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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

The lemon under the stars wars magical! His description was very hot already, but the real thing didn't disappoint either;)

 

omg! She invited him to stay and go to Phoenix! Yay

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 14

Fantastic chapter

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 14

Ah such a nice romantic getaway. I agree that Bella needed a vacation. When she walked into woods, I was almost expecting her to say she needed a human moment but then I realized its not that story. lol I can imagine her emotions are tough for her sometimes to get a handle on. It shows how far she has come that she is starting to think of Edward being there permently.

Of course what would a family gathering be without some drama, especially when new boyfriend meets old in laws.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

woot woot  Yummy vaca and first full lemony time

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

I loved it made tears come to my eyes more than once.  I cant wait for what is next

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2014 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 12

He and the kids made mother's day perfect for her. Esme is a wise women 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 13

So amazing. That was such a touching present. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 12

What a wonderful Mother's Day. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Bella. I hope Edward makes it all better. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 10

It's so sweet how Esme helped plan the date. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 9

That was a remarkable first date. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 7

Bella really is amazing. I'm divorced so I don't know what Bella is going through but to see her enjoy life just a little bit is testimony to how strong she is. 

 

Yeah Edward is going to meet the kiddies. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm so glad that Bella is getting help. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 5

The holidays are always the worst. My grandmother died on Good Friday so Easter is always hard and her birthday was December 23 so Christmas is hard too. I hope that Bella talks to Mrs Cope. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 4

Every kid tells their parents they hate them at least once in their lives. I'm so glad that Edward and Bella have each other. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

God poor Edward, they really are a matching pair. My grandmother died of breast cancer so I know what it's like to watch someone melt away.   

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

Renee means well but she is very misguided. I'm also curious why she didn't try to introduce Edward to Bella. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh the poor thing. To have gone through so much at such a young age. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 4:16 PM Title: Prologue

It's so sad. His children never got to say goodbye. I hope they are not mad at Bella. 

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 13

Aww! This was a wonderful chapter! Love this Bella and Edward

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 13

This was such a great chapter.

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have tears running down my face as I read this story! Gah! You have brought out the deepest of emotions in your writing, which is not an easy feat. I love this story already! I also want to send my greatest admiration for your friend, Pam, and you for going through tough times and rising to the top. I don't mean that you don't still feel the pain of your situations, I just mean that you are fighting each day for "your" normalcy! Bless you both and anyone else who's shared their survival story.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 13

Thank you again, this is the best story of love, caring, just plain old being there for someone you care about, not a lot of anything but people living life the best they can, while death as just past or is right around the corner. I look forward to every word you will write to complete this story. Update soon, take care.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 12

You do Edward and Bella so well. Nice chapter warm and inviting like Hallmark TV.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 11

I hope this chapter is a nice introduction to home made lemonade.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

It's getting hot up in there. Bella seem to be doing better, oh my, lemonade is sorely needed.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 9

This chapter was lovely, they will indeed make a great couple. Lemonade must be made," soon I hope.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 8

Thank you so much for jumping ahead, this thing was draging.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow, this chapter was simply amazing, A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!! Edward is SO wonderful with Bella and the kids... First she cares for him which he really needs and then he's just slipping into the father role for Johnny... they are the perfect family! I love it how John and Grace accept him and how he always points out that he does not want to replace their father! 

Then the borthday present... wow, they really did a good piece of work here! And obviously, Bella may be ready to get it all with Edward soon, too! Why else would there ba a "wedding"-like page in the scrapbook?

Of course it's important that Charlie gives his blessings, but he's a wise man and knows when his daughter is happy :)

I agree that the lemony goodness would be too much here, the emotional part was very important for all of them and the cherry on the ice cream may be next :)

Read you soon!!

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 4

I do declare Bella's the saddest thing ever. Cancer is the great you can either," live with me are die," conquest. I thank god every day, it has been a vistor for years in my family, it is not welcome, but you hang on.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

It's about time Edward showed up. Royce King I can't believe Renee, he's a fool.

