Date: 12 Sep 2020 9:32 AM Title: Epilogue ~ Decisions, Decisions
i got it read and loved it
Date: 11 Sep 2020 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 32 ~ My One and Only
so sweet
Date: 11 Sep 2020 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 32 ~ My One and Only
so sweet
Date: 10 Sep 2020 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 28 ~ First Lessons in Relationships
love it
Date: 10 Sep 2020 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 26 ~ Step Into The Light
love it
Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:58 AM Title: Epilogue ~ Decisions, Decisions
Thank you.
Date: 04 Sep 2018 12:36 AM Title: Epilogue ~ Decisions, Decisions
:) loved this story Looking forward to reading the sequel
Date: 02 Sep 2018 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Daydreaming
I am really loving this story - I came across it just yesterday and have caught up to the last chapter now. If you ever go back and edit, I have a suggestion - and I mean nothing mean about this - the term Alice uses in one of the last chapters - she says Edward was humming and hawing - it's hemming and hawing. Doesn't change the awesome feeling I have for the story - it's one of the best plot lines I've read in ages. I love this stronger Bella and this less controlling Edward. This works much better for the story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. We actually googled this phrase as we were writing it, and it told us "humming and hawing", even though we'd both heard and seen it phrased differently. We will go in and change this. Thank you again.
Date: 02 Sep 2018 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Daydreaming
I am really loving this story - I came across it just yesterday and have caught up to the last chapter now. If you ever go back and edit, I have a suggestion - and I mean nothing mean about this - the term Alice uses in one of the last chapters - she says Edward was humming and hawing - it's hemming and hawing. Doesn't change the awesome feeling I have for the story - it's one of the best plot lines I've read in ages. I love this stronger Bella and this less controlling Edward. This works much better for the story!
Date: 20 Aug 2018 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 45 ~ Time to Celebrate?
I enjoy this. It's a better love story than Twilight, in fact it's very close to what I imagine what Twilight should have and could have been. Thank you for sharing this story, and I look forward to more!
Date: 12 Aug 2018 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 45 ~ Time to Celebrate?
:)
Date: 06 Aug 2018 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ Ringing in the New Year
It's so lovely to have the updates. Thank you
Date: 02 Aug 2018 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 26 ~ Step Into The Light
I just wanted to tell you that I absolutely love your take on this story. It’s so well written, and they are so sweet they give me a toothache lol.
Date: 30 Jul 2018 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ Ringing in the New Year
Loving this story.
Date: 29 Jul 2018 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ Ringing in the New Year
I love this!! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2018 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 44 ~ Ringing in the New Year
:)
Date: 25 Jul 2018 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 43 ~ Domestic Bliss
I love this! I love them! ;)
Date: 24 Jul 2018 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 43 ~ Domestic Bliss
:)
Date: 24 Jul 2018 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 43 ~ Domestic Bliss
:)
Date: 24 Jul 2018 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 43 ~ Domestic Bliss
Glad to see you haven't abandoned it! Keep going and enjoy the ride. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Date: 03 Oct 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 41 ~ Over the Holidays
Loved it
Date: 01 Oct 2016 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Tour
I periodically wean myself off coffee only to start up again when things get busy at work. The first few cups make me chatter like crazy - very funny.
Date: 27 Sep 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 41 ~ Over the Holidays
I love it!! :)
Date: 26 Sep 2016 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 41 ~ Over the Holidays
Cute
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 41 ~ Over the Holidays
:)
Date: 24 Sep 2016 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 41 ~ Over the Holidays
Loved Christmas at the Cullens! The gifts exchanged between Edward and Bella were just right!
Date: 24 Sep 2016 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ Compromise
Things seem to be going smoothly for them, but I have a feeling that may not continue for too much longer. That last sentence, about breaking a father's heart, really points it out, too!
Date: 21 Sep 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ Compromise
I love this! :)
Date: 20 Sep 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ Compromise
Glad you're back!
Date: 14 Jan 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 39 ~ …And the Next Chapter Begins
Loving this
Date: 13 Jul 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ …And the Next Chapter Begins
Hello. Wonderful story! I went back and re-read all the chapters again....took me about 4-5 days, but now I'm left hanging, waiting for more updates. This is one of the most well-written stories I have read on here. Kudos to you! You are a great story teller who gives a lot of attention to detail, and that is what makes it so interesting. Thanks, Suzan Noerr
Date: 06 Jul 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 39 ~ …And the Next Chapter Begins
Loved it. Em is such a hoot.
