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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 136

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 136

She got a lot in that letter he understands much more about her now.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 136

Please, tell me there isn't going to be a massiveisumderstanding with Bella over this meetup with Angie!?

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 136

Paul needs to be strung up!!!

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 136

As always, I am glad Bella has Edward in her corner. I have battled self esteem issues most of my life and I know its a long road, and it might never truely go away. It really is true that if you are told something often enough, you start to believe it. It takes a much longer time to get the bad messages out and the good ones in than it does to let the bad ones in to start with. Hopefully having Edward there to help reinforce that she is a good person will help. But i am also a strong believer that you need to love yourself before truely committing to someone else so I think Bella's work will help both of them in the long run.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 136

I LOVE THIS!! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 136

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 136

Yea  paul's on the run I bet.

 

Glad she showed him the letter.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 136

looking forward to more

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 135

=)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 135

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 135

I think they had a wonderful evening there is a lot to work out.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 135

Thanks!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 135

The therapist will be great for Bella.  It will be interesting to hear her letter,

Reviewer: RandyWriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 135

Amazing, incredible, can't say enough good things about your story.    So excited to see your updates!    The gentle touches, words of love and how committed Edward is to Bella, makes me all warm.     Love it all!    Can't wait to see what Oaul gets in jail!!  Probably more than a swab stuck up his euretha, lol.     He doesn't have a hoo aha but he might think he has one after his time in jail, lol!    Oh happy days!     Love it all!   

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 135

:)

Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 135

So glad that these two are talking and getting things out there!!!  Can't wait for them to find the asshole Paul!!!

Reviewer: farrells4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 135

Love it!

 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 135

LOVE! :)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 135

Is it just coincidental that Paul had a 'family emergency' the same time witnesses came forth to give statements against him. Did someone tip him off?

At least Edward and Bella are working through their problems. I'm curious as to what her letter may have in it and what Edward's reaction will be.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 135

wonder if someone tipped off Paul and his "family emergency" is him taking off.

Reviewer: tiffanyleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 135

Great chapter!  I can't wait to see his response to the letter.

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 134

Great story. I like how you wrote bella in your story. Nice change. Looking (QQ) forward to the updates, soooooon. Thanks! :o)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 134

Go, Bella! Woot woot! Go, Josie! Yay! ;D

xoxo

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 134

I really like Elsa, she seems to be just what Bella needs:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 134

I think this is the best thing Bella could do for herself.

Reviewer: tiffanyleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 134

I really like Elsa, and it seems she's going to Bella a lot of good.  I can't wait to see the strong, confident woman that I know she's going to become!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 134

I'm liking Elsa already.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 134

Thanks!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 134

Looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 134

:)

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 134

I can't wait to see what happens when Bella comes face to face with Paul again. Hopefully AFTER she's has a few sessions with Elsa. ;D

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 134

I have done letters it is amazing how better they make you feel.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 134

I'm kinda disappointed that Bella wasn't pregnant, but hindsight, she's not mentally stable enough to care for a child at the moment.

She's took a huge step in taking responsibility for her own mental health. Seeing a therapist sometimes is the best thing for someone to do to get things in perspective for themselves. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 134

good

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 133

Bella is smart to want to get checked, as well as suggesting Edward to the same, regardless of how sure she thinks she's clean.

Exchanging 'I love you's." Nothing better. Can hardly wait to see what the doctor's say.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 134

Here goes Bella, enbarking on a new journey. I hope she gets out of it what she needs to. At least she sounds open to the process. Hopefully her talk with Edward goes well.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 133

Thank God Alice talked some sense into Bella. She is a basket case right now. Edward really did not do anything wrong. Bella just took it wrong. Paul needs to go down. He is a horrible person, who hurts people without a care in the world. I don't blame Edward for being upset with her defending him. Bella needs to stop hiding under the rug and fight for her sanity.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 133

:)

