Date: 25 Feb 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 10 ~ Overthinking
thank you for the update..Trust me Edward heard you and is grateful you told them...Edward's room Edwards's business...well done Bella...I wonder when Bella is going to tell Edward she can smell him in her room where he has NEVER been!!!....lol..Edward is busted
Date: 25 Feb 2014 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ Overthinking
The mystery of Edward's scent in her room is still eluding Bella, but I'm sure she will figure it out soon! Edward would make his life easier if he would just come clean with Bella. They both are well matched in their stubborness!
Date: 18 Feb 2014 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ No Supervision
Edward is going to change how he treats her now.
Date: 18 Feb 2014 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~ The Silent Treatment
what is wrong with him now
Date: 17 Feb 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ No Supervision
Oh little girl, have you got a lot to learn! I don't think you are going to get ahead of Edward or anyone else in his family, try though you may! Since Bella is noticing a few anomalies about him, I'm curious as to how long it might take her to figure out what he is! Then for the really big question, how she will react to the answer!
Date: 17 Feb 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ No Supervision
UT OH!! She thinks he has been in her room???
Looking forward to more.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 8 ~ The Silent Treatment
Mercy! Poor Bella!! :(
Looking forward to more and Edward coming to his sinces! :D
Date: 11 Feb 2014 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 8 ~ The Silent Treatment
It's a shame this isn't going any better for either of them. I think Edward was trying to accustom himself to Bella's scent but it may not be working the way he thought it would. Now I'm wondering why he's letting Bella drive with Jessica without objecting?
Date: 10 Feb 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Day One
Interesting take on the canon! Love that she rammed his car, though I don't believe they'll make it four months with this arrangement! I'm worn out from this first day! Can't wait for the next post!
Date: 10 Feb 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Responsible
Wonder how Edmund *snicker* will handle this meeting with Bella and her dad??
Date: 10 Feb 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Daydreaming
Love this story already!!
Date: 08 Feb 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Day One
Love it so far and I'm looking forward to reading more. Hope you can update again soon.
Date: 07 Feb 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Day One
I am really enjoying this story. Keep up the good work!
Date: 05 Feb 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Day One
He is losing his mind lol
Date: 04 Feb 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Day One
Edward is doing better than than he thought he could, while Bella is having as much trouble as she counted on having! It really is going to be a challenge to keep her busy for the next four months and keep her safe at the same time! Maybe he should ask Esme for help, or perhaps Alice?
Date: 03 Feb 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Day One
Poor Bella and Edward.... LOL!
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 28 Jan 2014 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Tour
I am loving her she is saying what is on her mind good for her
Date: 28 Jan 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Lunch
Senility must be creeping up on me, as I just now noticed I failed to read and review this chapter before reading six! The famous blood-typing scene, with Mike and Edward vying over who takes Bella to the nurse! Never a doubt that Edward would win, either! Plus, he got the bottle cap souvenir!
Date: 28 Jan 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Tour
This is my favorite chapter, so far! I must agree with you and Edward, coffee definitely has the effect of loosening Bella's tongue! It was a lot of fun listening to her babble on , and watching his amusement listening to it!
Date: 27 Jan 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Tour
LOL.... as long as she turns Edward into a spaz monkey.
Loving this chapter. Can not wait to see what else he has he do!!
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 21 Jan 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Lunch
Wow... I loved the blood typing in the Twilight book! I always thought that was a cute part.
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 20 Jan 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Lunch
She is going to love it lol
Date: 17 Jan 2014 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 4 ~ Ride
He realy is giving her to much to process so fast.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 4 ~ Ride
Makes me shake my head, at just how misread all the words and actions are with these two! It's enough to make a strong man weep, if he could produce tears, that is!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 4 ~ Ride
Poor Bella, this story brings a smile to my face everytime!
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 07 Jan 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Deductible
Hahahahaahahehheeh
That was too funny!
Poor Bella! :)
Date: 07 Jan 2014 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Deductible
Thank you!
Date: 07 Jan 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Deductible
Charlie can see that Edward wants more from Bella.
Date: 06 Jan 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Deductible
Sinceshe thinks Edward hates her and she's not real happy with his attitude, it's no wonder Bella is upset! Even Charlie isn't being very supportive! Okay, the next several months are going to be interesting!
Date: 06 Jan 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Deductible
Hahahahaha, poor Bella! And Charlie? Laughing with the enemy..
this is going to be so fun! I can se it :))
BTW, reviewing here because I dind't get the ffn alert.
xo
dani
Date: 06 Jan 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Responsible
LMAO!!
Poor Bella! Edward is a ass and she is just.... to darn funny! :)
Looking forward to more please! :D
Date: 06 Jan 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Responsible
This is... Hil-larious.. Literarlly!!!
PLz, update soon...... I love this story...
Regards,
satakshipari
Date: 30 Dec 2013 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Responsible
This really is going to be tricky because Bella can't tell Charlie the real reason she was angry, as that would involve telling him about Edward stopping the van! She better think up some reasonable explanation and keep the secret! Of course it wouldn't hurt if Edward would lighten up a bit and quit glaring at her all the time!I wonder how she's going to cover the deductible?
Date: 30 Dec 2013 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Responsible
LOL she pissed him off or is he just in shock . I hope she is not still bleeding when she gets there
Date: 25 Dec 2013 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Daydreaming
I wonder whats going to happen in the next chapter. lol
Date: 25 Dec 2013 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Daydreaming
I always wondered why she just didn't go ahead and run into him? She was angry enough to do something impulsive!
Date: 23 Dec 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Daydreaming
She hit is lol