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Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

I love flash forwards!

Pam just keeps piling on the crazy don’t she; masturbating w/ Sookie’s dildo… is there a word that means beyond disturbing?

One bit of critique: the big long paragraph is a bit daunting to read, I don’t know if you meant it to be like that or did something happen when you posted it. The content is great but it made it slightly difficult to read.

Can I borrow Eric for a night or two or three; I really could use so of his mojo!

I would say good luck on your original story but you aren’t going to need it you have talent and talent will out shine luck any day of the week! Just give me a heads up when I can purchases it, I want to be one of those people who knew you when and not be jumping on the bandwagon when everyone is in love with your characters. Luvs & hugs Jenny-girl.

XoXo

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

Eww gross “have I mentioned that you’re adorable when you’re all flustered”! And Pam w/ the nick names needs to stop it’s too creepy for words and did I mention she is totally fucked in the head because she is! Okay Sookie is hot when she’s all feisty (Oh no am I turning into Pam?).  

Pam is one cold bitch, I’m actually feeling bad for Alcide. Yeah half way through this riveting argument it dawned on me they’re all naked! And the girls being naked is one thing but naked flaccid (such a good word) men is just kinda sad, whenever Eric fisted his hand around his Viking sword you so had me.

I was wondering if Fido oh I mean Alcide being fixed was going to come back up the way Pam made it sound it wasn’t know but the fuck did she know!? And that was almost a bigger betrayal than cheating.

Sookie rebounded awful quick!

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 5

Well talk about the most awkward time to have this intimate relationship question! Not only is ready to pillage her but Alcide and Pam are w/ in shouting distance!

Wow look at you; you turn all hot and heavy sex into sweet lovemaking, you truly are skilled. In the words of my 5 year old “I did not see that coming, I did not see that coming”, after Pam had her fun w/ Alcide she lurks over to invade Sookie and Eric!!!

“Schmoopsie” that is truly appalling! And Pam has a interesting theory can’t fuck Sookie so I’ll fuck who she fucks, that’s not messed up at all!! Does the sarcasm translate through the page?

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 4

No, no, never, never, nah, nah, Pam & Alcide! That's why he was so hesitant screwing her; he didn't want either of them to inadvertently give anything away! And how awesome was it that Sookie & Eric both heard the comment but decided to fuck instead of deal w/ it and who can blame them? No me! Eric is going to need an internal note book to keep all this topics straight that he needs to bring up to Pam. So the check list looks something like         

                Do you or do you not want to have a baby with me now?

                What’s with the ‘miss you” comment from Alcide?

                Are you into all girls or just Sookie?

And now they both know they can’t be w/ their (in)significant others and are still in love! I’m rooting for E&S but I really, really want to know what’s up w/ Pam and not just w/ Alcide????

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

I don't really have any question I truly want to see  err read how this all unfolds. As for a full review I don't know how to review without blushing and sounding like a dirty birdy. Love your work as always keep the chapters cumming (was that too cheeky?).

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hello there, I know I usually post my review on FF but I felt so bad that this story only has 2 reviews! That’s just not right so I must change that post haste!

 You really have me wondering if Alcide ate pain chips as a kid or is just dumb founded that this is all happening in front of him (I’d like to believe the latter). Some might interpret Eric being secure that his skills are intact as cocky but I think it more that he’s being honest (with us), and I think his and Pam relationship has moved from being in-love to loving each other (but that’s just my thoughts).

 Loved the revel of Sookie & Eric’s back story, I’m not surprised Eric cheated he was a young horny man and they do stupid stuff now that’s not an excuse more of an explanation and he now realizes that a blow job wasn’t worth losing Sookie. It’s so surreal that they are doing this spur of the moment couple switch but they take the time to have rules, perhaps because it’s been in their minds for a while, having an ongoing joke for a while some times tells the truth (does that make any sense?).

 Ah okay Pam telling the room that “I’m not planning to breed anytime soon”, but convincing Eric to have a baby in private is so important to me it says she senses that there is something missing in the relationship and it needs fixing and a baby will do that (I have never, ever, ever understood that logic but that’s me).

 Funniest line “I’m not a cat person”, the line solo not that interesting but in context to say he prefers pussy i.e. woman too brilliant!

Reviewer: realjena Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it so far! More to come soon <3

Reviewer: Sitalia Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 3

I love it. I hope they end up together in the end. :)

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