Date: 01 Apr 2023 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 11-There are Monsters Afoot, Master
Loved it
Date: 01 Apr 2023 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 10-Medium Ground
Loved it
Date: 01 Apr 2023 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 9-His Power, Their Pleasure, My Pain
Loved it!
Date: 01 Apr 2023 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 8-Danger Lurks Around Every Corner
Loved it
Date: 01 Apr 2023 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 7-I'll Huff and Puff
Loved it
Date: 31 Mar 2023 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 6-Good Girls Hate Graduation Parties
Loved it
Date: 31 Mar 2023 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 5-Painful Bonds
Loved it
Date: 31 Mar 2023 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 4-Coersion
Loved it
Date: 31 Mar 2023 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 3-The Other Piece of my Heart
Loved it
Date: 31 Mar 2023 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 2-Fire and Ice
Loved it
Date: 31 Mar 2023 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 1-The Newborns are Coming! The Newborns are Coming!
Loved it!
Date: 16 May 2020 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 12-Heads Will Roll
I'm hooked... please write more!!!!!!
Date: 24 Aug 2016 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 12-Heads Will Roll
Loved reading this! Please continue, you're doing an awesome job!
Date: 15 Jul 2015 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 4-Coersion
Okay, I admit that I was expecting some kind of takedown from Garrett, but this works, too, I guess LOL
Date: 15 Jul 2015 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 3-The Other Piece of my Heart
Like you have given me a review many times over, I shall give you in return. There's really not a lot of Garrett/Bella out there in the FF world and this has to be one of my favorites so far. You're staying in character, even though it's a bit OOC, and I absolutely love to see stories like that. I can't wait to keep reading and see what else Bella has to say.
Date: 16 Apr 2015 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 1-The Newborns are Coming! The Newborns are Coming!
I hope your health has improved tremendously and that you are feeling better. Hopefully you will be able to update soon. :) It is a great story!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the well wishes. I'm glad you love the story. Frankly, I miss the characters a lot, too, but I'm still battling leukemia and I have trouble mustering up the energy to write after I homeschool the kids and attempt to take care of the house. The docs are optimistic about my recovery, though, so maybe I'll be back in the saddle sometime soon. 😊
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 12-Heads Will Roll
it is loses his head. are you going to update or did you decide to just leave it hanging? yes he was warranted, any time Eddie is dismantled is a good thing.
Author's Response:
No, I haven't abandoned the story. I've been deathly ill. In and out of the hospital. I understand it's exciting and you'd want more, but I'm desperately trying to get well again. Thanks for the reviews. I appreciate them.-Jamie
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 10-Medium Ground
Glad to see the twins are gone which will piss Aro off to no end which is a good thing.once Bella is brought back from the spirit world she can begin the journey to ending the Volturi once and for all,i know Garrett will enjoy that.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 9-His Power, Their Pleasure, My Pain
vicky's dead,i gather the witch twins are going to hell with her right now.Bella is dying and Sam is bitching while that is happening.Paul is right let him savehis mate.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 7-I'll Huff and Puff
Vicky is so dead,just a matter of time and she can go to hell and be with James.if that man child wasn't such a little bitch she probably would not have been able to grab Bella.
Date: 08 May 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 12-Heads Will Roll
Glad Quil is gonna help. Poor Garrett. Stupid Edward.
Hope you write more soon.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry, I'll get back to this as soon add I can. I've been deathly ill and unable to write. It's difficult while in and out of hospital. Thanks for reviewing.-Jamie
Date: 08 May 2014 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 11-There are Monsters Afoot, Master
Ugh too bad Dem got away and called grouchypuss
Date: 08 May 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 10-Medium Ground
Wowser. Loved Marie lighting into old quil
Date: 08 May 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 9-His Power, Their Pleasure, My Pain
gotta love peter.
Ugh So glad Alec and Jane are gone. What a pair of twits.
Date: 08 May 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 8-Danger Lurks Around Every Corner
ugh Hope Garrett gets to kill the little jerk boy
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 7-I'll Huff and Puff
I feel sorry for V as a human. As a V, hell no. YUMMY middle you get a lemon dance:
Ugh Jake always was a hothead.
Date: 08 May 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 6-Good Girls Hate Graduation Parties
WOo hoo for school being done. Em is too funny.
Date: 08 May 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 5-Painful Bonds
Oh wow. She's gotten good at blunt. Loved Rose and her talk
Date: 08 May 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 4-Coersion
LOVE B not putting up with E's crap.
Date: 08 May 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 3-The Other Piece of my Heart
Loved e getting his arse handed to him. Go Bella.
Date: 07 May 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 2-Fire and Ice
Glad B spoke up for herself. E is being a wanker. Love your Garrett.
Date: 07 May 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 1-The Newborns are Coming! The Newborns are Coming!
oooh Love B questioning things. E always did treat her like a china doll without a brain
Date: 24 Mar 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 12-Heads Will Roll
so he will burn edward? yes? Yes? :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 10-Medium Ground
Loving it!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm editing Chapter 11 right now. I've already edited Chapter 12. I should have both up by tomorrow, I'd think. Thanks for reviewing!-JA
Date: 15 Mar 2014 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 9-His Power, Their Pleasure, My Pain
thank you for finally updating. I missed your story..
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. I'm in the process of editing chapter 11. I've already edited chapter 12. So, I should have both up by tomorrow, I think. Thanks for reviewing!-JA
Date: 14 Mar 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 9-His Power, Their Pleasure, My Pain
Oh my this amazing... love it
Author's Response:
Thank you! Outside of Peter and Jasper, Garrett is one of my favorites nomads. This story is my baby and quite popular on all the sites it's uploaded on. Thanks for reviewing! -Jamie
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 4-Coersion
Yay!! I love Garrett, and I love that he would willingly back away if that's what she desired. Personally, that alone would make me want him!
