Date: 18 May 2014 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
What a beautiful and heartfelt story. I was there with both Edward and Bella. I loved that you kept to bella leaving. Often writer's get her to stay, I think giving Bella some.time to grow, away from edward was definitely best, and gives Edward time to consider the consequences of his actions, which I always felt is rarely focused on.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to review :)
Its great that you understood the reasons why I made Bella go and let her and Edward rebuild from there.
Thanks again
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 20
A tear jerker I was not expecting. As a matter of fact, I was cussing ExB all the way to ch 18!!! So glad that Tanya was really w/Irina!!
Thx.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
ahhhh so sweet it hurts my teeth. that was a really great story when she left i was in tears you have a way of pulling someone in that they really feel like they are there with the charters
thank you for sharing your gift
angel
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
A good chapter. In some places you have grammatical errors and could do with breaking up some paragraphs with full stops or commas. Apart from this its a really intriguing chapter and I liked the split point of view, however I would like to know what the story notes pertains to. The inclusion of this confused me slightly.
Can't wait to read more!
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 15 Jul 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
that was good i liked it and i like how you wrote everything i like how they got back together in the end
Date: 11 Jul 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
that was a great story.. loved it thank you
Date: 02 Jul 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well, I did NOT see that coming. I'm glad that Edward didn't have to hurt Tanya.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
haha...im not sure whether to laugh or cry! i didnt see that coming!!!! I was thinking it was gonna be something along the lines of bella would leave after the wedding and tanya would drop out and tradition states the groom has to marry the bridesmaid...
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
OMG!!!! You have got to be kidding me, all this time I was getting pissed off at Edward for nothing! I have faith that as I continue to read this that my thoughts will change.
Date: 16 Jun 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great story, I loved it.
Date: 16 Jun 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMG! Why doesn't he tell her how he feels before it's to late?
Date: 16 Jun 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
How could he do that to Bella? He's in love with her, how could he marry someone else?
Date: 28 May 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh I am a sucker for a reunion!
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
I cried all the way through it. It was beautiful! :)
Date: 26 May 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bring on the FLUFF!!! I love HEA!!! :)
Date: 11 May 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bella came back!! Is she not marrying Jacob?? Maybe he found someone in Italy and Edward didn't stick around to hear it. I hope that is the case because this is breaking my heart.
Date: 11 May 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
That is sad that he didn't get to her. But I have to wonder if she really got on the plane at all.
Date: 10 May 2010 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
i hope this is the big reunion and beginning of their admissions of love and wanting each other forever. Cause you know, that isn't asking too much, right?
Date: 10 May 2010 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
Not to be mean, but I kinda think that Bella's really stupid and selfish. Subtly, of course. So she mopes around all day long and doesn't get the guts to tell Edward. That part's fine, because most of us would do that. But then she has to involve all her friends. Emmett, Jasper and Rosalie are now mad at Edward. And Bella has to drag Jacob into the mess that SHE created. I just think that she's irresponsible. Also, it's her fault that Edward didn't know. She didn't tell him right?
Date: 10 May 2010 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
So he didn't get to her. Man I know that they will work things out if it is meant for them to.
Date: 10 May 2010 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
Holy Jesus!! I can't believe that he did that I don't know if I want him to catch Bella right now because he has hurt her so bad.
Date: 10 May 2010 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh man this is going to be terrible because really what is holding her there. She is going to go with Jacob.
Date: 10 May 2010 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
Man I really don't think that they can recover from all of this. I am so sad for them because I thought that maybe they could get back and be Edward and Bella again.
Date: 10 May 2010 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
I thought that Edward would have said something when Tanya told him that she wanted to use Bella's song for the wedding and when he didn't I really thought that he would have said something about the tree house but nothing. Is he really going to go through this?
Date: 10 May 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh man they have both messed all of this up. I hope that they can lead each other back to the other again.
Date: 10 May 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
And that right there is where Edward lost Bella. She is bailing out on her friends and everthing.
Date: 10 May 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
He really should have told her that Tanya was coming to the game with them. Now she is going to try to run again.
Date: 10 May 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
He really should have told her that Tanya was coming to the game with them. Now she is going to try to run again.
Date: 10 May 2010 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 8
And there goes Bella! Edward is losing her along with the rest of the gang. She is trying to distance herself so that she won't have to end up being the third wheel when Tanya comes around.
Date: 10 May 2010 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 8
And there goes Bella! Edward is losing her along with the rest of the gang. She is trying to distance herself so that she won't have to end up being the third wheel when Tanya comes around.
Date: 10 May 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh things aren't looking well for them right now. I hope that they get better and start acting like the friends that they are.
Date: 10 May 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh things aren't looking well for them right now. I hope that they get better and start acting like the friends that they are.
Date: 10 May 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh things aren't looking well for them right now. I hope that they get better and start acting like the friends that they are.
Date: 10 May 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
I think that Emmett just hit everything on the head right there and I hope that Edward listens to him before going on with his marriage to Tanya because he deserves to try.
Date: 10 May 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well I guess that Bella has game after all and the kids at school just didn't know it.
Date: 10 May 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
He is just not thinking clearly. I bet that the gang isn't going to get along with Tanya.
Date: 10 May 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
Aww... He broke Bella!