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 103

Well hello there :) I haven't been reviewing each chapter, cos, well, I am just too excited to read the next chapter & there are so many to get through, YAY!! However, when I read this A/N and noticed that people are giving YOU negative comments about Bella having such low self-esteem or saying this is the worst Bella ever?!?!? OMG, the time has come for a review!
I want you to know that I have truly enjoyed this story and am so excited I still have 30 chapters to go & it still isn't completed yet :) I appreciate your writing style, that we have to feel it from Bella's POV to really get her insecurity. Since your chapters are short, it may seem like Bella is going on about it but this is a very big deal for a lot of people & important to the story. I look forward to the point where she realizes it is ok to be loved and allows Edward to love her. I imagine it will be magical. Plus, I love the pics you are making available to us ;) Please know that for every hater, you have SEVERAL readers that love your story even if we don't review each chapter!! Sharing your story with us is so greatly appreciated. Your wonderful imagination and creative writing is truly enjoyed!!
Oh, and if those haters have anything else to say, just tell them to look up TWCS Top Ten Favorite Authors and they will find YOU -- enough said!!!!!  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Thank you, Tracey, for your kind words and support. Writing is my outlet to release my frustrations and emotions...When my characters get attacked, it's hard not to take it personally. I like to think I have a thicker skin than most, but it gets to you every so often. Reading reviews like yours...this is why I do this. So, thank you for reading and supporting and understanding...Hugs to you! ~ Josie

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 133

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Reviewer: MaryE1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 133

Yeah she Saud it back!

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 133

A lot of good steps in the right direction... Glad they both admitted how they feel for each other..

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 133

Thanks! I love the progress ;)

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 133

Pretty sure she's clean. She's already been checked ... of course, chlamydia is deceptive, but she has already been through antibiotics for other things. They kill chlamydia. She SHOULD be clear. Guess time will tell.

Glad they have actually EXCHANGED ILY's. Moving forward from here should be a lot easier. I hope she lays into Paul and unleashes all of her pent-up rage on him!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 133

Glad she's finally decided to get therapy.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 133

Oh boy! I can't wait for more! I am a bit worried about Edwards promise of "six". I hope he will be there. :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 133

WOW just Wow

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 133

Yes! Bravo! 

Reviewer: tiffanyleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 133

Love this chapter!  Can't wait for the next couple of chapters.  I hope someone goes with her to the gyno for moral support.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 133

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 132

Loved it :)

Reviewer: RandyWriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 132

Dang that was amazing!     So visual to see how destroyed Bella is, and how Alice helped get everything she could, out in the open....perfect!!    Loved it all!     So happy to see these two finally trying to get past the pain, and down to the truth now!    They are both so exhausted!    Time for some love  and peace.   Loved it all!!!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 132

=)

Reviewer: Shemilliah Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 132

I'm kind of between emotions with this chapter.
On one habd, I'm glad she has realised talking to someone doesn't mean your certifiable.
On the other, can't a woman apologise without crying? Now because of her crying Edward who end up doing it all. She needs to apologise besides 'I'm sorry' he deserves better than that.

Anyway next chapter is so important I cannot wait *sigh*

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 132

Meh!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 132

:)

Reviewer: Gane96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 132

I am addicted to this story. I'm going to be sad when it's finally over  

 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 132

Yay!! She ADMITS it. Now, it's time to tell HIM!

Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 132

So glad Bella FINALLY realizes that she needs some freaking help!  Can't wait for the talk!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 132

I love this story!!! :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 132

Glad she's finally going to see a therapist.  She needs it.  Smart getting an std test too.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 132

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 132

Finally she has admitted she needs professional help. I don't think she'll need a lot of therapy, just enough to get her on the right track.

This talk is gonna be life-changing progress. Can't wait to hear Bella confess her love for Edward. He should attend her gynocologist appointment with her. Hopefully, they'll get some unexpected news.

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 132

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 132

She is going to be ok she is admitting things.  I cant wait for the talk.

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 132

*sniff, sniff* Smart girl. Sweet boy. 

Reviewer: tiffanyleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 132

Finally, she's going to see someone.  I think it will be so good for her, and make their relationship much stronger.  The fact that she was able to admit, out loud, that she loves him is a huge step.  This is an amazing story, and I can't wait for the big talk!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 131

I hope she loves him back..

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 131

I am glad she is not upset about Paul truely.  Yes she loves him back but can she say it yet.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 131

Thanks!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 131

Oh my! I can't wait to hear what Bella's answer! ;)

Reviewer: sweet_n_juicy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 131

I don't get why everyone thinks that Edward's a idiot. I think he should have told her what he was doing so she wouldn't have been blindsided, but that doesn't make him an idiot. Neither does the way he said he loved her. Maybe he shouldn't have said it during a fight, but her reaction forced him to tell her why he did what he did. I'm not a Bella hater, but I can't defend her or see her side on this or why Edward is the bad guy/idiot in this argument.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 131

:)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 131

Bella was wrong to defend Paul after everything he did to her. Edward did what he thought was right. Bella needs to see that and accept he loves her... unconditionally.