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 13

Awww...you made me cry! But in a good way. LOL

I HOPE Esme lives to see Edward marry & even have a child of his own. What a wonderful gift that would be. :)

Can't wait for more! ;)

Reviewer: bird1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 13

life happens and as sad as i am about esme i am also happy that edward has gained a family and that what ever happens he wont have to go through it alone. i do hope that esme does get to at least see him get married and have a child of his own with bella. this was a very good chapter.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 13

Edward was completely naked and I was in my panties.

i read that sentence a hundred times and I shiver each time!

grear chapter!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

Boy, I can see why you had to cut this chapter off where you did, it's a biggy! The encounter with John and Jason was heartbreaking, but it was a great bonding moment for John and Edward. The album/scrapbook was such a touching gift, especially those last two blank pages! I can tell I'm going to cry when Esme finally passes on, just as her family will!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 13

This is a really sweet and touching story.  Thanks for giving it to us!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 13

I loved this chapter!

From the moment Mrs. Kerr came to apologize with her daughter, to Edward protecting John... Over to the gift making with Esme to asking Charlie's permission... This was pure bliss - thank you for that all:)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 13

CAN'T WAIT!!!!!! 

Reviewer: Twipotterlover2244 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter! Update soon!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wonderful chapter. Poor John.  Kids can be cruel esp when their parents are cruel to them.  But I'm happy Kylie is getting the help she needs now.

Wonderful birthday present.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 13

SO FANTASTIC!!! I love this!! I am so excited for more!! I can't wait for their trip!! ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 13

I think this was a good set up for their time away because we got to see them coming together more as a family. I really liked john and Edwards heart to heart. It's good they are all learning they can depend on each other. Now it's time to look forward to Edward and Bella's alone time. I am sure they are looking forward to it also.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 13

=)

Reviewer: tawelephant Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 13

That was soooo good. I'm still holding out for a miracle for Esme. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter. It was so sweet.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2014 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 12

Can't wait to read more.😊

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

Lovely

Reviewer: Jenablur Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

This is probably one of the sweetest stories I have ever read!  Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 12

Huge, huge chapter! So much positivity going on! Yes! Love it!

xo

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 12

I bet it was something having to do with their wedding. I think it's interesting after initially being the one to go slow, now Bella's the one making jokes about kidnapping Edward so he will stay at her house. But it's a statement over how far she has come that she is almost ready for them to live together.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loved the chapter!!!   I love how the kids and Bella are all moving forward - with Edward.   And that ring?  I thought that was perfect how he incorporated Jake's birthstone in it as well.   That was very sweet.  

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

I would bet Esme said something along the lines of, marry the girl while I'm still here to see your happiness. I don't mean it to gross anyone out, just that she loves them both so much, she wants their happiness above all else! Hope that makes sense! This chapter choked me up a bit when Edward took the kids to pick up the rings and helped them cook and fell asleep in Bella's bed.  When they went to his mom's and they all fit in so beautifully, and they said their I love yous! Just great!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

This is so friggen fantastic!! I love it!!! The "I love yous"! *sigh* I love these mionster chapters! I am so excited for more!! :)

Reviewer: leinchen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh dear ... *sigh* I simply L.O.V.E. thios story ...

And Edward is simply ... well there are no words ... I'm melting away with all his kindness his ability to understand and his behaviour ... (makes me a little bit jealous of Bella ...).

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Lots of greetings from Germany,

leinchen

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm out of words with pure happyness;)

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 12

Awww... He's so sweet. :) 

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 12

This was a beautiful chapter!  Loved it! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wow looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh my i cant wait for the next update  ... LOL

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 12

THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!!!!!!! WONDERFULLY LONG CHAPTER AND THEY FINALLY HAD SOME LOVING. THEY MAY NOT HAVE MADE LOVE YET BUT THEY DID SAY THE THREE LTTLE WORDS "I LOVE YOU" AND WHAT A MOTHER'S DAY THEY SHARED. GREAT CHAPTER!!! PLEASE DON'T BE TOO LONG IN UPDATING. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wonderful chapter with the limons.   Not quite full lemons yet.  hee hee.   Glad the visit with Esme went well too.

