Date: 10 Jun 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 10 Jun 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
awww for big brother Seth's threat. Glad e liked the tree
Date: 22 May 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
i loved the chapter(:
Date: 17 May 2014 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
Yes, but does he think it's Garrett?
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2014 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
He probably thinks she's with Garrett. Not.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
Seth is gonna go protective brother and ask questions. I don't think he'll figure out Bella is involved with Edward. At least I hope he doesn't blow it out of proportion for them.
Date: 10 May 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
Uhoh is Seth going be all protective brother
Date: 09 May 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
Lol. Love this chapter.
Date: 08 May 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella can't lie. I think that they need to tell him the whole story, in private of course. He just has to keep it a secret for a short time.
Date: 08 May 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
I thought I reviewed this chapter but I don't see it. Live their ti.e together. I am a little worried about the guy that was watching Bella.
Date: 06 May 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
First, I can't imagine spending $3000 on ornaments!!! Wow! Second, uh oh, what is the answers that Seth has? He commented to Bella as soon as Garrett made his comment about not expecting Bella to introduce Seth as her brother. So did Seth jump to the conclusion that it's Garrett or did he tag things with Edward since Edward was glaring at him and not saying anything? Hmm... I hope you're able to update soon. I'm on the edge of my seat!
Date: 06 May 2014 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
why would you do this to her now they were so close to telling people and bella and edward better not get hurt because of seth i will lose all faith in you as a writer
Date: 06 May 2014 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
Seth figured it out didn't he
Date: 06 May 2014 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 20
Surpise Seth will get to the bottom of it but does he have the right guy?? She needs to tell him and see how it goes ;)
Date: 06 May 2014 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 20
Christmas is going to be interesting if Seth has figured out who Bella is involved with! They were so close to telling everyone, too! Guess I will just have to cross my fingers for her and Edward and hope for the best!
Date: 06 May 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 20
The number of people who know is steadily growing. Now the question is whether Seth can keep a secret. I am assuming Bella is not supposed to tell her family till Edward tells Tanya. But I could see how telling them in person would be her right, just as Edward wants to tell Tanya. But the more people who know, the bigger chance that someone will slip. This is why stuff like this doesn't stay secret for long. Maybe Bella should have said she was at a different park.
Date: 06 May 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
lol for Seth figuring it out. Like that she involved Alice in the decorating.
Date: 06 May 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think Edward's plan is good and fair to all. I am happy that they had a nice little vacation where they could be themselves. 49 nights will pass quickly with the holidays approaching.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm wondering if the guy watching Bella was a private detective, but who would've hired him?
All in all they had a great trip. Looking forward to the countdown.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
i loved the chapter(:
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oops!! I screwed up last time.
:) (for last chapter)
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[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just finished reading this & it's companion. I rotated every couple of chapters but I didn't take the time to review. So for the next 36 chapters you will get smiley faces. I just wanted you to know that I'm really enjoying these stories.
Date: 22 Apr 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
What a good time I think it will be harder for them now that they have been open together to hide again. What is the deal with the guy at the casino??
Date: 21 Apr 2014 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm guessing the guy in the casino , the one who made Bella uncomfortable wasn't just a red herring? Could he have been a private detective shadowing them? Maybe I'm just paranoid, but you never know! Their Thanksgiving weekend sounded great, and I don't blame Bella for thinking how long it will be before they can out themselves! At least she gets to go home for Christmas, so she can see her dad and Leah.
Date: 21 Apr 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
Such a sweet vacation. Hopefully that guy at the roulet table was just a random perv and not a forshadowing of trouble. i have been in Vegas before and know there are always drunk, pervy guys around, especially with free alcohol in a casino. Hang in there Bella, only 49 more nights to go.
Date: 20 Apr 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
sounds like they had a fun time.
Date: 20 Apr 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 18 Apr 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
SO glad they are talking things out.
Date: 17 Apr 2014 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow fun and talking about getting married how exciting.
Date: 16 Apr 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
Sounds like they have a good game plan. I am sure it won't be as easy as it sounds but at least they are committed to seeing it through together. And props to Edward for owning up to his mistakes. It sounds like they have what it takes to make it. I think it was also smart for them to have this talk in the beginning so that way they can enjoy their weekend without it hanging over their heads. And keep up the wooing Edward.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love that they talked and got some things worked out. Loved the lemon!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm glad Edward sees the error of his ways where Rosalie was concerned.
