Date: 10 Jul 2020 2:45 AM Title: Ch 19: Homecoming
I know this fic is old and someone has probably mentioned it by now but it goes undergrad---MEDICAL SCHOOL --- internship--- residency. You don't jump from undergrad to residency as told in this story.
Date: 14 Aug 2017 9:15 PM Title: Epilogue
Enjoyed your story and thank you for posting it. I would have like to have gotten more of the Jasper & Alice story and what happened there. Maybe an outtake?
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2016 6:25 PM Title: Epilogue
sweet little story thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 29 Jun 2014 7:52 AM Title: Epilogue
I'm really glad everyone is happy and having babies, but I do feel sad for Alice. I know she did it to herself, but it's too bad she's all alone while all her old friends are so happy!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 7:46 AM Title: Ch 24: Plans and Vows
A simple, meaningful wedding. Nice that Rose was her attendant and Emmett was his. It probably hurt Alice a bit, but there will be time to mend that fence too, I'm sure.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 7:41 AM Title: Ch 23: Something Right
A rather fitting way to celebrate their engagement! I certainly enjoyed it!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 7:37 AM Title: Ch 22: Proposals
I just knew he was going to propose! And he did such a gorgeous job of it, too!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 7:33 AM Title: Ch 21: Surprises
You gotta love a guy with a romantic streak! Poor, pathetic Jessica, too bad they will probably fire her.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 7:29 AM Title: Ch 20: Adjustments
I'm glad they got that out of the way. Makes think it's about the right time, or just about! Wonder if he will pick up his wet towel in the morning?
Date: 29 Jun 2014 7:23 AM Title: Ch 19: Homecoming
Come on! Who wouldn't want Edward for a roommate? Ask me how pleased I was when Bella jumped on Nurse Stanley and Dr. George backed her up!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 7:13 AM Title: Ch 18: Distances
The good angels of both Bella and Edward seem to working well and making life a bit easier for the couple! I fhe gets transferred to Forks and Bella starts back to work part time, they should be able to see each other a lot more!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 7:08 AM Title: Ch 17: Forgiveness
It would be difficult for most people to be friends with someone like Alice, all that energy is wearing. I wouldn't mind, but then, I can get along with just about anyone! Bella merely pointed out the obvious, that trust is fragile and not easily repaired once broken.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 7:00 AM Title: Ch 16: Admissions and Interruptions
There was probably no force on earth that would have held Alice back, so just as well Jasper gave in and took her to Bella's! At least she got to tell Edward how long she has loved him, before being interrupted!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:54 AM Title: Ch 15: Reunions
I figured they might have trouble matching schedules, with his residency and her rehabilitation. Hope this time together lets them square things away!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:49 AM Title: Ch 14: Confessions
Well, it is about time they both leveled with each other!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:45 AM Title: Ch 13: Explanations
I'm just happy that Rose told her, since Edward was interrupted. I only hope now that Bella is strong enough to risk her friendhip for love!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:39 AM Title: Ch 12: Coming Around
Thank heaven for small favors! I had to smile at Charlie pushing Dr. George out of his way to get to his girl!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:31 AM Title: Ch 11: Making Amends
Having the support of family and friends probably saved Edward's sanity, and Charlies, too. It's only a cliche because it's so true, the most precious things in life are not things!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:25 AM Title: Ch 10: Need you
Something this traumatic can sure affect the way you look at everything, make you rethink some things, even. It reminds us how short a time we are on this earth, and we don't get to do overs!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:19 AM Title: Ch 9: Stay With Me....
That was so sweet of Charlie to not onmly make Edward admit his feelings for Bella, but to tell him about hers for him! So nice that they prayed for her together.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:15 AM Title: Ch 8: Accident
What a stroke of luck that he was headed to Forks anyway, so he can just go straight to the hospital!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:11 AM Title: Ch 7: Time Rolls On...
Ther she was, trying to be a good friend and what does she get? Head trauma, from the sound of it! Hope she's going to be okay, and soon!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:08 AM Title: Ch 6: Single Again
Everyone to their own view of this story, but I admired both Bella and Edward for putting their long friendship before all else. For me, it was the right thing to do! Too bad Edward can't come back to Washington along with Bella.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:02 AM Title: Ch 5: Separate Lives
Okay, things are awkward and it probably won't occur to either of them what the real reason is! Should be a different Thanksgiving, from the looks of things.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 5:56 AM Title: Ch 4: College Bound
Not that I'm dying to break up the gang, but I really think Bella and Edward are doing the wise thing. It's part of becoming an adult, going off on your own and learning new things, meeting new people.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 3: Camping
Since no hearts were broken, I thought Bella did the right thing. It's Edward who is being silly and dishonest with himself and Bella ! He ought to man up and tell her how he feels.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 5:18 AM Title: Ch 2: They Grew up
Bella is perfectly within her rights to be upset and angry, I would be. The thing it doesn't do is mend anything so they can all be friends again.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
Tough situation for a child and, of course, her father. It's so hard to lose someone that precious and have to uproot at the same time. Hope they really are going to be her friends!
