Date: 14 Apr 2016 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just read your story ,"Relentless". It was really good just sucks you right in ..Any chance you might expand on it some time. I hope so I'll keep checking back. I really am enjoying your stories, your very talented. Please keep writing!
Thank you :* Relentless has actually finished, but it has been pulled. If you are on FB you should be able to find a copy there. If not get in touch and we will work something out x x
Date: 22 Jan 2015 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
I wish the author the best loving it so far hope it will be a completed story..
Hi, thanks for the review. :) The next chapter is written and has just been sent to my beta and pre-readers. Thank you for your continued patience x x
Date: 20 May 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really love this story, but I think people need to give Bella a break. Everyone acts likes she should just get over killing two people. I can see how that would tilt her whole world. It's very clear that the feds think she is the weak link. Let's not forget about Caius and his daughter. They are who I think are behind Bella's running into an interior designer. They are going to try and get to her right under Edward's nose again. I also think Edward should give Bella some space. I can understand why she's mad about him bringing his family around. She should have some say in who is in her house. She needs a space that she can leave that world behind--- that's what this new house offered her. Edward's already taking that away from her. Everyone's going to keep pushing her until she completely breaks and I don't think either of them is prepared for that. Excited to see what happens next.
Thanks for the review! RL has been crazy busy, but I am writing at the moment & I will hopefully get it to my beta soon. Thank you for your continued patience.
I loved your review and I'm glad you seem to get Bella. A lot of people does seem to think that she just get over the two killings, but it's not something I could easily get over and I'm sure if many people thought about it then it wouldn't be something they could easily get over either.
She is the weak link in the chain.
Lets hope Jasper finds out more about the designer soon.
I also agree that Edward was an ass. Bella should have a right to say who she wants in her house and its understandable why she feels that way with Em & Carlisle. x
Date: 04 Mar 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds like it is going to get interesting. Oh by the way, the stories that you mentioned in your author's note, I have read and really enjoyed.
I love Cristina's stories and I am honoured that she pre-readers for me now x x
Date: 30 Jan 2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
"-Bella, tell me you didn't sleep with him!" Geez, mom:)
I suspect Edward is having Bella followed. No doubt he's already had a background check done on her altho with his comment "Maybe I'll need to buy you something more expensive." it didn't pick up on her personality. He's probably used to women that like money spent on them.
Your very observent, I like it :o) xx
Date: 07 Jan 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
He is very interested how does he know who she is??
We will see from Edward's point of view soon, but lets just say he saw her and he wanted her. He has the means to find out anything he can about her.
Thanks for the review x
Date: 06 Jan 2014 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
This looks great! Love the way you used a phone call to her mum to give us a summery of what happened without rehashing it x
Hi, thank you very much for your review! Glad you liked the phone call ;o)