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Reviewer: justmefanfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Unknown

how come this story didn't get at least a thousand comments here? i have read it a long ago on twilighted, one of the best and the most fsmous fics on fandom. there are some really hot chapters i used to re-read;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 11:48 AM Title: Outtake ~ What Bella Couldn't Remember

:) Loved this story 

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2014 4:47 AM Title: Outtake ~ Edward Cullen and the Mysterious Case of the "Uh-ohs"

Enjoyed this fic!   

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2014 1:12 PM Title: Outtake ~ Edward Cullen and the Mysterious Case of the "Uh-ohs"

another awesome story by you ;) it's a shame they didn't conceive again but adopted nontheless ;D

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 6:15 PM Title: Outtake ~ Edward Cullen and the Mysterious Case of the "Uh-ohs"

Thank you for this beautiful story! I love your writing style! *.*

 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 5:21 AM Title: Outtake ~ Edward Cullen and the Mysterious Case of the "Uh-ohs"

Great, great story, loved every bit of it, even the sad parts!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 5:00 AM Title: Epilogue

That was a perfect wrapup for them, ending where they started, online! This has been a great story!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 21 ~ Resolutions Pt. 2

Guess crossing my fingers worked, they are forging ahead with their lives, together.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 20 ~ Resolutions Pt. 1

I've no idea why he would be afraid of Charlie, but I guess your gir's dad being a cop is intimidating. Wonder what they talked about?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 19 ~ Past Demons

I hope now they can get back to what they had before he screwed up, bigtime!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 18 ~ Where Do We Go From Here?

Oh sure, now that he's got his head out of his ass, now she's hurt and in the hospital!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Unbearable Silence

I would really like to know what is going on with Edward's odd attitude! It's scaring Bella to not know how he feels, about Em and Rose or whatever!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 12:56 AM Title: Outtake ~ Viva Las Vegas

That was a little heartbreaking and a lot darling! Glad they found each other!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!

That has to be the ultimate in love at first sight, for Emmett and Rose to get married that fast! Bella and Edward just thought their romance was out of the norm!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 15 ~ Change in Plans

Things not starting out too well for Rose and Emmett! Bella and Edward, on the other hand are right where they want to be, in each other's arms!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice

Well, well, Rose seems to have had quite the effect on Bella and her shopping habits! Wonder where they found a stripper pole? That was probably the hottest session they have ever had!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

Oh yay! Good for the woman on the plane and good for Emmett, since they seem to be the impetus for these two declaring themselves! Guess Rose helped a little too, so maybe when she goes to Chicago in March she'll meet Emmett and they will fall for each other!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 12 ~ It's So Hard To Say Goodbye

Bella really needs to get her ducks in a row and figure out how to tell her dad and her friends about Edward. I wish she had told him the truth about the misdirected text, it's what he needs to hear from her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 11 ~ Cherish the Moments

It's going to be a long time until spring break, after spending this week together.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 4:37 AM Title: Outtake ~ Promise Kept

That was one hot, sexy outtake from this hot, sexy story!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ Here in New York

I'm hoping they will be able to get out of bed long enough to eat and shower! That is a deep, deep connection they have, and powerful!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York

The beginning of an amazing week, from the sounds of this first time together!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 8 ~ Anxiety

That scared hell out of her, when he wasn't there to meet her! I'll bet all kinds of awful thoughts ran through her mind, and probably his as well!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Not Backup

Oh boy, oh boy! Now we're getting down to brass tacks!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 6 ~Turning Point

Good for her for telling him the truth!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Desire

This whole things is growing by leaps and bounds! Now they are seeing each other and really liking what they see, from the sounds of it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 4 ~ Need

Yes, indeed , just a natural progression, from typing, to talking to now seeing each other!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Preoccupation

It's the next step in this situation, I guess, for them to actually talk to each other . Sort of a natural progression and easier than having to type one-handed!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 2 ~ The Unexpected

It seems we are dealing with two addictive personalities here, at least addicted to each other!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Unknown

The research for this story must have been fascinating!

Reviewer: SophiaMarie5639 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2013 1:20 AM Title: Outtake ~ Edward Cullen and the Mysterious Case of the "Uh-ohs"

I absolutely couldn't stop reading! I loved the relationship between Edward and Bella and the fact that it wasn't perfect but you could still feel the love! I also loved that Rosalie and Emmett played a bigger part then they normally do...I love Alice but there is only so much I can take! Super sweet ending so glad I decided to read : )

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Unknown

No, I apologize for not reading it carefully enough! I really thought I'd read every sentence!

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 3:54 PM Title: Outtake ~ Edward Cullen and the Mysterious Case of the "Uh-ohs"

Thanks for the update.  I just found it and loced it!!!   Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 8:16 PM Title: Outtake ~ Edward Cullen and the Mysterious Case of the "Uh-ohs"

Sweet! I loved this story.

I would really like an outtake of Bella's perspective of the very first night they met online. Her going out and getting drunk, what made her come home and get online and how did she find that site and did she try to chat with anyone else before Edward? Then of course, her side of their first encounter. Just a thought.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 8:01 PM Title: Epilogue

Great story! I have been reading it for three days.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 4:51 AM Title: Outtake ~ Edward Cullen and the Mysterious Case of the "Uh-ohs"

How lovely! Thanks ever so much for sharing. One question, though: whatever happened to the man who attacked Bella? I think you should go back a couple of chapters and write in that he was caught or something, because it was kind of nagging at my brain, and I was just waiting for it to reemerge. 



Author's Response:

Hi there. There actually is a mention at the end of Resolutions Pt. 2, that once her attacker was in custody, she perservered. He was caught and eventually convicted, I just didn't go into a lot of detail about that since trials like that can take a long time, particularly gathering evidence from multiple victims, and only a matter of months had passed between the attack and her move. So there was no sentence yet. I apologize for the confusion.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!

Well, I didn't see that coming. Yeah, I thought they'd hook up but I didn't expect the marriage! Go Rose.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

Love their love.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York

Whew!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 8 ~ Anxiety

Big *sigh*!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 6 ~Turning Point

Oh, this is hard. Poor Edward.

Reviewer: LeadMeIntoTemptation Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Preoccupation

This story is grossly under reviewed. I love everything about it. You're an awesome writer as well ;) 

 

Keep it up! 

 

Lisa 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Desire

Sigh.

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Date: 05 Oct 2013 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 4 ~ Need

OMG is right!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ The Unexpected

Very fun.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2013 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Unknown

Loved it!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2013 2:13 AM Title: Outtake ~ Edward Cullen and the Mysterious Case of the "Uh-ohs"

Very well done!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2013 1:37 AM Title: Epilogue

So good!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 12 ~ It's So Hard To Say Goodbye

Still loving it!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Desire

E's pov is my favorite!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 4 ~ Need

Great fun read!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Unknown

Nice start!

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