Date: 28 Jun 2014 10:11 PM Title: Prologue
Nothing like the possibility of never having that chance to say i love you, to really make you focus on what's important!
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2014 7:40 PM Title: Epilogue
I loved this story. I do hate how Alice can be so pushy, but I hope she finds her happily ever after. We all deserve to be happy.
Date: 05 May 2014 2:00 AM Title: Epilogue
Seems Alice got a taste of her own medicine. Once a cheat always a cheat guess that was true in Jasper' s case.
Date: 04 May 2014 11:11 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for sharing this story with us! I truly enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2014 10:57 PM Title: Epilogue
It's really sad what happened between Bella and Alice. I hoped their friendship could be repaired, maybe not to what it was, but at least for them to stay friends. Then Jasper leaves her for someone else, well, that's horrible. Alice doesn't deserve that much sorrow for what she's done. I am glad Bella tried to reach out to her when she saw her in the park.
I am happy Bella and Edward had a little girl who could play with Rosalie and Emmett's son, and that they plan to try for another child. They seem really happy.
Thanks for sharing this story.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2014 10:08 PM Title: Ch 24: Plans and Vows
Great chapter! I loved how Bella asked Rosalie to be her Matron of Honor and reassured her that she wanted her best friend by her side. The wedding day was perfect down to the ILYs.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2014 7:42 PM Title: Epilogue
loved this story :)
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2014 3:59 AM Title: Ch 23: Something Right
That was a beautiful moment between Bella and Edward and worth the wait.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2014 2:36 AM Title: Ch 22: Proposals
I enjoyed the romantic evening that Edward planned for Bella. It was a lovely surprise that he proposed before they made love.
Date: 03 May 2014 12:20 AM Title: Ch 23: Something Right
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2014 3:37 AM Title: Ch 21: Surprises
I am glad Bella knew what was going on with Jessica, so Edward didn't pay for her actions. I also liked that two board members witnessed her inappropriate behavior and would discipline her right away.
It was nice that Edward planned a special night for their first time together.
Date: 01 May 2014 3:07 AM Title: Ch 21: Surprises
i think you can do both mob and boxing in one :-D
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2014 1:53 AM Title: Ch 21: Surprises
aww too sweet. OMg car and al funny they had to keep composure during jess making an ass out of herself.
Date: 01 May 2014 1:48 AM Title: Ch 21: Surprises
looking forward to mroe
Date: 01 May 2014 1:37 AM Title: Ch 20: Adjustments
beautiful chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2014 1:13 AM Title: Ch 20: Adjustments
I'm glad Bella voiced her concerns and desires to Edward before she became too frustrated. I like that Edward told her how much he wanted her and that he was trying to make their first time special. I am glad she told him about the towel.
Date: 30 Apr 2014 7:44 PM Title: Ch 20: Adjustments
I love this one but as for your new story onward please
Date: 30 Apr 2014 2:28 PM Title: Ch 20: Adjustments
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 30 Apr 2014 1:30 PM Title: Ch 20: Adjustments
Thanks for the bonus update! I'm glad Bella cornered Edward to talk. Have to keep the lines of communication open.
I think boxerward would awesome!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 11:12 AM Title: Ch 19: Homecoming
hey
yaiiii he's home!!! Soooo great!
Could it be that Jessica is a bit jealous ??
why does she act that way ?!
let#s see what will happen at to party Alice set up!! Or isn't Bella going ??
bye
Lil
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2014 6:24 PM Title: Ch 19: Homecoming
I'm glad Bella got the all clear and that Dr. George reprimanded that nurse for her behavior. Edward truly was presumptious by just showing up at Bella's door and asking if she wanted a roommate. I wonder how Bella will react to this surprise.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 4:11 PM Title: Ch 19: Homecoming
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2014 3:57 PM Title: Ch 19: Homecoming
yes..... yes... jess is going to be a pain huh
Date: 20 Apr 2014 12:01 PM Title: Ch 18: Distances
Ugh, more more more. While that is not a cliffe per say it could have been longer. I thoroughly enjoy this story. Thank you
Date: 19 Apr 2014 10:26 PM Title: Ch 18: Distances
Yay!!! He's going home! Can't wait to see how Bella reacts to the news.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 2:08 PM Title: Ch 18: Distances
Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2014 2:03 PM Title: Ch 18: Distances
I am glad Edward was able to transfer his residency to Forks, so he can be closer to Bella. I look forward to Bella's reaction.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 11:57 AM Title: Ch 18: Distances
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:39 AM Title: Ch 16: Admissions and Interruptions
:)
Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:32 AM Title: Ch 17: Forgiveness
I just found this story today, and I'm really enjoying it. I agree with what you said about Alice. Her pushiness drives me crazy. In this chapter, it really, REALLY bothered me that she was so selfish, she made Edward wake Bella up for that conversation. All that served was to make HER feel better. Bella is recovering, and should not have to deal with Alice's guilt while that is happening. Frankly, I don't think Alice deserves Bella's forgiveness. For some reason, Jasper doesn't bother me as much. I think because he is less selfish about the situation and far more realistic.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2014 2:32 AM Title: Ch 17: Forgiveness
I'm glad Bella said what she did to Alice and Jasper because Alice needed to realize they may never get that level of trust back again and she can't demand it. I liked how Edward explained that while what happened with Alice and Jasper didn't help the situation, Bella and Edward were just not ready to be together until now.