Looking forward to more, now that I'm all caught-up again.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 130

Dating your brother's ex-girlfriend is off limits, and giving her Edward's number so she can call him to catch-up may piss Bella off more.

Emmett is a man of reasoning when he wants to be.

Reviewer: Shemilliah Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 131

Seriously, why is Edward an idiot?. I guess doing good and being good makes you one, meanwhile lets all rally around Bella since she's the victim here.
Forget "idiot" Edward. People like Emmett and Alice are not needed around you, family or not!
Seriously, idiot for doing good. Its laughable!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 129

Oh holy hell. The shit has hit the fan.

Angela?

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 128

Giselle and her family deserve some retribution from Paul, as well as the other girls. Shit is about to hit the fan. Can hardly wait to see how Bella will deal with it all.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 131

It sounds like Bella is still confused. She needs to figure that out first. When she is ready to say it, she will.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 127

I'm so looking forward to them taking Paul down. It'd be golden if that one chick did have his baby.

Can't imagine how Bella will feel once she finds out he was busy with his students while they were dating.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 126

That was exactly just what the doctor ordered.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 125

Thank goodness Alice is marrying Jasper and not his stuckup family.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 124

I'd have had second thoughts on including Jasper's family in my wedding planning if I was Alice. His mother, Barb is unbelievable.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 123

I getting suspicious that Bella is tired for another reason.

Jasper's brother sounds like a real dick.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 122

Nooo... she can't think it was just a dream.

Reviewer: tiffanyleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 131

I called it!  I knew she was in shock, and as soon as she realized what happened, she would see that Edward was right.

I love this story, and I love Bella (and Edward, too!).  I hate that she has so many haters!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 121

I'm hope Bella doesn't get sick. I'm curious about Emmett's date.

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 131

:)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 120

Poor Edward, being sick sucks.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 131

gotta love Alice.  At least B realizes shes a goober.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 119

Gotta love Emmett. He's such a good guy, even when he's teasing.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 131

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Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 131

Still pissed at Bella!   The fact that her first inclination was to defend that bastard she used to be with just fucking pisses me off!!!

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 131

What right did Emmett have to call Alice & spread E & B's business?! Alice also needs to mind her own business too! Em & A should focus on caring for their brother, NOT worrying about B!

I'm SO baffled that Alice would or could say ANYTHING negative against Edward. Best friend or not, Edward's her brother & blood is supposed to be thicker than water. Not to mention the fact that Edward has done NOTHING wrong! He's doing something good, something positive, which will add a ton onto his already heavy workload. I admit that at first he was doing it for Bella, but now he's doing it for SO many. How can this ever be wrong??? How many other men would care enough to do something like this for their girlfriend, or for anyone else?! Not many, I can tell u that! 

Bella IS in the wrong here as usual! I just DON'T understand how Alice or Emmett don't get that?!? They NEED to take off their rose colored glasses where Bella is concerned, quit siding with her crazy ass & tell her the blunt, honest truth! Maybe if everyone would quit pussyfooting around her sensitive ass, she might get better...change her stupid, whiney,  bitchy, unappreciative, selfish ways!!! Of course, it would be nice if they knew the truth about what a skanky, cold b***h she is, & how she's really treated their brother from the start! Using him, hurting him, treating him like s**t in general. 

And when Edward said he loved her, shouldn't it mean something despite how he told her? I love you means I love you NO matter when you say it! At least he didn't blurt it out for the first time during sex, which would've been far worse! She focuses on ALL of the wrong things, as usual! It's like she totally missed the whole part of him doing everything he's doing & has done because he LOVES her stupid ass!!! Instead of being mad, she SHOULD count her blessings!!! SHE'S the one who put him in a situation where he felt that he had no choice but to tell her WHY he's doing what he's doing!  

Can't wait for more! ;)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 118

Emmett's antics had me rolling.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 117

Hot shower scene.

I love Emmett. lol

 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 116

Ahh... sweet Momma and son time.

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 131

Aaahhhh!!

 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 115

I don't understand how some readers could think Bella was a ho, like you said she's had bad relationships, that has left her scarred and feeling unworthy of Edward.

I'm hoping she can confess her love for him soon.

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