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 3-The Other Piece of my Heart
Mmm...Garrett is just...hot. There, that will work :)
Bella, you tell 'em :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 2-Fire and Ice
Ooohhh, I am loving this!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1-The Newborns are Coming! The Newborns are Coming!
I haven't even started to read your story yet, and the title of this chapter drew me right in. That, and I love Garrett in the movie :) Onto reading now :)
I feel like clapping my hands like a little schoolgirl. I love this story already :)
Author's Response:
Hahaha! Your enthusiasm is awesome! Hope you like it! (And Garrett is one of my favorites!) -JA
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 9-His Power, Their Pleasure, My Pain
Can't wait for the next update
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 8-Danger Lurks Around Every Corner
Good update
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 8-Danger Lurks Around Every Corner
Eeep! This really is a fantastic story. I'm so excited about what comes next.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 8-Danger Lurks Around Every Corner
I don't know who's worse: Victoria or the Volturi! Please update soon! These cliff hangers are giving me mini heart attacks!
~Mae
Author's Response:
Over the next four chapters, you'll have a pretty good idea who you hate more. It's a rollercoaster ride. I promise! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for taking the time to review! -JA
(Oh, and you better take some medicine for that heart condition, cause I'm a card-holding member of the cliffhanger's club. lol Expect the majority of my chapter to have at least one.)
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2014 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 7-I'll Huff and Puff
Loving it! Really enjoying this story and can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to review! -JA
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 7-I'll Huff and Puff
Uh oh, that was an intense chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to review! -JA
Date: 20 Feb 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 7-I'll Huff and Puff
Oh well live vicarously through her. LOL
Author's Response:
Oh, I do. Isn't that why we write fan fiction? lol Thanks for reviewing!-JA
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 6-Good Girls Hate Graduation Parties
love it. seriously i do.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. I haven't had a chance to update here for awhile, but it's further along at FF.net
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2013 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 6-Good Girls Hate Graduation Parties
That was a hot chapter! I enjoyed it tremendously!
Author's Response:
Wait until next chapter if you think this one was hot. Lol Thanks for reviewing! - Jamie
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 6-Good Girls Hate Graduation Parties
I really ejoyed that cant wait for more
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!- Jamie
Date: 19 Dec 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 6-Good Girls Hate Graduation Parties
This is such a good story
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I appreciate you taking the time to review!- JA
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 5-Painful Bonds
Well thats one way to put it ;)
Author's Response:
Yes, it is. :) Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 08 Dec 2013 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 5-Painful Bonds
I am loving this story!!!
I did notice one misused word I want to respectfully point out
"They'll not rest until the sentence has been served—the whole coven will be implemented by association."
Implemented means it put in place.
i think you meant to say implicated by association which means to show someone is involved in a crime
can't wait for the next bit
;)
Author's Response:
Thanks. I combed it fairly well, but I didn't see that mistake! Opps.This story doesn't have a beta. But at least you understood what I meant. When I'm able to get to a computer I'll fix that.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for taking the time to review! - J A
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2013 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 5-Painful Bonds
Great chapter I dont know what happened to 6 but I look forward to it
Author's Response:
Sorry. When I uploaded chapter 5, it uploaded it twice. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 06 Dec 2013 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 4-Coersion
This is a great start to the story! Looking forward to the next update. Hoping Edward gets his desserts too.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoting it. I'm going to update either tonight or tomorrow. Thanks for tte review-J A
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 4-Coersion
Talk about life changing moments! Loved this chapter-he's doing all the right things-giving her the truth while letting her make her own choices-must be so hard for her after waiting so long for her x
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was an eye opening chapter. Next chapter changes everything. She won't really have a choice but to accept Garrett. Everything will work out. Thanks for reviewing- JA
Date: 05 Dec 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 4-Coersion
Garrett's declaration is sweet and I really hope Bella will not push him away but instead embrace her new destiny, her body and spirit feel it, now only to give him the chance
Author's Response:
Oh, she will. Thanks for taking the time to review. I appreciate it! Have a good night!~Jamie Anna
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 3-The Other Piece of my Heart
Cant wait to see what happens next, on the other hand, I really hope Bella accepts Garrett as her mate and Edward gets found out about her blood, I have a feeling that is the only reason he is with her and refused to change her, so he does not lose it, great story so far
Author's Response:
Yep, you're spot on there, and you'll like how she finds out. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I appreciate you taking the time to review. I'll post another chapter before the end of the night! ~Jamie
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2013 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 3-The Other Piece of my Heart
looks like Garrett's going to have his han ds full with Bella ;)
Author's Response:
Oh, yeah he will. She's a firecracker and a half. Thanks for reviewing. I'll update again tonigjt.-Jamie
Date: 03 Dec 2013 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 2-Fire and Ice
I hope he recognizes her as his mate right off..
Author's Response:
Garrett's in for a surprise. Thanks for revewing.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 2-Fire and Ice
Really liked it and I cant wait for another chapter
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. I love this pairing. Thanks for taking the time to review! Have a good day!!- Jamie
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2013 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 1-The Newborns are Coming! The Newborns are Coming!
I love this pairing! Can't wait to read on - do you have an update schedule in mind?
Author's Response:
I' ll update later tonight. I have a total of ten chapters written, and just like my other 2 on this site, I've been updating once daily. I'm glad you're enjoying this. Thanks for taking the time to review!!-Jamie Anna