Date: 25 Mar 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 32
It's nice to catch up with this family. It sounds like they are getting a good start on the wedding. I just wish Esme and Carlisle would come around but maybe they just need more time.
Just a request, I am one of those reading both and I sometimes forget whose story is whose. So if you can just put a quick reminder at the top of each chapter, that would be great. Thanks.
Date: 24 Mar 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 32
I love having both POVs on this story! I was so excited when I got the notification for new chapters. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and seeing how things are going as they move forward. My thoughts and prayers are with your mom and your family!
Date: 22 Mar 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 32
Hopefully, having a frest start for Rosalie will benefit her in the long run. Edward seems to be going out of his way to may sure everyone is happy. Carlisle and Esme need to get their heads out of their asses.
Date: 02 Dec 2015 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 31
What a stroke of luck! I'll bet Bella will be able to pull all the threads together, maybe with a little help! It's great that Rose has developed such a different, and better, attitude towards Bella! Bound to make life much more pleasant all around!
Date: 01 Aug 2015 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 30
I was for certain Rosalie was gonna be pregnant. I really feel bad for her, she's in so much emotional pain. Glad someone noticed and paid attention and she decided to open up and get well. Edward better hope Bella being pregnant is good news.
Date: 31 Jul 2015 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 30
Since none of us are perfect parents, or anything else, I'm not picking on Edward. The most loving parents can sometimes miss things. I think it's cool Rose finally asked for help, that's the first step to getting healthy again! I also have a pretty good idea how Edward is going to react to Bella's big news! This family is growing stronger, so about all that's left is for Carlisle and Esme to get their heads out of their asses!
Date: 31 Jul 2015 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 30
Most parents don't know until they actually catch the kid in the act or the doctors bring it to thier attention. Glad Rose is going to get help. Royce needs to have a visit from someone with a big fist. What an arse.
Date: 09 Jul 2015 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 29
The story got a little confusing for a second when you switched from his perspective to hers but otherwise I enjoy your work.
"Edward reached down and picked me up, laying me on the bed as he continued to tell me about his day. “I told Jasper about the game next Friday and he’s really excited, and Alice has a new friend at the daycare. She’s the daughter of one of the girls in accounting.”"
Date: 06 Jul 2015 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 28
Rosalie is such a brat and I think Bella fell into her trap. She knows she is loved by Edward. If he didn't why would they be living with him. She just likes the attention. Plus now she has everyone's sympathy. Poor unwanted Rosalie.
Date: 26 Jun 2015 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 28
I really like the way he considers Bella's views on everything and incorporates them into family decisions, real proof of his love, I think! There are still things to work through and I know you will be sending solutions to us soon. It must rankle, and hurt his feelings, at his brother and sisterinlaw's attitude. Oh well, first things first, get Bella healed, the kids squared away and get married!
Date: 26 Jun 2015 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
It feels like things are finally starting to come together for Bella and Edward. It is always interesting to hear how Edward thinks of things. And hopefully Carlisle and Esme will come around by realizing how much they are losing.
Date: 31 May 2015 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 27
I'm so happy you didn't drag this part out. A lot to take in, in one chapter, but well done. Rosalie needs an attitude adjustment, pronto. I adore Jasper and Alice, they just go with the flow. I'm amazed at Charlie and Sue in accepting Edward's relationship with Bella so easily. And I'm extremely disappointed in Esme and Carlisle in their behavior. Though, I'm excited that Edward decided to propose and not put it off any longer.