[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2017 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
What surname is he using?
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2017 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
No one has brought up that he could be married or have children.
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2017 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
I sure as Hell am glad that I've never had them as my PT's. They're very unprofessional.
Date: 01 Nov 2017 10:59 AM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part II
I loved this story. I actually love all 3 of them.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2015 5:28 PM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part II
Thank you for this wonderful story. I found it by pure coincidence and am damn happy I did. I love your characters and the story that almost went by without major relationship drama but Edward battling his demons with Bella by his side instead. You really did a great job writing this. Thank you so much.
Date: 11 Oct 2015 9:39 AM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part II
I've been waiting to read Come Back Tomorrow and will do so despite what you said about Edward being terminal! That's heartbreaking right from the start! As for this story, bravo! You did a beautiful job and I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Author's Response:
Hi there! I'm so sorry for the lateness of this response--it's been a crazy couple of months! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing How to Forget--I'm so happy you enjoyed it! I hope you like Come Back Tomorrow as well! :)
Date: 11 Oct 2015 9:09 AM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part I
This was every bit as difficult as I thought it would be, but as always, they got through it together. I'm so glad Bella insisted on going to Chicago with Edward. It helped immensely, plus she had a great visit with his folks! The night out with Kate and Garrett was just the relaxation they both needed!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 8:09 AM Title: Outtake- Oasis
Too bad the migraine ruined what was a great way to spend the day off!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 7:45 AM Title: Epilogue
What a really great ending! I love when they get their happy ever after!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 25
Funny that Edward had more faith than Bella did! He just knew that she would do what she thought was best for him, forgetting that he's a big boy and can decide things for himself! Anyway, they are together and in love and that is the very best!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
Something is not right with the way Bella has been, not calling and so forth. I can see why Edward needs to go back and see her, face to face! They have lots to talk about!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 23
Apart from not talking to Bella yet, things are looking up! One thought occurs, how did Demetri find Edward if the FBI hadn't yet? Is there someone else who is a traitor?
Date: 11 Oct 2015 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
I feel so bad for Bella, him just being whisked away like that! She knew it was a possibility, but to not even get to say goodbye! She wanted to tell him how happy she was that his old life was a good one, now she just misses him something awful!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 21
Obviously Edward's past caught up to and nearly killed him! One good thing came out of this horror, he remembers everything. If this new head injury doesn't send it all away again, now his past will be known!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wounded we can deal with, dead, not so much! That was tough to even read! Thank God he killed the guy!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
No wonder Bella is so happy, she has the man she always knew was inside the one she fell in love with! He's got his life on track now and I hope nothing derails that!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter,! Angela is a good therapist and Edward is just a good guy and that's why Bella loves him! Hearing Ben's story sur changed Edward's thinking about his past. The future looks mighty bright now!
Date: 10 Oct 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
He's gotten to such a good place that he's going to ask Angela how to proceed. This sure makes Bella happy, but I'm afraid as soon as he starts to accept his new life with her, the old one is going to come back to haunt them both!
Date: 10 Oct 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yeah, that was pretty breathtaking, alright!
Date: 10 Oct 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was cute, in a way, with Bella making him so relaxed he had no trouble whatsoever going back to sleep!
Date: 10 Oct 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
That was so moving I nearly wept! You give good presents, lady!
Date: 10 Oct 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 13
I don't care what he remembered, he's not a bad man! Bella wouldn't love him if he was and he wouldn't love her either! They both need to talk about their deepest secrets and hash this all out!
Date: 09 Oct 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
This was bound to happen aftr he remembered what his attacker said to him! The thing that scares me is all the codeine he's taking to sleep at night! I'm a bit disappointed that he won't tell Bella what he remembered, but I guess that's just Edward, being Edward!
Date: 09 Oct 2015 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
Emmett saying he would make it quick and painless nearly brought Edward to his knees! Talk about triggering a memory! Thank God Edward managed to calm and distract Em until Charlie arrived to help! I'm so pleased that they finally kissed and will be talking about it tomorrow!
