Date: 19 Jan 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Confessions
Amazing as usual! I love this story!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Coming out
I really hope that he doesn't catch her in any compromising position. He already has major trust issues. Just maybe something like a hug or the ex trying to get to close to her that could just make him overreact as usual and cause a fight.
Date: 10 Jan 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Coming out
Oh no that is a cliff hanger, why is CG seeing Red. What a great girls night out, a drunk Ana who has said the 3 letter word, I cannot wait for the repeat.
Date: 10 Jan 2014 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Coming out
Oh what will happen with her ex ....ass x
Date: 10 Jan 2014 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Coming out
Great update, love your story. Left hanging again please don't make us wait too long..
Date: 10 Jan 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Coming out
So good! How can you leave it there? Please update soon!!
Date: 25 Dec 2013 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Tit for tat
I love this story… can't wait for the next update
Date: 17 Dec 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Tit for tat
Hot update on my favourite eagerly awaited fanfic. Why do women i.e. Ana make things so complicated and not just say what they feel.
Date: 10 Dec 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 13 - You. Are. Mine.
Oh dear. Should have nipped that 'date' in the bud but to stay she'd be in his bed - oh dear he got that all wrong didn't he.
Date: 09 Dec 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 13 - You. Are. Mine.
Oh i loved the chapter but I am worried about the tit for tat. What chemistry there is between them......
Date: 09 Dec 2013 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 13 - You. Are. Mine.
Oh what is she going to do? And why didn't Christian refuse the date? This will be interesting.
Date: 09 Dec 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 13 - You. Are. Mine.
Ought oh....tit for tat does not sound good. Update soon, please.
Date: 06 Dec 2013 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Piano in the Dark
Really heart warming, I loved it and am walking for more!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Piano in the Dark
absolutely loooooooooooove this story. Thank you. not good at reviewingm, just know what I like. keep writing and I'll keep reading. Pamela
pamhanley@tadaust.org.au
Date: 05 Dec 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Piano in the Dark
You says lemons are not your strong suit, but that chapter was just perfect!
Date: 05 Dec 2013 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Piano in the Dark
Perfect!
Date: 05 Dec 2013 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Piano in the Dark
This was definitely the one I was waiting for and it was well worth the wait. I really liked how they dealt with touch issue...and the piano was hot, hot, hot. I'd say you do well with lemons.
Date: 30 Nov 2013 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Dances and Confessions
I continue to just love this story. I'm so glad you didn't make it a triangle with Eric. The honesty between then was refreshing. Love this Ana.
Date: 30 Nov 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Dances and Confessions
I NEED the next chapter. Hoping it's the one I've been waiting for. This conversation was perfect. I love how understanding she and his honesty was great. Elena better watch out.
Date: 27 Nov 2013 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?
Please don't make Ana fall for him. Poor Christian, even if he did this to himself.
Date: 27 Nov 2013 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Taking Flight and Letting Go
Oh Christian, go back to her. That was heartbreaking.
Date: 27 Nov 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 8 - What's going on with us?
Throw the phone out the window!!!! Great chapter.
Date: 27 Nov 2013 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Making Headlines
What did Brad do? Im dying!!!! Those headlines were great. Don't ruin things, Joe!
Date: 27 Nov 2013 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Georgetown
Snap! They were so close. This is great.
Date: 27 Nov 2013 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I think I like you...
She missed her graduation for Brad ? Didn't expect that. I'm intrigued. Yes, CG, go with Ray!!!!
Date: 27 Nov 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Interview
What great chemistry. She will definitely give him a run for his money.
Date: 27 Nov 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Meet Ana
Oh this Ana sounds interesting. Looking forward to her background.
Date: 27 Nov 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a unique spin. Looks promising, though I wonder if he'll be able to survive his past in a campaign.
Date: 24 Nov 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?
Oh, my heart broke for Christian here - and the plum dress too. Love this story soooo much.
Date: 22 Nov 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Dances and Confessions
Wow. Great chapter which I read too quickly to find out what happens. Now going to read again to make the story last until the next update. Love it.
Date: 21 Nov 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Dances and Confessions
Totally excellent chapter! Yeah, Christian for talking and yeah, Ana for listening. I cannot wait until the inevitable confrontation between Elena and Ana!!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?
Christian can't catch a break in this one. Can't wait to see what the future holds for him.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Taking Flight and Letting Go
OK, Christian needs to tell the President what Brad did, because somehow, I don't think he knows. Brad's a bigger ass than I tought. That was a good twist.
