Date: 07 Nov 2021 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 20
I have to tell you, you did an amazing job for your first fanfic. I LOVE this story. I enjoyed it thoroughly from beginning to end! I'm not big into too much angst but this was the perfect amount to set the stage. I can't wait to see what else you come up with! Thanks for the story!
Date: 07 Nov 2021 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 20
I have to tell you, you did an amazing job for your first fanfic. I LOVE this story. I enjoyed it thoroughly from beginning to end! I'm not big into too much angst but this was the perfect amount to set the stage. I can't wait to see what else you come up with! Thanks for the story!
Date: 22 Jun 2017 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
I never get tired of reading this story. I don't even remember how many times I have read it.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Congrats on writing an amazing story, you are a gifted writer. I'm astounded that it is your frst!. This story is one of the most unique and original ideas I've ever come across of a Twilight fanfic/canon couples. I truely enjoyed every page.
As in reference to your AN: I hope all is well with you and your family.
The only constructive critisism i have is, I wish there were more of a back story on how/why both Edward and Isa were living so close to each other but never knew of the others existence until they met in the meadow.
P.S. I loved the fact that the Cullens were the bad guys and so OOC.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2015 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
AWESOME story ;) thanks for completing and posting this on here for us ;D
Date: 24 Jun 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 20
First off I would like to extend my prayers to you mom and family. I hope all is well. I love that you made the story different then anything I have ever read. I love that for once the amazing Carlisle was the bad guy. That while using Stephanie Meyers characters, you also added youself in the mix. Aro, Marcus and Calius were animal drinkers?! I thought that was funny and cool. I also love that u made it possible for the other members of the crew to have children. Human or not. Your creativity is amazing and I hope you keep mqking stories with the Twilight Characters.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your kind words, they really mean a lot to me. I am working on a new story but will not start posting till its complete...hopefully in a few weeks and definetly before the end of July! Fingers crossed!!
Date: 08 Jun 2014 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 20
This was a great story and I loved the ending. I'm looking forward to reading what you come up with next.
Date: 08 Jun 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you!!! For writing a wonderful story.
Date: 07 Jun 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
Life turned out extremely well for Edward and Isa and all their friends, living close to each other yet not too close! It was a real blessing when Marcus saved those babies and gifted them to his American friends! Now I can picture all the kids growing up together with their unusual parents! Looking forward to your next story!
Date: 07 Jun 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
This was a really good story. I have enjoyed reading it. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved this story
Date: 07 Jun 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
I always hate to see a good story end
Date: 23 May 2014 3:44 AM Title: AN
So sorry to hear about your mother. I'll say a prayer for both you and her.
Date: 22 May 2014 10:20 PM Title: AN
I hope your mother gets well soon.
Date: 21 May 2014 7:28 PM Title: AN
I'll say a prayer for you and your mother.
Date: 21 May 2014 5:13 PM Title: AN
You take all the time you and your mom need and know that we all wish you the very best. Good luck and God bless!
Date: 21 May 2014 5:06 PM Title: AN
I am so sorry about your mothers diagnosis, both of you will be in my thoughts and prayers!
Date: 21 May 2014 4:45 PM Title: AN
Sorry to hear about you Mom.
Date: 21 May 2014 4:34 PM Title: AN
Take care your family. Be well.
Date: 18 May 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great update. I hope your muse is cooperating and you will get to update quicker. If not then don't stress, we will all wait for the next exciting chapter.
Date: 13 May 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
What can I say but, good for Esme? After all the awful ways she and the guys were treated, it seems only fitting! I am really glad that the burden is lifted from all the group, they can sort of breathe a sigh of relief and go on to better days.
Date: 12 May 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
Truer words were never spoken - "the bitch had it coming". All three of them - Alice, Rosalie and Carlisle got what they deserved and then some for everything they have done.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
Adieu le mauvais!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
Excellent story. Keep up with your writing
Date: 16 Apr 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
It seems harsh treatment, until you think of all the pain and misery, and real evil, these three indulged in! I guess I am just not that averse to revenge, for Jasper and Emmett!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2014 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
Can't wait for more
Date: 05 Apr 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
I think you are doing well with your first story.
Date: 05 Apr 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
this chapter moved along better. Last chapter I thought was slow.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ils ont fait des plans.
Date: 05 Apr 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter. I'm glad Marcus arrived.
Date: 04 Apr 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
Not that the danger is totally over, but I'm sure there will be a huge sigh of relief when this evil trio is finally dealt with! Then everyone can get back to living the way they want to , quietly and peacefully!
Date: 04 Apr 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'd love to know the reasons why Carlisle, Alice and Rosalie are doing all of this? Surely, it's not just to get Edward to come back to live with them. I'm looking forward to seeing how it all plays out.
Date: 04 Apr 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
I really enjoyed this different type of twilight story. I can't wait to read what will happen to Allice, Carlisle and Rose in the coming chapters!
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
All goes well. It is an opportunity for Emmett and to Jasper, they are free and they found their partner.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
C'est une bonne fiction, j'aime l'histoire.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well, Volturi arrives...
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
It is a monster this man.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
Il ya de bonnes nouvelles.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Esmé does not want to join Carlisle, She is not any more under influence.
Isa is wary...
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
Je suis convaincu que Volturi sont des personnes aimables, que les changements !
Isa est en chaleur ... allons-nous avoir des bébés ? Je suis prêt d'un!