Date: 09 Oct 2015 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
Both a good thing and a bad thing, that it took getting drunk to let something happen between them! Now I wonder how he will react tomorrow when she tells him how she feels about him?
Date: 09 Oct 2015 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
I cheered when Edward took down Riley! Who does he think he is, grabbing her like that? Despite Jess hitting on him, I'm glad Edward had a good time at Tyler's.
Date: 09 Oct 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 8
That was a nice surprise for a change, for Edward and for Emmett. His schizophrenia must be under control with medication but still it has to be hard for him and Charlie and Bella.
Date: 09 Oct 2015 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm just agog at the gun incident! To take one of those apart unawares is flat amazing. He could be most anything, but I'm with Bella, he's not a bad man!
Date: 09 Oct 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
At least they tried to go out and relax, too bad it didn't work out that way! Maybe Edward will feel better if he gets the job and starts to pull his own weight!
Date: 09 Oct 2015 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
The dream fragment he had shows a bit of memory has surfaced in Edward's mind. I hope that is the start of more showing up! He will have a bit of trouble adjusting to living with Bella, just because he feels worthless.
Date: 09 Oct 2015 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
I also think, besides her compassion, Bella has a spark down deep, of feeling for Edward, and that's what made her offer him a place to stay!
Date: 09 Oct 2015 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looks to me as if Alice is right about the attraction between Bella and Edward. It sure perked up his Sunday for her to show up and take him out of the hospital for an hour.
Date: 09 Oct 2015 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can't blame Edward for his anger and frustration at remembering nothing, plus losing short-term memory right along! Something about him seems to draw in Bella, so it will be fun to see where it all leads.
Date: 08 Oct 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Boy, what a grouch! He didn't take long to run her off, and she didn't put up with him, either!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 11:32 PM Title: Prologue
Hell of an introduction, I must say! Sure hope the woman got away, but we may never know!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2015 9:56 PM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part II
thanks so much for sharing this AWESOME!!! story + o/t on here for us ;D
Author's Response:
You're welcome! Thank you for reading, and for saying hello! :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2015 3:55 PM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part II
:) loved this story
Author's Response:
Aww ... I'm so glad you did! :)
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
I was leaning toward him being undercover. His temperament doesn't strike me as the typical drug lord.
With the injuries he has, I going to wager he's going to retire.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2015 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
Be realistic Bella, he was drunk and it would be less than professional fo her to take advantage of him.
When are we going to get some answers or action?
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2015 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
I know he's still in PT but what about seeing a psychologist or therapist? He dealing with so much.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2015 9:29 AM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part II
good job
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2015 11:43 PM Title: Epilogue
this was absolutely wonderful!!!!!
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you so much! I saw your reviews throughout the day, but I couldn't respond because I was at work. it was fun to follow along as you read, though. Thank you for reading, and reviewing! If you liked this one, I just started posting a new story a few weeks ago. It's called Come Back Tomorrow -- check it out!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2015 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 22
I rarely figure out plots or even try but I am glad he is a good guy and I believe he will be back
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2015 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
I hope we do find out his past
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
I think he was an undercover cop and the pushers they were looking for were helping Edward bring the bad guys down
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2015 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
coincidently I am reading this on my birthday
Author's Response:
Happy birthday! This was my favorite chapter in the story, and I was so happy that I could arrange to post it on my birthday.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2015 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
that was trajic
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2015 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
so now I am still leaning towards Law enforcement
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2015 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
I would guess he was a cop but then someone would know he was missing
Author's Response:
Good observation!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2015 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
great so far
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 17 Jan 2015 3:39 PM Title: Epilogue
Really good story
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for the reviews! :)
Date: 17 Jan 2015 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 24
She is giving him space to go back to his life. The phone calls she does no answer are proof she is having a hard time.
Date: 17 Jan 2015 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
Well he has gone back to his life and she now has to go on with hers.
Date: 17 Jan 2015 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
I hope she remembered to say the name Aro to the detectives.. Aro and Demitri. So Tanya was killed, sister, girl friend, wife, whomever she was.
