Date: 16 Mar 2015 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
Thank you for the beautiful story..
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Date: 06 Nov 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
Soooo great I laughed and cried so much but it was awesome story
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2013 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
this story touch home for me I'm fighting cancer myself right now I'm 9 months into my fight and am told they are done with treatment that say's a lot to me I'm sure I don't have much time left the pain is the hardest to handle for me. oh and i also adopted a child a little girl she was and is healthly she is now 27 I'm 69 I have 17 grandchildren and 7 greatgrand children I'm not ready to die i want more time with my grand babies and my children. I love your story and I thank you for writing it for us your readers to read.
Date: 06 Dec 2013 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
You guys did a fabulous job with this story! I can see how much research and caring went into it. The love story with Edward and Bella was great and the love between the family members and friends and patients was too! Looking forward to the next collaberation between the three of you!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
I loved what the adoption judge had to say, and the party for Bree that Angela's parents came to. It was so sweet that Bella and Edward gave their girl Angela for a middle name! Alice is quite the interior designer and party planner it seems! She and Jasper must be the next to become engaged, now that Emmett and Rosalie are . That was so funny to see how nervous Em was, to ask Charlie's blessing!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 14
That was pretty scary when Jacob forced his way into Bella and Edward's home! Bad enough he laid his filthy hands on her, but it was the horrible, vile things he said that earned him that ten year sentence, I'll bet! I'm glad the two skanky nurses, Jessica and Lauren were punished, too. Now Bella and Edward are in their new home with Bree and Minnie and all the family close by! Good times!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 13
Very touching and sad and yet uplifting at the same time! Don't blame Bella for tearing up while reading Angela's last words to her family and friends, it was even tough to read! The loss of young people like her is just so hard to take, or make sense of!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
The scumbags Edward ran into outside the florist make you wonder who mistook them for human beings, when obviously they are anything but human! Amazing someone doesn't squash them like the insects they are!On the plus side, Bella and Bree are both better and Lauren and Jessica are out on their ass. They must have violated all kinds of ethical nursing standards, letting Jake into Bree's room and letting him touch her! I hope the poor little thing was properly fumigated afterward!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
How wonderful that Angela got to cross off so many things on her bucket list! I was a soggy mess, reading the lyrics of that beautiful song, then turned right around when Ellen got to teasing about Edward and laughed! Nice juxtaposition, there! It's inevitable that Angela will soon die, but I still will tear up when it happens! Now, what the heck is wrong with Bella?
Date: 06 Dec 2013 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
A beautiful and imaginative wedding with family and friends! Too bad some slug taped it and sold it! I hope someone goes to jail over that little trick! Everybody is being nice about this record Bella is making for Angela. I hope she is strong enough to walk the red carpet with Bella and Edward.
Date: 06 Dec 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
Their first time loving each other was just fine and just what was needed by them both! Lucky for them Edward's office has both a locking door and a shower! Can Black get any lower than the snake's belly he is? What a worthless excuse for a human he is!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
I have a feeling it's almost time for tissues! This is going to devestate Bella and through her , Edward ! All this angst and that poor baby is going to die despite the care she's been given!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
All women should be lucky enough to find a man like this! Of course I also know they're in short supply, so I'm glad I found mine all those years ago! This crap in the papers, promoted by that bastard Jacob, is awful! Too bad Edward and Emmett can't get together and beat hell out of him and make him recant!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
Rabbit, my foot! No doubt it was a paparazzi/skunk!This may turn out to hurt a lot of these wonderful characters! I hope not, but don't trust those guys not to put a slimy slant on things! Maybe we should sic Rose on them!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
I don't see why anyone would dislike Alice! I wouldn't want to be her mother, but I get the biggest kick out of reading her! She's such a fun character and I laughed myself silly over her outrageous inquisition of Jasper! I also figured Edward was falling pretty hard for Bella, too!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
Several things about this chapter, first, I love Emmett, even though he punched his brother ! He's got it bad for Rose, and she for him! Secondly, Edward's patients aren't doing too well, then there's Alice's upset! What a creep Alec is, plus Vicky is a bitch! I really laughed at what Edward and Emmett did to him, and I think their uncles are really cool!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
Funny that Edward didn't pick up the clues about Emmett and Rosalie! He and Bella are sure hitting it off, what with closing Emmett's restaurant and walking two blocks past his car! I see them drawing closer by the day!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
Alice almost had a heart attack when she found out her brother knew Isa! I'm glad her brother reined her in before she could tell anyone the secret, but my, what a bribe! I can already see a blip, in that Edward at thirty-one, is going to think he might be too old for ninteen year old Bella. I say, what's twelve years among friends? This story is heading in a really good direction!
Date: 05 Dec 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Got it scoped out! Bella is really Isa the singer, and the one that wants to adopt Bree, the abandoned baby. Edward already like Bella, they will become much closer and through her Alice will meet her crush, Jasper! Hope I'm right! Edward's other patients, Angela and Riley; she may not make it and he probably will. Seriously, I'm already bracing myself for the loss of some of these kids, I know it will happen and dread it! If Edward and Bella have each other for comfort and support, it will be okay!
