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Reviewer: Kristing5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Confessions

Amazing as usual! I love this story!

Reviewer: fiberlm Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Coming out

I really hope that he doesn't catch her in any compromising position. He already has major trust issues. Just maybe something like a hug or the ex trying to get to close to her that could just make him overreact as usual and cause a fight.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Coming out

Oh no that is a cliff hanger, why is CG seeing Red.  What a great girls night out, a drunk Ana who has said the 3 letter word, I cannot wait for the repeat.

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Coming out

Oh what will happen with her ex ....ass x

Reviewer: be johns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Coming out

Great update, love your story. Left hanging again please don't make us wait too long..

Reviewer: Kristing5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Coming out

So good! How can you leave it there? Please update soon!!

Reviewer: Ilovechristianandgideon Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2013 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Tit for tat

I love this story… can't wait for the next update

Reviewer: be johns Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Tit for tat

Hot update on my favourite eagerly awaited fanfic. Why do women i.e. Ana make things so complicated and not just say what they feel.

Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 13 - You. Are. Mine.

Oh dear. Should have nipped that 'date' in the bud but to stay she'd be in his bed - oh dear he got that all wrong didn't he.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 13 - You. Are. Mine.

Oh i loved the chapter but I am worried about the tit for tat. What chemistry there is between them......

 

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 13 - You. Are. Mine.

Oh what is she going to do?  And why didn't Christian refuse the date?  This will be interesting.  

Reviewer: Artsyfun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 13 - You. Are. Mine.

Ought oh....tit for tat does not sound good. Update soon, please. 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2013 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Piano in the Dark

Really heart warming, I loved it and am walking for more!

Reviewer: joytome123 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Piano in the Dark

absolutely loooooooooooove this story. Thank you. not good at reviewingm, just know what I like. keep writing and I'll keep reading. Pamela
pamhanley@tadaust.org.au

Reviewer: blossom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Piano in the Dark

You says lemons are not your strong suit, but that chapter was just perfect!

Reviewer: Artsyfun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Piano in the Dark

Perfect!  

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Piano in the Dark

This was definitely the one I was waiting for and it was well worth the wait.  I really liked how they dealt with touch issue...and the piano was hot, hot, hot.  I'd say you do well with lemons.

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2013 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Dances and Confessions

I continue to just love this story.  I'm so glad you didn't make it a triangle with Eric. The honesty between then was refreshing.  Love this Ana.  

Reviewer: Artsyfun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Dances and Confessions

I NEED the next chapter.  Hoping it's the one I've been waiting for.  This conversation was perfect.  I love how understanding she and his honesty was great.  Elena better watch out.   

Reviewer: Artsyfun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?

Please don't make Ana fall for him.  Poor Christian, even if he did this to himself. 

Reviewer: Artsyfun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Taking Flight and Letting Go

Oh Christian, go back to her.  That was heartbreaking. 

Reviewer: Artsyfun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 8 - What's going on with us?

Throw the phone out the window!!!! Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Artsyfun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Making Headlines

What did Brad do?  Im dying!!!! Those headlines were great.  Don't ruin things, Joe!

Reviewer: Artsyfun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Georgetown

Snap!  They were so close.  This is great. 

Reviewer: Artsyfun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I think I like you...

She missed her graduation for Brad ?  Didn't expect that.  I'm intrigued. Yes, CG, go with Ray!!!!

Reviewer: Artsyfun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Interview

What great chemistry.  She will definitely give him a run for his money. 

Reviewer: Artsyfun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Meet Ana

Oh this Ana sounds interesting.  Looking forward to her background. 

Reviewer: Artsyfun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a unique spin.  Looks promising, though I wonder if he'll be able to survive his past in a campaign. 

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?

Oh, my heart broke for Christian here - and the plum dress too.  Love this story soooo much.

Reviewer: be johns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Dances and Confessions

Wow. Great chapter which I read too quickly to find out what happens. Now going to read again to make the story last until the next update. Love it.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Dances and Confessions

Totally excellent chapter! Yeah, Christian for talking and yeah, Ana for listening. I cannot wait until the inevitable confrontation between Elena and Ana!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2013 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?

Christian can't catch a break in this one. Can't wait to see what the future holds for him.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Taking Flight and Letting Go

OK, Christian needs to tell the President what Brad did, because somehow, I don't think he knows. Brad's a bigger ass than I tought. That was a good twist.