Date: 17 Jan 2015 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
hmm time to live in the present.
Date: 16 Jan 2015 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
well I thought that was gonna be bad and then it turned around.. You are such a teaser. LOL
Author's Response:
But aren't you glad that it did? :)
Date: 16 Jan 2015 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Em.
Author's Response:
I know. :(
Date: 16 Jan 2015 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
good one.
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Date: 16 Jan 2015 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
Yea Edward and Emmett. Now he has a friend.
Author's Response:
:) They have some things in common, don't they?
Date: 16 Jan 2015 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 7
how very hard that must be for him.
Author's Response:
Yes, finding out things about yourself by surprise like that, and things that don't really look like good ones, either. Poor guy!
Date: 15 Jan 2015 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Tough sweet B.
Author's Response:
Yes, she's being practical, and she's not going to let him suffer when he could be comfortable. :)
Date: 15 Jan 2015 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
Good old Bella.
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 15 Jan 2015 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I get this I do. I am a substitute teacher and there are days when I get tired of them not wanting to learn. I just remind them I get paid whether you learn or not. I get to take that pay check and buy things. If you Ever want a pay check you better find it in yourself to learn some basics at least or Mickey D's won't even hire you. You will be living with Mom and Dad (if they have them) for the duration. Your choice.
Deb (droturno) is one of my favorite authors along with Jenrar.
Author's Response:
:) Yep, Bella had to be a bit tough with him, but as you point out, it was necessary to get him to see. Deb and Jenrar are awesome! Thank you for reading, and reviewing!
Date: 24 Feb 2014 12:41 PM Title: Epilogue
Just a quick line to say 'thank you' for sharing this with us...great story.
Best wishes, and I'll look forward to the next! T
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2014 3:42 AM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story, I loved every minute of it <3
Author's Response:
Aww...thank you so much for reading, and for reviewing! :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 22
Poor Bella being able to be there when Edward wakes up and for him to be in a different state. I know there's no way Edward will stay away from Bella. I look forward to their reunion.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:09 AM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part I
I'm embarrassed to say I finially finished this wonderful story. Many things I could relate to unfortunately with head trama, paralysis etc. loved the story. I never for one minute believed he was a bad guy.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
It was only a matter of time before his past came looking for him. I hope Edward and Bella will overcome this new challenge.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward has come a long way by excepting Bella's love and learning to except who he his now.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
No atonement needed, Edward has been struggling with his feelings of not being good enough with his returning unpleasant memories. I so happy they finally admitted their feelings for one another and were able to physically express it. I really hope Edward has put leaving to rest, he and Bella belong together.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
Johnnie Walker may have clockblocked but he also got the party started :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love Edward the protector :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
Fabulous heartwarming chapter <3
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is so hard on himself, he could just as easily be in law enforcement or ex military with his knowledge of weapons, but he automatically assumes he was on the wrong side of the law. I love the near kiss and feel like the actual kiss us just around the corner. Fantastic chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 6
Having a job bad being able to contribute will do wonders for Edward.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm happy Bella offered to let Edward stay with her and glad he excepted. I'm not so sure Charlie will be thrilled about his daughters choice of roommate.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm truly enjoying this story. I love the developing closeness Edward and Bella are experiencing. The two are obviously quite drawn to one another even if they cannot see it for themselves.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
I empathize with Edward/John as it has to be incredibly frustrating not having any memories or knowing who you are while being surrounded by complete strangers. Then on the other hand his former companions certainly didn't have his wellbeing in mind when they left him for dead. Maybe a blank slate and fresh start is just what he actually needs.
