAPPENED THAT WAY. YOU KMOW WHAT FOR ME ALMOST ANYTHING EDWARD AND BELLA DO IN BET IS BEAUITFUL.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 8:29 PM Title: Outtake One
SO THAT WHAT COULD HAVE HAPPENED IT WOULD HAVE BEEN GREAT AS WELL.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 6:42 PM Title: FGB No. Two: The Future Shot
WOW SEX IN THE BACK YARD JUST WOW THATS ONE I NEVER DID BUT IN DID IN THE WOODS ONCE WITHOUT A BLANKET UNDER ME NOT GOOD AT ALL IT HURTS THE BACK AND ASS. LOL
Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:51 PM Title: FGB No. One: The Lost Scene
IT WAS A VERY GOOD THING FOR SAM TO TALK TO LIZZIE IT WORKED AND SAM DIDN'T SEEM TO TRY TO FORCE BELLA ON LIZZIE AT ALL. SAM'S A SMART MAN.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:00 AM Title: Epilogue: Part One
MARRIED AT LAST WILL THERE BE MORE BABYS?
Date: 21 Jul 2012 1:04 PM Title: Admissions
She should beg for his forgiveness.
He missed the birth of his son, he miss watching Bella grow with him, he missed, the birth, he missed his first bath, first feed... the list goes on
I stand behind you Edward.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 12:33 PM Title: Labor
I am sorry, but if Edward takes her back with a drop of a hat I will be pissed, not only has Bella put him thought he wringer, but his kids also, and with the help from his brother, I would never speak to them again and then I would go after partial custody for my child.
I would be so angry... and if you don't make Edward that angry, I am though with this story also.
So far Bella = bad and Edward = good. You will not change my mind, I don't care how messed up Bella is from her fathers death, you talk to the person you are having a child with, Edward never got to help choose the child's name, or see him come into this world... Bella did wrong by Edward.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 4:11 AM Title: Advice
I HOPE BELLA SAY'S YES AND MOVES IN RIGHT AWAY.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 8:03 AM Title: Perspectives
FIRST IF MY FAMILY KEEPT SOMETHING SO BIG AS THIS BABY I THINK I WOULD NEVER FORGIVE THEM I MEAN IF I WAS THE FATHER EVERYONE THAT KNOWS WHERE BELLA IS AND HOW EDWARD IS SUFFERING AND HIS GIRLS AS WELL THEY ARE JUST NOTSHOWING EDWARD OR THE GIRLS THE LOVE THEY SHOULD HAVE FOR THEM HOW CAN THEY WATCH THEM SUFFER LIKE THAT. I WANT TO KICK SOME ASS.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 6:40 AM Title: Connection
DAMMIT THIS WAS SO WRONG OF BELLA SHE SHOULD HAVE TOLD EDWARD ABOUT THE BABY ANYWAYS HE HAS A RIGHT TO KNOW. IF SHE HAD HE WOULD HAVE TOLD HER HE WANTS THE BABY AND TO MARRY HER I'M SURE I'M SO MAD AT HER RIGHT NOW. FOR HURTING EDWARD. AND I'M PISSED AT JAKE AND EMMETT TO BECAUSE THEY SHOULD HAVE TOLD EDWARD WHAT SHE WAS PLANING HELL EMMETT IS HIS TWIN FOR CHRIST SAKES.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 1:40 AM Title: Assurance
WHAT WHERE THE HELL IS SHE MOVING TO AND WHY. IS SHE LEAVING EDWARD BECAUSE OF THE BABY? ANF WHY HASN'T ANYONE TOLD EDWARD YET THAT BELLA IS HAVING HIS CHILD.?
Date: 17 Jul 2012 8:36 AM Title: Declaration
SO WHAT DOES THAT MEAN DID BELLA PASS OUT OR DID SHE WRECK THE CAN? WHAT?
Date: 17 Jul 2012 6:55 AM Title: Dilemma
I DON'T GET WHY EDWARD CAN'T TELL BELLA HE LOVES HER HE DOES SO WHY NOT TELL HER?