I agree with your A/N. Alice is my least favorite character in this story and it is rare when I do like her in fanfic. She was just too pushy and self serving here. I hope Alice backs off now and accepts the relationship they have. She may never have the close relationship that Bella and Rosalie share, but I think that's okay. Rosalie has proven to be the better girlfriend.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2014 1:51 AM Title: Ch 16: Admissions and Interruptions
Bella's declaration was definitely worth the wait. I loved that Edward got emotional.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2014 1:34 AM Title: Ch 15: Reunions
It was a shame that Bella and Edward were interrupted by his boss calling him into work and Edward having to leave. I look forward to Bella telling him how she feels about him.
Date: 12 Apr 2014 1:21 AM Title: Ch 17: Forgiveness
Bella was right Alice is selfish she wanted Jasper so she went after him no thought of anyone else. Bella has been their friend just not close because she doesn't trust them which I don't blame her. I think it's pretty shitty of Alice to demand Edward and Bella be together and Bella forgive them when she is still healing.
Date: 11 Apr 2014 9:32 PM Title: Ch 17: Forgiveness
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2014 8:19 PM Title: Ch 16: Admissions and Interruptions
Yes more please. I can't wait to see how Edward and Bella handle the relationship. Great chapter.
Date: 11 Apr 2014 7:40 PM Title: Ch 16: Admissions and Interruptions
loving how this story is coming!! and yay bella finally told edward =D cant wait to see what happens with bella alice edward and jasper, cant wait to see them putting it behind them... Update Sooon Cant Wait!!!
Date: 11 Apr 2014 7:17 PM Title: Ch 16: Admissions and Interruptions
YAY!!! Bella finally told him how she feels, too. They have constantly been interrupted. After Bella is better, they need to go away for a weekend without telling anyone where they're going and turn off their phones!!!
Please, please, please, please post the another chapter today!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2014 6:32 PM Title: Ch 16: Admissions and Interruptions
plz always
Date: 11 Apr 2014 6:27 PM Title: Ch 16: Admissions and Interruptions
Please!
Date: 11 Apr 2014 6:00 PM Title: Ch 16: Admissions and Interruptions
i am loving this story! just pulled over to the side of the road to read! please plesse please update soon (read: TODAY).
love!!!!
Date: 11 Apr 2014 5:02 PM Title: Ch 15: Reunions
I loved it, but damn they can't catch a break!! I'm soooo glad you're gonna post another chapter later. I so didn't want to wait til next week.
Date: 11 Apr 2014 2:12 PM Title: Ch 15: Reunions
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 11 Apr 2014 1:48 PM Title: Ch 15: Reunions
i love this story thank you for writing it
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2014 1:31 AM Title: Ch 14: Confessions
finally
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2014 3:14 PM Title: Ch 14: Confessions
Yeah! Happy times are ahead.
Date: 05 Apr 2014 3:58 AM Title: Ch 14: Confessions
FINALLY !!!! Can't wait for more..
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2014 2:35 AM Title: Ch 13: Explanations
I am glad Bella had no memory loss and that Charlie gave Bella some time alone with Edward. Ah, that nurse had some bad timing.
I loved how Rose let Bella know of Edward's devotion to her. I look forward to Bella taking the leap and admitting her feelings for him.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2014 2:16 AM Title: Ch 14: Confessions
I'm so glad Edward finally told Bella how he feels about her. It was also great to see Emmett could still make her laugh.
Date: 05 Apr 2014 1:37 AM Title: Ch 14: Confessions
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 05 Apr 2014 12:51 AM Title: Ch 13: Explanations
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 04 Apr 2014 11:12 PM Title: Ch 13: Explanations
Please update again tonite. They both love one another and they just need to say it!
Date: 04 Apr 2014 10:15 PM Title: Ch 13: Explanations
Pleeeeeease
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2014 1:59 AM Title: Ch 12: Coming Around
oh em gee finally shes awake!!! yaaaaaaaaaaay
Date: 29 Mar 2014 1:29 PM Title: Ch 12: Coming Around
What another week? Come on what a cliffie!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 3:28 AM Title: Ch 12: Coming Around
So glad Bella woke up :) I hope Edward gets his chance to say how he feels about her now...
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2014 9:54 PM Title: Ch 12: Coming Around
I'm so glad Bella woke up and both Edward and Charlie were there.
Date: 28 Mar 2014 4:41 PM Title: Ch 12: Coming Around
I'm so glad you didn't abandon this story! I'll definitely be waiting next Friday for the next chapter.