Login
Register a New Account


Follow Us
      

You must login (register a new account) to review.
Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love it! Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 5

Really love this story

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 5

Hopefully Edward gets his birthday wish!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

He is impressed with Bella and wants more much more I like his birthday wish.

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 3

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 2

great story!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2013 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

I don't think Bella would be as opposed to getting with Edward as he thinks.

Rosalie needs taken down a notch or two. Soon.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2013 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

loving this

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2013 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 4

He is a smart man and knows what he want now if he can just figure out how to do it lol

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story,  Merry Christmas! 

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 4

Rosalie needs boot camp for brats.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love it!

How long will he be able to stay away...

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

Settling in anywhere is a trial.  New city, new hours, new people, new schedule,....new nanny!  Hearing Esme's thoughts on Bella was great!  Edward should now have a somewhat known quantity on his hands.  Alice is a treat!  All in all, a wonderful set up chapter!  Thank you!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

I'm impressed with Edward's introduction to his work place, he seems to have it under control. There will be a lot to begin with, but by the time the kids get home from vacation with their mom, he should have picked his team and be on his way! He with work and Bella with moving in are going to both be pretty busy for the next week or two. Then they have to get comfortable with each other before the children are back.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 3

Either I overlooked it or it wasn't put into the story, but what did Bella go to school for? And does it have any bearing on the story?

The kids are gone for two whole weeks, that could be interesting time together for Edward and Bella to get to know each other.

Wondering why Edward is expecting Esme and Bella for at the office...



Author's Response:

In this story he referenced her culinary background, but in Bella's POV, you learn that she went to culinary school straight out of high school and then moved to New York to get a degree in English, creative writing specifically.  And they're going to the office so Bella can get a key and Edward can give them his credit card so they can shop.  Thanks for the review and I hoped that answered all of your questions.  Have a great week!

AGW

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 2

Carlisle was gonna cut Edward's thoughts off on Nannygate before they even got going on Bella, lol. I'm sure there will be some hurt along the way, but I'm looking forward to the story unwinding.

Sherry



Author's Response:

Sorry, I forgot to put this in the other response, so I tacked it onto this review, but her culinary degree comes into the story mainly as a skill that helps her take care of the family, and as an interest that will be explored more by the pair.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

I don't think I've ever read this type of family dynamic... Edward being the father of Rosalie, Jasper, and Alice. It seems Rosalie has the same attitude as most stories. Tanya and Edward having an agreeable divorce and custody arrangement was unexpected. 

Now that Edward has seen and met Bella he wants her bad... he's so fucked. I wonder what her reaction to him will be.

I'm looking forward to reading more.

Sherry

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

I think Edward is going to work well there I cant wait for Bella to arive ;)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

So happy to see the update!  Edward may want Carlisle to think he will back off Bella, but so egos I doubt Carlisle is that gullible!  I loved to see the way each person fits (Orin Rosalie's case, doesn't want to fit, here.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

Carlisle doesnt want to lose his nanny and a good friend if it didnt work out with him and Bella but he has no worrys.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

loving this

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

Funny Carlisle is warning his brother away from Bella. Is he afraid they would lose their nanny, or is he genuinely concerned for her emotional well-being? Kind of pushy either way, I thought! Instead of Esme, why doesn't he ask Bella for input on the ccokware? So far this seems to be a good beginning, except for Rosalie. I hope she gets a little better attitude soon!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love the idea of this story being told in halves, as it were.  It's rather like peeking into Bella's and Edward's  individual journals or diaries.another thing I love about this is the fact that you have written Tanya and Edward as amicably divorced.  It does not always need to be contentious and you have given us two parents who love their children enough to put them first and remain trusting friends.  Kudos for that!  I look forward to  reading even more.  Thank you for all your hard work.

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh My God this is amazing!!! I am hooked!!!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking foward to reading more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

She is everything he didnt know he wanted well he knows now lol

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my.....this is gonna be interesting!!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2013 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

One look and he's a goner? Oh my, that was quick as well as unexpected! I can see this becoming a bit of a problem for both of them and Rosalie being a real pain. Nothing like a pissed off teenager to make life interesting! I wonder how Bella is going to react to being asked to move in, giving up her personal space, her own apartment? Looking forward to finding out how she takes it!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am so loving both points of view. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.  As I stated in "Everything I Wanted", welcome back. I'm really excited that you're back!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love this so far. Can't wait to see where it goes. Do we have to read the companion story to know what Bella's story is, or will it be touched on briefly here? I love Epov the best and am looking forward to your story!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh yeah, I'm liking how this is shaping up! Bring it!

You must login (register a new account) to review.