Date: 17 Jul 2012 5:40 AM Title: Revelations
HE BETTER OR I'D MAKE HIM WATCH ME MAKE MY SELF CUM
Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:42 PM Title: Games
WELL WHAT BELLA SAID TO EDWARD SEEMED LIKE SHE ONLY WANTS TO BE FRIENDS AND NOT LOVERS PERTTY CUT AND DRY TO ME BUT EDWARD'S NOT HAPPY WITH THAT HE WANTS MORE HE WANTS THE WHOLE PACKAGE
Date: 16 Jul 2012 10:38 AM Title: Comfort
OK I DON'T GET IT WHY CAN'T THEY BE TOGETHER JUST BECAUSE HE HAS THE TWINS THATS NO RESON THEY CAN DO THERE THING WITH OUT THE KIDS SEEING THEM
Date: 16 Jul 2012 9:15 AM Title: Moving
I'M GLAD EDWARD WAS THERE TO COMFORT BELLA WHEN SHE NEEDED IT SHE MISSES HER DADDY SO MUCH.
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:32 AM Title: Commencement
WOW EDWARD HAS A LITTLE GREEN EYED MONSTER IN HIM AND I DON'T JUST MEAN THE COLOR OF HIS EYES.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:26 AM Title: Brunch
NOW SHE REMEMBERS WILL THINGS CHANGE FOR HER, HER FEELING FOR EDWARD?
Date: 14 Jul 2012 9:53 PM Title: FGB No. Two: The Future Shot
Too funny........ ;-) Loved the outtake !
Date: 14 Jul 2012 7:03 AM Title: Change
Very promising beginning!
Date: 14 Jul 2012 2:11 AM Title: FGB No. Two: The Future Shot
Oh... that outtake was VERY nice :)
Date: 13 Jul 2012 9:54 PM Title: Change
This is the first story I have read that Esme couldn't cook...good for you!
Date: 13 Jul 2012 6:41 PM Title: FGB No. One: The Lost Scene
Loved this outtake! Sam is a great friend.
Date: 13 Jul 2012 6:24 PM Title: Epilogue: Part Two
Nice chap! There is nothing like laundry room sex, especially when you have kids :)
Date: 13 Jul 2012 4:19 PM Title: FGB No. One: The Lost Scene
Loved it xx
Date: 13 Jul 2012 8:33 AM Title: Epilogue: Part Two
I loved this story so sad it ending xx
Date: 12 Jul 2012 12:27 PM Title: Epilogue: Part One
Awesome! Edward is so damn sweet. And I love Caveward!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 6:16 AM Title: Epilogue: Part One
I can't stop picturing Sam as John leguizamo from the movie "To Wong Foo" LOL
Date: 11 Jul 2012 11:31 PM Title: Finally
nice!!! But I think he gave in to her too quickly. I would have made her wait a little longer. LOL
Date: 11 Jul 2012 3:54 AM Title: Advice
Okay!!!!
Ahhhhh.....all is right! Damn, E just kills me!
Date: 11 Jul 2012 2:30 AM Title: Advice
Edward was to forgiving of Bella. She was in the wrong in so many ways it unbelievable!! I do not blame Edward for being pissed at Emmett. What he did to Edward was awful! So much for being a twin, to Emmett it didn't mean anything! I am surprised that Esme hasn't stepped in more.
Date: 10 Jul 2012 3:52 AM Title: Admissions
Glad that Bella finally got the courage to go see Edward. Too bad that he got too emtional
Date: 10 Jul 2012 3:24 AM Title: Admissions
Edward, MAN UP and take Charlie and boot her out in her ass! Emnett TOO!
Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:31 AM Title: Admissions
Oh Edward......
Date: 10 Jul 2012 12:27 AM Title: Admissions
Well, holy shit! But hey, I'm not surprised. I mean, she did leave and was gone for almost a year with no contact and then she comes back hoping Edward will accept everything. It's just too much and I bet he needs time to think LOL