Date: 10 May 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh man are they two stupid people that could have had what their friends had a long time ago if they would have just opened their eyes!
Date: 10 May 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love it! I hope he really wasn't just dreaming it, and that she is actually there in their tree house. Hope they can talk this out and finally tell each other how they feel so they can be together! Can't wait for the next update..
Date: 10 May 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
she cant marry jake
Date: 10 May 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
Please let them finally work this out! ow-such heartwrenching. You truly capture the angst from bad decisions and regrets--perhaps some lemons would lighten the mood? Just a suggestion :D
Date: 25 Apr 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
This story has had my heart in my throat the entire time,thus why this is my first review. The angst was painful at times and I wanted to smack some sense into edward, but it is an amazing story and very well written. Cant wait to find out if she really did leave!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 17
This is really good cant wait to see what happens next
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
ahhhh look at you dropping those little hints that she is sitting in the cafe watching the plane leave, or at least I hope thats right. Great chapter can't wait for them to find each other!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
Run Edward Run!!!! :)
Date: 21 Apr 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 17
Frustrated is how this chapter makes me feel, I don't really know what to say besides that.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you for the update! I am so entertained by the angst! I would love to see where Bella is in the next chapter!
Cheers!
Gretchen
Date: 21 Apr 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
yeah- she cant pull down the shack- thats headquarters
Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
oh this made me want to cry
Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. I just know that Alice stopped her from getting on the plane and Edward will look around and spot her...Please!!! Kat
Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
poor bella, edward is so clueless- love the apple girl and fang boy
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
What a story! I read this straight thru! Well written, and I love how the twists thrown here and there made it more interesting! Bella is breaking my heart ~ to see her suffer becuase she wants her friend to be happy, discounting herself in that role. Sigh...looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow! Amazing update. Poor Edward hes gonna be too late. Please update soon.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
eagerly waiting for more and hoping it will be a happy chapter.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 15
that secret was so not worth the misery it has caused for bella and edward. hope he can get to her in time.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
hope she doesn't go although i am sure all she wants to do is run.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
ok there has to be some happiness soon or i will have to stop reading. You are just killing me with the heartbreak and sadness. Just when I think this is when they will make that realization and connection she is hurt once more.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
now i am really thinking he spilled something on his shirt and nothing else. one more lost opportunity and missunderstanding to keep them apart i fear.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
ok I hope she just finds some excuse not to spend time with them and hopefully he will wise up.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
so she just practically told him she loved him and he had no clue what she was really saying about not sharing him if it were her. still crying.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
i still have hope for edward and bella.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
this story is killing me but I can't stop reading.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
so sad. i cried. hope they find their way to each other.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
PLEASE update soon, can't wait to see their reactions!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
Well, what will Edward do now?? :)
Date: 10 Apr 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
Her actually leaving like that was so wrong. Good chapter though.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
another great chapter... I can't wait until the next one.. hurry hurry ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Bella. I still can't believe Edward was willing to marry Tanya and not tell ANYONE that it was false. I can't wait for wedding day with the Cullens. Thaznks.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMG she actually is leaving? I cant believe it... Cant wait to see what is going to happen next chapter, keep up the great work.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
i love this story....i hope he follows her
Date: 26 Mar 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
wow! Amazing chapter....so did not see that coming.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
I knew that was going to happen. She can't have left yet it not time for the supposed wedding that she is in. Besides she can't go with Jake, she should go someplace by herself to figure her life out.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
ok WOW just read the whole story... like it a lot. Hurry Edward
Date: 25 Mar 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great twist. I was soooooo relieved. Thank you! Kat
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
It was a ruse the entire time!?!? How will anyone ever forgive him? Great chapter and story, can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
I did not see that one coming and yes RUN EDWARD RUN !!!!!!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow did not see that coming. Oh how I hate Tanya.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
This is such a great story but it's so sad. It's making me cry but in a good way lol!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
Please tell me that these two figure it out before the wedding. Personally I think it was wrong for Tanya to ask Bella to be in the wedding, she knows how Bella feels about Edward.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
I really enjoy the pacing of your story. It's breaking my heart that they are both so hard headed. Thanks.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
Will she go or will edward finally talk to her??? Join us tomorrow same bat time same bat channel....... Another great chapter!! :)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
well hell - Don't Go Bella !!!!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
I almost feel for him but then again he is the one who brought Tanya around.. So I guess NOT- make up your mind Edward you keep going from loving Bella forever to not knowing that you love her .. your emotions are giving me whiplash
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
What is Tanya getting at????
Author's Response:
This story is on fanfic as well and from over 100 reviews your the only one to pick up on that little something ;o)
You have made my day !
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh Edward Edward Edward tsk tsk tsk , should have told Bella you were bringing the wifey.. I mean aren't they BFF's
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
oh Edward is so F#@%ed ... can't wait to read that chapter
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
This is the saddest story. I feel terrible inside, just reading it.
I love the detail in the chapters; so often you get short 900 word chapters that leave you with more questions than answers.
I'm at the edge of my seat, waiting for the next chapter.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
Why is Edward so dense? Poor Bella can't wait for next update
Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 13
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! What a place to stop! Heres hoping you update soon =]
Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
Ahhh I love your story! Its soo good and I am so hooked! =]
Date: 02 Mar 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 13
god he is such a dumb ass