Date: 07 Nov 2016 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Dances and Confessions
Finally! He tells her! Great story so far. I noticed lots of little plot bunnies still left in your story. Like the fact that Jose is the name of Elenas current sub, who happens to be a friend of the bitch troll. Also .... I find it funny Elena is spending so much money...or is she? We all knows how she likes to steal Christian's money, so could it be? Hope Ana finds out soon and outs her thievery! Can't stand her or Kate! Speaking of which, why did her and Elliott break up? Was she after Christian?love your story and Your Pinterest page.
Date: 03 Dec 2015 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow ,sorry to hear that I been with your story from the day you post it. Hope you get it taken care of fast. Can not wait to read next chapter . The red room of pain (lol) . Wish you good luck on getting your story rights back . I will let as many people I know about your stolen book . Great story ,wonderful writing ,love it.
Date: 01 Dec 2015 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
Hy you. I used twitter and A Different Forest to denounce the theft of your story. Now Lissa Bryan has checked (I have no access to wattpad) and tells me that the thief's profile has been deleted.
I hope for an update of your story soon, btw
Date: 01 Dec 2015 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
i am sorry to hear this has happened to you. i have had a look at Wattpad and cannot find it but it is a very difficult site to navigate. i hope tey are made to remove your work and are censured in some way for theft.
Date: 30 Nov 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
I don't know if you succeeded in removing her or whatever, but I haven't found a fanglover 2012. There's a 12 and a 201202. I also didn't see a story by that name. I was going to review it and warn people it's stolen. ;)
Date: 10 Dec 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?
I really enjoy reading your Ana & Christian. Some time ago i had stopped reading due to chapters that were not written yet. I started from beginning again not to long ago. I am pleased to find more has been written! I feel the charge between them again! Thank you!
Date: 14 Jul 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Sometimes Reality Bites
Just caught up with last two chapters.. Soo hot... CG still doubting himself and whether he deserves her... Think she gets that now, doesn't she it as him not trusting her.. She just cones back at him harder.. Convincing him of her love...
Date: 29 Jun 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Mending Fences
I'm so glad that I finally found you here !!! I was so sad you left FF 'cause I LOVE "All's Fair" !!!
So, when will you update this wonderful story ??? (on FF you had 23 chapters)
I'm a little impatient... ;-)
Greatings from Germany
Date: 23 Jun 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Mending Fences
I'm here!! Lol. I got that message from fanfiction. I checked Wordpress but didn't find you so maybe I looked wrong (Wordpress confuses me) so I may just stay here. I'm not sure how to know you updated unless all I had to do was favorite you and the story (done and done)? Told you I'd follow where you went cause I love this story. Let me know when you get Wordpress up (I follow bronze goddess there so it may be easier for me) and I'll check it out too!
Date: 15 Jun 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Mending Fences
I love love love this story!!!! The setting is totally great (always enjoys the AU)...the details are amazingly told I felt as if I was part of the campaigns lol....and your Mr Grey is catching up fast with hearts and flowers ;)
You are totally something else Ms Greytosteele :)
Date: 22 Apr 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Taking Flight and Letting Go
Your style of writing fluid, smooth, easy to read. As the POV's change, I can follow easily. Ana should at least get some back ground on Christian. Fair is fair. They do still want to work together.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Revelations
Hi, I got 7 alerts for chapter 19 but the chapter isn't there. You may have to repost.
Thanks for letting me know. The site is acting up. I've just posted again. The chapter seems to be there, but the story isn't moving up in the category as updated. So frustrating!
Date: 06 Feb 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Declarations
I'm just wondering... I've been attempting to get back into this story as I use to follow it last year. However, sometimes it's hard, after so much time has elapsed. I find I have to go back and reread, to refresh my memory. I do understand you had real life setbacks, as stated in AN's on another site. Of course they take precedence over everything else and I hope all is well. It's just that with all the current stories with more frequent updating, I don't always get back to ones that for whatever reason, slacked off. But that's on me to work out. I saw you posted a new chapter here, but soon realized that this is from an earlier stage in the story. So I went to the other site and saw you posted Ch 23 last month. I just wondered why, this is still six chapters behind the other site, after publishing here four months ago. Does it have something to do with this site?
Date: 19 Jan 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Confessions
I love this story, I am so glad she has told Brad that she is in love with CG. Watching Nashville today I so needed my fix of Mr a Grey, so very happy to read your lovely update this evening..... Bring on the next installment please!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Coming out
I really hope that he doesn't catch her in any compromising position. He already has major trust issues. Just maybe something like a hug or the ex trying to get to close to her that could just make him overreact as usual and cause a fight.