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
that was a very touching story, well done!
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love and it has a great sense of what people go through from each side I should know I was on the side where you see your love one go through it and become sick, through up and downs ...... Sadly my uncle didn't make it it's now 9yrs as of yesterday 19th of November I love and miss uncle/dad(because to me he was like my dad) everyday and know he's whacthing over us
I loved it and was a great story can't wait to read more stories from you guys in the future
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2013 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ladies thank you for a wonderful story..well done.......Little Miss Bree is so adorable, she grew up to be a smart , well rounded child........I love the relationship with the Cullens and of course Bella and Edward
Date: 20 Nov 2013 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
I loved this story. I just thought they would have more children, since they both love them so much.
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2013 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
:) loved this story
Date: 20 Nov 2013 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
loved the ending
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2013 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
I absolutely loved this story. Great ending to a great story. It sad to see these wonderful characters leave.
Date: 20 Nov 2013 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am so sad it is over but I loved it. It tore at my heart and made me cry it was all good. Love will get you through. Thanks so much and I will be looking forward to what is next
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2013 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
love it
priceless
hell of a journey
thank you
Date: 20 Nov 2013 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
Thank you for writing this amazing story..
Date: 20 Nov 2013 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
Sweet, sweet story. Thank you for sharing it with us. I can't wait for the next one!
Date: 20 Nov 2013 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
so glad to have been a part of this. HAPPY BIRTHDAY SAVANNAH. thank you guys for a wonderful journey. can't wait for more from you.
E/k
Date: 20 Nov 2013 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
You have done a great job you put your whole heart into it this story. I have loved reading every chapter I hope to read more of your work
Date: 19 Nov 2013 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Such a great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2013 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
Sniff!! loved this
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2013 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow, that was heartbreaking but good too!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
hell of a chapter.adoption process is an awesome thing when it works. my cousin adopted her daughter and it took 2 years and alot of red tape. they couldn't have kids and this poor girls mother kept having kids addicted to drugs. it was a tear jerker of watching the process. i am glad bree has a home and alot of love and an awesome family
how cool that they changed her name to include angela
love it all. thank you
Date: 19 Nov 2013 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
Crying this is just so emotional and I love every emontion. Emmett is just to funny. What a party
Date: 19 Nov 2013 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was a really beautiful tribute. And truthfully Ellen would of ram with it of it was real.
Date: 19 Nov 2013 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 15
I have really enjoyed this story. Just one thing in this chapter bugged me: Bree should have been at the adoption hearing. I worked in adoptions for years and the child was always present when the adoption was finalized.
Great story with a sweet family. It had a good theme too: more people should be willing to get tested and donate bone marrow!
Looking forward to the epilogue...and the next story!
Date: 19 Nov 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
What a great story. Thank you
Date: 19 Nov 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved the chapter
Date: 19 Nov 2013 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
aww great chapter love it and glad that rose said yes and they did the ellen thing with james cant believe only one more chapter sad its almost over
Date: 18 Nov 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
Glad they got Jacob on tape. Since you've given us snippets of the bad press Jacob caused for Bella, I'd love to hear how the press handled the reaction to jacob's crime & sentence.
I notice that this Jake seems similar to the jake of Diamond Doll's Kitty Cave. They both had 20 men lined up for Bella
Date: 18 Nov 2013 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ahh, if justice was only served like that in real life!
Date: 18 Nov 2013 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
glad he got what he deserved great chapter loved it
Date: 18 Nov 2013 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
luvvvved it
E/k
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 14
glad angela parents are working on things. even better ms weber is still seeing the girls.
wow a new home and the whole family together is great
love that jacob and the girls got an awesome sentence. they so deserve everything that came down on them. thank god for alice calling the cops and getting it all on tape
awesome chapter, thank you
Date: 18 Nov 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think Alice just needed to grow up. Jacob got what he deserved I loved the double punch lol.
Date: 18 Nov 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
I didn't think Alice did anything really wrong. She is young, younger then her years anyway. And she was star struck. I'm so glad that Jacob got what he deserved.
Date: 18 Nov 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh that was so sad. I'm happy that Angela isn't suffering anymore. And I'm glad her family doesn't have to watch any longer. I'm not trying to be mean, I watch my grandmother die of breast cancer and it was painful for her and us.
Date: 18 Nov 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
This was so sad .....
Date: 17 Nov 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
PoorAngela. Still I think she gave her family the best exit she could.
On the other hand, good news about the judge's reaction to Jacob. Can't wait to see if he complys or digs himself deeper
Date: 17 Nov 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
sad but sweet loved it great chapter
Date: 17 Nov 2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved how Bree threw out the wolf!
Will you share with us the "goodbye gift" the staff gave the nurses?
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2013 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Jessica and Lauren got off way too easily
Date: 17 Nov 2013 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
Looking forward to more
Date: 17 Nov 2013 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thanks for the tissue warning because it was very needed. But what did she whisper to Edward before she passed?
