Date: 26 Feb 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope you are well. I just discovered this story and I am thoroughly enjoying it. It seems as though there has been no activity since early 2014. As it is 2015 now, I am assuming you have abandoned this story. That is a shame because I loved your slant on the Ana/Christian story. There were many plot points that I wish were resolved. Will Ana and Christian stay together through all their issues? Where is Ana's drunken mom and stepdad - will they re-appear? Will Elena get out of prison, and what hell will she wreak? Also, I noticed your use of the sub names (Leila and Susannah) and the birth moms name (Ella). Will these characters prove true to form? So many possibilities.... please reconsider completing this story if you are able.
Thank you for the review! I have continued this, you can find it on Fanfiction.net, same penname and same title. Time just wasn't enough to keep the story up to date on multiple platforms... I look forward to reading your take on the rest of the story (not quite finished yet) if you decide to continue reading it!
Date: 19 Feb 2014 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
I absolutely love this story. I found it 26hrs ago & now I'm caught up & sad. Thank you for you all you do to bring this story to us. I can't wait for a whole lot more (I hope).
I was kinda wondering what repercussions would come with Ana taking Ben to the park. Maybe this can give Ana & CG an idea of CG getting a place for the shelter that would have a place for a private park or have an indoor playground (he has the money. Lol). CG & Ana might want to think about her moving in with him too. I had an idea about the car thing too, if your interested you can let me know. I'm kinda new to this site, so not sure how things work. Anyway, thank you again. I really do appreciate all your hard work.
Thank you for your review! I'm happy you enjoyed it, hope you'll continue enjoying it! H xx
Date: 01 Jan 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well, that was a pleasant meeting break; I think they need a strong tea and coffee now. I am looking forward to Ana giving CG her Charcoal picture.
Definitely a refreshing break to the meeting :)
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm really enjoying how this is moving along. They are so caring with each other. I like how things are moving along in the relationship too. can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 01 Dec 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
It seems weird that she is flat mate of Leila, I hope this does not mean something horrible coming up in the, story. Looking forward to Christian and Ans's first night together!
To be exact she rents Leila's appartment. As for A&C being together... A few chapters to go ;) Thanks for reading!
Date: 24 Nov 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
They both had a really hard start in life. Can't wait to see who makes the first movebecause they both have some amazing energy.
They have had their share of darkness in the past. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 24 Nov 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
Seems these two have worked their way into each other's heart. I am looking forward to see how their relationship progresses. Thank you for the update. xo
Thank you for reading and reviewing! You are very welcome!
Date: 13 Nov 2013 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
This story is so sweet! I like the way you have written Ana and Christian. So different from all the others. I really look forward to more.
Thank you! I'm happy you are enjoying my version of the A&C romance.
Date: 12 Nov 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am really liking this story.
Thank you for reviewing, it means a lot to me. I thought I replied your earlier review, but apparently it has vanished into thin air... Anyway, I'm happy you are liking my version of the A&C saga.
Date: 10 Nov 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for update you have done a wonderful job with this so far again thank you so much for sharing you writing with us
Thank you for reviewing! I'm always happy to hear that people are enjoying my story.