Reviewer: tawelephant Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 12

That was wonderful!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow that was a full chapter love her kids so sweet. I think they will sleep in her bed make out like crazy but that is all or at least not all the way

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 10

I don't understand where this is coming from?!? You are one of my favorite authors - I've read & loved ALL of your stories & even favorited them when they were over on FF. I also visit your blog frequently & enjoy it as well. ;)

Just because I have an opinion of a fictional character or situation shouldn't bother you like this - you shouldn't take it personally. I am only commenting on a fictional person/situation. It's just my opinion, which I am entitled to, right? I'm NOT insulting you as a person or as a writer - I think you do a great job. I am always respectful to you - I ALWAYS leave you a rating of 10, no matter how pissed I may be at one of your characters. LOL 

And I've seen your other reviews, especially on Friends with Benefits, & a lot of your readers feel the same way that I do about Bella...so WHY am I the bad guy??? And why do you only respond to my supposed bad review, but never to any of the countless good ones that I've left for many of your stories?!? :(

You make me, as an avid fan & reader of your stories, not want to participate in them anymore. :(

Reviewer: myhope0506 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 2:08 AM Title: Prologue

I absolutely love this story!! My heart goes out to Bella, she is grieving over the loss of her husband. That is something she may never get over. She may move on but, part of her heart will always belong to Jake. 

Reviewer: bellagirl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 11

*shakes head* Bella should have pressed charges and should have let Alice take photos of her face pre-heavy duty makeup. That kid is a freaking menace to society in waiting. I can already tell the kid's a sociopath in the making. I also don't believe the mom is going to keep her end of the bargain for very long.

Reviewer: Momma Big Evil Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved the chapter (as always :D) .. I am very glad to see that Bella is taking her time getting to know Edward more before jumping into a full fledged physical/ very intimate relationship with him..

The grief timeline has no set time limits... When Bella is ready to move forward to the next step of her and Edwards relationship.. she will know... It has been 4 years since my mother in law lost my father in law, and she is still grieving at times to this very day..

Keep up your awesome, kick ass writing Josie because your stories ROCK!!! :D

Reviewer: HpTwiGirl2788 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 11

I am loving this story so far! You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to see how the story plays out! I love that Edward cares about Bella's kids and doesn't want them to forget their dad. I can tell he will be a great role model for all of them!

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 11

I just hope Bella realizes that it's NOT all about her & her kids. Edward is a wonderful man that she should be thankful sticks around & puts up with some of her crap. I mean, she is kinda on the overly whiny side, despite the wonderful support system she has & people willing to help her with any & everything.

Don't get me wrong, I understand her missing Jake, but I just feel like she's being selfish at times where Edward is concerned...like she's stringing him along or using him to be around only when she wants or needs him - only when it suits her.

If she's not ready for a relationship, then she shouldn't be in one. I feel like she forgets that Edward has problems of his own - his mother has cancer, his job can be stressful, not to mention that he has feelings, wants, & needs because she's always just so wrapped up in herself & her problems. :(



Author's Response:

I've had it...your reviews are making me not want to write any more. If you don't have anything positive to say, then don't say anything at all. If you don't like my characterization. DON'T READ IT. I do this for fun and for relaxation. It's fiction and it's how I see it (and my friend is living it...this Bella based off a friend of mine who lost her husband). Your overly-critical and negative reviews are mind boggling and getting on my damn nerves. I understand that we all have our opinions, but I'm over this. 

Please be considerate when reviewing because I'm working my ass off to complete these chapters only to have them torn apart. Like I said, I'm over this...

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 11

Looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 11

I don't think they will get it on, but I think Edward may stay - but I assume his condition will be to actually sleep in Bellas BED, which will be difficult... but maybe they can cross this bridge finally and he can show her that with him, it's actually nice to sleep in a bed again.

The dinner with the kids went perfect I think! It's natural that John is irritated at first, but if Edward continues to be this open with regard to Jacob, John will be perfectly fine!

The game was fun and even the bruised nose can't shadow that! Kylie is quite a piece of work, I wonder if there's more behind her behaviour!

Hope you update again sooooon :) I just LOVE this story! (as some of your other ones as well, but anyway...)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

The pics are wonderful as ever, I really like the blanket;)

At the beginning of the first mixed up date with the kids I was really nervous. I get that the kids, John especially, might have a problem with Edward being the boyfriend of his mom... But both, Bella and Edward, really made it easy for the kids to see, there's no competition for Jake in Edward:)

And the day with the adults was very sweet too!

Hm... Will he stay the night?!