Communication is key and Edward is finally getting it right with Bella. His plan seems solid, let's hope it works out as it was intended without any surprises.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
I absolutely love that he has all this planning, and talk about the wedding is great! The two of them getting thieir relationship out in the open is wonderful! Communication truly is one of the most important things , if not the most important!
Date: 14 Apr 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
Mr. Spock would be proud of Edward: he is being very logical now.
Date: 11 Apr 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
i loved the chapter(:
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter!
Date: 10 Apr 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it! Amazing chapter and I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 07 Apr 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Sounds like Lottie is a great sketch artist.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
I can't wait to hear about their exciting weekend. I loved the dress ideas that Bella and Charlotte did. Bella is going to be needing that dress before Charlotte realizes.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm looking forward to them coming out to everyone. My main concerns are for how Tanya and Rosalie will react.
Looking forward to them having fun at the Borgata, but I have a feeling this weekend is the calm before the storm.
Date: 04 Apr 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am so excited for the weekend and to hear what the game plan is.
Date: 04 Apr 2014 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
As far as I see, Bella is already acting like a parent so hopefully when everything comes clean, she will already have a handle on that. And knowing Bella, she will make it clear she is not replacing their mom. I am sure Rosalie will be thrilled. lol The part about her helping with the art application was really sweet. So now we have the perfect date and the perfect wedding dress covered. Edward does not get to see it till the big day. Looking forward to hearing about their holiday trip.
Date: 03 Apr 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella was teary-eyed over Charlotte's sketch of the wedding dress, it must have been her dream dress, for sure! Now that everyone is scattered for the holiday, she and Edward can just relax and enjoy each other!
Date: 03 Apr 2014 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
I can't for the next chapter to find out what l they talk about and work through towards getting everything lined up for the big reveal in January. I'm really curious as to how Esme and Tanya will react. We already know Caisle will be less than thrilled since he told Edward to stay away from the very beginning. And of course, looking forward to the sexy times and experimenting!!!
Date: 03 Apr 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love seeing Bella with the kids but I am so ready to read about her and Edward. Hot times to come. Can't wait.
Date: 03 Apr 2014 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 03 Apr 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
I for one can not wait until everything comes out and in the open.. I really feel like he is keeping her a secret..
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter!
Wonder if they will last till January or if they will get discovered before then?!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
she is a naughty girl lol Edward loves it. I cant wait till they tell everyone.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wonder how long till Charlie shows up. Ben and Ang need to get ont he bus.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
loved it!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 15
loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 16
i loved the chapter(:
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2014 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
Looks like everything is going well for them. Just in time for something bad to happen. I hope I am wrong.
Date: 27 Mar 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
Gotta love teenagers. Hopefully Rosalie gets her head on straight before she gets into serious trouble. And Bella and Edward are so cute when they flirt. It sounds like this thanksgiving trip is going to be fun. Can't wait to read about it.
Date: 27 Mar 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
Edward's getting all worked up just thinking about what Bella is doing to prepare herself for their holiday getaway! Gives him something to think about besides work and the kids. Now that he has set a time for coming out to the family, they will have to start planning who to tell when!
Date: 27 Mar 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
looking forward to more
Date: 26 Mar 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
I can't even imagine what their thanksgiving holiday is going to be like. I'll be surprised if Edward lets her leave the hotel room.
Date: 26 Mar 2014 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for the update. It was a wonderful 40th birthday surprise.
I think Alice is going to out them before January.
Children see more than adults give them credit for....
Date: 26 Mar 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
Cannot tell you how happy their relationship is progressing. Makes me nervous that something is going to go badly and Bella will lose. Rosalie is a spoiled brat & judging from her Halloween antics, I wouldn't put it past her to cause trouble.
Ben made a good point. Edward has to tell Tanya first before the kids and the rest of their families.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
I have a feeling they will get busted before they have a chance to tell everyone themselves.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
I was thinking that Rosalie went from being a pain to nice way to quickly.
Love the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter!
Date: 23 Mar 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
i loved the chapter(:
Date: 21 Mar 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
looking froward to more
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2014 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
They are experiencing some growing pains. Everything in their lives have been changed. They will get their groove, but Rosalie needs a reality check. She could easily be taken advantage of by some perve. I bet she looks older than she is. I hope Jasper and Edward love the new boys time. It will do them both good.
Date: 21 Mar 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
Not only is Rosalie a spoiled but she's a stupid spoiled brat. Did she really think she would grt away with her lies when she sent Tanya pics.
Date: 21 Mar 2014 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
loved it!
Date: 21 Mar 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 12
loved it!
Date: 21 Mar 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
loved it!
Date: 20 Mar 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
loved it!