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2013 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
Bless the Weber famiky.
angela stayed strong till the end. Thats true strength.
so glad they got Bree home, sge deserves a family and a home.
that jugde is the best ever lol, how stupid and irresponsible would jacob look now. I saw sue, sue em alllllll haha
thank you for updating.
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2013 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Damn that was hard as hell to read. Im proud of myself for making it through. I have loved this fic from the begining, but that chap made me worship it. Everyone should be reading this. It is an award winner in my heart. Your world although sad is beautiful. Im sad we are coming to an end. This fic is eternal. You guys totally rock. I hope for more from you. DAMN U CAN WRITE. Till next chap.
E/k
Date: 17 Nov 2013 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 13
Need a tissue you mean a hole freaking box of tissues OMG. That was so touching. I love the puppy who could say know to the little princes lol
Date: 17 Nov 2013 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
That pap is lucky that is all he did to him. Poor Bella is so run down and stressed out no wonder. Edwards mom is a smart women lol
Date: 17 Nov 2013 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
Didn't need tissues, needed paper towels. So what kind of dog is Minnie? Knowing Charlie I would say a great dane... XOXO, Cheri
Date: 17 Nov 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
I can't wait to see Jacob get his. I think they need to get the judge involved. Bree is technically still a ward of the state.
Date: 17 Nov 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
That is going to kill Bella. There is no way she is going to be allowed near Bree until she is better.
Date: 17 Nov 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm glad that things are going well for Bree.
Date: 17 Nov 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
great chapter loved it
Date: 17 Nov 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love this judge. Jacob is going down. Lol
Date: 16 Nov 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
Just when things went well at the press conference.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2013 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
I feelmit for celebrities. I just wish one day someone records whats being said to them, post it on YouTube (since you cant trust a news outlet) and show the world how vile these vermins are.
So glad Jessica and Lauren have being dealt with.
Jacob is a right bastard, using a sick isolated child to make himself look good. Take him to the cleaners Edward.
You know something lol, I was secretly hoping she was pregnant lol guess I didnt factor the time span. Plus not practical right now.
looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
Now the shit is going down. Can't wait.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
No, I am glad those nurses will be dealt with.,..It was dangerous to let Jacob into her isolation room..
Date: 16 Nov 2013 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Looking forward to more
Date: 16 Nov 2013 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
That was no rabbit. That was a viper. Now poor little Bree is going to be all over the press. I imagine that will not help Bella's court case. But maybe it will shed some positive light on the importance of being a donor. I'm on the bone marrow donor registry.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
Alice is the ultimate crazy fan girl.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
That was great.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Emmett. The guy is heartbroken. I wonder if he'll get pissed when he finds out about Edward and Bella's date.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm so happy that Edward is going to help Bella try and adopt Bree.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really liked this chapter, very emotional. I had to go on YouTube to find that song, really brings the chapter together, great choice. I may have cried a little! Carry on the great work, ladies.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was amazing what they did for Angela my heart is broken she is such a sweet girl. I am worried about Bella she has let herself run down. I am excited for the next chapters
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2013 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
It is very rare that I add a fic to my all-time favorite list and even more so to add it before completion. But this chapter has done just that and sealed the deal. I LOVE that song and when put to the words of this story, I was a mess. Thank you for sharing your gifts of storytelling with us!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow. This story is great. I was looking for something new.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
what happened, I hope she is not getting sick.
Date: 15 Nov 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh no wonder whats wrong with her great chapter how everything played out for angela and great song to do to one of my fav.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Very emotional but very well written. I broke out tissues sooner than few chapters down the road.
Date: 15 Nov 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
I already she'd a tear or two on this chapter so I'm sure I'll be shedding more on the next few.
i hope Bella's being sick isn't serious.
Date: 15 Nov 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
I can't see to type a review because I'm still crying. It was too sad, but great.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Angela, she is so brave
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2013 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
Im loving this story. But why is edward always portrayed as a push over?
Rose acting all caring just erked me because #1 Bella can make her own choices #2what Black did has nothing to do with Edward.
Emmett would of never stepped foot in my house again, brother or not. And the fact Edward laughed it off. Then Rose oking it?
I know its fiction but the Edward character is sometimes too much of agentleman in my book.
On a positive note loving Bella and Bree, such a touching sweet story.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2013 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
Fantastic story, I am really enjoying this.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Jocabs is an asshole
Date: 14 Nov 2013 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love what they are doing for Angela and for others it will benefit. Great little wedding that should really piss Jacob off.
Date: 14 Nov 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love this story, cant wait to read ,more. its so sad though.......
Date: 13 Nov 2013 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great wedding. I'm guessing the leaker is Jess and / or Lauren.
I'm taking it as given that Jake will try something at the awards show.
Date: 13 Nov 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
great chapter loved it
Date: 13 Nov 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
Jasper and Angela made me cry. Too sweet!
Date: 13 Nov 2013 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
Looking forward to more