Date: 09 Feb 2014 2:45 PM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part I
This out take was fantastic. So detailed. Thank you for your hard work.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:18 AM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part I
I had almost forgotten just how much this story affected me. I read a LOT of FF and most of it is good, some more than others, but I very much enjoyed reading this outtake. It took me right back to the heart of this story and I remembered how wrapped up I was in it all the time I was reading it. This is a very satisfying ending to the story. We get to know, to witness, the outcome. Next OT will finish it off, right? I very much want to keep this when it's done and hope you don't mind if I do. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Date: 27 Jan 2014 10:46 PM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part I
Thank you for the update. I have really missed these 2. Can't wait for the next update.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 25 Dec 2013 11:28 PM Title: Epilogue
Keep writting your doing a great job. look forward to more of your storey's
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:37 AM Title: Outtake- Oasis
This most definaly have been a great story to read thanks for all ur effort& deidication in writting this wonderfully beautifully well writtien story!!
Date: 17 Dec 2013 12:02 PM Title: Outtake- Oasis
Bella is an angel. You made the pain so real. Amazing outtake.
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2013 12:23 AM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for a wonderful story!!! I have enhoyed watching their love grow. Sad to see it come to an end...but I guess all good things must come to an end. Thanks again!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2013 8:43 PM Title: Prologue
ok, this looks really good, saw the rec by ocsickgirl74, and ooo, just downloaded it.....
Date: 13 Dec 2013 6:18 PM Title: Epilogue
I have, so very much, enjoyed reading this story. I saw Domie's post today and must say I didn't realize that this was your FIRST story! I'm doubly impressed now. You are very talented and I look forward to reading more of your work. When your 2 outtakes are posted, may I save this story to my Kindle for future enjoyment?
Date: 11 Dec 2013 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Sad to see it end but have enjoyed the trip. Looking forward to the epi & out takes. Hope to read more from you in the future.
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much! :)
Date: 10 Dec 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm so happy right now! *tears*
Author's Response:
Aww...that's SO sweet!!
Date: 09 Dec 2013 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm sad to see it end. I love this story. I kind of thought that was her reason for not getting in touch with Edward. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response:
Me too. :( I will certainly miss these two! I'm so glad you love the story!
Date: 09 Dec 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm late getting ready for work just so I could read this. I'm so sad that it's almost over, but ecstatic that they are back together. I understand her reasoning, but so happy that he came back to confront her in person. I cried tears of joy reading this. I'm so looking forward to the epi and outtakes.....and to your next story!! Thank you so much for giving this to us!
Author's Response:
Aww...I'm glad you were so excited about it! And you cried! WOW!! That almost makes me cry... ;) I'm glad you understood Bella's reasoning. To me it made sense, but it hasn't to everyone. Epi and outtakes will post soon, and the epi will have a bit of a tease for the next story in the A/N.
Date: 04 Dec 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
I want the outtake s. I love Edwards attitude in this chapter. Great speech. Go get her Edward!
Author's Response:
Outtakes coming up after the epilogue. :) I'm so glad that you're happy with Edward! Yup, he's going to get to the bottom of this!
Date: 03 Dec 2013 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
I can't imagine why Bella hasn't called him. I hope everything works out. I would love the outtakes after the epilogue. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response:
Bella has her reasons, and she thinks they are good ones. You'll find out in the last chapter!
Date: 03 Dec 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
YES! to outtakes and all that. I suppose post them after the epilogue?
I love this story. It is truly wonderfully written (doesn't take the easy way out but doesn't create angst unnecessarily. All of the characters reactions ring true.)
Author's Response:
Yup, I've decided to post them, and they'll be after the epilogue. Aww...thank you so much! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it!
Date: 03 Dec 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 24
Ohh I'm so anxious to see what's gone on with Bella! I have everything crossed for them when Edward gets back to her!
Author's Response:
You will have answers in the final chapter, I promise! Thanks for reading, and reviewing!
Date: 03 Dec 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
Why hasn't she called him, I can understand her being hurt but Edward is not the one that was awake and talking to her...did her father not give her the message.
Author's Response:
Yes, Charlie does give her the message, but she has her reasons for what's she's doing, as you'll find out in the next chapter. As she told us earlier, sometimes love is doing what you think it right for the other person, even if it breaks your heart.
Date: 28 Nov 2013 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you I needed that.
Author's Response:
You're welcome! More soon!