Poor Christian needs some TLC.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Making Headlines
Great chapter. I love that your Christian is willing to at least consider a non-D/s relationship. The mystery over Brad is killing me: I don't know how Christian can stand it!
Date: 14 Nov 2013 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?
Love this story. Poor Christian is own worst enemy.
It's been a good week for updates. Thank you.
Date: 14 Nov 2013 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?
Chapter 10, this was so hard to read just knowing Ana is hooking up with Eric, oh no......CG you are such an idiot X
Date: 14 Nov 2013 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Taking Flight and Letting Go
And the plot thickens. Oh Mr. Grey, what a mistake you've made. I don't think she'll forgive him easily - nor should she. Damn Elena.
Date: 12 Nov 2013 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 8 - What's going on with us?
Great read; I wish Ros would bog off as we need some serious heat....
Author's Response:
It will be a few more chapters, but they'll get there.
Date: 11 Nov 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 8 - What's going on with us?
Awesome sexual tension......hilarious!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.
Date: 11 Nov 2013 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 8 - What's going on with us?
Great chapter. I am loving this story. What a cliffie!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it. Lots more to come.
Date: 08 Nov 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is shaping up to be a really good must read story and eagerly await the next episode. It's good to see a strong confident Ana showing Christian the way....
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I appreciate you're support. More to come soon.
Date: 05 Nov 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Georgetown
Oh snap! They were so close. Poor Christian, poor Ana. Loved her graduation speech - and his reflections during it. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
I know, but they'll get there. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Nov 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Georgetown
Great story line you have here. I really like the changes with the characters personalities. I'm glad you are not portraying them so close to the originals. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. More to come soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Nov 2013 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Georgetown
Awww, poor Christian! Awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
It will be a bit of roller coaster for a couple of chapters, but they'll get there. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 Nov 2013 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I think I like you...
Really enjoying this, I cannot wait for their first kiss!
Author's Response:
Hopefully it lived up to your expectations. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Date: 02 Nov 2013 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Old Friends
UR OTHER STORY A DIFFERENT PATH TO ANNA IS SAYING ACESS DENIED THIS STORY HAS NOT BEEN VALIDATED
PLEASE FIX!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I need to reload the entire story, but I thought I would spend some time editing it first. I'm awful at self-editing and didn't have a beta for the story. I will put it back up, I promise.
Date: 02 Nov 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I think I like you...
I hate Elena. Poor Ana, hopefully Christian will save the day and get Ray there for her graduation. Love this!
Author's Response:
I hate her too. She'll get hers - eventually. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 02 Nov 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Old Friends
Hilarious! His inner thoughts are great and the background with Elliott is priceless. What's the story with Brad?
Author's Response:
Thank you! The background with Brad has been posted. We'll see him more in the future.
Date: 02 Nov 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Interview
This is going to be fun. Love their interaction.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 02 Nov 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Meet Ana
Sounds like she has a back story. Can't wait for the interview.
Author's Response:
Most of it just came out, but we haven't seen or heard the last of Mr. Whitman.
Date: 02 Nov 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this. Can't wait to meet Ana.
Date: 02 Nov 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I think I like you...
I suck at reviewing, but I love yr story. Loooooooooove the storyline. keep writing & I'll keep reading. You write very interesting characters. Pamela
pamhanley@tadaust.org.au
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. The reviews make my day.
Date: 01 Nov 2013 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 - I think I like you...
Great chapter! Ugh, Elena! I want to see Ana smack her down.
Author's Response:
It's coming - but not for a while. Please stick with me. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Author's Response:
It's coming - but not for a while. Please stick with me. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Author's Response:
It's coming - but not for a while. Please stick with me. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Author's Response:
It's coming - but not for a while. Please stick with me. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Oct 2013 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Old Friends
This is terrific! Can't wait for more. Love your characters. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.
Date: 29 Oct 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Old Friends
I am really enjoying this new take on this hot couple.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. It's fun to write. More to come soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing, it makes my day to read your thoughts!
Date: 28 Oct 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving this, really good scene between Ana and the two Greys, the discription and sex appeal of Ana is amazing, please keep writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Check out my Pinterest page for pictures.
Date: 23 Oct 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Interview
I love these two characters already. A slight twist and such an intriguing encounter. Can't wait.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! More to come soon. I appreciate you taking the time to review.
Date: 22 Oct 2013 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Meet Ana
Intrigued by the mystery.
Author's Response:
We'll see more of Mr. Whitman in the coming chapters. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 22 Oct 2013 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
As if Christian doesn't have skeletons! HA! Can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response:
The skeletons will come into play, but not for a while. ;-)