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Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2017 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 46

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Date: 12 Nov 2017 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 45

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Date: 12 Nov 2017 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 44

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 43

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 42

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 41

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 40

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 39

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 38

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 37

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it! Poor Edward! 

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 35

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 35

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 34

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 33

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 32

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 31

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 30

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 29

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 28

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 27

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 26

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 25

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 22

Poor Emmett!  Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it!  Go Bella! 

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!  Poor Bella! 

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awesome chapter! 

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! Poor Bella! Paul is a jerk! 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 45

So when are they going go stop dening their true feelings for each other?

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2017 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 32

Wow

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2017 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 18

Go Bella Go!!

Reviewer: dky3813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2016 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

 

 

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2015 2:59 PM Title: Epilogue

fun read :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 9:56 AM Title: Epilogue

another great story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 138

The Zipper is my favorite ride

Reviewer: stickyfeathers Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 103

I'm loving the story but I'm over Bella and her depressing mood.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 7:35 AM Title: Epilogue

Wonderful! Amazing! Awesome! I loved it if you can't tell!

Reviewer: Aloha202 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2015 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 131

I reserved my judgment of Bella because I realized that she has serious psychological problems, but you as a writer really made her look extremely pathetic then used your other characters to justify her bad behavior. No matter how you try to spin it, it just didn't work in my opinion.  She was just plain wrong.  She even accused Edward of having a doctored photo, someone who she has known for years and questioned his meticulousness and his integrity. Wow. 

 

 

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2015 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it! Go Bella!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it! I really hate Rosalie!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 15

Bella is awesome!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

Awe poor Bella! Does Edward like Bella too?

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

Awesome!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it! Poor Bella! I really don't like Paul!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it! What will Bella's reaction be when he tells her?

Reviewer: Snowbabe23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 7

fantastic!

Reviewer: Snowbabe23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Snowbabe23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it! Poor Bella! Paul is a jerk!

Reviewer: Snowbabe23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4

Amazing!

Reviewer: Snowbabe23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

GREAT!

Reviewer: Snowbabe23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowbabe23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! Poor Bella! Paul is a prick!

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 98

i love that edward is so  sweet, understanding, patient, compassionate,

intelligent, romantic, loving man...

hope bella doesnt try to sabatage her own future with him again...

xD

Reviewer: renaka Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 5:30 PM Title: Epilogue

FANTASTIC! Such a cute, fun & hoy story! You truly know the way to a reader's heart! I'm SO reading your other fanfics!! You are absolutely gifted! Keep it up!!

Una geniaa total!  👏🎊💯

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 85

Just so strange about "going slow" and not having sex after everything they have already done..

I mean they have been BFF for many years so they know they love each other's company so what is the point of no sex?

my take is...everything should remain the same , BFF, add the kissing, continue the sex, just change their relationship status...

what is the big efing deal?

arrgh... Bella has always been annoying in so many of these fictions...

I love confident, liberated, beautiful, hot, not take crap from other women, somewhat needy Bella who doesn't mind being pampered with gifts and being taken care of by Edward ....

xD

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 84

Here's my issue among others with Bella.

she has known Edward for 10 years and knows how important she is to his family. Knowing how reserved and conservative he is and how his family is very important to him, how can she even think he would tell her he loved her "flippantly" one minute then fall out of love with her shortly after? He being her BFF along with his sister, doesn't she know him better than that? Esp since he does not say those words easily to anyone!

it's one thing to have no faith in oneself, but to think Edward is so shallow after all those years of knowing him the way she does... If she is going analyze everything about how Edward feels, perhaps she should use some of her intelligence that she supposedly has to look at everything from a different view point rather than the misguided self loathing eyes that she has....

just sayin... xD

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 69

WTH is wrong with Bella?

EVERYTHING!

her annoying over analytical self depraved, self hatred(really lo lo self esteem)

is shining through like always.....xD

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 1:06 PM Title: Epilogue

awesome story thanks so much for sharing it with us ;D

Reviewer: bba628 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 45

Listening to DMB (Dave Matthews) crash while reading any of his sexy songs are perfect for your stories especially PFL

Reviewer: bba628 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 44

WOW uhh yeah lets continue please

 

Reviewer: bba628 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 42

OMG Sexting is the best your an amazing author thank you I am reading all of your stories!!! Keep on posting!! luv luv luv!!!

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 1:43 AM Title: Epilogue

Such a beautiful, sexy, erotic at times and heartrenching at others but it was sooooo good and I'm mad at myself for not reading it sooner. I love all your stories!! Keep up the awesome work u do on your stories and I know I will absolutely keep reading them. I know all the feelings Bella felt through this story because I gave felt that way for the past for years with a husband that has ridiculed me, called me names and cheated on me which thankfully will be over soon since we've past the 60 day mark for a judge to grant a divorce now he just needs to agree with everything I'm asking for which is only half of everything we've accumulated while we've been married these past nine years and primary custody of our 3 girls but he's stalling even though if we go to court the judge will grant me what I want since Texas law states I get half of everything! Anyway sorry for rambling I just know what Bella was feeling since I could relate and I think she was an excellent character along with Edward he was so sweet and sexy and naughty! Thanks for sharing this incredible story!!!

Melissa

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 7:32 PM Title: Epilogue

Nice chapter long as hell, but the best ever. I love your story telling and your happy ever afters are to die for. Good bye........

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 150

I hate you got to go, I have truly enjoyed this wonderful story.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 140

I don't like it she slept with Edward and now she's with his brother, not cool. Angela is a name in twilight fanfiction that will do whats right, being with Emmett, not right, but I'm just a reader and I'm in love with your stuff, your way and I love this story it's great, so I will shut the hell up.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 127

I leave you more than some, I've been waiting for Edward and Bella to bring this devil down to hell, he's a slime ball.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 126

Whoa, this has got to be the hottest lemon anywhere, you should offer classes on the internet, damn to glory.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 117

Take him so far down he will see hell. Bella is such a beautiful character, I hate having her hurting and Edward cares and loves her.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 75

She's so damn wishy washy, I wish Edward did not want a low on the totem pole Bella, it's a mine thing and her mine can bring him down. I hate her right now, forgive me.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 53

I hate Jacob, he's like a fly thinks he can eat from your plate and not pay, they land on your food with their feet ewee, nasty.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 42

I just read chapters one thru forty two and I'm breathless, this Edward and Bell ( that you've created) are smokeing hot, damn, I am loving this story, leaving you some somethin' somethin', I am glad it's completed.

Reviewer: Sarra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2014 12:00 PM Title: Epilogue

Love love love it!

that is all 

ps: can I have the same Edward for myself?lol

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