Poor Christian needs some TLC.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Making Headlines

Great chapter. I love that your Christian is willing to at least consider a non-D/s relationship. The mystery over Brad is killing me: I don't know how Christian can stand it!

Reviewer: be johns Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?

Love this story. Poor Christian is own worst enemy. 

It's been a good week for updates. Thank you.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?

Chapter 10, this was so hard to read just knowing Ana is hooking up with Eric, oh no......CG you are such an idiot X

 

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Taking Flight and Letting Go

And the plot thickens.  Oh Mr. Grey, what a mistake you've made.  I don't think she'll forgive him easily - nor should she.  Damn Elena.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 8 - What's going on with us?

Great read; I wish Ros would bog off as we need some serious heat....



Author's Response:

It will be a few more chapters, but they'll get there.

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 8 - What's going on with us?

Awesome sexual tension......hilarious!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: blossom Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 8 - What's going on with us?

Great chapter. I am loving this story. What a cliffie!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you like it.  Lots more to come.

 

Reviewer: be johns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is shaping up to be a really good must read story and eagerly await the next episode. It's good to see a strong confident Ana showing Christian the way....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I appreciate you're support.  More to come soon.

 

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Georgetown

Oh snap!  They were so close.  Poor Christian, poor Ana.  Loved her graduation speech - and his reflections during it.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

I know, but they'll get there.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Georgetown

Great story line you have here. I really like the changes with the characters personalities. I'm glad you are not portraying them so close to the originals. Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  More to come soon.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Georgetown

Awww, poor Christian! Awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

It will be a bit of roller coaster for a couple of chapters, but they'll get there.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I think I like you...

Really enjoying this, I cannot wait for their first kiss!



Author's Response:

Hopefully it lived up to your expectations.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Old Friends

UR OTHER STORY A DIFFERENT PATH TO ANNA IS SAYING ACESS DENIED THIS STORY HAS NOT BEEN VALIDATED

PLEASE FIX!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I need to reload the entire story, but I thought I would spend some time editing it first.  I'm awful at self-editing and didn't have a beta for the story.  I will put it back up, I promise.

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I think I like you...

I hate Elena.  Poor Ana, hopefully Christian will save the day and get Ray there for her graduation.  Love this!



Author's Response:

I hate her too.  She'll get hers - eventually.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Old Friends

Hilarious!  His inner thoughts are great and the background with Elliott is priceless.  What's the story with Brad? 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The background with Brad has been posted.  We'll see him more in the future.  

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Interview

This is going to be fun. Love their interaction. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Readabook Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Meet Ana

Sounds like she has a back story.  Can't wait for the interview. 



Author's Response:

Most of it just came out, but we haven't seen or heard the last of Mr. Whitman.

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love this.  Can't wait to meet Ana.

Reviewer: joytome123 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I think I like you...

I suck at reviewing, but I love yr story. Loooooooooove the storyline. keep writing & I'll keep reading. You write very interesting characters. Pamela
pamhanley@tadaust.org.au

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.  The reviews make my day. 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2013 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 - I think I like you...

Great chapter! Ugh, Elena! I want to see Ana smack her down.

Author's Response:

It's coming - but not for a while.  Please stick with me.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.



Author's Response:

It's coming - but not for a while.  Please stick with me.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.



Author's Response:

It's coming - but not for a while.  Please stick with me.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.



Author's Response:

It's coming - but not for a while.  Please stick with me.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: fairfax19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2013 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Old Friends

This is terrific! Can't wait for more. Love your characters. Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.  

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Old Friends

I am really enjoying this new take on this hot couple.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  It's fun to write.  More to come soon.  Thank you for reading and reviewing, it makes my day to read your thoughts!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loving this, really good scene between Ana and the two Greys, the discription and sex appeal of Ana is amazing, please keep writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Check out my Pinterest page for pictures.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Interview

I love these two characters already. A slight twist and such an intriguing encounter. Can't wait. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  More to come soon.  I appreciate you taking the time to review.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2013 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Meet Ana

Intrigued by the mystery.



Author's Response:

We'll see more of Mr. Whitman in the coming chapters.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2013 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

As if Christian doesn't have skeletons! HA! Can't wait to see what happens.



Author's Response:

The skeletons will come into play, but not for a while.  ;-)

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