Reviewer: melwea Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 11

I absolutely LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love this story. Edward is amazing as usual. They should at least have a very serious make out session. I can see Bella freaking out a bit with full out sex, but it should be a great first step.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 11

THAT! WAS A FUN FILLED CHAPTER. I LIKE THAT SHE'S FOLLOWING HER HEART AND NOT SOME SELF IMPOSED TIME FRAME. I HOPE THE NEXT CHAPTER HAS A FEW ORGASMS THEY NEED IT.  READ YOU SOON. REALLY SOON! (LOL)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 11

I don't think they will go all the way but it sounds like Bella might be willing to explore a little. I think she should let Edward spend the night. It sounds like she could use the comfort, especially since sleep is an issue for her. Who knows, maybe one day he will get her to sleep in her bed. Glad the dinner with her kids went ok. its to be expected that they would have mixed feelings. I think its always harder on older kids because they have more memories of the parent that was lost.

Listen to those instincts Edward. They are serving you well so far.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 11

I was appalled by the damage Kylie did to Bella! At least it proved to her mother that the poor child desperately needed help! Edward was so sweet to take care of Bella's poor nose and help her sleep. The trip to the Mariners game was great, as was the dinner with her kids. See you soon!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 11

John had a reasonable reaction considering his age.  Went well though.  Ugh for Kylie's mom.  Hate those types of parents.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 11

OMG! I love this I can't wait for the next update!!! :)

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 11

I loved the chapter.   And I'm glad that Bella kept the dinner with Edward going.   He is really making a great impression on the kids, and I love the fact that he isn't discouraging them from talking about Jake.   Edward is just such a kind soul.    And he really stepped up to help take care of Bella after the Kylie incident.   

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great date they are getting so close

Reviewer: pixiekat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 10

Sweet, sweet chapter, m'dear. And they're making progress. It'll take them a while, but baby steps forward are so much better than stumbling backward.Thanks so much!Kat

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 10

Here comes some! I discovered the story on your profile and am totally engulfed by it ;-)
Bella has gone through hell and back, as Edward put it, and is finally starting to enjoy life again! This will have a good impact on the kids, we  have seen what Johnny has told Edward about his mom being sad all the time and not scratching his back ;-)

I am happy to see that the dates with Edward go so well and that therapy and a strong environment get Bella out of her misery.

However, I am crazily curious who will be the first person to sleep with her in her bed again... I hope for it to be Edward, but you never know. Maybe it is a good point to start with him and to expand the trust!

Hope to get to read your next chapter soon!! :-)

Reviewer: twicrazreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 10

Hey T

Just wondering how often u update this fic?

Loving it so much!!

Marie

Twicrazreader

Reviewer: twicrazreader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 9

Amazing first date!

Marie

Twicrazreader

Reviewer: bellagirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 8

Bella really really needs to see a therapist to help her with her grief. And everyone's grieving periods are different. Some longer some shorter.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 10

Hey for Bella an ass grab is pretty forward at this point. I am glad to see that she recognizes that she is healing. As was mentioned in another story, Edward should remind himself of all the fun that be had making all the stops in between kissing and making love. He can pretend he is a teenager again. And Bella will get more time to heal. Hopefully the kids will be ok although I think Edward needs to go slowly with them, just like Bella. Especially since John is feeling a bit sad right now. They just need to be clear that Edward is not replaceing their dad. These little insights into Edward's mind are good but it is really Bella's journey.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thinking Grace will be ok with them dating, but think John is gonna have a prob with it.   Glad they are getting to know each other though

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 10

I'm glad that she could take some if his felt pressure of his chest after the Vancouver question! It was very sweet to offer, and who knows, maybe she'll be able to give him an answer sooner than expected?;)

Snooping Alice on the hunt for details about their first date, was very funny! I can totally understand her feeling nosy with her best friend, but am glad that she didn't pushed too far...

i can only repeat myself, how impressed I'm feeling about the strength Bella shows! She's such an amazing mother to her kids, doing so many sweet things with and for them! She's always the last on her long list of tasks, but she's finally starting to allow herself some happyness too:)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 10

I love this story so much! I am thinking Bella is going to be surprised by the kids being okay with having Edward around. Either that or they are going to flip their shit by seeing Edward with the coat! :) I can't wait to find out what will happen!!! :)

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter as always.    I wish Alice woud have lightened up on Bella, though.   She was really pushing for info on her and Edward.    But I loved their date and the fact that after Edward's bad day, he went to Bella for comfort.   As for Vancouver, I think she'll go.    Hopefully, by the time July rolls around, Bella will be even more comfortable in her relationship with Edward and things will progress further between them by then.

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