I thought it was different and kinda amazing! In the beginning the way you mixed up the pairings had me second guessing where you were going with this but i kept reading because I was honestly intersted in where the story might go. You are a great writer and should keep writing what you love and not what you think other people would like. 

I didn't like the Rose/Edward pairing, therefore I didn't enjoy the story. For me, knowing the characters from twilight make it impossible to get into stories when authors switch around pairings- sorry:(

Curious though if you are still updating Confessions of a billionaires whore? Are you going to continue writing that story? I'm really enjoying that one:) as well as many of your other stories! Your writing is beautiful.  Thanks for your time:)

Personally, I think this piece was unstintingly perfect!  I may be a romantic, but I am also a realist.  Young love - and how we see those we choose to love the, are not usually forever.  Forever is the everyday.  The days wher things go right and some go wrong.  Forever, though is most definitely attainable.  It takes work.  In Edward's relationship with Bella, he did all the work.  His relationship with Rosalie will last  ecause they both work at it.  They both want it, they both desire it.  It's in the quiet times between that a couple becomes one.  That is what you wrote here - as so very few are able!  Having been married happily for more than 22 years I know that to be a fact.  Love - in the outset - is not really all consuming.  But if you give it time it can be!  Thank you for an amazing piece of art and life!