Date: 06 Jul 2015 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 39 ~ …And the Next Chapter Begins
Glad she had a good birthday, I was concerned for a minute :)
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 06 Jul 2015 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ …And the Next Chapter Begins
I am so happy for the update! I love this! :)
Date: 06 Jul 2015 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ …And the Next Chapter Begins
I can't imagine a better birthday, all things considered. This senior year is shaping up really well for Bella and Edward. Their progress with each other is growing and has to make them both happy!
Date: 04 Jun 2015 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…
Great chapter! I enjoyed it!
Date: 29 Apr 2015 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…
I must have missed the email notice of this update since it's been over two weeks ago. N ever the less, I really enjoyed this chapter, the silver ring sounds lovely and very meaningful. I cheer their continued progress and applaud their loving patience!
Date: 16 Apr 2015 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…
Glad they're moving forward.
Date: 13 Apr 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…
They are becoming so very adept at reading each others emotions. Even if the words aren't always there to back it up.
Date: 12 Apr 2015 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…
Absolutely perfect!! I love this!! :)=)
Date: 11 Apr 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…
Hello. Nice to see an update in my inbox. I just love these 2. They are so mushy. Thanks, Suzan Noerr
Date: 10 Apr 2015 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…
great update
love this story
Date: 27 Mar 2015 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 19 ~ That's Not Creepy
Starting to open up that is a good thing
Date: 23 Mar 2015 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 18 ~ Too Much Time To Myself
That was the longes weekend of the poor girls life and I am sure it was Edwards to they had to drag him away from her
Date: 23 Mar 2015 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 17 ~ Intolerably Alone with My Thoughts
that was heavy she has made up her mind
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up
kay, I've just finished reading this story, and I LOVED it. I know it's not marked as complete, but you guys haven't updated it in a while, and I'm getting a little worried! I just wanted to beg you not to let this story die. Keep going - please! The last chapter left me wanting more and I'm probably going to go crazy wondering about that past line. You know, the one with "dreaming about unknown, cloaked figures," or something along those lines.
Anyway, I was so surprised that Bella got Edward to agree to change her without all the stubborn arguing that happened in the original series. Hahaha, it nearly had me hyperventilating in shock! I'm really looking forward to more! Kutgw:) ~ The_Lions_Lamb
Date: 27 Dec 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer
This is fun. Sounds like it is going to get interesting with the wolves and Edward better not try - end of discussion - again. I don't think Bella will like that.
Date: 27 Dec 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 28 ~ First Lessons in Relationships
Perfection
Date: 27 Dec 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 26 ~ Step Into The Light
So sweet
Date: 26 Dec 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Deductible
Lmao
Date: 21 Dec 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer
So nice to have a new chapter, thank you. This is certainly a slow burn.
Date: 19 Dec 2014 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer
Fanfriggentastic!!! I love it! :)
Date: 19 Dec 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer
Mercy!! Wonderful chapter! so glad that you updated!!
Wonder if Alice and Jasper used any of those condoms???
Date: 18 Dec 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer
Very interesting dreams this girl has! The visit with her mother was both good and bad for both Bella and Edward. I think Bella has a really good grasp of how to make the most of her time as a human. Had a small chuckle over Alice and Jasper conducting the scientific testing for the couple!
Date: 18 Dec 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer
hell yeah!!!!!!!!you're back
Date: 14 Nov 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up
This story is very well written and a pleasure to read, however the unpredictable updates leave the reader wanting more and cause the audience to lose interest and move on to more flowing pieces.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up
Love it!!!
Date: 03 Oct 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up
A nice twist on the birthday scene.
Slow and steady wins the race. Their restraint should be commended.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up
Edward had a wonderful birthday!
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 02 Oct 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up
The gifts from his family were wonderfully thoughtful, for sure, but the journal from Bella truly was the top of the list. Unless it was the exploration of their boundaries after everyone left! Great chapter, great birthday for Edward!
Date: 29 Sep 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder
hey it's been too long since the last tme you updated....itt's a great story.....do not give it up
Author's Response:
Hello,
Sorry for the lack of recent update, but we can assure you, we have not given up on this story. The next chapter is almost finished, but real life has just been out of control for both of us lately, so we are working on getting caught up.
Thank you for reading and your patience. Take care.
Dawn and Erica
Date: 19 Sep 2014 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder
waiting for updates really got frustrating so I'm deleting my interest in your stories. too bad because this one was good.
Date: 29 Aug 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder
You've been missed :)
another delightful chapter. Enjoying the slooowwww burn!
Date: 28 Aug 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder
The perfect gift for her man, and he is going to love it! I would like to be a little mouse when Edward and Charlie go fishing together! Next up will be the trip to Jacksonville, which reminds me how irritating the wolves are with their suspicions! How about they take into consideration what Bella wants? Oh no! That would make too much sense!