Merci.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
L'arrivée de Pierre et Charlotte est une bonne chose.
Date: 20 Mar 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
Poor Jasper and Emmett, how awful to have been robbed of their true memories for years, and forced to do terrible things! I'm so glad that it looks like Carlisle, Alice and Rose are going to receive the justice they so richly deserve!
Date: 19 Mar 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
If I were Carlisle, Rose and Alice, I'd start to get a little worried. Edward's numbers are growing by the day and Carlisle, Rose and Alice are about to get some way overdue comeuppance.
Date: 19 Mar 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
Really good chapter! Thank you.
Date: 19 Mar 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
Another great update
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait for more
Date: 11 Mar 2014 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter! Thank you.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
I hope this plan comes off okay and nothing harms Isa and her babies. It's good that Willow and Ava, Demetri and Felix are going along to capture Emmett and Jasper. It's so weird to think of Aro, Marcus and Caius as vegetarians! Just curious, were they driving an Escalade or an Expedition?
Author's Response:
It is an Escalade, thank you for catching that and letting me know!!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope everything goes well and they are able to get Jasper and Emmett away from Carlisle, Rose and Alice. Those three need to be stopped!!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
Can't wait for the next update
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm so glad Edward and Bella have found each other and have friends in high places. This depiction of Carlisle as "mad scientist" and Rosalie as the evil manipulator is mind-blowing!
Date: 27 Feb 2014 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good chapter! Love this story.
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
Carlisle, Alice and Rose are truly evil and really deserve to be killed! I hope they can save Jasper and Emmett though!
Really like this story and always get excited to see an update!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2014 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thats just sick what they did to her parents I really want them to pay for that
Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
Such a sad chapter. Poor Isa.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm so glad Edward and Peter blew up Carlisle's lab! Especially after they read the contents of the Swan file! It nearly gags me at how vicious and evil the Cullens are in your story! It sure isn't how most of us have always thought of them!It makes me root for the good guys to destroy the evil ones!
Date: 17 Feb 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
What a twist
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
Damn can't wait for more
Date: 07 Feb 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
What a double surprise - first Edward proposes to Bella and then she surprises him with the news of her pregnancy - and it's twins!!!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was sweet and funny at the same time! Thinking to keep this wonderful secret to themselves for a while, Edward just can't contain hi sjoy, shouts out and gives it all away! The proposal was quite romantic,even though they had to guard against danger and not linger away from the security of their home.
Date: 07 Feb 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well edward ruined them not knowing can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
Im so happy for them
Date: 28 Jan 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
Sounds to me like Carlisle, Rosalie and Alice have some sort of agenda they are not sharing with the rest of their coven. None of it looks to be good news for Edward, Bella and their friends. Kind of feeling sorry for Esme, not wanting to go back. I wonder if starting a family at this time is a real good idea, except they kind of have to take advantage of the opportunity!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
What a great chapter! I can't wait to read more. Love this 'shifter' version. Good job!
It's interesting that Carlisle is the "Mad Scientist" and probably responsible for tracking and killing Edward's parents. I'm trying to figure out why they'd need Esme though?
I'm hoping having friends in high places will be fortuitous for our panthers when the showdown happens.
Excellent shield power! I liked that entire scene and how Isa can envelop, tighten and use it as a weapon, not just as defense. MUCH better than SM's version! Completely awesome! Totally. *high five*
Cant wait to see if she gets pregnant. Looking forward to your updates. Thank you.
~RoseE. x
Date: 27 Jan 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
This was a really good chapter. Great story!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great story with an interesting twist.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Damn can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
Their coming but the question is will they get away before
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
Can't wait for more
Date: 17 Jan 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
It seems odd that the Volturi are practically family and the Cullens are dangerous to Edward and Bella's happiness. At least they have powerful allies in caseof need. With Bella in heat, I'm guessing that a baby could be in their future. If not right away, they will have lots of fun trying!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
Really good! I love this story.
Date: 07 Jan 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
Sorry, but this is so weird, having the Cullens be the villains of the story! I'm glad Edward has some backup, now that his good friends are with him and Bella. I see this whole thing escalating, so the four of them better get on that planning situation! I just know that it's coming to a fight!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
If the Cullens are the killers why are Alice's eyes gold?
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2014 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh this is getting exiting cant wait to see what happens!!
Date: 07 Jan 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
Good chapter! If Alice had gold eyes, she couldn't have fed on the two murdered girls, right? hmmmmmmm.....
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2014 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 8
Can't wait for more
Date: 07 Jan 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
Dang it this is not good. I hope they get rid of the Cullens because they will be big trouble for them now that Bella is in the picture. Can't wait for more.
Date: 07 Jan 2014 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
the plot thickens
Date: 28 Dec 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
Good chapter! Thank you..
Date: 25 Dec 2013 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good story.
Thank you and Merry Christmas to you and yours,
Date: 25 Dec 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
Really good story.. Thank you
Date: 25 Dec 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
nothing said about previous partners.. No condoms so I am guessing they want babies.
Date: 25 Dec 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
They both have lost their families. Only Edward is the vampire. I wonder if in time he will want to change her? Not until the babies have been born and over the nursing stage.
Date: 25 Dec 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well the Cullens saved him and used him. Well that is a lot to think about.
Date: 25 Dec 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
glad they found each other in the 2nd chapter..