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder
Great chapter!! Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder
I love this so much!! :)=)
Date: 03 Aug 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 34 ~ Out The Window
I love this!! :)
Date: 03 Aug 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 34 ~ Out The Window
This is shaping up to be a really great summer, for both Bella and Edward, and probably the rest of the family as well! Alice said Bella would like the results of this weekend and it appears that, as usual, she was right! Bella has been so perceptive and thoughtful, and Edward has been so willing to compromise and consider her views. These two are so meant for each other and to be together, forever! I love your take on them!
Date: 03 Aug 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 34 ~ Out The Window
"Hold on tight, Spider Monkey!" tee hee hee
Date: 03 Aug 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 34 ~ Out The Window
This was a great chapter.
I loved how the killed Laurens gossip b4 it got started.
And practice make perfect! ;)
I loved this!!
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 29 Jul 2014 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make
Loved this chapter!
Date: 26 Jul 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make
Yes! Whew!
Date: 23 Jul 2014 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make
Yeah. So stubborn. Very well thought out on both sides.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make
This chapter is so freakin fantastic!!! :)=)
Date: 21 Jul 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make
This is one of the most logical and emotionally healthy discussions of the "changing Bella" issue I've seen in the fandom. Nicely done.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make
I feel as if I have suffered through this with both of them, and am so relieved by the decision he has made! My first thought at the end of this chapter was, Thank God! It looked for a while that there was no way around this problem, but I'm so happy they found a way through it, together! I sure hope writing this chapter didn't give you two migraines!
Date: 21 Jul 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make
Damn... I have been in tears this whole chapter. My thoughts were everywhere. I was so sure she was going to break up with him, or him with her.
But I never thought her would decide to change her.
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 09 Jul 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 32 ~ My One and Only
Aww, yay! Okay, phew, big sigh of relief that he's not going anywhere! :D
xo
Date: 08 Jul 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 32 ~ My One and Only
Sweet. Oh, this is a long, long wait...
Date: 08 Jul 2014 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 32 ~ My One and Only
So he is assward, and he is forgiven. I'm sure that Alice had nothing to do with telling him to make it right? LOL... teenagers, gotta love'em!
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 08 Jul 2014 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 32 ~ My One and Only
I think Bella is right, Edward says the perfect thing at the perfect time and she just melts! It's sweet that her father sees her the way he does! Even better that Edward agrees with him!
Date: 08 Jul 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 32 ~ My One and Only
This is so fantastic!! I love it!! :)
Date: 04 Jul 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 31 ~ A Night To Remember
I love this story! Poor Bella. She just doesn't understand teenage boys. ;) I am all caught up and can't wait for more!! :)=)
Date: 04 Jul 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 30 ~ Two Way Street
Awww...this is so great! :)
Date: 04 Jul 2014 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 29 ~ We Can Do Normal
I love this! :)
Date: 04 Jul 2014 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 28 ~ First Lessons in Relationships
Beautiful!! :)
Date: 03 Jul 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ Flushed Faces
OMG! This is fantastic!! I love it! :)=)
Date: 03 Jul 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 26 ~ Step Into The Light
OMG! This is fantastic!! :)
Date: 03 Jul 2014 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 25 ~ How to ask a vampire if you're dating
This is fantastic! They are adorable! ;)
Date: 02 Jul 2014 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 21 ~ This is a Test, Only a Test
Progress! I love it! ;)
Date: 02 Jul 2014 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 20 ~ He’s a Comedian
This story is so great! I love it! :)
Date: 02 Jul 2014 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 19 ~ That's Not Creepy
I LOVE THIS!! :)=)
Date: 01 Jul 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 18 ~ Too Much Time To Myself
Fantastic! I love it!! :)
Date: 01 Jul 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 17 ~ Intolerably Alone with My Thoughts
She's hooked! ;) I love it!
Date: 01 Jul 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 16 ~ Simple Logic
This is really fantastic!! I love it so much! :)=)
Date: 01 Jul 2014 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 15 ~ My Choice
I love it! I can't wait to read more!! :)
Date: 01 Jul 2014 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 14 ~ I'm a Detective
Fantastic!! :)
Date: 01 Jul 2014 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 13 ~ Freedom
I love this chapter!! :)
Date: 01 Jul 2014 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 31 ~ A Night To Remember
Oh Charlie, if you only knew how really old-fashioned Edward is! All things considered, I think they had a wonderful prom, just as Bella told him. It was so nice of Alice and Jasper to give them their time together, and I love how Alice wraps Charlie around her little finger! May I say Bella is a better person than I, because I would have laughed myself silly over Lauren wearing that sloppy joe!